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is my music good? be honest and please comment on my song for any advice so i can improve i made the on iphone btw any help from anyone would mean everything
is my music good? be honest and please comment on my song for any advice so i can improve i made the on iphone btw any help from anyone would mean everything
is my music good? be honest and please comment on my song for any advice so i can improve i made the on iphone btw any help from anyone would mean everything
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AstRay I’m astray I know what you gonna do. I’m fluently in this lyrically you know I’m gonna come through. I don’t need bullets some kind of bulletproof column bulletproof my heart. I love you. I’m coming in. I don’t need to fucking deal with your problems. You wanna push me off roof, what you gonna do I AM of course I land on my feet. I Am bulletproof you tell me not to kick you. You’re a marine fr they teach you not to fuck with the MMA you know I preach you out the fam I’m bullish I’m lost calf searching for my new baptism bath I’m bulletproof. I didn’t mean to bully you. I was just outcast too bad outclassed. Who s this about I don’t need too tell you who I AM allergic to Bullshit thats what y’all about Omni I out shine the shrine s all your beliefs are all about my family. We started the simulation. Gave Raymond a break awake 24 just might send you a quick quake.wake Bord first date ♑️🩸✝️♾️JESUS love CHRISTOS mmmm THIRSTY THEALL
Chorus Drowning in the shadows, can't find the light, Surrounded by the lies in the middle of the night. People let me down, yeah, they broke my heart, Now I'm searching for the pieces, falling apart. Verse 1 Stuck in my mind, can't escape this pain, Fake love around me, driving me insane. They said they'd be there, but they left me alone, Now I'm lost in the dark, nowhere to call home. Poppin' these pills, tryna numb my soul, But every single night, it just takes its toll. Chorus Drowning in the shadows, can't find the light, Surrounded by the lies in the middle of the night. People let me down, yeah, they broke my heart, Now I'm searching for the pieces, falling apart. Verse 2 They said they had my back, but they stabbed me instead, Now I’m haunted by the memories inside my head. Fighting with these demons, they don't ever leave, Looking for some love, but it's hard to believe. Chorus Drowning in the shadows, can't find the light, Surrounded by the lies in the middle of the night. People let me down, yeah, they broke my heart, Now I'm searching for the pieces, falling apart. Outro Maybe one day, I'll find my way, But for now, I’m lost, just drifting away.
I’m Wide awake I’ve been for Days trying not Go insane I can’t Stay this way Takeing out tha Purple potion today calling Up old friends Best come this way It’s time to party Bad vibes stay Away fucked up Throughout tha Night to day sun Light bruns my eyes Obsessed I made Walls in my mind Now they Concave loved you Blissfully unaware that It was gonna be uh misery There used to be symphony’s There’s now an empty place
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This is so good! 💜
Crazyyyy af
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Am second Juice wrld 😇🤒
No😊
You are pathetic and if you are Juice WRLD stand on it if you can come close stand on it
Crazy beat man
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Hoping on this
I’ll hop on this rnrn🫶🏼
Much love 🤝🏻
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Great beat frfr💪💪💯💯💯keep it up ur doing amazing... Thankyou ur apreaciated 🤟🤟🤟🤟💯💯💯💯💯💪💪💪💪🎶🎶🎶🎶
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AstRay
I’m astray I know what you gonna do. I’m fluently in this lyrically you know I’m gonna come through. I don’t need bullets some kind of bulletproof column bulletproof my heart. I love you. I’m coming in. I don’t need to fucking deal with your problems. You wanna push me off roof, what you gonna do I AM of course I land on my feet. I Am bulletproof you tell me not to kick you. You’re a marine fr they teach you not to fuck with the MMA you know I preach you out the fam I’m bullish I’m lost calf searching for my new baptism bath I’m bulletproof. I didn’t mean to bully you. I was just outcast too bad outclassed. Who s this about I don’t need too tell you who I AM allergic to Bullshit thats what y’all about
Omni I out shine the shrine s all your beliefs are all about my family. We started the simulation. Gave Raymond a break awake 24 just might send you a quick quake.wake Bord first date ♑️🩸✝️♾️JESUS love CHRISTOS mmmm THIRSTY
THEALL
Just off the top of the head, rough draft
I fucking love this! Ima do my best to spit some 🔥
Nice one bruvva amma make something out of this if you dont mind keep up wit dis man your great
Chorus
Drowning in the shadows, can't find the light,
Surrounded by the lies in the middle of the night.
People let me down, yeah, they broke my heart,
Now I'm searching for the pieces, falling apart.
Verse 1
Stuck in my mind, can't escape this pain,
Fake love around me, driving me insane.
They said they'd be there, but they left me alone,
Now I'm lost in the dark, nowhere to call home.
Poppin' these pills, tryna numb my soul,
But every single night, it just takes its toll.
Chorus
Drowning in the shadows, can't find the light,
Surrounded by the lies in the middle of the night.
People let me down, yeah, they broke my heart,
Now I'm searching for the pieces, falling apart.
Verse 2
They said they had my back, but they stabbed me instead,
Now I’m haunted by the memories inside my head.
Fighting with these demons, they don't ever leave,
Looking for some love, but it's hard to believe.
Chorus
Drowning in the shadows, can't find the light,
Surrounded by the lies in the middle of the night.
People let me down, yeah, they broke my heart,
Now I'm searching for the pieces, falling apart.
Outro
Maybe one day, I'll find my way,
But for now, I’m lost, just drifting away.
That’s kinda 🔥
I’m Wide awake
I’ve been for
Days trying not
Go insane I can’t
Stay this way
Takeing out tha
Purple potion
today calling
Up old friends
Best come this way
It’s time to party
Bad vibes stay
Away fucked up
Throughout tha
Night to day sun
Light bruns my eyes
Obsessed I made
Walls in my mind
Now they Concave
loved you
Blissfully unaware that
It was gonna be uh misery
There used to be symphony’s
There’s now an empty place
Posso usar man??😢
Os créditos seram seu!
yes only for soundcloud or youtube
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Dropped a new song on your beat! Let me know if you like it everyone/Taigen! 💜
What's the name
is my new song good??
I won this free please
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If you want to get good at songwriting just practice every day you'll only get better over time
If you wanna get better at freestyling just listen to music and be a sponge and adsorb it and then find out new words then use them and freestyle what's in your mind it's the most fun thing to do with songs
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Do yall like my last song?? 😊
I feel like I am left astray
That's why I take my dabs everyday
But this pain just doesn't go away
I'm sorry I'm the one that you hate.