ok, i know this moment of a certain girl dying is important and all but i cant help but imagine just kakashi and the other guy just watching this all happen...
The worst death in this video. The aftermath was only slightly above it. First thing is I never understood why Haku didn't just use senbon to stop Kakashi instead of jumping in the way, especially in this story as She loved Naruto and shouldn't have just thrown her life away like that and could have saved Zabuza with a few well placed hits. Possibly even using Kakashi's own lighting against him by using the senbon as conductors and zapping Kakashi with his own attack. The other problem is Naruto should have gone completely ape-shit on Gato and his men as soon as Gato talked shit about Haku and instead of the 1 tail incomplete cloak and he should have went into the orange cloak and would have given meaning to the color shift that was never explained or seen again. Though I think it was meant to be a prelude to the KCM. Other than this, the story wasn't as bad as some of the other fan-fics out there and didn't go to the point of overpowering Naruto right off the bat and even went as far as to show Naruto as knowing he had no chance at killing Orochimaru in The Forest of Death unlike so many of these stories do.
This was a very well written story. I really liked it a lot specially, for the changed personality of Naruto and Hinata. Hope that there’s going to be more of this story to continue and I really hope it comes out soon. 6:33:30
Unfortunately, most of these Fan-fics never get finished, or if they do those that make these videos, never finish them or only have the finished product on their Patrion accounts that way they force you to pay to hear the rest of the story. A smart ploy to make money but also a bad one once people start to notice this fact and stop paying for material that could be considered theft as Naruto is a copyright and making money off of it is technically illegal even if it is Fan-fic.
The story is ok but i realy hate the parts where he can just demolish somebody but is like "no i'll just hide all my power and appear like a foll" its just damn annoying
@@bluerose4899deception is only important if it's not life or death, or will not compromise your goal. For example let's say he's actually "a hidden genius that should be #1 in class" it wouldn't make sense for him to fail the genin exams. It's one thing to not tell everyone and their mother's, another to purposely write it to where they fail so they can follow canon to a T other than him acting smug about it whether it be in his head or his dialogue.
Another Love story just so happy stories like this and stories about Naruto game even dumber than he is and Canon I can understand having nobody's told him anything but even homeless people pick up common sense
Bruh this story only had 9 chapters ffs 🤦🤦 I'm dead ass about to start writing my own shite just to satiate my want for a completed story, that isn't overly edgy and dark for no other reason just to be angsty and dark. To "subvert expectations" and all the other trash.
Just a thought... Does anyone know how Orochimaru managed to shrug off the reaper death seal when the Kyuubi couldn't? Yes, Hiruzen was fatigued by 2 kages and Orochimaru, plus he had the Kusanagi stuck in his gut, but Minato fought his own kage level Shinobi and expended a lot of Chakra restraining the fox not to mention he had a claw the size of his torso literally in his torso
I've been noticing this lately.Why are so many Of these fan fictions missed titled? Can the ones bringing these fan fictions over from the text sites At least get the titles, right?
I got a question that's been bugging me. If wind beats lightning and someone combined water and lightning into a water lightning dragon would the wind take out the lightning or would it not work
I cried when haku died i was engaged going to be married but tragedy struck my feionsay was killed i haven't been happy since then that was 11 years ago
I can't lie I just don't like anko things at like 3:23:00 smt anko and naruto be no.. The reason is IN BARUTO she got fat.. and that means if this fic goes to baruto she might be...
Here's another thing. I find infuriating. Why the hell include the card segment of the first exam? If you don't have Naruto's information, otherwise, it's just a repeat of the d*** cannon story. And it's something that every fan fiction includes, but some of actually include Naruto's information. But no, this one is keeping Naruto, So much in the shadows that it's getting kind of monotonous. Let him show off a little bit. Just having this barbed tongue and snod comments ever once and while it's not changing it all that much and it's getting kind of old. I hate it when they do that at least let him be something above average, instead of just standing around grinning at people. I'm sorry. The entry stuff just isn't that interesting. He's just trying to be secretive and it ends up making him kind of blind at least when he's the stupid knuckle head. He's a little bit funny. This one's not even being funny. His dry humor is so understated that it's not even amusing, at least to me.
