Gordon the Late Engine

Thomas and Friends is Copyright to Mattel
Hi Guys Here's another Trainz Story This would have come
Out Earlier but I had a major Problem With Copyright and
Getting Gordon's Theme in. Thanks For Watching Zach
Written & Narrated By Zach's Trains
Models By @Sodor Workshops
Music By Sa Music Mavis M And InstrumentManiac

[@randomclass4653]

i Liked it , but i think the narration should be a little more-slower but it's still a good video!

[@marcusarline3564]

Woo hoo Edward never gives up

[@kaldesyzdi595]

references to Wrong Road and Old Iron are made.

[@LMS5935]

I have one problem with the story the line where Gordon says maybe you should be scrapped Gordon would never say that he would say lots of vulgar things but Gordon would never say maybe you should be Scrapped.(if this took place a little later in the timeline Gordon would especially not say this considering all his brothers are literally Dead.)

[@lunkrhino4029]

Bringing up scrap is dis, dis
Disgraceful said Lunk
Disgusting agreed James
Despicable spluttered Henry

[@patrickward163]

That role should have been given to either 98462 or 87546 as they were both rude and their spiteful ways exceeds Gordon's

[@firenutter1798]

i was kinda shocked this gordon would say such a thing to edward about being scrapped and so on

[@patrickward163]

That is something I expect 98462 to say as his rudeness exceeds Gordon's that resulted 98462 got sent away in disgrace

[@matthewwilson5019]

@@patrickward163 exactly

[@LMS5935]

That’s because the real Gordon would never say that especially if this took place after tenders for Henry because all his brothers are scrapped and dead

[@dwilliams6440]

Loved it! Gordon redeemed himself when he apologized.

[@patrickward163]

1:48 that is something I expect 98462 & 87546 to say not Gordon. I know Gordon, 98462 and 87546 are bullies but 98462 & 87546's rudeness exceeds Gordon's

[@corialicetales5249]

87546 & 98462 would say that to Edward. Gordon has his limits on how rude he can be

[@patrickward163]

@@corialicetales5249 Yes as 98462 & 87546's rudeness got them sent away

[@Killdane]

Wow I really liked this story! You did a great job!

[@marcusarline3564]

Go Edward

[@corialicetales5249]

I could see 87546 replacing Gordon role in this story

[@matthewwilson5019]

i agree, plus Gordan isnt that mean or rude

[@corialicetales5249]

@@matthewwilson5019 He was rude in the early season but not this rude, That goes to the two big blue engines in Edward's day out

[@matthewwilson5019]

@@corialicetales5249 thats why I said what I said lol

[@northern1369]

I know that gordon can be pompous and proud , but Iike...... Wtf ???
I felt that the dialogue legitimately ruined Gordon's character at the beginning.
This is not Gordon , this is just an 98462 or 87546 or roughly a Spencer .

[@sorryshyss]

I'm not sure what time period this story takes place but if this takes place around Season 1 after Henry's arc then it might seem off. I feel like this could take place in either Season 7 or 8, that is if you replace Gordon with someone else such as Spencer or 87546 or idk. Speaking of Gordon, his character seems to be very off. He might be rude at times but he usually knows when to stop and he wouldn't really go that far to saying that Edward should be scrapped, so I agree with what the comments are saying about this story. Other nitpicks I would like to mention are the lack of sound effects in some scenes and the narration and story pacing is too fast but overall the shots are pretty good. So yeah, good shots and all but the writing could be better. I'm sure you can do better writing if you do more research of the TTTE characters and also communicate with the fans on how to write better stories. You do have some potential though! ;)