I wrote a sea shanty

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  • @MatthewTheWanderer
    @MatthewTheWanderer 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +649

    To me, the coolest, most interesting people are those who are multi-talented, especially if they are good at a wide variety of different things. Elle is one of the coolest people on TH-cam!

    • @jodidavis6595
      @jodidavis6595 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

      I second that. 👍🏼

    • @shazzthedon
      @shazzthedon 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      Elitist

    • @MatthewTheWanderer
      @MatthewTheWanderer 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

      @@shazzthedon WTF!?

    • @shazzthedon
      @shazzthedon 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      @@MatthewTheWanderer why do you have to define people by their “cool”-ness, and then rank them not only by how many talents they possess but also how they then compare to other content creators. Just treat everyone equally and fairly

    • @MatthewTheWanderer
      @MatthewTheWanderer 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@shazzthedon OMFG are you SERIOUS!? STFU you rude weirdo! How could you possibly be offended by what I said!?

  • @user-if5bv7de2l
    @user-if5bv7de2l 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +313

    Title suggestion "The Sailors Way". As a former sailor, I can tell you the ocean is a cruel mistress. Sailors both love and fear her and I think your song does a fair job capturing some of that.

    • @Door.
      @Door. 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

      I second this suggestion. I am not a sailor, with no intention to be, but both my parents are and my brother aspires to be one so I definitely agree that this song just gets what the sea is, especially to sailors.

    • @tedwolf1716
      @tedwolf1716 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I was thinking "A Sailor's Farewell"

  • @SnowWolf75
    @SnowWolf75 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +341

    "Lost to the sea" - double meaning of the phone's fate, but also the fate of the sailors.

    • @AhmedEtman79
      @AhmedEtman79 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      That's the one

    • @YashaHarari
      @YashaHarari 29 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Nailed it.

    • @charlesrice3786
      @charlesrice3786 10 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Home at Last

    • @woodybrison
      @woodybrison 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      A Home in the Sea

  • @xocasgv
    @xocasgv 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +107

    You should call the shanty "Marusía." It's a Galician word meaning a rough sea but also the smell of that ocean. Galicia in NW Spain is known for its rough seas and seasoned sailors. That's the word that came to mind when I saw the initial video. I absolutely loved it.

    • @butzmanniam
      @butzmanniam 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      Strangely enough, ist's also a Russian diminutive to Maria.

  • @elleandtoni
    @elleandtoni  ปีที่แล้ว +579

    Ahoy mateys, just wanted to share a demo of a sea shanty I wrote recently. This was inspired by some footage of the ocean I saw floating around on TikTok which evoked the mysteries of the briny deep, and I couldn't resist adding to the already long and lush list of sea shanties out there. Incidentally, I started writing this song a few days before the passing of Gordon Lightfoot (a songwriting master famous for his own shipwreck song) so now seems like an extra good time to share this in honor of his memory. I hope you enjoy it! [And too bad about the phone, but that's what I get for being a doofus 🤪] Yo ho ho, that's all for now ye landlubbers. I'm off to get some grog! --Reina

    • @shoomanDFW
      @shoomanDFW ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Those phones can be pretty tough these days but not sure with all the recording gear it was probably hooked up to. =/ Hope it was salvageable.

    • @mikemeyers1717
      @mikemeyers1717 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      You never really said that Gordon died , just in his memory . Of course , everyone should already know that , it was a sad day in music ! What a great singer / songwriter ! ! ! What a great song , to play in his memory ! ! ! Love it ! ! !

    • @elvispresleysongssunginmyc4463
      @elvispresleysongssunginmyc4463 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Title: My Heart will Cel On

    • @larrymoon3630
      @larrymoon3630 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      wondering if you saw the movie Fisherman's Friends?

    • @allanc.bourose2278
      @allanc.bourose2278 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      ❤ 0:28

  • @YachtCaptain
    @YachtCaptain ปีที่แล้ว +172

    Great job! I sailed for 70 years before I was too old. I didn't just listen, I felt your song.

  • @jumboegg5845
    @jumboegg5845 หลายเดือนก่อน +52

    "iphone's lament"

  • @homesteadgamer1257
    @homesteadgamer1257 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +76

    This is incredible. I expected some comedic song, but this is an actual masterpiece.

  • @abesapien9930
    @abesapien9930 ปีที่แล้ว +413

    The ending is ironic and pretty awesome. You called out to the dead in the sea, and they took your phone as confirmation. :)

    • @mayflowerlash11
      @mayflowerlash11 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      LOL. The irony is delicious.

