"She Hunted Him for Food But Found a Different Kind of Hunger" explores how love can transcend biological imperatives and societal boundaries. Sometimes the prey becomes the hunter, and sometimes both become something entirely new. In a world of monsters, the real evolution isn't in our genes - it's in our hearts.
Um how could he have been a child after the fall but be an adult and see the evacuation dude you're getting sloppy massive plot hole disproportionate that's two stories in the last few days 🤔 is it intentional I think not. Plus a couple of other plot holes made the story lose its lustre, unfortunately. Not your best work disappointed
@Sydthesloth45 A fair catch - let me clarify the timeline. Dante was part of the initial genetic experiments well before the evacuation, while their childhood encounter happened during the early stages of the fall. The mass evacuation came years later. I can see how this wasn't clear enough in the narrative. Thanks for the feedback - it helps make future stories stronger.
@mikegann551 Thank you! It means a lot to hear that Dante and Ailena's journey resonated with you. They've been living in my head for so long, it's wonderful to know their story touched others as well. Sometimes the best tales are born when we let our characters surprise us.
Great story, you could probably rework this and create multiple chapters. Giving this story more details would make it more awesome than it currently is. Subbed to your channel 😊
This story is both thrilling and unexpectedly deep! What starts as a hunt for survival turns into something far more intriguing. The twist on 'hunger' is so cleverly done-definitely not what I expected. What do you think about this unexpected connection?
This is sci-fi at its best. Aliens and humans, hidden secrets, love and evolution all in one. Oh and with impossible abilities thrown in just to keep it interesting. YES.
@MichaelRhodes-u7n You got exactly what I was aiming for! There's something magical about mixing classic sci-fi elements with raw human emotion. Add a dash of impossible, and suddenly anything becomes possible. Glad you enjoyed the ride.
@Sci-Fantasy The "Ass-Hunter" was a comical slight from Ash Hunter. Thanks of course to AI script reading. Was a nice touch to my morning. Thank you guys. Great story.
Thank you for another great story. It was enjoyable to listen to and it made a very great respite from the existential hell of life that is cancer thank you so much.😂😂😂😂😂
@JasonVanderweele Your message touched my heart deeply. Knowing that Dante and Ailena's story provided you some comfort during your battle means more than any literary praise could. Stay strong - like them, you're fighting your own impossible odds. Wishing you strength and better days ahead.
Misnomer tag line. She hunted him as an assassin hunts a target; no indication she ever considered eating him. No other criticisms, though. Awesome story, even without Caldwells.
Molly in the High council Members didn't stand a chance against Dante and Alina when they fought together and whatever supporters they have backing them now don't stand a chance against them still especially with Aurora growing up to become just as strong as both of her parents.😊
The ending timeline was confusing, What was the length of time passed? From the medical facility to the counsel HQ it seemed like a day. the story was decent up to that point.
@Aharpoon24 Good catch. To clarify: Three months passed between their escape from the medical facility and the final assault on the Council. I see now I could have made those time jumps clearer. The adrenaline of writing their final confrontation might have made me rush past some important details. Thanks for helping me spot where I need to tighten things up.
@Sci-Fantasy anytime! I like your stories and I feel the best way to improve is with honest feedback.... even if I seem like a jerk in the process. Thanks for the clarity!
Evolution is a process that's left in the chaos of time and the mental capacity of the species to handle it itself.52:29 We always have a choice, but the biggest question to answer is do we have the goods and bravery to make the choice that could benefit us in the long run?
Exactly. That's what drove me to write Dante and Ailena's story. True evolution - whether biological or spiritual - requires the courage to make impossible choices. It's about having the strength to break free from our programming, even when every instinct screams otherwise. In the end, the bravest choice is often the one that terrifies us most.
This is what dialog should be like telling a story not constant jokes by a wussy Male like other web sites. This is action packed dialog , you know writers are bad when all they write about is jokes a weak Man telling boring Jokes. So far Great Story
It was hard to get beyond the AI picture that has the bow string going through her neck and left boob making it very hard to utilize. How did that even happen?
Instead of the word "bow" being pronounced like rainBOW the A.I. repeatedly pronounced it as if it was the bow of a ship. PLEASE check the A.I. pronounciations before publishing the story.
"She Hunted Him for Food But Found a Different Kind of Hunger" explores how love can transcend biological imperatives and societal boundaries. Sometimes the prey becomes the hunter, and sometimes both become something entirely new. In a world of monsters, the real evolution isn't in our genes - it's in our hearts.
Um how could he have been a child after the fall but be an adult and see the evacuation dude you're getting sloppy massive plot hole disproportionate that's two stories in the last few days 🤔 is it intentional I think not. Plus a couple of other plot holes made the story lose its lustre, unfortunately. Not your best work disappointed
@Sydthesloth45 A fair catch - let me clarify the timeline. Dante was part of the initial genetic experiments well before the evacuation, while their childhood encounter happened during the early stages of the fall. The mass evacuation came years later. I can see how this wasn't clear enough in the narrative. Thanks for the feedback - it helps make future stories stronger.
Stupid
Absolutely love the story ❤! Narration, plot, action and sarcasm all very well distributed! I definitely give it five thumbs up 👍👍👍👍👍
Wow, thank you!
