"I consumed the poison, the eight ball of Coke, Now I’m shattered, wrecked, in a desolate smoke, Gazing into the abyss where nothing is real, I strike the void with the anguish you made me feel." "You fed the flames, you watched me burn, Turned my world to ash with every lesson unlearned, In this endless chasm, your shadow’s the bane, And I’m left in ruins, choking on the pain." "As I crumble into dust, it's your fault I decay, Your whispers of torment, your lies lead me astray, Now I thrash in despair, caught in your twisted play, I slap this void with sorrow, and it's you who made me fray." I cooked chat?
I did the part before the breakdown **"Jeffy’s Descent"** In the shadows, Jeffy stands, A crayon in his hand, no plans. His mind a maze, lost and wild, A broken heart, but still a child. "Why, Daddy? Why?" he screams, Haunted by his twisted dreams. A puppet pulled by strings of pain, A life of chaos, drenched in rain. The helmet hides what’s underneath, A soul that cries, yet shows no grief. Alone he walks, misunderstood, A tale untold, but never good. His fate is sealed, no turning back, In endless night, lost in the black. A rebel’s mask, a tear-filled plea, Forever trapped, he’ll never free
amazing piece of musical composition, melody feels sad, as if Marvin is distraught with everything falling apart. Jerry sounds as menacing as he should've in the original song. 10/10 for sure!
One of the very few times I don't skip when listening to a song I've never heard before, would LOVE to hear a retake of more songs, aethos and non aethos related. Also, that Butchery reference goes HARD.
Alright, I'mma just give an hot take here. This is better than the OG Aethos or any other official version, it doesn't shift the tone like how V3 does, it just stays in V1's lane while adding what V3 did (like the Butchery reference). This just sounds more serious and intimidating (especially the instrumental). There's so much to unpack with this. The vocals? Jerry's (or Jeffy's) sounds pho nominal, he sounds like he is actually possessed by an evil entity inside an eight ball. The way the instrumental hums and sounds like an tribute and the pauses? Just Chef's Kiss. And god damn, the lyrics got some buff and emotion behind it. At first, I thought the lyrics were meh but as I let it sit with me, I've grown to see that the lyrics hit me like an train-wreck. The way Jerry sounds so glitched and distorted, it makes it clear that the entity is the one torturing and tormenting Marvin for god knows how long with his own son's body. This is the best retake by far, just bravo. No questions asked from me.
Goddamn, it sounds sad. Because of the melody change, it made it so sad just like the other retake of Aethos. Like how the parts of the og Aethos are not in the same order, like 1:27 that was supposed to be in the end but instead came in a bit early. Like how they fight impacts the shit they do together so much but at the same time they have a personal connection to each other.
@@RaNdOmsCrazyTrain i would imagine the phase 2 art style more detailed and more bloodied looking for Jeffy. But yeah, I think it would change before this part.
Aethos bur BETTER and NOT made by a shit person I can FINALLY ADD IT BACK TO MY PLAYLIST 🎱🥤‼️‼️🔥🔥 Also the improvements to other sections are INSANE, the lyrics sound far more impactful and well paced for each word to hit, the buildup to the breakdown is somber, before being the CRAZIEST banger I’ve EVER heard from an FNF song PERIOD.
Oh this is most delicious! Funny thing: I've worked on an Aethos retake of my own (sounds nothing like yours by the way). Now I am motivated to make a video and publicly release that bad boy! Hopefully, you will smile favorably upon my take as I have grooved and jammed unto yours.
"I consumed the poison, the eight ball of Coke,
Now I’m shattered, wrecked, in a desolate smoke,
Gazing into the abyss where nothing is real,
I strike the void with the anguish you made me feel."
"You fed the flames, you watched me burn,
Turned my world to ash with every lesson unlearned,
In this endless chasm, your shadow’s the bane,
And I’m left in ruins, choking on the pain."
"As I crumble into dust, it's your fault I decay,
Your whispers of torment, your lies lead me astray,
Now I thrash in despair, caught in your twisted play,
I slap this void with sorrow, and it's you who made me fray."
I cooked chat?
I did the part before the breakdown
**"Jeffy’s Descent"**
In the shadows, Jeffy stands,
A crayon in his hand, no plans.
His mind a maze, lost and wild,
A broken heart, but still a child.
"Why, Daddy? Why?" he screams,
Haunted by his twisted dreams.
