Thank you for playing Digital Dysfunction, pretty bad for the very first finished map I think. Seriously, I didn’t touch much in the gameplay, I mostly handle the 2D section and the detail around. At first, I wanted to make an Internet themed map, it could’ve been a different map, but then the team decided to change the theme and I’m not the leader, so I followed them. In conclusion, thanks for the feedback, I’ll try to take it as a lesson for my later maps.
Very surprised that out of all the jam maps, Simulant was able to score in the top 10, even tying with Smoldering Fractured Realm and Skyline Oscura (made by fellow tria map makers lmao). Just as a fun little explanation for the theming, the map was actually supposed to be loosely based off of Inside Out and have different "emotions" depending on the tone of the song, which is also why the RJ OST was chosen as it had many different tone changes, but it eventually just transitioned into an rgb theme because we believed the theme was too vague. It was still fun to make regardless, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for playing Stranded! Absolutely not my best work, but I really appreciate the feedback. Making a map in only a week was a tough but fun challenge. Hope to get in the top 50 if there’s another event :)
wow gotta love getting funni number 69 anyways uhh thanks for the feedback, I was the lead on all the gp so ill fix it if me and the other creators decide to remake it but yeah i agree the forest section is total butt and i didnt even know there were slopes until i played it the next day [i did NOT know about the tree slopes bc my friend randomly added them for no reason 😭] but uhh thanks for the 4 [4 is my favorite number] also the main reason most parts are underdetailed is because towards the last 3 days of the jam, a core reset bug appeared in the map, so the end areas are kinda rushed, but yeah I wish that bug didnt happen because we couldve done so much in 3 days thanks again for reviewing our map
Me and Phos were still a bit busy while making the map in the Jam, so cutscenes is our savior there. But it's alright tho, I'll try to fix my mistakes in our next upcoming projects and updates, thank you anyway!!
I know I'm so late but I only came here to see if feedback was shared here and I saw my map Shattering Realms in the top 20.. WTF Let me just say this, my map should've had wayy lower creativity score, because I didn't personally find it THAT appealing even though it's my own work lol.. As for the gp, I already knew it was horribly executed, I wanted to save the best of gp at the 2d part but I had like 1 day to set everything up along with the ending, basically I rushed and it turned out like this, yikes. V2 on the way hopefully
thanks for playing alluring phantasm and actually giving some feedback, and tbh, its my first ever map so there will be trial and error. do you mind explaining whats wrong with the gameplay or design?feedback is gonna be added into the map. thanks for the feedback again poker!!! and you got the theme exactly right btw! also u had the same opinions as you on picture your own world and people got so mad, i hate how people cant take criticism.
The gameplay is very linearly made. I prefer, ragardless of the difficulty, for the maps to have a lot of twist and turns + verticality, cause it makes them more engaging. For the detail, the theming in the first part is a bit inconsistent(neon signs, platforms that are weirdly made(jellyfish ones idk how to call them), "main" islands). Also making maps that are not "boxed" is hard because the background should be pretty good, the lighting also should be good to basically mask the inevitable edges of the maps. It basically takes a lot of practice to make them really good. Specifically for this map, some island movements would make this map better. I think this kinda has the same idea as the Inside Out memory islands, so you can take a look at those also. Hope this helps!
Cant lie i dont think my map deserves to be that high LOL. I had more plans for gameplay inside the tower but i ran out of time + the bgm was only 2 minutes long so I had to rush the last section. Also gameplay is my weakest part regarding making maps so I have to agree its not the best lol. Anyways, glad you enjoyed the map still.
I unfortunately have to say this is the ranking of top 6 winning maps #1: Gallery of Wonders Score: 27.875/30 #2: Surreal Scene Score: 27.8571428571429/30 #3: Smoldering Fractured Realm Score: 27.1875/30 #4: Interstice Mindscape Score: 26.3125/30 (tied) #5: Gallery of Illusion Score: 26.3125/30 (tied) #6: Envisioned Order Score: 26.1875/30 Maps that didn't win in your top 6 ranking: #5: Crystal Clear Skies #3: Space-Time Torsion (I don't understand why) *Opinion:* You kinda did most of them dirty. It's not the judges' fault because this is just their opinion. It's probably sad to all crazy+ maps in FE2CM Map Jam not win but all of them are just opinions sometimes. All of them are gonna be highlighted on November.