    • @8088I
      @8088I ปีที่แล้ว +17

      Oh well, appears Prometheus was
      so taken, he had to take a small
      sacrifice📱at the end🤳. :-))

    • @YashaHarari
      @YashaHarari 29 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @russbell6418 I see what you did there. Good one.

  • @jonvagg
    @jonvagg 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +30

    No idea for a title but the sound of the sea itself in the track is brilliant.

    • @YashaHarari
      @YashaHarari 29 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      And the timing of the waves crashing onto the rocks. Perfect.

  • @dragongamer4610
    @dragongamer4610 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +146

    "Hear The Roar" it just fits so nicely

    • @LawIV
      @LawIV 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Seconded

    • @steakismeat177
      @steakismeat177 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      I don't think so. Beyond The Deep fits much better

    • @dragongamer4610
      @dragongamer4610 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@steakismeat177 yoooo thats pretty good!

    • @mr.mystery6429
      @mr.mystery6429 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Maybe something simple like “Journey into the Stormy Sea” or “Lost at Sea”
      Something else might be “Oneway Journey”or “The Wind’s Cry”

    • @joshuafetter3831
      @joshuafetter3831 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I love this as the name because she starts the first verse using it and brings it back full circle with that line in the last one. It also reflects the roar from the video that inspired the song

  • @cpergiel
    @cpergiel 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +462

    Do not call yourself an idiot. Do not denigrate yourself. Phones have a natural inclination to die. They are constantly on the lookout for ways to end their miserable existence.

    • @rhabeldibabeldi6812
      @rhabeldibabeldi6812 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +18

      Thank you for that good laugh kind stranger 😂

    • @PobortzaPl
      @PobortzaPl 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

      Basically, phone are cats of the world of electronics

    • @gavinjenkins899
      @gavinjenkins899 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      It must not have even died anyway, since we are listening to a recording from it.

    • @cpergiel
      @cpergiel 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      @@gavinjenkins899 It must not have been trying hard enough.

    • @jarrodtravelstead4056
      @jarrodtravelstead4056 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

      electronics yearn for the sea

  • @martinreed2157
    @martinreed2157 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    Keel Down - which is the goal of sailors to keep the boat afloat, but also sounds like kneel down - what you do before an awesome power - and that is what a raging sea is

  • @brentsullivan619
    @brentsullivan619 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    That is the first original shanty I've ever heard that truly drew me into the depths of the sea where I could feel the coldness Bind my bones.
    The waves in the background were perfect both for the audio and visually

  • @teresamarre5220
    @teresamarre5220 ปีที่แล้ว +122

    Love that you captured the "Red sun in the morning, sailor's take warning" into your Shanty. Excellent work Reina.

    • @tristantager7870
      @tristantager7870 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      And also the J. Alfred Prufrock reference, the monsters singing each to each.

    • @annestewart5741
      @annestewart5741 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I'm from a VERY long line of sailors & grew up with,
      "Red at night,
      Sailor's delight.
      Red in the morning,
      Sailor's warning."
      ...& variations on it, like sailors', and "sailors take warning", etc.
      ✨️What an amazing shanty this is, huh?!✨️

  • @Bluewolf1118
    @Bluewolf1118 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    "Answer the Call"
    The video called you to write the song, your community called to you to finish it, and it speaks to the spirit of the song.
    Great song, btw!

  • @artwithjj1837
    @artwithjj1837 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +46

    Heave and Blow, that is what this song should be named

    • @russellwatkins854
      @russellwatkins854 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Yeah, I was going to suggest "Yo Ho, Heave and Blow"

  • @Ace_Of_All_Cards
    @Ace_Of_All_Cards 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    This is absolutely amazing in all honesty. I would love to see it out on Spotify, Apple Music, and just like literally shown to the world because it’s that amazing and I would definitely sing to it and with it

  • @beboop583
    @beboop583 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    The timing of the tide rising with the ending of the song is perfection

  • @user-kg7co9vi5r
    @user-kg7co9vi5r 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    Well done and well sung. I would not have known this was not an old traditional song had you not told us. Bravo.

  • @TheTibetyak
    @TheTibetyak 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +33

    The creaking of a seaborne wooden ship was magnificent.

  • @scottpeterson4802
    @scottpeterson4802 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +62

    I love that you left in the last bit of the video showing your cellphone falling to it's salty demise!