A puppet pulled by strings of pain,
A life of chaos, drenched in rain.
The helmet hides what’s underneath,
A soul that cries, yet shows no grief.
Alone he walks, misunderstood,
A tale untold, but never good.
His fate is sealed, no turning back,
In endless night, lost in the black.
A rebel’s mask, a tear-filled plea,
Forever trapped, he’ll never free
of course you did 😎
you cooked, but maybe it could be used for an AETHOS retake that's significantly longer than this one.
@@Mr.Prendo ai aalert
amazing piece of musical composition, melody feels sad, as if Marvin is distraught with everything falling apart. Jerry sounds as menacing as he should've in the original song.
10/10 for sure!
0:56 BUTCHERY REFERENCE🔥🔥🔥🔥
FR DUDE WTH
Me when the plate is all eaten:
@@Cheesekthe1stMe When I Am Full Of Your Shit (this is from the Butchery song I am not being rude to you)
@@SleepyAssassin-m5i me when I’m done being a kid:
@@YunaboomerBeing a kid? Woah
One of the very few times I don't skip when listening to a song I've never heard before, would LOVE to hear a retake of more songs, aethos and non aethos related.
Also, that Butchery reference goes HARD.
this has every right to be this good, this isn't even an fnf song anymore, this is straight art
THOSE BEGINNING CHORDS ARE FUCKING BEAUTIFUL
Alright, I'mma just give an hot take here.
This is better than the OG Aethos or any other official version, it doesn't shift the tone like how V3 does, it just stays in V1's lane while adding what V3 did (like the Butchery reference). This just sounds more serious and intimidating (especially the instrumental). There's so much to unpack with this. The vocals? Jerry's (or Jeffy's) sounds pho nominal, he sounds like he is actually possessed by an evil entity inside an eight ball. The way the instrumental hums and sounds like an tribute and the pauses? Just Chef's Kiss. And god damn, the lyrics got some buff and emotion behind it. At first, I thought the lyrics were meh but as I let it sit with me, I've grown to see that the lyrics hit me like an train-wreck. The way Jerry sounds so glitched and distorted, it makes it clear that the entity is the one torturing and tormenting Marvin for god knows how long with his own son's body.
This is the best retake by far, just bravo. No questions asked from me.
dude this hits harder than the metal part of the belt my dad used to beat me with
someone took my title format.......slash joking haha
this is genuinely amazing dude. wowie zowieH OLY SHIT
bro owns the title format
4:10 breakdown harder than og aethos one ever was, good job bro
Ngl I like the v3 aethos more than retake idk maybe because feels actually more scary
FOR REAL 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I'm ascending with this one
guys i've gotta say
here comes the fucking breakdown.
HOLY MOLY. This is probably one of the best aethos songs ive heard. You DEF cooked.
i genuinely love this so much
first good aethos retake
the inst during the “breakdown” is the most insane booty bumping shit i ever heard i love it
This song is fun but I hate my green beans
This comentary IS fun but daddy dont you hear?
funny miiverse reference
Me too
eat your green beans
@@Ax3lBlu3this reply is fun but I love their screams and plea
Goddamn, it sounds sad. Because of the melody change, it made it so sad just like the other retake of Aethos.
Like how the parts of the og Aethos are not in the same order, like 1:27 that was supposed to be in the end but instead came in a bit early. Like how they fight impacts the shit they do together so much but at the same time they have a personal connection to each other.
You think the art style would change before or after this section?
@@RaNdOmsCrazyTrain i would imagine the phase 2 art style more detailed and more bloodied looking for Jeffy.
But yeah, I think it would change before this part.
how do you have only 370 subscribers??????????? this is so good
2:37 for skippers
edit: why is this my most liked comment
II DRAAAAAANK AN 8-BALL OF COKE
@@mrenderman3204AND NOW… I’M… WRETCHED AND BROKE!
AS ISTARE INTO THE ENDLESS AWTHOS I SLAP.. MY DIAPER WITH WOEEEEE OHHHHH..
@@SixtyFourJr AS I STARE... INTO THE ENDLESS AETHOS
@@doofgaemI SLAP, MY DIAPER WITH WOE...OH
This is fire🔥
Love it dude. Probably the most unique take I've heard of this song!
you didn't just cook bro
you cooked, and everybody WAS HUNGRY
IT'S THE MOST DELICIOUS MEAL.
