Actually... a chicken gun is a real thing! (I was particularly bored one day, so I typed the first thing that came into my head into Google). Essentially, a chicken gun is a cannon that fires dead poultry at aeroplane windshields, in order to test them for possible airborne collisions. Evidently Elizabeth is not half as ridiculous as she seems!
More please! Encore! Encore! Encore!!! Best piece of short steampunk I've seen in an age, and decent actors too. Bravo and Thankyou! I will be sharing your work and hoping you get to make many more. The only thing out of step even slightly is the short filming time. It shows, the fluidity of a longer filming, crew and cast interacting. Not being together long leaves a faint jerkiness of overall production, sharp edges that can only be worn in by familiarity; familiarity with script and cast interactions, and just how everything meshes together like clockwork (or so we project organisers like to hope it will!). I hope you don't mind the hopefully constructive feedback, more time needed for you main character actress especially, to get compfortable in her role, live it more than act it. I adore the story so far and hope that there is lots more to find! All the best, Alicia Manolas.
I love it! If this short film probes something is that it doesn't need to have a complex back story, clichés nor amazing scenery to really trap you inside the world you're seeing, it has amazing acting and writing and even better, likeable and interesting characters, even with its short length you care about the people and their actions, this is what was lacking in many steampunk short films, that even though they had various episodes you really didn't catch what was going on or why you should care. This is astonishingly brilliant!! Bravo!
High quality cinematography and performance from the actors. Must say ... just brilliant!!! If I liked Steampunk before, gems like this makes me love it even more. Shared it.
Well done, well done indeed. Take the entertainment value times the comedic innuendo (use base value of 4.3) and you get a hearty chuckle followed by a one sided grin. Thanks.
Ha Ha! “Trousers?!...” Of course, I admire trousers on a lady. It goes to show their dedication to resourceful & modern practicality. And it was a good wheeze, there at the end! Well done! 😂👍
Yeah,this was great...I'd like to see longer ones from this team,actors..perfection mixed with naturality,well cameraed,nice deco,so I loved it..10/10...
That was brilliant! I've never seen such a lovely made steampunk film before. I'm a little bit disappointed that it got only 13.000 views. I love your creation :)
Yes! I say very nicely done old man. I sincerely loved this story. It has style, grace, beauty, and deadly weapons all in a Victorian Steampunk setting. The workshop and estately home were by far the best I've seen yet for such a grand endeavor. I thought the acting was top notch and the costuming was every bit as enticing as the female lead. Bravo to you good sir!
I actually like that! The colours and photography were excellent. The pacing and plot not bad at all! Needed a little more polish but a very good result, I thought. Well done!
I loved it. I found only one inconsistency: when our heroine goes up to change the first time, she has a very dirty face. You don't even show her giving her face a quick wash. On the other hand, it was a great steampunk comedy short. And I don't see how making it longer would make it better. Though, like others, I wish for another story! It amazes me how little money was used. And the ending was absolutely perfect. :)
love this, !!!! and to be honest that would have rung true, in that time period what one wore meant far more than what was going on. hope to see more product from you'ns
"Dear Elizabeth. Your invention is great - it's just YOU that we have a problem with. You see, you never change your clothes, and frankly, we can't stand the smell...."
LOLS "A simple no, would have sufficed" Oh for the days of tails and surcoats! Toppers and propers, and all things Victorian Era! Where was this filmed again?
OK, that was pretty funny. Not often you run across a comedic steampunk story, but this worked quite well. Good job.
Finally a steampunk short with really good acting! Loved it!
That could not have had a more perfect ending! Brilliant
"Trousers. . .in front of a suitor!"
That had me floored. :) Well done!
kinda wanted to see that chicken gun tho
Actually... a chicken gun is a real thing! (I was particularly bored one day, so I typed the first thing that came into my head into Google). Essentially, a chicken gun is a cannon that fires dead poultry at aeroplane windshields, in order to test them for possible airborne collisions. Evidently Elizabeth is not half as ridiculous as she seems!