Uhm Ethereal Demise was never disqualified... Why I mean thanks for saying its good outside the jam but it was never brought to any concern of being disqualified other than a proportion of people not understanding the theme. Kinda unfair how you bring it down for me tryna make a unique abstract theme but okay. Also where crazy defined abstract as ''Not Nature or facility'' was a joke confirmed by ryalbern, i literally spoke to them and they said it was a fine theme (and i got the idea from searching ''abstract life and death'' on the internet lol..) I am curious what you would have rated it if you hadnt brought down theme for concern which never existed Edit: I do somewhat agree with you wanting to lower the rating of the maps that don't look as abstract but i do think the miscommunication of ''Not Nature or Facility'' ruined peoples thoughts on some maps and i was pretty annoyed when you said it was disqualified when it was never lol. But gg on being first person to have fully edited ranking of all 85 maps.
All of the disuqalified maps in the video were not officially disqualified, rather chosen by me as maps that were either unplayable/broken or didn't follow the theme imo. I knew Crazyblox basically wanted something "creative" but I thought actually having the theme "Abstract" is better because it makes judging the maps easier. Sorry for feeling like your map was not fairly ranked but I stated in the video my reasons for not thinking this was enough "abstract" to me. I wouldn't have guessed the idea without reading your interpretation, that's why. Outside of the jam, I don't rank maps(especially for creativity) but it would have had around 20 points. Your map is still great.
Yeah i was high when i was making mindscape library 🔥🔥🔥🔥💥💥💥💥 Tho fr the reason why it sucks so badly is cause i had like 2 days to work on it cause i started insanely late LOL
Here's what can I say about my favourite Map in the Jam, can you guess it? (Hint: it's 16/30) The sync depends on how fast the player gone into the portal, not how devs made it! So it isn't exactly their fault! The lag isn't intended for the map, the creators know about it, and in near future it's promised to be fixed! As you said, they had a week, HOW DO YOU EXPECT A BETTER END SECTION WHEN YOU NEED TO DO A WHOLE MAP IN A WEEK? You have 3 attempts to guess it!
0:00 Intro
💀disqualified maps💀
1:43 Shattered Oblivion
2:07 Bloated Islands
2:15 Arrow-Mania
2:26 Enlightened Shard
2:46 Fast Enough
2:53 Galaxy-Skycrper
3:03 Fallen Place
3:11 From The Abstract
3:27 Lab Terror
3:36 Talking
map jams
4:34 71. Painting a New World
5:55 70. Grayscale Abstract Lands
8:08 69. Shattered Reality
10:25 68. Chroma Falls
12:03 67. Corrupted Islands
14:21 66. Digital Dysfuction
16:24 65. Roxbury Reverie
17:58 64. Vivid Void
20:58 63: Envious Calamity
23:34 62. Htam
25:14 61. Vided Abyss
27:38 60. Cubic Islands
29:22 59. Malfunctioning Cartridge
31:24 58. Alluring Phantasm
33:23 57. Surreal Dreamscapes
36:03 56. Uptown Uproar
37:52 55. Desolated Farlands
40:07 54. Triangular Perception
41:58 53. Mindscape Library
44:18 52. Fragmented Dreamscape
46:38 51. Stranded
48:53 50. Transdimensional Singularity
50:49 49. Hopeless Reality
52:47 48. Scattered Space
55:05 47. The Aimless Void
56:53 46. Eternal Isle
58:46 45. Scattered Dimension
1:00:11 44. Golden Ratio
1:02:14 43. A Jounery To The End Of Time
1:04:29 42. Ethereal Demise
1:06:41 41. Besiege Heleco
1:08:56 40. Mystifying Universe
1:10:36 39. Crystal River
1:12:29 38. Ethereal Ascent
1:14:13 37. Holoscape
1:16:04 36. Abstract Voidlands
1:18:09 35. Mystical Paradise
1:20:37 34. Fragmental Vortex
1:22:31 33. Thaumaturgic Rifts
1:24:55 32. Scattered Time
1:27:19 31. Luminescent Breach
1:29:33 30. Polychroma
1:32:23 29. Underworld Infinity
1:34:27 28. Collapsing Time Reactor
1:36:50 27. The Seventh Dimension
1:38:50 26. Lunarian Starlight
1:41:24 25. Surreal Delusion
1:43:06 24. The Malfunction Of Time
1:45:33 23. [ERROR] FILE DEPRECATED
1:47:45 22. Televerse Limbo
1:49:37 21. The Spectral Prism
1:53:13 20. Interstice Mindscape
1:55:54 19. Shattering Realms
1:58:25 18. The Tower At The End Of Time
2:00:46 17. Beyond Reality
2:02:39 16. Buttonless%
2:04:54 15. Dreamscape Skylines
2:06:57 14. Cakrwal, Nexus Engine
2:09:46 13. Envisioned Order
2:11:55 12. Cerebral Colosseum
2:14:06 11. Warped Horizon
2:16:28 10. Digital Dynasty
2:18:11 9. Simulant
2:20:12 8. Picture Your Realm
2:22:49 7. Skyline Oscura
2:24:49 6. Smoldering Fractured Realm
2:27:08 5. Crystal Clear Skies
2:28:52 4. Surreal Scene
2:31:02 3. Space-Time Torsion
2:33:15 2. Gallery Of Illusions
2:35:18 1. Gallery Of Wonders
2:36:49 the real 1. Crossing The 7 Wonders
2:41:55 Outro
You deserve an award my guy
Thank you for playing Digital Dysfunction, pretty bad for the very first finished map I think.
