This is sooooo helpful. I am a mom who has been fustrated trying to help my child understand how to write a paragraph. This was well organized and structural. Thank you
I really like how specific you make your word wall for each type of paragraph since it helps students remember elements to include in their writing and can help speed up their process in identifying/highlighting the correct examples from their reading to cite instead of highlighting everything. I love checklists so I appreciate you modeling yours. Grateful!
Amazing! Working with your child is going to help them sooo much! Thank you for being a supportive and hardworking parent. I appreciate your effort!! And I am so grateful this helped you and your child! I LOVE WRITING
This is fantastic!!! Do you have examples of a finished flow map to see? I'd love a couple examples to read over before I begin teaching my fifth grader. Thank you!!!
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I have purchased this and LOVE it! Is it possible for you to somehow update example essays for each type? It would be so helpful for me to see a good student sample to see if I'm teaching correctly.
Wow. You have explained this so well. I intend to purchase this for my class. I do have a couple of questions as I am very green to teaching (I have a 4/5 split class). To differentiate this for my low grade 4 and 5s, what would you suggest? Decreasing number of paragraphs? Just a single paragraph? Also, how long chunks of time do you find you are taking for the lessons? This has been so valuable to me. Thank you.
Hello! I differentiate by pulling for small group, using sentence stems for the transitional phrases, allow students to copy me or if they feel like they can handle it, filling in their own. I also do a lot of partner work! I usually spend 45-55 min on each chunk of the writing lesson :)
first year teacher dong an internship for student teaching! this is so helpful!! what time of the year do you start these? and how often do you do them?
Hi . I am a mom and my son is struggling with essay and not far from the state test. Can you please make a video working on an essay from intro to conclusion like if you are in class? You video helped me.a lot. Thanks
This is write on time. Lol. I made myself laugh. But seriously just found out that I am the social studies and writing teacher and I am so lost. I have always just taught reading and grammar so here we are.
I’m really scared for all of my FSA tests because I’m in online school in the 5th grade and I’ve been really stressed about it too. My writing FSA is on April 20th and I keep thinking about it. Last year when I was in 4th I learned about writing but COVID started right before my writing FSA and I also forgot some things my teacher taught me. That’s why I do a lot of research about writing tips and things like that. Sorry it was so long if you read this.
Don’t be nervous about the test! The fact that you take initiative to research on your own is amazing! You are not defined by a test, especially when the world was very unsteady. Try your best and I promise you, you will learn everything you need to learn all in due time 💕
@@HighVibeTeaching I am struggling to get my kids to put the statement together. What we did seemed too long and almost very repetitive throughout the essay.
@@HighVibeTeaching Wow! Idid not expect a response. You aren't even teaching anymore. Thanks. I started looking online andI think I found something that will work. I'm going to try your system this year and I'm really nervous. Thank you for responding.
@@HighVibeTeaching You are so sweet to still follow up on your products like this. Yesterday I looked for something on Teddy Roosevelt and thought I'd try to follow your instructions like I was a student. I think I just didn't find a very appropriate source article. I'm going to try again today using one of your source articles. Also, I'm going to start out with the 3rd grade level. My 5th graders aren't good writers to begin with. I'll start with the paragraph and then move up to the essay. The only specific question I have is how to do the formative assessment. They will have circled one detail in red for a formative assessment. It seems like more of a pass/fail thing to me. You're adorable and so bright and energetic. Your district lost a good teacher. Such a shame.
Hello! I am starting This is my second year teaching 4th grade but first year teaching only writing for 4th grade. I am honestly super confused and terrified. Any feedback or help will be greatly appreciated !!
Hey! I have a couple 1:1 calls available if you're looking for feedback or advice helping you on your teaching journey! Here's the link! www.highvibeteaching.com/offers/u5v7FgEr
I love the organization of this! I'm curious, how do you have your kids quote once they start publishing. Do you look for "In _____, pg. __, Paragraph ___, it states "_____" or is it a more simple than that?