I vaguely recall the Mythbusters doing something like that if I'm not mistaken
As for the actual chicken gun... This article is quite informative:
todayinottawashistory.wordpress.com/2017/12/30/the-fastest-chicken-in-the-world/
A trump towel dispenser.. Puerto Rican model
Charming, funny, well acted and well produced. Fine work all round. Capital! Bully! Bravo !
The "chicken gun" was invented by Cornel Sanders. Everyone in Kentucky knows that.
More please! Encore! Encore! Encore!!! Best piece of short steampunk I've seen in an age, and decent actors too. Bravo and Thankyou! I will be sharing your work and hoping you get to make many more. The only thing out of step even slightly is the short filming time. It shows, the fluidity of a longer filming, crew and cast interacting. Not being together long leaves a faint jerkiness of overall production, sharp edges that can only be worn in by familiarity; familiarity with script and cast interactions, and just how everything meshes together like clockwork (or so we project organisers like to hope it will!). I hope you don't mind the hopefully constructive feedback, more time needed for you main character actress especially, to get compfortable in her role, live it more than act it.
I adore the story so far and hope that there is lots more to find! All the best, Alicia Manolas.
I loved her outfit and the ending was so hilarious! Great Work!
I love it! If this short film probes something is that it doesn't need to have a complex back story, clichés nor amazing scenery to really trap you inside the world you're seeing, it has amazing acting and writing and even better, likeable and interesting characters, even with its short length you care about the people and their actions, this is what was lacking in many steampunk short films, that even though they had various episodes you really didn't catch what was going on or why you should care. This is astonishingly brilliant!! Bravo!
Witty, well played, with the right pace and great acting. Those trousers!
High quality cinematography and performance from the actors. Must say ... just brilliant!!!
If I liked Steampunk before, gems like this makes me love it even more. Shared it.
I liked it, really enjoyed it. Would like to follow the story more.
Steampunk AND acting!?! Genre busting!!!!
Fine lass too by golly, what!
Absolutely brilliant piece of work, great twist pity there is not more. Regards Paul from London
This is fantastic. Short stories are my favorite. I'll never understand why the form isn't more popular.
I love the pythonesque aspects of the story, they really made the story into something that really satirised English manners.
I would love to see what kind of velocity and range you get with classic versus extra crispy chicken
Well done, well done indeed. Take the entertainment value times the comedic innuendo (use base value of 4.3) and you get a hearty chuckle followed by a one sided grin. Thanks.
That was funny as hell. And very well done. Kudos.
Loved the story, and the actors were especially wonderful! 2 thumbs up!
Ha Ha!
“Trousers?!...”
Of course, I admire trousers on a lady. It goes to show their dedication to resourceful & modern practicality.
And it was a good wheeze, there at the end!
Well done!
😂👍
This was really good! The acting was great and the costumes were so cool! Elizabeth was super funny. Also the clockwork card was a cool idea.
Yeah,this was great...I'd like to see longer ones from this team,actors..perfection mixed with naturality,well cameraed,nice deco,so I loved it..10/10...
That was brilliant! I've never seen such a lovely made steampunk film before.
I'm a little bit disappointed that it got only 13.000 views. I love your creation :)
Fantastic! The best steampunk movie I have ever seen! Hope, you will make more!
Very well done. I highly enjoyed this. I hope you find a way to create a second episode.
Yes! I say very nicely done old man. I sincerely loved this story. It has style, grace, beauty, and deadly weapons all in a Victorian Steampunk setting. The workshop and estately home were by far the best I've seen yet for such a grand endeavor. I thought the acting was top notch and the costuming was every bit as enticing as the female lead. Bravo to you good sir!
Best Steam Punk film I've seen so far, look forward to your future work, keep up the good work.
The business card at 7:28 is very nicely done. I'm sure Patrick Bateman ("American Psycho") would love it!
love that black satin gown
10 chickens a minute you say, that I must see.
Best steampunk short I've seen for a while, didn't try too hard and overdo everything.
Marvelous piece. Love the attention to detail. Fantastic job by all!
I really really loved this!!! :D Already watching it fot the second time, and I have passed it on to!
+J. Derek Howard I just watched it ... i'm really hoping for a second part!
one of the best steampunk shorts i've watched so far!
