I think I finally pierced together this story: OP is very much a social butterfly. He is physically and socially awkward. Bit he has a good heart and a focused mind on his personal goals. He worked hard for financial and educational successes. He sacrificed his your year, not chase women, but knowledge. Along the way, many people, more experienced that him, taught him 'tricks'. Mostly because he and they had lots of time to kill. Guys taught him how to cook, handle knives, work high tech computers, and stage magic. Like I said: OP was an awkward nkid with lots of time on him hands. Well during someof that time, some lonely (some married) ladies taught him about how yo navigate the female body in bed. He learned well. Well enough to mesmerize and striking beauty of a coworker, at a job in a warmer climate. So being a simple guy, of a frugal mindset, and with well stocked bank account, OP was doing fine onbhis own. But as they say, women hate it when a good looking guy is not chasing after them. So they chase him. Her name is Sue. Sue is the type of girl, who expect handsome guys with money to pursue her. So when all her female coworkers were wondering why OP (aka Enigma) wasn't sniffing their scents, Sue decided to learn what this tall, Slim Shady is w about. What she didn't expect was a simple, charming, social butterfly, who had to assets to live however he wanted. But he chose to live without flamboyancy. This won her heart. But a leopard doesn't change its spots. Sue held a secret. She was a woman who craved excitement....mistly from men. OP (now known as Trey) was wealthy, and incredible in bed; but that wasn't enough to keep her from straying. Sue has been spending her free time, when she's out of Trey's sight, to play with 2 married coworkers: Marvin and Dale. From the story, my guess is thet the guys caught Sue in an over intoxicated state and convinced her to have fun with them. When the alcohol fog faded, Sue felt emmense guilt, but they guys wanted more; so long as their wives and Enigma/Trey didn't find out. So when this barbeque, hosted by Sue and Trey, everything was cool. That is until Trey began demonstrating his own expertice with knives, and voicing his detestment for spousal infidelity. Of course, Trey had no idea that his statement and subsequent demonstration had suddenly put the fear of death in theae 3 wayward spouses. But their looks of guilt did not go unnoticed by the men's spouses. Sue was also feeling understandably uneasy physically. None of the 3 could stand to look at Trey's steely gaze. So without the understanding the situation unfolding, Trey had silenced any thoughts of the 3 being intimate behind their spouses backs. The wives humbly begged Trey to be forgiving of their husbands, and his wife, for their past transgressions, and show them mercy. He men were even willing to allow Trey to spend time with their wives as repaymnet; which they wives were agreeable to. All except Sue; but she had given up any right to object. So there you have it. This was an unusual tale of cheating where the main victim doesn't know he has been victimized. He a FORREST GUMP kind of guy.
Ending was screwy. It repeated the part where trey was sitting on the pier and she came up and begged him to forgive her hubby. When it did end it seemed that it needed more to reach an end
These people have a bad habit of repeating part of the story in the middle, makes it a bit confusing. Also many of them seem incomplete and unsatisfactory.
This story reminds me of the movie, 'Being There' with Peter Sellers as Chauncey Gardiner. This enigma fellow is clueless as to his wife's extremely dirty dealings with the other men. He doesn't realize that his threat to the poor chicken was taken literally by these low life men. As to the knife flying across the yard to stick in the target at an impossible distance? It has set them on notice that he could cut them down without even being near them or stopping to think about it much. But to him, it was just a funny way of getting their attention! However, the wives thought it was very Apropos.Making the cuckold man's point quite pointedly. Don't mess with enegma and that which is his...
So they were trying to get Sue to have a threesome when she was drunk but nothing happened, Enigma had no clue even though his tricks put the fear of God into them and they felt the need to apologize before as they they believed that Trey would take revenge on them for messaging with his drunk wife when in turn he thought he was the problem not the 3 spouses!!
Third story today where the AI reader goes back and repeats a part. I liked the way they built Enigma's character, he really comes across as HFA or Asperger's. I figured early on that this was to be a swap party, but was disappointed that it never really developed. A long hour for an end that was barely a whimper.
The fact that people who have sat through this are confused about what the f is going on says it all. I will not waste my time continuing aftre 13 minutes even I was getting confused
By minute 22 I am so confused I have no idea where this story is going. How does the BBQ connect with the arctic or his Corvette or his sex conquests? Total inane narrations.