  • @SVAdAstra
    @SVAdAstra 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +33

    A new sea shanty! Beautiful! A classic. Sailors will be singing it for the next hundred years. From someone who's been sailing the oceans for for 50 years: you've captured the spirit like an Old Salt! Purely authentic, all the way to invoking the storm tactics and required confidence of facing the sea's challenge. If you can, please post that as a standalone so I can play it on my sailboat as I voyage the Pacific.

    • @roxitocin
      @roxitocin 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      “Old Salt” would actually be a cool title…
      I suggested “Souls of Salt”

  • @jeffreymckie3328
    @jeffreymckie3328 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Truly beautiful. The music, the lyrics. Never heard a better shanty. Best recording of any type I’ve heard in I can’t remember when.

  • @MegaIndecisive
    @MegaIndecisive 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +62

    That wave at 1:47 was timed perfectly.

    • @alexiserlexcc
      @alexiserlexcc 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      And the other one too

    • @BrightBlueJim
      @BrightBlueJim หลายเดือนก่อน

      I would find this disturbing. The sea does not answer to musicians and poets. The sea is not your friend, and when the sea reaches out to you, this does not bode well.

  • @Claire-tk4do
    @Claire-tk4do 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +25

    The red sun verse gave me chills!
    "Yes we see that red sun on the rise
    we have no fear of luckless skies
    our ship is fit our captain wise
    and we'll reach our harbor by and by"
    Especially the middle two lines
    Especially "we have no fear of luckless skies" like OooAhh shivers in delight

  • @IceFerret2
    @IceFerret2 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +29

    As a retired sailor, I felt that song. Wonderfully done.

    • @grumpyowl3515
      @grumpyowl3515 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Me too! It reminded me of days when we were walking on the walls... the feel of the ship shuddering with each new wave took me a while to get used to. DD 987

    • @IceFerret2
      @IceFerret2 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@grumpyowl3515 LST-1195 for me. 3 Days of wall walking.

    • @otterishly777
      @otterishly777 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Same. (Retired oceanographer. Worked mostly on the Bering sea, which tended to behave like the sea in this song.)

  • @52dewey
    @52dewey 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    I've been a musician and singer and guitar player over 50 years and I enjoyed this very much. Great song and great lyrics, thank you ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @boulderdesigner
    @boulderdesigner ปีที่แล้ว +65

    Fantastic song, I love it! I’d call it “Heave and Blow”

    • @JayCross
      @JayCross ปีที่แล้ว +4

      I'd consider "Down to the Briny Depths" as a title also.

    • @davidroberts1638
      @davidroberts1638 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I like both of these choices! It's such a shame that the briny depths devoured the phone, though. That blows!

    • @LorisWhirled
      @LorisWhirled 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Yup. Heave and blow.

    • @marvthedog1972
      @marvthedog1972 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Vote for Heave and Blow

    • @tarazieminek1947
      @tarazieminek1947 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Heave and blow will definitely be easier for people to remember

  • @jimhurley2160
    @jimhurley2160 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    "Heave and Blow" is succinct and evocative, a fitting title for this epic, haunting shanty.

  • @CAPSLOCKPUNDIT
    @CAPSLOCKPUNDIT 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    "The Ocean Calls, and iPhone Her Back"

  • @MrJtate
    @MrJtate 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Best original writing this year. Bravo!

  • @canthandlethejuice9637
    @canthandlethejuice9637 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    I am a second mate in charge od navigation of ultra large oil tankers, i find this extremely relatable and soothing, thank you

  • @joshuafetter3831
    @joshuafetter3831 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

    I am seconding a name I found the comments: Hear the Roar. I love this as the name because she starts the first verse using it and brings it back full circle with that line in the last one. It also reflects the roar from the video that inspired the song.

  • @scottkidwellmusic9175
    @scottkidwellmusic9175 ปีที่แล้ว +29

    As a former sailor, and having sailed upon the Bering Sea, I gotta say well done to both you and Toni.
    You captured the somber feeling and hopelessness/ helplessness against the forces of nature. We all resigned to our fates when getting underway...

  • @dannyboy14370
    @dannyboy14370 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    I was sincerely hoping she would say, "I'll save you the stress and let you know that...this is actually the Atlantic Ocean."

  • @michaelwicker9538
    @michaelwicker9538 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    I feel like the colab MALINDA with Hoist the Colors would be a good match for the vibes here.

  • @BongoX2x2
    @BongoX2x2 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I really love the accuracy of the lyrics. From the red sky in the morning to the heaving to when weather gets heavy. Only seasoned sailors ever hove to and survived.

