Wow, you really did a great job reading this one! I always thought it was too hard to read in a suitable way because of the many different people speaking in the story, but you blew it out of the park as always =)
I usually listen to creepypastas to sleep, and I manage to doze off in a matter of a couple minutes. With this story not only have I been unable to sleep, but I had to change to another video because it was scaring me WAAY more than what I had expected. Keep up the amazing job
@@storieswithstyle could you please tell me the name of the squeal plus your other stories please? Really enjoyed this one, you guys make a great team!
As always Vii, you ROCK!! I started listening to this story last night and had to start all over again this morning. Lol. I think I did a rewind about 4 times just because this story is so immensely thought-provoking! I like this series! You're simply AMAZING Vii, amazing 👏 ❤️ 💖
@@Viidith22 I've been finding that my likes on videos are removed from the videos but my comments are still here and there so I went to my 5000+ likes videos and videos like this one is in my list so why are they not reflected on this video it makes no sense my friend
I love your stories and the reenactment storytelling. I’m sure my grandmother listened to the radio for stories like these at night. It puts a warm smile on my face😁
I can never get enough horror stories that involve underground caves, abandoned mineshafts, the ocean’s depths, lush forests and most of all, the Arctic and it’s vast and desolate landscapes. Mother Nature and all her beautiful bounties can be truly magnificent, but they can also be extremely terrifying!! 🥶😱🫣 I freakin live for stories like these!!! 🙌🙌
Unfortunately, it got lost in translation :( She was more childlike in the original language, but I did not manage to translate it well. I don't have an editor for stuff like that, sorry :(
Great story bro do you have any other channels? Because you kind of remind me of another good storyteller it was probably in the beginning though if it is you.
@@betasector Yeah, it is a translation problem, in German she sounds very "young child-ish", but I am not a good enough English speaker to translate that well =( An editor would have probably helped :D
@@storieswithstyle she would be still too elaborate, I don't believe such a small child would talk like that. But okay, I guess. It was okay otherwise.
I really liked the story and your performance. It had a great atmosphere and the author conveyed a sense of what I imagine a remote, cold war era soviet village might be like. But it was really spoiled by two things: first, the little girl had the vocabulary of a 50 year old English professor, yet she was supposedly young enough to be proud that she could tell time. And secondly, how did bombing the town stop a non-corporeal entity? I get that it may have infected some of the people, but could he not at least TRY some technique for diagnosing if they were infected?
Thanks for the comments on the story! I understand your concerns about the girl. When I translated it, I think I chose the wrong words in the translation here. I also talk about this in my commentary on this story. Your second point is also well made! Bombing the town was more of a plan to close off the mines and the other people that started to change were the target of a possible bombing in the end. You are correct, I should have made this learer. I think for the infection, they did test it and found nothing, which I tried to imply by having a specialist there. Thank you again for the criticism, I get too little =) Glad you enjoyed the atmosphere, though =)
@@storieswithstyle You are the author? This is a common problem when a very literate person writes dialogue for children. The fact that English is not your native tongue only serves to amplify the problem. You are doing your best to convey information with precise language, but children do not SPEAK with precise language. Their vocabulary is greatly restricted and very fuzzy. A child young enough not to know how to tell time - 7 or younger, will have a greatly limited vocabulary, and is likely to speak using far more similes comparing against basic things in their life thus a rhino may become "like a big horse with hard skin" for example. I felt as though you were trying hard to imply that the specialist was brutally lacking in compassion, hence his total lack of guilt about all the other children killed by the bomb, but without a clear framework for WHY he made that decision, it simply came across as overly stereotyped Soviet coldness, contradicted with the rescue of the girl. As an author myself, I appreciate only too well the value of feedback. I'd rather receive (constructive) negative critique that spurs me to improve in future tales, than sycophantic "Love its" that provide no useful detail about what people specifically appreciate. I find it all too easy when writing, to write as though the reader knows what I know (about the story world) when telling a story. That's why I find it useful to leave it a while (a few days to a week minimum) before doing my final proof. You clearly have skill at world building - now you simply need to step outside yourself, and dot your is and cross your ts. Good luck!