Love this one!!! Well done 😉
Oh, and thanks for sharing. 👍
This was a great story about love, acceptance ,and the kind of trust that heals.
Awesome story!!!
Thanks for sharing!!
This is one of the best stories I've ever listened too. Absolutely loved it!
@mikegann551 Thank you! It means a lot to hear that Dante and Ailena's journey resonated with you. They've been living in my head for so long, it's wonderful to know their story touched others as well. Sometimes the best tales are born when we let our characters surprise us.
Yup
Beautiful, just beautiful! Their love started 20 years earlier when she spared him, and then he, in turn, spared her. Happy New Year!
Great story, you could probably rework this and create multiple chapters. Giving this story more details would make it more awesome than it currently is. Subbed to your channel 😊
This story is both thrilling and unexpectedly deep! What starts as a hunt for survival turns into something far more intriguing. The twist on 'hunger' is so cleverly done-definitely not what I expected. What do you think about this unexpected connection?
The best yet!
@hmcpimpslap480 Simple. Direct. Just like Dante would appreciate. Thank you!
This is sci-fi at its best. Aliens and humans, hidden secrets, love and evolution all in one. Oh and with impossible abilities thrown in just to keep it interesting. YES.
@MichaelRhodes-u7n You got exactly what I was aiming for! There's something magical about mixing classic sci-fi elements with raw human emotion. Add a dash of impossible, and suddenly anything becomes possible. Glad you enjoyed the ride.
I like the turn of events it's something this world could learn from great story thank you
Great story as always. Thank you for the listen.
@VikingShipExplorer Thanks for being there for another journey. Listeners like you make the storytelling worthwhile.
Great story , enjoyed every part 👏 👍
Admittedly, I'm hard to Impress. I Am Impressed! This would make a great movie.
Very nicely done story!
Thank you very much!
My appreciation to the graphics designer ( or ai?) on her wonderful body.
What a beautiful story Ty
Best one yet!
A very interesting story. Original compared to many
Thank You!
@Sci-Fantasy The "Ass-Hunter" was a comical slight from Ash Hunter. Thanks of course to AI script reading. Was a nice touch to my morning. Thank you guys. Great story.
Great story
Glad you think so!
Thank you for another great story. It was enjoyable to listen to and it made a very great respite from the existential hell of life that is cancer thank you so much.😂😂😂😂😂
@JasonVanderweele Your message touched my heart deeply. Knowing that Dante and Ailena's story provided you some comfort during your battle means more than any literary praise could. Stay strong - like them, you're fighting your own impossible odds. Wishing you strength and better days ahead.
Super Great 👍
Misnomer tag line. She hunted him as an assassin hunts a target; no indication she ever considered eating him. No other criticisms, though. Awesome story, even without Caldwells.
I agree. Using the "hunting for food" was a clickbait and completely unnecessary.
Molly in the High council Members didn't stand a chance against Dante and Alina when they fought together and whatever supporters they have backing them now don't stand a chance against them still especially with Aurora growing up to become just as strong as both of her parents.😊
anyone else find it funny that string of the bow in the picture is apparently going through her body? Good story, but funny pic.
The ending timeline was confusing, What was the length of time passed? From the medical facility to the counsel HQ it seemed like a day. the story was decent up to that point.
@Aharpoon24 Good catch. To clarify: Three months passed between their escape from the medical facility and the final assault on the Council. I see now I could have made those time jumps clearer. The adrenaline of writing their final confrontation might have made me rush past some important details. Thanks for helping me spot where I need to tighten things up.
@Sci-Fantasy anytime! I like your stories and I feel the best way to improve is with honest feedback.... even if I seem like a jerk in the process. Thanks for the clarity!
Evolution is a process that's left in the chaos of time and the mental capacity of the species to handle it itself.52:29 We always have a choice, but the biggest question to answer is do we have the goods and bravery to make the choice that could benefit us in the long run?
Exactly. That's what drove me to write Dante and Ailena's story. True evolution - whether biological or spiritual - requires the courage to make impossible choices. It's about having the strength to break free from our programming, even when every instinct screams otherwise. In the end, the bravest choice is often the one that terrifies us most.
This is what dialog should be like telling a story not constant jokes by a wussy Male like other web sites. This is action packed dialog , you know writers are bad when all they write about is jokes a weak Man telling boring Jokes. So far Great Story
It was hard to get beyond the AI picture that has the bow string going through her neck and left boob making it very hard to utilize. How did that even happen?
A good story, but that bow string goes right though her body...
The string is through her
Anyone else notice the bow string cuts through her head and left breast?
BOWL 10:19 10:22
Nice diction.
Instead of the word "bow" being pronounced like rainBOW the A.I. repeatedly pronounced it as if it was the bow of a ship. PLEASE check the A.I. pronounciations before publishing the story.
Strange string on her bow at the start.
And at the picture. It's going through her.
is it a ai?
Dante Raven? Lmao
picture AI is little to fat from eating so much few days ago, bowstring trough head and u know what ^^
What? You just gonna leave us hanging?
Why pronounce "bow" in 2 different ways?