Read the other comments. Story was incomplete. A social nerd with a lot of acquired skills but otherwise clueless. Two husbands took advantage of his girl. Now they are scared sh-tless th hat he will take revenge. 😅
Yes, meanwhile, Enigma/Trey had no idea all the assumptions were being made that he was a 007 with killing skills. He stayed oblivious. The guilty parties were scared and expressed remorse. He still didn't ever understand what he was missing.
I thought it was done well, there is a common hickup of repeat. This is more like life than many folks realize, lived instead of talked. I knew a man that arranged a golf game, with anyone that required his attention, as very good golfer, eighteen holes worked better than weeks of interviews.
To the author or editor or whomever developed this story - learn your craft before posting this subpar drivel. The story was all over the place. The past flowed into the present and back again without any clear notation. I enjoyed the story for the most part, but the obvious editing/audio duplication at the end was, to say the least, inept. There was no ending and it left me thinking "what a waste of time". Take a piece of advice from an English major - find an educated (preferably in English) second or third party to audit the finished product before posting it. All of your stories have the same issues and, to be frank, these stories display a lazy and amateur author/producer.
Poorly done! You went out of your way to not tell the story! loosely connected thoughts! Character development is crucial but you need to connect the dots. After listening to this story many times I found it lacking
I think I finally pierced together this story:
OP is very much a social butterfly. He is physically and socially awkward. Bit he has a good heart and a focused mind on his personal goals. He worked hard for financial and educational successes. He sacrificed his your year, not chase women, but knowledge.
Along the way, many people, more experienced that him, taught him 'tricks'. Mostly because he and they had lots of time to kill. Guys taught him how to cook, handle knives, work high tech computers, and stage magic. Like I said: OP was an awkward nkid with lots of time on him hands.
Well during someof that time, some lonely (some married) ladies taught him about how yo navigate the female body in bed.
He learned well. Well enough to mesmerize and striking beauty of a coworker, at a job in a warmer climate.
So being a simple guy, of a frugal mindset, and with well stocked bank account, OP was doing fine onbhis own. But as they say, women hate it when a good looking guy is not chasing after them. So they chase him. Her name is Sue.
Sue is the type of girl, who expect handsome guys with money to pursue her. So when all her female coworkers were wondering why OP (aka Enigma) wasn't sniffing their scents, Sue decided to learn what this tall, Slim Shady is w about. What she didn't expect was a simple, charming, social butterfly, who had to assets to live however he wanted. But he chose to live without flamboyancy.
This won her heart. But a leopard doesn't change its spots.
Sue held a secret. She was a woman who craved excitement....mistly from men. OP (now known as Trey) was wealthy, and incredible in bed; but that wasn't enough to keep her from straying.
Sue has been spending her free time, when she's out of Trey's sight, to play with 2 married coworkers: Marvin and Dale. From the story, my guess is thet the guys caught Sue in an over intoxicated state and convinced her to have fun with them. When the alcohol fog faded, Sue felt emmense guilt, but they guys wanted more; so long as their wives and Enigma/Trey didn't find out.
So when this barbeque, hosted by Sue and Trey, everything was cool. That is until Trey began demonstrating his own expertice with knives, and voicing his detestment for spousal infidelity.
Of course, Trey had no idea that his statement and subsequent demonstration had suddenly put the fear of death in theae 3 wayward spouses. But their looks of guilt did not go unnoticed by the men's spouses. Sue was also feeling understandably uneasy physically. None of the 3 could stand to look at Trey's steely gaze.
So without the understanding the situation unfolding, Trey had silenced any thoughts of the 3 being intimate behind their spouses backs. The wives humbly begged Trey to be forgiving of their husbands, and his wife, for their past transgressions, and show them mercy. He men were even willing to allow Trey to spend time with their wives as repaymnet; which they wives were agreeable to. All except Sue; but she had given up any right to object.
So there you have it. This was an unusual tale of cheating where the main victim doesn't know he has been victimized.
He a FORREST GUMP kind of guy.
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Pretty much sums it up. Although I don't think the "affair" got much farther than maybe some kissing. I actually liked this particular story.
The story was all over the place and I have no idea what’s going on
Agreed!
Haha. same with me, I was confuse until the end. this author might be high on something..