📼🎥😁God's honest truth bro you are awesome the way you narrate the stories really well read, it's light switch off, get in your relaxing pad, bed or chair, headphones in and Low behold, blow out some ZzZzz ZzZzz 👍🏾🎧😳
I realize this story is set in Soviet Russia, and thus traditional religious beliefs in the region were suppressed and hidden if not exterminated. I can't help but wonder how much better they would have fared against the primal darkness of the Deep if they had the light of religion to fall back on for defense. Not even going to suggest a particular religion over another, anything would be better than a materialistic void that subconsciously _feeds_ the Deep. If anything, this scenario seems a bit like the Horus Heresy novels, where the Emperor's desire to crush religious belief in an attempt to starve out the Chaos gods only serves to blow up in his face and leave the Imperium inadequately defended against daemonic threats.
That is an interesting idea! I have to admit, that the newest Ebrugh Report I am planning is dealing with exactly that. It is gonna be "Ebrugh-Report 16: The Hole". I tend to revisit "entities/happenings" in the reports. An example [Spoilers]: Ebrugh Report 11 and 21 have the same entity.
SLIGHT, VERY VAGUE SPOILER * * * * * * * * * Having listened to "My Village was Haunted by God", the answer is... not much better! :D The deep claims all.
@@TheAshHeritor Not exactly, but very close. =) The deep does not "act randomly" but on the contrary very selectively (in parenthesis because not completely true and might spoil too much if I got into more detail). =) But I am not gonna say more to not ruin the fun. ;)
@@storieswithstyle Indeed, very true. It does seem to let certain people go. Which is very interesting. As a fellow writer of horror, mad props on your stories, all of the ones I have heard have been very good!
Thanks for notifying me, the link should be fixed soon! You can also get links to all reports I have published on r/EbrughReports . Hope this helps! =)
The book sounds awfully similar to the Entity of Tsarichina in the mountainous region of Bulgaria. Home of the famous, now deceased, blind prophetess, “Babavinga”, the Bulgarian military went digging underground for lost treasures but instead came across a life force that was demonic and evil. Based on true life events, they ended up cementing the dig site never to disclose what they found. It’s on TH-cam Channels.
Im sure everybody knows this. Although, there's quite alot of commenters who can't spell and their grammer sucks! I take it they probably don't read and never paid attention in school or even finished school? That's why they watch TH-cam. LOL.😆
Great reading..the story made no sense in several places..such as the expert talking about possibly feeling ill from radiation in minutes despite no readings...well you don't feel sick that quickly regardless. If I was a bit more clueless then i would have finished. However great job reading once again!
Well, the first thing she says is that it had nothing to do with radiation and then she tries to assure herself that it did to make her feel more "safe". At least that was the inrention. What part did not make sense other than that? Might re-write those parts should I ever edit the story again, so I would be happy to hear your other criticisms. All the best! =)
@@storieswithstyle that was how I interpreted what she said as well, since she said nothing to do with radiation and then it sounded like she was trying to reassure herself and say maybe there really was radiation and the rocks were blocking the readings or something along those lines. Great story at any rate!! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and giving us a heads up about both your upcoming story and a couple past stories. I had been wondering what was with report 12 in the title until you explained a bit in another post, and now I'd like to check out the detectives'other stories. I'm very much in appreciation of you letting Viidith share this story of yours with us in the creepypasta-o-sphere ;)
@@marlenaneedham3818 Yes, that is what was intended, though I get why it might have been misinterpreted =D I am glad you like the others =) I will probably let the detective rest for a while (though I am thinking about doing a story with Itrushka that happened more recently). The next story the Deep is in will therefore feature different protagonists. =) I am very glad viidith shares these, he is such a talent =)
I must admit that I was legitimately pissed, right up til he said something about them adopting a little girl and her doll. 😮💨 Idk why it made me so irritated/angry that I thought he’d left her there ffs🤦♀️🥹 As usual, the story was great…but it would have been nothing without your astounding narration my dude!!!😉👍
![[Ebrugh Report 13] The Terrible Cooing](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/NWr-_LccgQ0/mqdefault.jpg)
Wow, you really did a great job reading this one! I always thought it was too hard to read in a suitable way because of the many different people speaking in the story, but you blew it out of the park as always =)
I appreciate you letting me narrate your story, brother! Glad I did well on this one! ❤
@@Viidith22 You really did
@@DaemonC Thanks, perhaps you'll enjoy the others in the "Ebrugh-Universe" :D
Yeah and who ever wrote it was straight up killin this shit!