So in the beginning of the year, when we discuss R.A.C.E we create a poster/ anchor chart about transitional phrases we can use to Cite information. Then when we move to that section of our writing, it goes really smoothly because we have been practicing how to cite :) We make an entire chart of different transitional phrases the students can choose for that section of the writing :)
Yes! Number the paragraph 1st. The tell students that we will be going through each sentence of the paragraph asking ourselves: "Is this an important detail about the main idea?" If yes, then write down on circle map and label the paragraph :) Just to get in that habit.
Ask & answer the who what where when which why how questions which should show tell describe explain teach us about any person place thing idea event situation story.
I would make extra time for my students to get all the body paragraphs done in one day. The writing may take 60 min lesson instead of a typical 30-45 min lesson :) I would sometimes put the red and orange paragraph a days into a lesson as well! Then the next day focus on green and blue!
It's good to know that even 5th graders aren't expected to write all 5 paragraphs in one day. I have my 2nd grader writing 3 to 5 sentences a day toward a single paragraph. And I was thinking by 5th grade on assessments or state writing tests, they might have to practice all year writing more in one sitting, but I guess not? 😅 So when they do have a standardized or quarterly writing assessments, do they just require a quick write that only requires a paragraph or so to answer the prompt...or do they in fact have to he able to wip out a whole 5 paragraph essay in one test by the end of the year? And what about third graders end of year writing test expectations? Thanks!
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Yup SAME!!! I learned the most about teaching from TH-cam.. not actual college lol lol lol
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I’m a first year teacher and I’ll be teaching 5th grade. This is so helpful, thank you so much!
Yay so happy!
Thank you for sharing your WORD WALL. Interesting method of teaching.
This is sooooo helpful. I am a mom who has been fustrated trying to help my child understand how to write a paragraph. This was well organized and structural. Thank you
Yay you are so welcome!!!
I am a 5th grader and I love writing plus I am teaching my siblings how to write good stories like me,thank you so much
You're so welcome! Keep it up! Writing is magical!
This is a lifesaver as a first year teacher! Thank you for explaining your products to us.
You are so welcome! Enjoy and have fun with it!
I really like how specific you make your word wall for each type of paragraph since it helps students remember elements to include in their writing and can help speed up their process in identifying/highlighting the correct examples from their reading to cite instead of highlighting everything. I love checklists so I appreciate you modeling yours. Grateful!
Thank you so much!
I loved this I'm a father who get weekend visitations with my daughter I'm using our time to help her with her school work as much as I can
Amazing! Working with your child is going to help them sooo much! Thank you for being a supportive and hardworking parent. I appreciate your effort!! And I am so grateful this helped you and your child! I LOVE WRITING
Thank you so much for making this video. I am back to homeschooling again this year and this video is such a tremendous help!
Yay I am so happy to help!
she definitely looks like an English teacher, still a good video!
I teach 5th grade so technically I am an English teacher :)
This video was very helpful thank you so much
This is awesome 👏🏽 this is perfect for my 5th grade essays I learned a lot about your video!
Yay!!! I’m working on source pages too!
@@HighVibeTeaching me and my mom loved you. Great teacher.
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Thank you for this! I love this. I can't wait to use it with my students! I think that it will even be helpful for my 6th graders!
I think so as well! I would love to teach 6th grade one day! I think it would be super fun!
You are awesome! This information and the explanation of all of it was SO helpful! Thank you!
You are WELCOME! :)
I'm going to 5th and I am taking notes to make a good stories
Thank you very much, very helpful !!!
This is fantastic!!! Do you have examples of a finished flow map to see? I'd love a couple examples to read over before I begin teaching my fifth grader. Thank you!!!
I’m revamping the TPT product so I can add examples in the actual product! If you already purchased, then you will get the free up load :)
I haven't purchased it yet. When should I check back to purchase with the examples?
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this helps me a lot
Thanks
I have purchased this and LOVE it! Is it possible for you to somehow update example essays for each type? It would be so helpful for me to see a good student sample to see if I'm teaching correctly.