Seriously, I didn’t touch much in the gameplay, I mostly handle the 2D section and the detail around. At first, I wanted to make an Internet themed map, it could’ve been a different map, but then the team decided to change the theme and I’m not the leader, so I followed them. In conclusion, thanks for the feedback, I’ll try to take it as a lesson for my later maps.
Very surprised that out of all the jam maps, Simulant was able to score in the top 10, even tying with Smoldering Fractured Realm and Skyline Oscura (made by fellow tria map makers lmao).
Just as a fun little explanation for the theming, the map was actually supposed to be loosely based off of Inside Out and have different "emotions" depending on the tone of the song, which is also why the RJ OST was chosen as it had many different tone changes, but it eventually just transitioned into an rgb theme because we believed the theme was too vague. It was still fun to make regardless, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for playing Stranded! Absolutely not my best work, but I really appreciate the feedback. Making a map in only a week was a tough but fun challenge. Hope to get in the top 50 if there’s another event :)
4:04 LMAO the jab at my map being a bit rushed and me forgetting to remove the toolbox model inside of the map XD
wow gotta love getting funni number 69
anyways uhh thanks for the feedback, I was the lead on all the gp so ill fix it if me and the other creators decide to remake it
but yeah i agree the forest section is total butt and i didnt even know there were slopes until i played it the next day [i did NOT know about the tree slopes bc my friend randomly added them for no reason 😭]
but uhh thanks for the 4 [4 is my favorite number]
also the main reason most parts are underdetailed is because towards the last 3 days of the jam, a core reset bug appeared in the map, so the end areas are kinda rushed, but yeah I wish that bug didnt happen because we couldve done so much in 3 days
thanks again for reviewing our map
ah, sorry that happen. I was being a little heated cause the map drove me nuts while playing it 😅
@@PokerFaz it's okay 😭
thanks for putting digital dynasty on top 10! we’ll use ur criticism on the gp and make changes, thanks!
Me and Phos were still a bit busy while making the map in the Jam, so cutscenes is our savior there. But it's alright tho, I'll try to fix my mistakes in our next upcoming projects and updates, thank you anyway!!
I know I'm so late but I only came here to see if feedback was shared here and I saw my map Shattering Realms in the top 20.. WTF
Let me just say this, my map should've had wayy lower creativity score, because I didn't personally find it THAT appealing even though it's my own work lol..
As for the gp, I already knew it was horribly executed, I wanted to save the best of gp at the 2d part but I had like 1 day to set everything up along with the ending, basically I rushed and it turned out like this, yikes.
V2 on the way hopefully
Great Video!
thanks for playing alluring phantasm and actually giving some feedback, and tbh, its my first ever map so there will be trial and error. do you mind explaining whats wrong with the gameplay or design?feedback is gonna be added into the map. thanks for the feedback again poker!!! and you got the theme exactly right btw!
also u had the same opinions as you on picture your own world and people got so mad, i hate how people cant take criticism.
The gameplay is very linearly made. I prefer, ragardless of the difficulty, for the maps to have a lot of twist and turns + verticality, cause it makes them more engaging. For the detail, the theming in the first part is a bit inconsistent(neon signs, platforms that are weirdly made(jellyfish ones idk how to call them), "main" islands). Also making maps that are not "boxed" is hard because the background should be pretty good, the lighting also should be good to basically mask the inevitable edges of the maps. It basically takes a lot of practice to make them really good. Specifically for this map, some island movements would make this map better. I think this kinda has the same idea as the Inside Out memory islands, so you can take a look at those also.
Hope this helps!
@@PokerFazthis helps alot! tysm, and the jellyfish platforms are made to fit in the abstract theme. i will keep this in mind for future maps!! ❤
In which rank was televerse limbo
22nd
the weirdness of crystal river's gameplay was mainly because i did the whole layout in a single morning 💀 thanks for feedback tho
I Looooooove Gallery of Illusion 🗣🗣🔥🔥🔥🔥
im sad, enlightened shard got eliminated, still theres some abstract parts but most is nature, bruh what a mess that we made for this map 😓😓😓
Cant lie i dont think my map deserves to be that high LOL.
I had more plans for gameplay inside the tower but i ran out of time + the bgm was only 2 minutes long so I had to rush the last section. Also gameplay is my weakest part regarding making maps so I have to agree its not the best lol.