Funny. And the clothing was very timely.
Good story and a great ending, well done!
Loved it! I loved the gal's spunky nature.
Love the vintage look...Peace
😂😂😂😂 my 2nd steam punk short....loved this.
Ok, that ending is perfect, loved it.
Ab-so-lutely WONDERFUL!!
Beyond excellent. Everything was perfect and I loved the automated business card
Exelent work, the best steampunk shortfilm ever, and Elizabeth wooooooooow, i want a woman like her, beautyfull and smart, great work
This was passed on to me. I simply ENJOY it. Can't wait to see more. Thank you. 😊
Of all the short films on youtube this is the only one I remember being fun
I say, absolutely marvellous this piece of film!
Erin - You are the best actress on planet Earth. Please return to the silver screen. It misses you terribly, with or without your gun.
I actually like that! The colours and photography were excellent. The pacing and plot not bad at all! Needed a little more polish but a very good result, I thought. Well done!
LOL. This is a great short film. Very creative. Loved it.
This short film was fun to watch. The business card was sublime steam punk. Captions good.
So clever! Well acted, well paced, well shot.
VERY well done..... I hope to see more (smile)
Loved it. Erin Heckel rocks!
This was great. Especially the end 😂
I love it ! The ending was perfect ! I want to see more of this !
Marvelous piece of work.
I had this on my watch list for a long time, I'm really happy I finally watched it, I love it. I hope it will get continued
Intéressant, merci du partage! Stéph.
That was fun! Who knew tea time could be so dangersous?
LOVED IT ! Please make more, I admire your work !
~LOVED~ THIS SHORT FILM..........
...and I didn`t even need a monocle to see with :D :D
I cannot think of a single "the ___ could have been better".
Great acting. Funny. A beauty.
Great film. Thank you.
Brilliant in every way. Great work!
Nicely done. Loved the punchline at the end! Hehe.
I'm Christy the time traveler. From the air ship The Saint Album, and I liked this short film
"Trousers in front of a suitor! WE WILL NEVER GET YOU MARRIED OFF!"😆
Excellent work!
I loved it. I found only one inconsistency: when our heroine goes up to change the first time, she has a very dirty face. You don't even show her giving her face a quick wash.
On the other hand, it was a great steampunk comedy short. And I don't see how making it longer would make it better.
Though, like others, I wish for another story! It amazes me how little money was used.
And the ending was absolutely perfect. :)
Enjoyable...loved it. Love to see more.
Good stuff. She looks like a young Juliette Lewis
I love the clockwork business card!
love this, !!!! and to be honest that would have rung true, in that time period what one wore meant far more than what was going on. hope to see more product from you'ns
This is brilliant! LOVE it!
Jorge is an adorable bean. I wanna give home cuddles. ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜💖💕👄👄👄
LoL, this was a fun watch, thanks!
to be continued? Hope so! :-)
I enjoyed this one! Made me smile for sure.
"Dear Elizabeth. Your invention is great - it's just YOU that we have a problem with. You see, you never change your clothes, and frankly, we can't stand the smell...."
i like this ! she's pretty good!!! 👏
like to see it as a full length movie or tv series , it is clever and funny and would be something out of the ordinary stuff we usually have to endure
Omg I want to see this as a whole NetFlix series!!!!
Brilliant..just love it
What I want to know is, would that be live or dead chickens that get fired out of that gun?
Awesome story. What camera was used?
This is amazing! I loved watching this and it was very funny whilst also making a point about society and feminism in the Victorian era.
Cool, very well made!
I need to get one of those.
The gentleman forgot to stand when both of the women left each time.
That was a hoot! Can I send you the doctor's bill for repairing my cracked ribs (from laughing so hard)?
that is a really cool steampunk made film
LOLS "A simple no, would have sufficed" Oh for the days of tails and surcoats! Toppers and propers, and all things Victorian Era!
Where was this filmed again?
Jewels Bororughs...clever name. :)
Very nice indeed! 😂. tavi.
Very cute. Worth watching.
Please make more films!
This was amazing!
Brilliant!!!! Loved it!
Only $ 3000.00
I am impressed.