One guard was clutching his throat and the other one was unconscious but the one clutching his throat helped his buddy up? How do you help an unconscious person up to their feet? It's a good thing this wasn't an actual manuscript to an editor because they would have laughed themselves out of the chair
This story is such a joke. We're supposed to believe that he goes to the police station and police officers just hand him information about the case on a USB drive?😂
This stupid story is ridiculous. The author wants you to believe that the man was in the house drinking coffee and his wife was carrying on with her brother and their daughter was being thrown down the stairs at the same damn time without anybody noticing anything? Jeez 🙄
Wait. The story starts with the man in his own kitchen drinking his coffee and looking at the paper. MINUTES later, when he gets to the hospital, his daughter says she came home and caught her mother in HIS bed with her own brother. WHAT IN THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE? This makes absolutely no sense. And he's sitting in his own kitchen and his daughters being thrown to down the steps in her own home and he doesn't know about it? This story needs some serious editing and it's getting a thumbs down because of that
Great story 😊
Great story excellent plot and story line clear narration enjoyed
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Excelent story. One of the best I've read.
He returns home and sees two SUVs in his driveway. They weren't there when he left home?😂😂😂😂
Great story! I'm listening from California.
Some families are out to destroy you without a single thought.
Another man not knowing that his bank account is being emptied by thousands of dollars?
Is this an incest story. Having an affair with her own brother 😮😮😮😮
"Her voice shook with tears"? What?
Finally someone who won't listen to her lies
OP dealing with dangerous people yet he remained in his house where he did the planning? Didn't add up.
Hi from Middlesbrough, UK
Very nice
One guard was clutching his throat and the other one was unconscious but the one clutching his throat helped his buddy up? How do you help an unconscious person up to their feet? It's a good thing this wasn't an actual manuscript to an editor because they would have laughed themselves out of the chair
Calhoun City, MS
This story is such a joke. We're supposed to believe that he goes to the police station and police officers just hand him information about the case on a USB drive?😂
youtube ruins this video with so many ads.
The Philippines
Mabuhay !
Miami Florida USA
This stupid story is ridiculous. The author wants you to believe that the man was in the house drinking coffee and his wife was carrying on with her brother and their daughter was being thrown down the stairs at the same damn time without anybody noticing anything? Jeez 🙄
Wife is at his house shackking up with her brother, yet he got a call from hospital sitting in his kitchen? Are they living apart? Bad logic dudes.
Wait. The story starts with the man in his own kitchen drinking his coffee and looking at the paper. MINUTES later, when he gets to the hospital, his daughter says she came home and caught her mother in HIS bed with her own brother. WHAT IN THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE? This makes absolutely no sense. And he's sitting in his own kitchen and his daughters being thrown to down the steps in her own home and he doesn't know about it? This story needs some serious editing and it's getting a thumbs down because of that
Her brother?!?!
Ewe!!!
From surbiton ,uk !
Wait is Rick her brother or his brother so her lover is her brother eww
I'm from England
from Sweden.
From Sweden
Pa
Great story excellent plot and story line clear narration enjoyed
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