4:27:00 NARUTO TELLING HINATA TO GET CONFIDENCE, SELF RESPECT FOR HERSELF BEFORE BEING NARUTO TRUE LOVER IS BRILLIANT WRITING. MOST OF ALL BEING DESPERATE TO BE ACCEPTED BY PEOPLE WHO WILL NEVER SEE PAST YOUR SURFACE IS BEYOND POINTLESS AND STUPID. HAKU IS A PERFECT ROLE MODEL TO NARUTO. 💙💙❤🔥❤🔥💖💖💝💝😍😍😘😘🤗🤗🥰🥰🎆🎆✨✨🌟🌟
ok, i know this moment of a certain girl dying is important and all but i cant help but imagine just kakashi and the other guy just watching this all happen...
frrrr🤣
Bro exactly that has to be the single most awkward and confusing situation for kakashi and Zabuza
I thought this was cringe as fuck
Bro I felt the same way-
The worst death in this video. The aftermath was only slightly above it.
First thing is I never understood why Haku didn't just use senbon to stop Kakashi instead of jumping in the way, especially in this story as She loved Naruto and shouldn't have just thrown her life away like that and could have saved Zabuza with a few well placed hits. Possibly even using Kakashi's own lighting against him by using the senbon as conductors and zapping Kakashi with his own attack.
The other problem is Naruto should have gone completely ape-shit on Gato and his men as soon as Gato talked shit about Haku and instead of the 1 tail incomplete cloak and he should have went into the orange cloak and would have given meaning to the color shift that was never explained or seen again. Though I think it was meant to be a prelude to the KCM.
Other than this, the story wasn't as bad as some of the other fan-fics out there and didn't go to the point of overpowering Naruto right off the bat and even went as far as to show Naruto as knowing he had no chance at killing Orochimaru in The Forest of Death unlike so many of these stories do.
Dumb ways to die when Naruto says "though you we're a guy"
I agree and I want more please
Part 2 Definitely Part 2
This was a very well written story. I really liked it a lot specially, for the changed personality of Naruto and Hinata. Hope that there’s going to be more of this story to continue and I really hope it comes out soon. 6:33:30
This story seriously needs a part 2
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You know damn well it ain't getting one
@@Nah_Id_win_6942 considering "Movie" is in the title i think you are correct
Author hadn't updated story since 2017 😭😭😭 and it was so frickin good...oh well, thanks for what we did get I guess
Unfortunately, most of these Fan-fics never get finished, or if they do those that make these videos, never finish them or only have the finished product on their Patrion accounts that way they force you to pay to hear the rest of the story. A smart ploy to make money but also a bad one once people start to notice this fact and stop paying for material that could be considered theft as Naruto is a copyright and making money off of it is technically illegal even if it is Fan-fic.
After a long search found a good what if. Thank you for the good story
I would love to see a part 2 of this
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Love Naruto's sadistic side, please make a second part. Keep writing, i love you're story's. 🥰🥰🥰🥰
The story is ok but i realy hate the parts where he can just demolish somebody but is like "no i'll just hide all my power and appear like a foll" its just damn annoying
Deception is the way of ninja
@@bluerose4899deception is only important if it's not life or death, or will not compromise your goal. For example let's say he's actually "a hidden genius that should be #1 in class" it wouldn't make sense for him to fail the genin exams.
It's one thing to not tell everyone and their mother's, another to purposely write it to where they fail so they can follow canon to a T other than him acting smug about it whether it be in his head or his dialogue.
Part 2, please!
Please make movie 2 please
Part 2 this is one of the best what ifs
Anybody else realize that 13 teen went into the forest of death. All teams had to get two items and yet 7 pass?
Someone could have found an old scroll from a previous exam
26 teams went in.
Absolutely love the episode need more please💚💚💚
We need part 2 mann
Great story I really hope you finish it
Part 2 & 3❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Yeah we most definitely need a part two
Imagine Naruto was a genius. Bro couldn't be stopped
Take menma as example
More more moooooore pls 😁👍
I would like a part too. What's a good story.
1:45:35 Yo that my friend was a violation, personally I wouldn’t have that
2
Please do a part 2 its so good
Please make more of his videos
Part 2,3 and 4 please!🎉🎉🎉🎉😢😢😢😢❤❤❤❤
Kinjutsu is sword fjuuinjutsu is seals
Pt2 is needed
Kinjutsu is Forbidden Jutsu. Kenjutsu is swords. Fūinjutsu is sealing.
Another Love story just so happy stories like this and stories about Naruto game even dumber than he is and Canon I can understand having nobody's told him anything but even homeless people pick up common sense
Bruh this story only had 9 chapters ffs 🤦🤦 I'm dead ass about to start writing my own shite just to satiate my want for a completed story, that isn't overly edgy and dark for no other reason just to be angsty and dark. To "subvert expectations" and all the other trash.