Obviously while not talking about his past and being covered with scars they all thought he was a hard core 007 or a gangster of some kind.😅
This story was horrible 👎🏻
Ending was very confusing
Ending was screwy. It repeated the part where trey was sitting on the pier and she came up and begged him to forgive her hubby. When it did end it seemed that it needed more to reach an end
These people have a bad habit of repeating part of the story in the middle, makes it a bit confusing.
Also many of them seem incomplete and unsatisfactory.
What in the hell was this story about? What a rambling, repetitive mess!
I have no idea what’s happening in this story
That made no sense what so ever.
This story reminds me of the movie, 'Being There' with Peter Sellers as Chauncey Gardiner. This enigma fellow is clueless as to his wife's extremely dirty dealings with the other men. He doesn't realize that his threat to the poor chicken was taken literally by these low life men. As to the knife flying across the yard to stick in the target at an impossible distance? It has set them on notice that he could cut them down without even being near them or stopping to think about it much. But to him, it was just a funny way of getting their attention! However, the wives thought it was very Apropos.Making the cuckold man's point quite pointedly. Don't mess with enegma and that which is his...
What the F**K is this story about, could not make heads or tails on it, perhaps he can juggle it more and get it to make sense.
So they were trying to get Sue to have a threesome when she was drunk but nothing happened, Enigma had no clue even though his tricks put the fear of God into them and they felt the need to apologize before as they they believed that Trey would take revenge on them for messaging with his drunk wife when in turn he thought he was the problem not the 3 spouses!!
Third story today where the AI reader goes back and repeats a part. I liked the way they built Enigma's character, he really comes across as HFA or Asperger's. I figured early on that this was to be a swap party, but was disappointed that it never really developed. A long hour for an end that was barely a whimper.
i gues they figured not to mess with him or it could be bad for them
The ending was total chaos ,,, Very hard to follow
What a confusing story........time waster
Once again, this story could have been 15-20 minutes shorter if they hadn't repeated a bunch of it.
The fact that people who have sat through this are confused about what the f is going on says it all. I will not waste my time continuing aftre 13 minutes even I was getting confused
ENDING SUCKS
Gump in the special forces, or so they think. AI glitch at the end doesn’t help. Otherwise a good story.
This sucks
That was a waste of an hour.
Who ever came uo with this story was DRUNK or HIGH ..BOTH ...
By minute 22 I am so confused I have no idea where this story is going.
How does the BBQ connect with the arctic or his Corvette or his sex conquests?
Total inane narrations.
well thats 1:03:57 of a waste of time
Read the other comments. Story was incomplete. A social nerd with a lot of acquired skills but otherwise clueless. Two husbands took advantage of his girl. Now they are scared sh-tless th hat he will take revenge. 😅
Yes, meanwhile, Enigma/Trey had no idea all the assumptions were being made that he was a 007 with killing skills. He stayed oblivious. The guilty parties were scared and expressed remorse. He still didn't ever understand what he was missing.
Reminds me of the Peter Sellers movie Being There
Duplications spoil story
This story is so fucked
I couldn’t follow this story!
Does anybody know what this crap was all about?
The same voice for every part makes these double talk converstaions very hard to follow. Especially with radom flashbacks thrown in.
I am lost with the story..repetition over and over.
You lie to your supporters - Good luck with that!
I thought it was done well, there is a common hickup of repeat.
This is more like life than many folks realize, lived instead of talked.
I knew a man that arranged a golf game, with anyone that required his attention, as very good golfer, eighteen holes worked better than weeks of interviews.
An hour of borimg nothingness with a silly ending
To the author or editor or whomever developed this story - learn your craft before posting this subpar drivel. The story was all over the place. The past flowed into the present and back again without any clear notation. I enjoyed the story for the most part, but the obvious editing/audio duplication at the end was, to say the least, inept. There was no ending and it left me thinking "what a waste of time". Take a piece of advice from an English major - find an educated (preferably in English) second or third party to audit the finished product before posting it. All of your stories have the same issues and, to be frank, these stories display a lazy and amateur author/producer.
I just wasted an hour.
What's a waste. Worst story layout I've heard. Also the AI reading totally sucked.
Poorly done! You went out of your way to not tell the story! loosely connected thoughts! Character development is crucial but you need to connect the dots. After listening to this story many times I found it lacking
Simpery.
just crap
Very bad. Repeats half the story, the ending wasn't an ending. Do better.