  • @humanrightsadvocate
    @humanrightsadvocate 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    1:40 OMG! The sea itself is singing along!!

  • @WalksWithBooks
    @WalksWithBooks 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I can easily see this getting various covers. I hope your song spreads.

  • @CaliforniaDaileys
    @CaliforniaDaileys ปีที่แล้ว +65

    Yo ho, I love your song! You and Toni are so talented. I loved how the roar of the sea added to the tension of the song. However, your phone falling into the water was priceless.

    • @elleandtoni
      @elleandtoni  ปีที่แล้ว +40

      It did, unfortunately, have a price 😂

  • @peterjones4732
    @peterjones4732 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Wonderful capture of the mood and the genre. Thank you for your work across all disciplines!🙏❤

  • @pinball1968
    @pinball1968 ปีที่แล้ว +59

    “Shall Not Find Our Graves” works as a title. I also agree with “Heave and Blow”, as others have suggested. Great tune!

  • @JudoJonny5
    @JudoJonny5 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I'm a merchant mariner currently bound for Baltimore from England and I love this

  • @markforeman7082
    @markforeman7082 ปีที่แล้ว +42

    I am loving how you brought so much real tension into the story. The ominous waves building beyond the rocks, getting nearer. Great engagement with nature to tell its story!
    The musical elements really do add to the depths. You and Toni amaze.

  • @Dr.Reason
    @Dr.Reason 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    What a masterful composition. Thats a long term keeper.

  • @RobertJBallantyne
    @RobertJBallantyne ปีที่แล้ว +47

    We Canadians find the songs of the sea fun to sing. You mentioned Lightfoot’s Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald. And there’s lots by Stan Rogers. Can’t wait to stamp our feet to Barret’s Privateers and the Mary Ellen Carter. Or even the song that should be our national anthem, Northwest Passage. Thanks for adding another shanty that we can use when we raise a voice or a jar. :)

    • @MordicusEgg
      @MordicusEgg ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Yes, RdC should definitely plan to cover some songs from Stan Rogers, especially "Barrett's Privateers" and "Witch Of Westmoreland" (which Stan covered from his pal Archie Fisher, but made his own)! "Maryellen Carter" could be a great addition, too!

    • @wartgin
      @wartgin 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Maybe you can answer a question for me then. In the musical (Come From Away) about the passengers stranded in Gander, Newfoundland after 9/11, did they base the song that sounds like a sea shanty in the bar scene on an actual shanty and, if so, what is the title? I can't find any mention of it in the program notes I've seen but they also don't mention the religious songs sampled in another piece and I know they did it there because I recognized the song from my own religious tradition.

  • @davidkeck9988
    @davidkeck9988 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    the first wave crash on beat is FIRE!

  • @Malyard
    @Malyard ปีที่แล้ว +20

    Such an excellent vibe to this song. I feel that the phrase "Souls of the Sunken" captures the feeling and meaning ... That's my suggestion for a title.

    • @jeffm5808
      @jeffm5808 ปีที่แล้ว

      that is a great title aswell

  • @jacobopstad5483
    @jacobopstad5483 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I like the line that says "each to each"

  • @2ndhorseman
    @2ndhorseman 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Hauntingly beautiful sea shanty.

  • @jackoh991
    @jackoh991 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    As soon as I saw the title I knew this was going to be epic. I was not disappointed

  • @HPgirl
    @HPgirl 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    'In case you are worried about the phone, don't worry, it's warrented'
    Love it.

  • @Lucern2112
    @Lucern2112 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Wonderful !
    Fantastic !
    The imagery- transported me back to an earlier time.
    Well done indeed.

  • @jerodspeake6463
    @jerodspeake6463 ปีที่แล้ว +27

    You never fail to amaze me. The wide spectrum of tunes you put out is fantastic. I’m a fan for life.

  • @DreamEngine707
    @DreamEngine707 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    The best kind if writer is one who just comes up with something from seeing a video and then makes a video that is a super funny tribute to the oceanic depths of our planet’s liquids.

  • @Chris_Blackstock_Music
    @Chris_Blackstock_Music ปีที่แล้ว +4

    As a retired sailor, I really enjoyed this. I am a songwriter and guitar player and I am inspired to write my own shanty. Thanks for the inspiration!

