This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters, especially Naruto and all of his women. I’m really glad that this story for Naruto has a really good ending because he really deserves to have a family, and all the women that’s with him that love him for him not for power or wealth. They all love Naruto for him being himself. 0:00
Love this story man. I find it crazy how much better the fanfiction Naruto story are than the original. Loads of the Naruto what if story are crazily well made and thought out.
This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters, especially Naruto and all of his women. I’m really glad that this story for Naruto has a really good ending because he really deserves to have a family, and all the women that’s with him that love him for him not for power or wealth. They all love Naruto for him being himself. 0:00
Love this story man. I find it crazy how much better the fanfiction Naruto story are than the original. Loads of the Naruto what if story are crazily well made and thought out.
I don't care what others say this is a great story I'm downloading to Listen to anytime thank u for this your a boss please keep up the good work
Thanks for part 2
Hears torture and skip to Konoha.
Me:About to skip because I think it's someone innocent.
Hears its about Jiriya.
Me:Stops and listens happily