Yes!!! I am hoping to teach writing again next school year! I will more than likely create an update video and maybe even a mini training this year!!
I love this! I will be using this with my class. Question - Does the quotation have to be the 2nd sentence or can it be anywhere in the paragraph?
It can be anywhere and as much dialogue as desired! But it HAS to be somewhere in each body paragraph :)
I’m up studying to pass my FSA so I can finally leave elementary yay 6th grade here I come
Wow. You have explained this so well. I intend to purchase this for my class. I do have a couple of questions as I am very green to teaching (I have a 4/5 split class). To differentiate this for my low grade 4 and 5s, what would you suggest? Decreasing number of paragraphs? Just a single paragraph? Also, how long chunks of time do you find you are taking for the lessons?
This has been so valuable to me. Thank you.
Hello! I differentiate by pulling for small group, using sentence stems for the transitional phrases, allow students to copy me or if they feel like they can handle it, filling in their own. I also do a lot of partner work! I usually spend 45-55 min on each chunk of the writing lesson :)
I really enjoyed how you walked through each of these types of writings and the steps you teach. Very informative!
Im glad it was helpful! When I first started teaching I was so confused on how to teach lesson plans!
Commenting this so I can refer to it later: timestamp at @27:06 for the paragraphs sentence by sentence.
This was helpful! Thank you
I teach all little children and some sometime a adult disability people's or disabled people as well
first year teacher dong an internship for student teaching! this is so helpful!! what time of the year do you start these? and how often do you do them?
I start with narrative writing by breaking down each part of the narrative (dialogue describing characters, hook) and we work on 2 essays a month :)
You’re amazing! Thank you so much.
You are welcome!
Hi . I am a mom and my son is struggling with essay and not far from the state test. Can you please make a video working on an essay from intro to conclusion like if you are in class? You video helped me.a lot. Thanks
This video is a pretty good break down for what I do in the classroom going step by step, however, once I am in the classroom again, I will!
My mom making me watch videos so I could pass the FSA this Thursday
Good luck! :)
Same but I just woke up early cause mines is today I’m writing a essay on goggle docs and I finally found a video that will actually help me
I have the fsa writing in thurday to!
This is write on time. Lol. I made myself laugh. But seriously just found out that I am the social studies and writing teacher and I am so lost. I have always just taught reading and grammar so here we are.
Yay so happy we connected!
Omg I'm exactly in those shoes. Help any tips or anything you learned from teaching.
I’m really scared for all of my FSA tests because I’m in online school in the 5th grade and I’ve been really stressed about it too. My writing FSA is on April 20th and I keep thinking about it. Last year when I was in 4th I learned about writing but COVID started right before my writing FSA and I also forgot some things my teacher taught me. That’s why I do a lot of research about writing tips and things like that. Sorry it was so long if you read this.
Don’t be nervous about the test! The fact that you take initiative to research on your own is amazing! You are not defined by a test, especially when the world was very unsteady. Try your best and I promise you, you will learn everything you need to learn all in due time 💕
Could you show us how you teach reading?
Sure! What exactly are you looking for? :)
I love my job
This is awesome!!!!!!!
SO happy it is helpful!
what about animal research? would this be set up in the same way?
Absolutely! Search 3-4 different types of animals and print them out as sources pages 1,2 and 3! And follow this process!
@@HighVibeTeaching thanks!
cool
For the example is this from the text or in their own words.
In there own words! Its where they essentially infer what they read and give an example!
Can you do a video on thesis statements?
Can you explain what would be most helpful?
@@HighVibeTeaching I am struggling to get my kids to put the statement together. What we did seemed too long and almost very repetitive throughout the essay.
@@ksedillo2233 what grade do you teach?
@@HighVibeTeaching I am moving into fifth grade from fourth.
@@ksedillo2233 yes! I’ll be teaching more writing this year so I’ll really be able to elaborate !
I'm frustrated! Where do I find that Theodore Roosevelt biography. I downloaded the whole bundle from TpT. I'm still looking...
I did not make that page! I just found a grade level version online!