  • @stonewriter876
    @stonewriter876 8 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    i felt like a stowaway listening behind barrels of rum to the pirates sailing to their next anchor and hoping i make it with them…and they keep raising their drinks so i can slip away when it’s time..Beautiful wording and textures i felt ..nice

  • @geralynpalacol3764
    @geralynpalacol3764 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    A cool Title for this Classic Song: “The Call of the ROARING SEA”🥰🎸🎸🎸

  • @donaldosborn9255
    @donaldosborn9255 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    WONDERFUL!! Just discovered you in the past few days as I recover from total knee replacement. You routines and this magnificent composition have really helped this enforced recovery period. Thank you!!

  • @ThiagoSimoes79
    @ThiagoSimoes79 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    As someone who loves the sea, your music are excellent!!

  • @timharrison1158
    @timharrison1158 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    That was awesome. Especially that very last moment. Very satisfying.

  • @wendynine-sc2sv
    @wendynine-sc2sv ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Or "The Souls of the Sunken" which evokes those calling from below and those heading there! PS: Have you all seen the movie based on a true story of Cornish singing fishermen, "Fishermen's Friends?" Top folk album of all time - last I heard.
    Fantastic song, Elle and Toni - lyrics, singing, set up - and the phone going to the briny depths - all awesome! ...❤...

  • @henrydhamster1093
    @henrydhamster1093 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    At some points it sounds like you timed the song to the breaking of the surf perfectly! Trying to figure out why you would be barefoot on that rocky beach. Of course, being from the Seattle area my first thought is concern you're gonna get all cut up from barnacles. Anyway, amazing song! It would fit in perfectly on Pandora or Spotify Miracle of Sound Radio. I could easily see it mixed in with stuff from The Longest Johns.

  • @geraldineaherne9763
    @geraldineaherne9763 ปีที่แล้ว +65

    Absolutely beautiful. A fitting tribute to Gordon Lightfoot. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent.

    • @AMorgan57
      @AMorgan57 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      My favorite Lightfoot lyric is:
      Does anyone know where the love of God goes
      When the waves turn the minutes to hours?

    • @johncross9488
      @johncross9488 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      “Souls of the Sunken “ is my vote for title.
      My father was based out of Reykjavik Iceland on a destroyer in 1942 & 1943 then transferred to a battleship in the Pacific in 1944 & 1945. He sank 2 U-boats and shot down numerous kamikazes. When I asked him “weren’t you scared of the U-boats and the kamikazes?” He replied, “ Oh hell they were nothing compared to the damn storms!”

  • @Wooster23
    @Wooster23 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    A great shanty and you have a great voice. I'd love to hear a cover from Colm McGuiness.

  • @alexmcgilvery3878
    @alexmcgilvery3878 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Great song. I love how the waves work with the rhythm of the music.

  • @jamesmetzler2031
    @jamesmetzler2031 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This song is amazing! As I listened to it, I could easily imagine 18th century sailors with flagons of ale singing this song in an Irish seaside pub and stomping their boot- clad feet on the hardwood floor in time to the music. Brilliantly done!

  • @JeffMartin2510
    @JeffMartin2510 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    I love how you incorporated, "Red sky in the morning, sailor take warning" , without actually quoting it. I think a good name would be, "The Harbinger".

    • @elleandtoni
      @elleandtoni  ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Glad you caught that reference!

    • @ArcoZakus
      @ArcoZakus ปีที่แล้ว

      Great title suggestion.

  • @360hikes
    @360hikes 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Love it - perfect setting, and the waves and birds all play their part!
    "Sad Sailor Song" would fit, alas that's already taken.

  • @Michael_Hester
    @Michael_Hester 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Just as the first chorus started, my eyes involuntary widened.
    As the third verse was half through, I got chills.
    And by the last chorus, there was a watering in my eyes for the sailors never to be found.
    Your piece evokes feelings, which evolve as it goes, and that is just about the greatest thing to hope for with a work of music. Cheers!👏

  • @vaanyaverma5003
    @vaanyaverma5003 วันที่ผ่านมา

    i NEED this on spotify!!!
    so good

  • @lees2708
    @lees2708 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Nice touch at the end (Before the phone suffers the fate of the lyric) Nails along the strings, sounds like the tension of a ship about to go down. Beautiful song, Reina. In my head, I hear it with full accompaniment.

  • @ChrisFindley
    @ChrisFindley 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I think "Home at Last" gives a deceptive foreshadow appropriate to the story. Beautifully done, as well. Thank you for sharing.

  • @burnellmusic
    @burnellmusic ปีที่แล้ว +9

    What a great song! So happy to have found your channel. There is something quite profound about what you and Toni are giving to the world and the folk tradition.