Anyways, glad you enjoyed the map still.
Sup shadowking12331 I love your videos!
maybe i should remove all comments saynig this cursed name...
an disclassified map jam still can be highlighted in an month?
not necessarily in one month, but they can be highlighted some day
@@PokerFaz ty, me and my friends will make an "V2" the map is also available on surge outbreak (but the game is unavailable lol)
I unfortunately have to say this is the ranking of top 6 winning maps
#1: Gallery of Wonders
Score: 27.875/30
#2: Surreal Scene
Score: 27.8571428571429/30
#3: Smoldering Fractured Realm
Score: 27.1875/30
#4: Interstice Mindscape
Score: 26.3125/30 (tied)
#5: Gallery of Illusion
Score: 26.3125/30 (tied)
#6: Envisioned Order
Score: 26.1875/30
Maps that didn't win in your top 6 ranking:
#5: Crystal Clear Skies
#3: Space-Time Torsion (I don't understand why)
*Opinion:*
You kinda did most of them dirty. It's not the judges' fault because this is just their opinion.
It's probably sad to all crazy+ maps in FE2CM Map Jam not win but all of them are just opinions sometimes.
All of them are gonna be highlighted on November.
Uhm Ethereal Demise was never disqualified...
Why
I mean thanks for saying its good outside the jam but it was never brought to any concern of being disqualified other than a proportion of people not understanding the theme. Kinda unfair how you bring it down for me tryna make a unique abstract theme but okay.
Also where crazy defined abstract as ''Not Nature or facility'' was a joke confirmed by ryalbern, i literally spoke to them and they said it was a fine theme (and i got the idea from searching ''abstract life and death'' on the internet lol..)
I am curious what you would have rated it if you hadnt brought down theme for concern which never existed
Edit: I do somewhat agree with you wanting to lower the rating of the maps that don't look as abstract but i do think the miscommunication of ''Not Nature or Facility'' ruined peoples thoughts on some maps and i was pretty annoyed when you said it was disqualified when it was never lol. But gg on being first person to have fully edited ranking of all 85 maps.
All of the disuqalified maps in the video were not officially disqualified, rather chosen by me as maps that were either unplayable/broken or didn't follow the theme imo. I knew Crazyblox basically wanted something "creative" but I thought actually having the theme "Abstract" is better because it makes judging the maps easier. Sorry for feeling like your map was not fairly ranked but I stated in the video my reasons for not thinking this was enough "abstract" to me. I wouldn't have guessed the idea without reading your interpretation, that's why. Outside of the jam, I don't rank maps(especially for creativity) but it would have had around 20 points. Your map is still great.
Great!
Yeah i was high when i was making mindscape library 🔥🔥🔥🔥💥💥💥💥
Tho fr the reason why it sucks so badly is cause i had like 2 days to work on it cause i started insanely late LOL
well for 2 days this is literally amazing, good job on finishing it
what can i add to Abstract Voidlands quick!!
another exploding ball
@@PokerFaz uhh
LETS GO 12TH PLACE
Here's what can I say about my favourite Map in the Jam, can you guess it? (Hint: it's 16/30)
The sync depends on how fast the player gone into the portal, not how devs made it! So it isn't exactly their fault!
The lag isn't intended for the map, the creators know about it, and in near future it's promised to be fixed!
As you said, they had a week, HOW DO YOU EXPECT A BETTER END SECTION WHEN YOU NEED TO DO A WHOLE MAP IN A WEEK?
You have 3 attempts to guess it!
Ingore the end section word, I thought you had to complain about it, and I'm lazy to fix it?
error file depricated, ez
@@PokerFaz Yeah, I gave you the easiest one, but seriously, they promised to fix lags there, we just don't know when...
Creativity 3 on Thaumaturgic 😭 I worked so hard on the lore.....
i'm sorry :(
bro got lucky he wasnt (from my knowing) part of the massacre of besiege on fops stream (never again will i make a kill part a touch part)
Jokes aside thanks for the feedback. they will be implanted in place once the jam ends (Thanks for playing. and for some reason reading the lore) :D
@@Thedudewholikesyata np
yappatron 💀💀 pokeryap 💀💀
FR
Ngl i disagree hard with ur opinon on digital dysfuncation, not to say the video is terrible because i disagree with you good video overall still.
I forgot to put dot at good and you
lol.
near the bottom XD (63 place XD)
eh.. kinda makes sense
idk why people like the map :Shrug:
only 27 hours
YOOOOOOOO I AM GOING TO WATCH ALLAT
as you should
yoo i got to the top 50
crazy clickbait. maybe even crazy+....,...,,
pokerfaz cant respond to this comment
Bro I acc hate pokerfat
sure :D