P.11 OC Story- 'Whispers & Nightmares'

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 21 พ.ย. 2024

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  • @PhantomJackCosplay
    @PhantomJackCosplay หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I definitely feel like there could potentially be an element of overlap between options 2 and 3 of the vote. Like if Erasmus wants to be able to help Darrow then he has to sacrifice something in order for that to happen. Love the artwork for the Twitch as well btw, will 100% hop on over there when it all starts up

    • @MaukusNoise
      @MaukusNoise  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Ee thankyoo, it shall be an interesting experience seeing whether it works or not!!

  • @BlissStarBean
    @BlissStarBean หลายเดือนก่อน

    I love the dramatic irony of knowing EXACTLY where those woods are and what the creatures in the lake are. Great crossover with the podcast!
    I also love the POETIC irony that Darrow is going down loosely the same way Erasmus described wanting to end his life
    Voting:
    OBVIOUSLY not option 1, because NO! I think option 2 is a good one, and maybe mixing it with option 3 a little (I know you're trying to keep us from doing this, but hear me out): Erasmus and Darrow are on either side of the gate to this realm, and they BOTH have to sacrifice/trade something to get Darrow back....but neither of them know the other is trading too, and there is an opportunity for angst when they find out
    SO EXCITED FOR YOUR TWITCH! Let us know when it's LIVE and I'm there!

    • @MaukusNoise
      @MaukusNoise  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      These creatures deserve more attention, I defo want to use them more!!
      And ahaaa no dying, got it xD

  • @Witchchylde
    @Witchchylde หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I see no point in option one. Two speaks strongly to me. I can't imagine what the sacrifice could be, but I definitely forsee an immediate lack of gratitude initially from Darrow for being torn (from his perspective) from the creatures that were promising him what seems like belonging. Rational thought should return fairly quickly, though. Perhaps in the moment he tries to speak, only for rank water to pour out from his wretching lungs.
    Conversely, option 3, I can imagine Darrow using the violin to counter the song of the water dwellers, even though he only knows two songs consciously. Some fierce instincts of survival could inspire mad musical improvisation that repels the beings and convinces them to return him to land

    • @MaukusNoise
      @MaukusNoise  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Ooooooo loving these thoughts! Music as a counter especially

  • @Lady_Inkheart
    @Lady_Inkheart หลายเดือนก่อน

    If you knew how MUCH I was looking forward to this. Because I knew it was going to be up, when the new big TV was there, so I could enjoy your story with the right equipment. And OH dearie, this was a whole new level of awesome! Also my personal decor made the whole atmosphere while watching somehow cozy-spooky.
    I loved, LOVED so much the way you put art pieces in between to capture the general vibes of the scenes you were describing at the moment. They turned out awesome by the way.
    Once again I am very amazed how you managed to make me care so much about these two characters. HOW do you manage to do this? Asking for a friend xD
    The part when you were describing the cold area they were walking through made me very happy that I had so many candles and blankets around because it was making ME feel cold!
    I think considering the choice that can be made, I am rejecting the first option right away. Apologies, but I can not bear the idea of Darrows life ending.
    I am preferring OPTION 3, that there is another realm beneath the water. If the two have to FIGHT-fight or just struggle their way through in any other way, who knows. But I really hope Erasmus will not hesitate to follow Darrow right away ^^;
    Looking forward to the next part and wishing you an amazing week! :)

    • @MaukusNoise
      @MaukusNoise  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Oh yes I forgot to credit myself in the art xD nevermind I think most of ya know my style by now!!
      And ahaaa yes dying Darrow seems to be unpopular. I am taking this as a compliment as you guys want him around xD

    • @Lady_Inkheart
      @Lady_Inkheart หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@MaukusNoise Yes you should give yourself credit for your art, dang it! It's pretty!
      Also now I am kinda happy that I almost right away recognized your style.
      Yeah no. Darrow dying permanently is a big "Gosh I hope not" for me. Yes I do love the story you made about these two lovely dorks. I wish I could add it to my shelf because it deserves to be a gold-edged special edition which is to be dispayed at a bookstand xD

    • @MaukusNoise
      @MaukusNoise  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Oooooo how about silver edges and a black cover?!

    • @Lady_Inkheart
      @Lady_Inkheart หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@MaukusNoise Sounds glorious. I would get a book like that ✨️immediately✨️

  • @TwixxieGhost9768
    @TwixxieGhost9768 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    so i may or may have not screamed into my settee. YOU CANT KILL DARROW! it works better with him. But I want to see the outcome of that scenario... frick!. Patreon and Instagram, choose wisely. And may the votes be ever in your favour. My angst demon can't handle this...

    • @MaukusNoise
      @MaukusNoise  หลายเดือนก่อน

      I will put you down for an Option 2 or 3 then :)

  • @simonkennedy6116
    @simonkennedy6116 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Did I ever tell you about the blanket and box trick? I think I did. Love the creep factor. You know you could try pitching this to BBC Radio when it's finished. I'll vote for option 2 but I kind of like 3. Secret option 4, someone from their past is down there

    • @MaukusNoise
      @MaukusNoise  หลายเดือนก่อน

      I aammm thinking I will re-record on better audio and upload it as a podcast... plans ideas plans!

    • @simonkennedy6116
      @simonkennedy6116 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@MaukusNoise to be honest it was fine, I just had to turn it up halfway through