@@nomansgoddess Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it =)
This one is one of my favorites. I listen to it all over again once a month or so
I’m sorry, how are you not WAY more popular. 10/10 voice on this. Would listen to long books. (And sweet whispers of nothing lol)
I listen to 10-20 hours of creepypastas per week. This for me is in my top ten for the year. Awesome job and thank you.
From the story content itself, was the part that you liked most? I might do more in future Ebrugh Reports with stuff that people found interesting =)
You always find awesome tales, thank you for another one!
Yes the best writers 😁
V can't tell you how much I appreciate you!!
Gotchu fam ❤
I usually listen to creepypastas to sleep, and I manage to doze off in a matter of a couple minutes. With this story not only have I been unable to sleep, but I had to change to another video because it was scaring me WAAY more than what I had expected. Keep up the amazing job
Hopefully you will enjoy the sequel as well, it will be read by viidith next month, keep an eye out for it ;)
@@storieswithstyle OH GOD YES!!!! Are you the author by any chance?
@@Maatkara1000 Yes, I write the Ebrugh Reports :) I am very lucky that viidith reads them =)
@@storieswithstyle oh I can't wait for the second part of this story!! Please keep on writing, you're doing a terrific job!!!
@@storieswithstyle could you please tell me the name of the squeal plus your other stories please? Really enjoyed this one, you guys make a great team!
This topic sounds great! Thanks Viidith22. Wish nice weekend! Edit: Loved the end! Really great story! I enjoyed it. Thank you
As always Vii, you ROCK!! I started listening to this story last night and had to start all over again this morning. Lol. I think I did a rewind about 4 times just because this story is so immensely thought-provoking! I like this series! You're simply AMAZING Vii, amazing 👏 ❤️ 💖
Viidith22 channel is your #1source for all things horror👍💯👍👊
Thank you my dear traveler for joining me on this dark road. ❤
@@Viidith22 I've been finding that my likes on videos are removed from the videos but my comments are still here and there so I went to my 5000+ likes videos and videos like this one is in my list so why are they not reflected on this video it makes no sense my friend
This is the first time I've listened to you, and wow what an impression!
My thoughts as well. His voice is refreshing.
As always wonderful narration and talented writer .A great pleasure listening ❤😊
I JUST dropped in on your channel and I have to say...YOU Sir are in the TOP 3 orators on TH-cam...Thank you.🤘☢️🤘
He's excellent.
Here be our Vv with a full story! Rock on, fam, and #karaokenightlivestream someday ❤️
I love your stories and the reenactment storytelling. I’m sure my grandmother listened to the radio for stories like these at night. It puts a warm smile on my face😁
Now that's a well spoken 9 year old.
I was just about to comment that XD lol
simply wow! great story great narration many thx for it!
I can never get enough horror stories that involve underground caves, abandoned mineshafts, the ocean’s depths, lush forests and most of all, the Arctic and it’s vast and desolate landscapes. Mother Nature and all her beautiful bounties can be truly magnificent, but they can also be extremely terrifying!! 🥶😱🫣
I freakin live for stories like these!!! 🙌🙌
Brillianto! Thanks! You and Others like you make paying for the data worthwhile! Awesome xxx
Good evenig dear V my evenig story😄.I'm ready and exiting ❤❤👍
Thanks!
This is pretty damn good
You're sick man. Keep up the good work!
This story kinda reminds me of Mushishi : Pickers of Empty Cocoons.
Mushishi is really good. I remember this particular episode. Ah, the nostalgia...
Perfection V!!!
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Whoa!! That nine year old has one helluva vocabulary! LOL!!
Unfortunately, it got lost in translation :( She was more childlike in the original language, but I did not manage to translate it well. I don't have an editor for stuff like that, sorry :(
@@storieswithstyle No need to apologize. No harm, no foul.