Part 2 please
More part 2
first
pin me
Ur not special bud
@@jomanasalih5001I agree
Part 2
Next part please
Love the video ❤❤
what if naruto was Trained by goku black x tsunade 🖤🥀🍸
They didn't abandon him at wave though?...
True but who care’s almost all what if’s have wrong titles
@@OangelswrldO Yeah that's the problem.
@@Darizonyou never know what the story is about
I actually cried when Haku died
Same
Everyone who asks for part 2 the fic that this is based off of is dead and it's fully caught up
THIS IS CANON!💙💙💝💝💖💖❤🔥❤🔥😍😍😘😘🤗🤗🥰🥰🎆🎆✨✨🌟🌟
The nine tails is a fennec fox
Movie 2 please
We need another one
The video was great please make next part 2 ❤❤❤❤😊😊😊
Escargots
It doesn't matter
Huh?
Huh?
🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿
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Part 2 please, this has been a very good story.
6:18:00
Noo please complete this fanfic😢
BRO 6H
1:35:17
Just a thought... Does anyone know how Orochimaru managed to shrug off the reaper death seal when the Kyuubi couldn't? Yes, Hiruzen was fatigued by 2 kages and Orochimaru, plus he had the Kusanagi stuck in his gut, but Minato fought his own kage level Shinobi and expended a lot of Chakra restraining the fox not to mention he had a claw the size of his torso literally in his torso
Plot armor
I think it was will power I mean we did see him fighting it
Yes, plot armor indeed
1:24:17 if it’s to late for what ifs well *clicks off the video*
4:22:25 so did Karen just leave the village?
When you said Karen why did I think of one those "let me speak to your manager" Karen
@@sarahstewart1962 lol right
i want a part 2 but when does naruto get abandoned?
I've been noticing this lately.Why are so many
Of these fan fictions missed titled? Can the ones bringing these fan fictions over from the text sites At least get the titles, right?
I got a question that's been bugging me. If wind beats lightning and someone combined water and lightning into a water lightning dragon would the wind take out the lightning or would it not work
I cried when haku died i was engaged going to be married but tragedy struck my feionsay was killed i haven't been happy since then that was 11 years ago
You do know haku is a boy right 👍🏿
Bro this is a what iff
Changeing genders is very easy
@@What_if_Mannn exactly a what if naruto being abandoned doesn't change nobody gender☠️‼️
@@AtomicBlasted that was not my point
@@What_if_Mannn ngl if haku was a girl she would be bad ash
Why part 2 it is allready 6 hours
Would u rather not have more time to listen
I can't lie I just don't like anko things at like 3:23:00 smt anko and naruto be no.. The reason is IN BARUTO she got fat.. and that means if this fic goes to baruto she might be...
Here's another thing. I find infuriating. Why the hell include the card segment of the first exam? If you don't have Naruto's information, otherwise, it's just a repeat of the d*** cannon story. And it's something that every fan fiction includes, but some of actually include Naruto's information. But no, this one is keeping Naruto, So much in the shadows that it's getting kind of monotonous. Let him show off a little bit. Just having this barbed tongue and snod comments ever once and while it's not changing it all that much and it's getting kind of old. I hate it when they do that at least let him be something above average, instead of just standing around grinning at people. I'm sorry. The entry stuff just isn't that interesting. He's just trying to be secretive and it ends up making him kind of blind at least when he's the stupid knuckle head. He's a little bit funny. This one's not even being funny. His dry humor is so understated that it's not even amusing, at least to me.
1:33 clickbait title 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😤😠😡😡😡😡😡😤😠
Not Vote for religions fight
6 fucking hours…
Please be naruto x temari
THIS NARUTO FANFIC IS 200,000,000 WAY BETTER THEN THE ORIGIN GARBEGE SERIES. NARUTO FINALLY HAVE A CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT.
4:27:00 NARUTO TELLING HINATA TO GET CONFIDENCE, SELF RESPECT FOR HERSELF BEFORE BEING NARUTO TRUE LOVER IS BRILLIANT WRITING. MOST OF ALL BEING DESPERATE TO BE ACCEPTED BY PEOPLE WHO WILL NEVER SEE PAST YOUR SURFACE IS BEYOND POINTLESS AND STUPID. HAKU IS A PERFECT ROLE MODEL TO NARUTO.
💙💙❤🔥❤🔥💖💖💝💝😍😍😘😘🤗🤗🥰🥰🎆🎆✨✨🌟🌟
5:38:11 WHAT IS BDSM?
Part 2 please
part 2
Need a part 2 please.
Escargots
Part2
Please part 2
Part 2 please
Part 2 please
Part 2 please
Please part 2
Part 2 plzzzzzzzzz