Needs more likes, and more subs, this is the best Aethos retake I've ever seen
GYAT DAMN.................
lymph
Brainrot
Maybe Slingo is a bad person but Jesus he totally cook with the creation of Aethos, and you cook with this retake
Wtf this is fire as hell man
0:22 to skip intro
almost had me crying bro 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
in a good or bad way
@@Rey_13123O in a good way
Aethos bur BETTER and NOT made by a shit person I can FINALLY ADD IT BACK TO MY PLAYLIST 🎱🥤‼️‼️🔥🔥
Also the improvements to other sections are INSANE, the lyrics sound far more impactful and well paced for each word to hit, the buildup to the breakdown is somber, before being the CRAZIEST banger I’ve EVER heard from an FNF song PERIOD.
hippolizard or whatever his name is? did he do something
@@olidaholi no, not hippolizard lol. sling
@@hamburgerhelperboy mightve been wrong comment
I love this song so much I'm add to my playlist
I am Butcheryguy77 and i like the reference to Butchery here 0:55
Is this a freaking masterpiece💯💯
holy shit, this is an experience.....im getting distraught over your world crumbling to ash vibes + Jerry aethos
edit: THE ENDING IS SO EPIC OML
Dang it better than the original one i like it so much 🎉
dude this retake is GODLYYYYY!! YOU COOKED SO HARD!
Oh this is most delicious!
Funny thing: I've worked on an Aethos retake of my own (sounds nothing like yours by the way). Now I am motivated to make a video and publicly release that bad boy!
Hopefully, you will smile favorably upon my take as I have grooved and jammed unto yours.
this is really good
only complaint being towards the end when jerry is yappin you cant really hear him that well because the filter cuts out the voice
@@bistratus thx for the feedback !
this is fire
Oh my peaks
SOMEBODY CHART THIS AND MY LIFE IS YOURS
0:58 a reference to the fan-made concept butchery?
yup
@@Rey_13123Ocool
daddy i told you i hate green beans
Insaneeeeee
Hi
@@VWFM811 wsp bro
slingaling
Cash apping for the flps actually works! (Just so you know if it wasn't obvious)
Popped off.
Lit
Slangmango
@@rockstarfoxy2852 🤫
I need a ten hour version of the beginning
Very well done!
Wow..
I am super scary marvin and i approve this to super scary sml
Sounds really good
🎱🥤😈🗣🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
peak song
I wonder how the instrumental looks like
this is so sigma!
W
🅝🅘🅒🅔, its sounds like I'm Alvin
Peak
fire song
I dont know if i want to pay $5 for the flp but im tempted.
Aethos but 100% times better and with a "✻h+3+яд✻7lucjio0t6" vibe
worzr mix has nothing on this i’m afraid
Why did you remove the sound effect video? I need it for my AETHOS V5/AETHOS REMADE V3
2:34 lyrics part
me like :]
I want the flp so bad but I cant get cashapp here 😭😭😭😭😭 (I'm Canadian)
could u maybe just maybe make an flp 🙏
can we have the instrumental
@@NitroleFart it’s on my soundcloud
Aethos if it was a dead air song
@@valhallecule this sounds nothing like a dead air song but ok
Dead air is mid, this is better then that.
@@Amigothemango dead air is peak bro
@@Rey_13123O im a certified hater of dead air.
That could change tho idk
@@Amigothemango dead air is trash
Can I have a link to Marvin chromatic pls
no
Who’s you💀
@@Deputationproductions1 those who know 💀
Mk 👁️👄👁️👍
yoo could u release a vocal flp for this id love to cover this 🔥
I dont plan on releasing one, sorry.
@@Rey_13123O ur good dw fire song anyway
ok..
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Perez Thomas Lopes Melissa Davis Jeffrey's Incompehensible misadventure that does not sustain an ending
Can you post just the instrumental?
instrumental is up on my soundcloud
on.soundcloud.com/fy4yfEQLJ7We8tjEA
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☹️ hm, it’s seems you’re a aethos, I don’t really like aethos that much.
anyways I don’t like AETHOS songs but I can appreciate the effort in this song cuz it feels way different and just overall better
this one is just a tier below the other retake, srry to say it.
@@Blueoneisback nah its fine im not really proud of this either
In my opinion its awesome@@Rey_13123O
At least it's better than the original atheos (the old one) sorry but someone had to say it. ✋ 💀 ✋
I am nivram and I hate this song
Oh no its nivram!