  • @onlyvoid
    @onlyvoid 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    " Call of the open sea " It is even mentioned in the song lyrics and I think it's the best way to describe this song with one sentence.

  • @lotsamoxie
    @lotsamoxie 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Marvelous, mystical & enchanting! 🌟

  • @timgraziani
    @timgraziani 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    A compelling verse reminiscent of sea songs. Nice.

  • @DanMuntean
    @DanMuntean ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Beautiful song and wonderful music arrangement ,Reina ! Congratulations and great like ! Best wishes from Austria 🎶🎤❤👏👏👏

  • @wolfvonwitting7455
    @wolfvonwitting7455 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Brilliant! And I've never seen Poseidon smile so satisfied before.

  • @JohnKoellischSongwriter1
    @JohnKoellischSongwriter1 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I love that you are free to write and create when ever inspiration calls, because you are very gifted and I love your work!

  • @mariaschwartz5827
    @mariaschwartz5827 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    My kiddo says Heave Ho.
    I was singing it by the end. Absolutely stunning song and voice

  • @CRyan71
    @CRyan71 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Reina you have a way with words. A great songwriter.

  • @jimikrakorn
    @jimikrakorn หลายเดือนก่อน

    Great fun. Your voice is suited for depth, darkness, mystery…. Thank you Elle

  • @Hobie152
    @Hobie152 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Superb. Evoked images of The Perfect Storm, for me. The melody was wonderful, and the lyrics sublime.

  • @janetmccall674
    @janetmccall674 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Wow! That raised goosebumps! What a beautiful and terrifying song you have written. Thank you so much.

  • @NotThatDuck
    @NotThatDuck ปีที่แล้ว +9

    That was great! Nicely sung, played (you too, Toni!), and awesome sea footage. That phone fall at the end, though. Ouch.

  • @otterishly777
    @otterishly777 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Loved it! Such excellent musicality, with the dynamics mirroring the swelling of the waves.(Spoken as someone who's spent a couple of years living/working on ships on the Bering Sea, I'd say you really captured it!) Loved the toms, the mandolin, the harmony and general building of energy towards the end--and the finishing "creeeeak" sound. Outstanding!

  • @bluejacket645
    @bluejacket645 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    You two never cease to amaze! A great lyric, to go along with a stellar tune and fun, creative extras. Congrats!

  • @jawngoosen
    @jawngoosen 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    What a super song thanks for sharing Greetings from Cape Town South Africa 🤩

  • @fishonahook9247
    @fishonahook9247 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    My goodness, your song sounds like a real sea shanty! You did a great job there. 👍

  • @HarveyNguyen-d7d
    @HarveyNguyen-d7d 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I have some suggestions
    1. “Yo Ho, Heave and Blow”
    2. “Shall Not Find our Graves”
    3. “The Cruel Ocean”
    4. “We Shall Not Sink Today”
    5. “Roar of the Sea”
    6. “On with the Journey”

  • @wildbill118
    @wildbill118 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Bloody marvellous! Such a talent, you’re quite the epitome of a polymath, I’m loving your stuff. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👍🏻

  • @mikemcnevin1785
    @mikemcnevin1785 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Most excellent! The world needs more Shanys!

  • @timgarrett203
    @timgarrett203 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    “Heave and Blow” is a perfect title. I liked that you were inspired by Gordon Lightfoot. Other GL songs in this vein are “ Ghosts of Cape Horn” and “Sea of Tranquility”. I did laugh at the microphone drop. Probably more because you set it up so well!

  • @paulbeardsley4095
    @paulbeardsley4095 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I could imagine that being used as the soundtrack in a big budget movie.
    And I can imagine audiences saying, “Where can I get hold of that soundtrack?”

  • @petermersch9059
    @petermersch9059 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Great. You have many many talents. And they deserve to be heard. Title? "Heave and Blow"

  • @hernandogonzalez5194
    @hernandogonzalez5194 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I cannot tell you how much I love this shanty. It is perfect! I have been a fan of you guys since Ive first heard your covers of others. This is such a powerful song and I hope I never tire of listening to it. My wife will call out from another room "Are you listening to that song again?" hell yeah!! I agree it is a Masterpiece you should be very proud, way to go Elle!!

  • @parsec2711
    @parsec2711 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Geez Reina! Goosebumps up and down my arms; hard to make happen on an 83 year old from Vancouver Island. Well done bonny lass.

  • @dvk578
    @dvk578 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    That was awesome with the sea background sounds. That wave crashing after the first verse was perfect!