Great story bro do you have any other channels? Because you kind of remind me of another good storyteller it was probably in the beginning though if it is you.
I really enjoy your stories
Well done. Very disturbing.
Awesome story! ☠️🤘☠️
Well done 👍
Amazing story!
What an excellent writer
Thanks =) The "sequel" to this (and Report 10 as well) is already almost finalized, hopefully you will enjoy that one as well =)
Except the kid. That part is shoddy as fuck.
@@betasector Yeah, it is a translation problem, in German she sounds very "young child-ish", but I am not a good enough English speaker to translate that well =( An editor would have probably helped :D
@@storieswithstyle she would be still too elaborate, I don't believe such a small child would talk like that. But okay, I guess. It was okay otherwise.
Don’t need to be such a jerk. You are in no position to criticize what is a translation issue.
Ur videos are awesome!
Glad you enjoy!
Excellent. New subscribed
I really liked the story and your performance. It had a great atmosphere and the author conveyed a sense of what I imagine a remote, cold war era soviet village might be like. But it was really spoiled by two things: first, the little girl had the vocabulary of a 50 year old English professor, yet she was supposedly young enough to be proud that she could tell time. And secondly, how did bombing the town stop a non-corporeal entity? I get that it may have infected some of the people, but could he not at least TRY some technique for diagnosing if they were infected?
Thanks for the comments on the story! I understand your concerns about the girl. When I translated it, I think I chose the wrong words in the translation here. I also talk about this in my commentary on this story. Your second point is also well made! Bombing the town was more of a plan to close off the mines and the other people that started to change were the target of a possible bombing in the end. You are correct, I should have made this learer. I think for the infection, they did test it and found nothing, which I tried to imply by having a specialist there. Thank you again for the criticism, I get too little =) Glad you enjoyed the atmosphere, though =)
@@storieswithstyle You are the author? This is a common problem when a very literate person writes dialogue for children. The fact that English is not your native tongue only serves to amplify the problem. You are doing your best to convey information with precise language, but children do not SPEAK with precise language. Their vocabulary is greatly restricted and very fuzzy. A child young enough not to know how to tell time - 7 or younger, will have a greatly limited vocabulary, and is likely to speak using far more similes comparing against basic things in their life thus a rhino may become "like a big horse with hard skin" for example.
I felt as though you were trying hard to imply that the specialist was brutally lacking in compassion, hence his total lack of guilt about all the other children killed by the bomb, but without a clear framework for WHY he made that decision, it simply came across as overly stereotyped Soviet coldness, contradicted with the rescue of the girl.
As an author myself, I appreciate only too well the value of feedback. I'd rather receive (constructive) negative critique that spurs me to improve in future tales, than sycophantic "Love its" that provide no useful detail about what people specifically appreciate.
I find it all too easy when writing, to write as though the reader knows what I know (about the story world) when telling a story. That's why I find it useful to leave it a while (a few days to a week minimum) before doing my final proof.
You clearly have skill at world building - now you simply need to step outside yourself, and dot your is and cross your ts.
Good luck!
@@Martial-Mat Thnk you man, really appreciate it =)
@@storieswithstyle My pleasure.
@@Martial-Mat If you find things like these in other Reports, I would appreciate you feedback as well! Have a nice weekend! =)
📼🎥😁God's honest truth bro you are awesome the way you narrate the stories really well read, it's light switch off, get in your relaxing pad, bed or chair, headphones in and Low behold, blow out some ZzZzz ZzZzz 👍🏾🎧😳
Happy to help fam ❤
Heck yahhh a nice long one
Gotchu fammm
That's one eloquent child
I realize this story is set in Soviet Russia, and thus traditional religious beliefs in the region were suppressed and hidden if not exterminated. I can't help but wonder how much better they would have fared against the primal darkness of the Deep if they had the light of religion to fall back on for defense. Not even going to suggest a particular religion over another, anything would be better than a materialistic void that subconsciously _feeds_ the Deep.
If anything, this scenario seems a bit like the Horus Heresy novels, where the Emperor's desire to crush religious belief in an attempt to starve out the Chaos gods only serves to blow up in his face and leave the Imperium inadequately defended against daemonic threats.
