Really good for a improv fic. I would work on pausing and filler words like "yeah and um" I would also use "strange and weird" less. 😁 also work on Virgils character he is rarely so nonchalant and calm especially over these kind of circumstances. Other then that you did really good
Omg this did not go in the direction I thought it would- I legit thought Roman was gonna propose or smthn when Virgil burst into his room,,,,, Fantastic improv, nevertheless
Why is no one talking about that photo that photo is so cute of Virgil also love your videos.😊
Truth
I have a picture of virgil smiling
can you make a part two, it was really good and i want to know what happens next
I’ll keep that in mind ^^
7:55 if this was me I would of been like "WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?? " This made me laugh a lot so thank you :D
This is so good!! I can't wait for part 2, but don't rush it. Just take your time❤
Thats ok we understand
I go to school to so i understand
Laughs in therapy
Janus at the end was was adorable. *Snek boi*
**Me silently praying this was all a nightmare of Virgil's.**
PART 2 then 3 then♾♾♾♾♾♾♾♾♾♾♾♾♾♾
Pllleaaseee make a part two I wanna see what’s gonna happennnnn
Man i can’t wait for pt2:D
This is really awesome!
Can't wait for part 2!😁
this was amazing in my opinion I think you shod make a part 2
My anxiety keeps yelling at me to pause but my morality is telling me to keep watching so what am i suppose to do ahhh
Why are you better at coming up stories and reciting than I am?
-_-
Really good for a improv fic. I would work on pausing and filler words like "yeah and um" I would also use "strange and weird" less. 😁 also work on Virgils character he is rarely so nonchalant and calm especially over these kind of circumstances. Other then that you did really good
I tried
@@glitchy_stormcloud it was really good! You did great, sorry if this came off as rude or nit picky
@@sugerwillowsmores5345 nah it’s good, I thought the same thing but I figured at least it’s not too bad.....hopefully anyway
Omg this did not go in the direction I thought it would-
I legit thought Roman was gonna propose or smthn when Virgil burst into his room,,,,, Fantastic improv, nevertheless
love it
I loved it
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
@Virgil Sanders No these are some of my favorite storys
Is this story on watt pad if not I should put it on there
No it was just improve