@@HighVibeTeaching Wow! Idid not expect a response. You aren't even teaching anymore. Thanks. I started looking online andI think I found something that will work. I'm going to try your system this year and I'm really nervous. Thank you for responding.
@@melissasw64 what are you nervous about!?
@@HighVibeTeaching You are so sweet to still follow up on your products like this. Yesterday I looked for something on Teddy Roosevelt and thought I'd try to follow your instructions like I was a student. I think I just didn't find a very appropriate source article. I'm going to try again today using one of your source articles.
Also, I'm going to start out with the 3rd grade level. My 5th graders aren't good writers to begin with. I'll start with the paragraph and then move up to the essay.
The only specific question I have is how to do the formative assessment. They will have circled one detail in red for a formative assessment. It seems like more of a pass/fail thing to me.
You're adorable and so bright and energetic. Your district lost a good teacher. Such a shame.
Hello! I am starting This is my second year teaching 4th grade but first year teaching only writing for 4th grade. I am honestly super confused and terrified. Any feedback or help will be greatly appreciated !!
Hey! I have a couple 1:1 calls available if you're looking for feedback or advice helping you on your teaching journey! Here's the link! www.highvibeteaching.com/offers/u5v7FgEr
I love the organization of this! I'm curious, how do you have your kids quote once they start publishing. Do you look for "In _____, pg. __, Paragraph ___, it states "_____" or is it a more simple than that?
So in the beginning of the year, when we discuss R.A.C.E we create a poster/ anchor chart about transitional phrases we can use to Cite information. Then when we move to that section of our writing, it goes really smoothly because we have been practicing how to cite :)
We make an entire chart of different transitional phrases the students can choose for that section of the writing :)
Bre-tiful Teaching thats great! Thank you very much for your response and the great resources you’ve given.
Keshana you are welcome! Happy teaching!
I need this for 2nd grade!!! Is this edible? Or can you make one for 2nd and 3rd grade teachers?
I have never taught 2nd grade so I wouldn’t know exactly what would work, but this summer I can try to make it editable!
So for the narrative do you just do the 1st sentence of every paragraph, I guess I'm a little confused?
How do I find you on TPT? Thanks
Here you go!
I'm in 5th grade 😌
I wish I was in 1st grade 😥 I'm bad at writing😥
I bet you this year all the kids would have many reasons to tell you why a bat would not make a good pet.
lol. That is hilarious!! Spot on!
I wish you were my teacher😔
Can you video tape an example of this lesson? I really want to try it but you lost me in your explanatiom
I may create a mini course for about $20.00. Is that something you would be interested in?
I'm invading it as a foreign myself I prefer learn English this way
or do you just label it paragraphs 1- whatever and then go through each paragraph sentence by sentence?
Yes! Number the paragraph 1st. The tell students that we will be going through each sentence of the paragraph asking ourselves: "Is this an important detail about the main idea?" If yes, then write down on circle map and label the paragraph :) Just to get in that habit.
Ask & answer the who what where when which why how questions which should show tell describe explain teach us about any person place thing idea event situation story.
Did your 5th graders typically have time to cover all three body paragraphs in one day? Or was it split into days?
I would make extra time for my students to get all the body paragraphs done in one day. The writing may take 60 min lesson instead of a typical 30-45 min lesson :)
I would sometimes put the red and orange paragraph a days into a lesson as well! Then the next day focus on green and blue!
It's good to know that even 5th graders aren't expected to write all 5 paragraphs in one day. I have my 2nd grader writing 3 to 5 sentences a day toward a single paragraph. And I was thinking by 5th grade on assessments or state writing tests, they might have to practice all year writing more in one sitting, but I guess not? 😅 So when they do have a standardized or quarterly writing assessments, do they just require a quick write that only requires a paragraph or so to answer the prompt...or do they in fact have to he able to wip out a whole 5 paragraph essay in one test by the end of the year? And what about third graders end of year writing test expectations? Thanks!
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I don't quite understand that I do we do Could you explain that?
Yes! The “I do” is for you to sho and talk out loud your thinking process!
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