That is an interesting idea! I have to admit, that the newest Ebrugh Report I am planning is dealing with exactly that. It is gonna be "Ebrugh-Report 16: The Hole". I tend to revisit "entities/happenings" in the reports. An example [Spoilers]:
Ebrugh Report 11 and 21 have the same entity.
Hi, I know it has been some time, but "Ebrigh Report 14: My village was Haunted by God"(now also on this channel) takles exactly that scenario. =)
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Having listened to "My Village was Haunted by God", the answer is... not much better! :D
The deep claims all.
@@TheAshHeritor Not exactly, but very close. =) The deep does not "act randomly" but on the contrary very selectively (in parenthesis because not completely true and might spoil too much if I got into more detail). =) But I am not gonna say more to not ruin the fun. ;)
@@storieswithstyle Indeed, very true. It does seem to let certain people go. Which is very interesting.
As a fellow writer of horror, mad props on your stories, all of the ones I have heard have been very good!
You know what cracks me up? The author deleted the story lol.
Thanks for notifying me, the link should be fixed soon! You can also get links to all reports I have published on r/EbrughReports . Hope this helps! =)
The book sounds awfully similar to the Entity of Tsarichina in the mountainous region of Bulgaria.
Home of the famous, now deceased, blind prophetess, “Babavinga”, the Bulgarian military went digging underground for lost treasures but instead came across a life force that was demonic and evil. Based on true life events, they ended up cementing the dig site never to disclose what they found. It’s on TH-cam Channels.
Well that was a cut above.
Sounds similar to the Vashta Nerada from Doctor Who.
Hi. I'm Bruce Banner, tied hand and foot to a chair.
What shall I do now?
Currently Watching from the 5th dimension 😉
Gulag was a network of camps not a single place
Im sure everybody knows this.
Although, there's quite alot of commenters who can't spell and their grammer sucks! I take it they probably don't read and never paid attention in school or even finished school? That's why they watch TH-cam. LOL.😆
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Great reading..the story made no sense in several places..such as the expert talking about possibly feeling ill from radiation in minutes despite no readings...well you don't feel sick that quickly regardless. If I was a bit more clueless then i would have finished. However great job reading once again!
Well, the first thing she says is that it had nothing to do with radiation and then she tries to assure herself that it did to make her feel more "safe". At least that was the inrention. What part did not make sense other than that? Might re-write those parts should I ever edit the story again, so I would be happy to hear your other criticisms. All the best! =)
@@storieswithstyle that was how I interpreted what she said as well, since she said nothing to do with radiation and then it sounded like she was trying to reassure herself and say maybe there really was radiation and the rocks were blocking the readings or something along those lines.
Great story at any rate!! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and giving us a heads up about both your upcoming story and a couple past stories. I had been wondering what was with report 12 in the title until you explained a bit in another post, and now I'd like to check out the detectives'other stories.
I'm very much in appreciation of you letting Viidith share this story of yours with us in the creepypasta-o-sphere ;)
@@marlenaneedham3818 Yes, that is what was intended, though I get why it might have been misinterpreted =D
I am glad you like the others =) I will probably let the detective rest for a while (though I am thinking about doing a story with Itrushka that happened more recently). The next story the Deep is in will therefore feature different protagonists. =)
I am very glad viidith shares these, he is such a talent =)
@@storieswithstyle excellent, thanks for letting me know about your next story. I will give it a listen!
All they had to do was pray to Jesus Christ he is the light he is the king of kings in the darkness would have disappeared🙏
As a later story revealed, no it would have not.
it's all capitalist propaganda! jk
The deep....the deep...dark and deep is the deep. DEEPDEEPDEEP BEEPBOOPBOP ::RESET::
the deep is deep.
Tldr; deep.
Hu
I must admit that I was legitimately pissed, right up til he said something about them adopting a little girl and her doll. 😮💨 Idk why it made me so irritated/angry that I thought he’d left her there ffs🤦♀️🥹
As usual, the story was great…but it would have been nothing without your astounding narration my dude!!!😉👍
Don't worry, she will reappear in the future, but grown up. ;)
Good title. I just don't have time to sit here and watch a blank screen or a still shot screen for over an hour listening to the story.