Tbf, you probably wouldn't become an op monster hunter either when you see that thing, we're only human, and that's one thing humans do (fight, run, or freeze)
I'm only at 25 minutes in, but honestly I would find it so cool that the narrator had been living with the monster the whole time and the monster was just hanging out and letting him keep exploring, like "that's cute". I bet $100 the monster thought the narrator was at least kind of cute.
A real writer wouldn't leave the family's involvement unaddressed at the end. If id written that, wouldn't have taken 5mins to explain family lore, & their part in the curse, that hidden evidence from generation to generation.
That was not too bad! I’d have preferred a longer backstory, maybe telling the story of why and how the entity came to be. But I’ll settle for this. It seemed that Louise had quite an enormous amount of fight in her, as she was able to combine all her remaining strength, twice, in her fight with the Harry. It’s a good thing too! She saved the town! Who doesn’t love a happy ending???
I kinda interpreted it that way. The monster must have caught some feelings if he just let him stay in his apartment knowing there was a risk of discovering his secret
@@dopaminedrought395 I always liked the misunderstood monster and I like the Misunderstood Slenderman and misunderstood Creepypasta Characters better.
This story has a major pacing problem. The first ten minutes felt like something that should’ve happened 30 min in when the protagonist realizes crazy and weird stuff is happening.
Yeah. “So I moved in this remoted place. There’s an odd bell in the church. Rings kinda creepy. Asked some old man about it and he said there’s this monster that hunts people. Mkay. Seems legit. Gotta stop the monster now I guess...”
I don't really understand how your subs have stagnated at 2.07 million for the past couple years or so. You are by far one of the greatest narrators on this platform. Don't stop brother, many thousands of us are daily followers
@@couchman-sw6jy This is exactly it. And personally, the stories he's been reading have been eh as of the last 6-12 months. At least for me. I've been listening to Dr Creepen for awhile now when I can't find anything of Creeps' I wanna hear. He does really, really well. I would say pretty damn equal quality in comparison to a lot of the other creepypasta readers on TH-cam.
There is the algorithm, there is the lower amount of videos relative to when it had a big grow, there was the controversy some time ago (which i don't want to go over)... Lots of reasons
@@jerrieyoutubecandystars3752 he didn't even CONSIDER helping. bro was writing about how she was about to be defeated and she couldn't hold on for much longer... my guy had a full bar of health and just calculated hit points on his teammate. and she wasn't even mad at HIM
Thanks for doing these videos all these years, you have been a huge part of my routine for quite a few years now, i think its been probably 5 years or more across like 8 youtube accounts that i keep coming back. Im always looking forward to the next video. Just wanted to let you know that you do more to influence peoples lives than you think. Keep up the good work bro.
The guy was pretty quick to believe the old man...and pretty quick to do something stupid despite being told about it. I'm usually annoyed by people who refuse to believe what they're told in these stories, but I'm a bit more annoyed by someone who believed it and did stupid things anyway.
No creepypasta video has made me quickly unlock my phone and go back a few seconds just so I can listen to something again to make sure I'm not missing something vital other than this one
@@BeesWithKnees im imaginig the village being like medievil buildings, with some being really tall devived into small tenaments with a main market street where the shops are and then the one large lot in willow creek is where the forest is with the church in the middle. Ill have to listen to it a few more times to get the discription of the buildings and placements right. Do a few sketches and plans ofr what i think it looks like.
It is absolutely impossible for me to feel bad for protags like this. "They told me not to this thing, so I did, now I'm in danger". I mean come on, this is almost satire it's so ridiculous
Please upload this story on spotify, i wanna listen to it tomorrow for my bus ride. I always listen to your stories on spotify before sleep and on the bus.
They rushed into the story way too fast. I stopped listening after it said that his neighbor was the entity. They could’ve waited and it had more of a build up
Wait isnt this similar or different perspective of another creepypasta you narrated? The one of the kid talking of his childhood in Willow's Creek and how they had to all squeeze into a bunker and the guards being harsh but sorrowful for those who didn't make it?
I know I'm not alone in this thought but: as horrible as this story was written and as terrible as almost all of the plot points were, I thoroughly enjoyed this story
Good story though some of the descriptions are overused. I think 'inviting' popped up some four times describing the apartment alone. Also 'tens of decades' seems clunky.
Here at 16 minutes and I have come to two conclusions, either Harry (Harris?? Idk his name) is the love interest or he will get crazy/ is controlled by the monster/ is the monster and will kill the protagonist Edit 1: At 21 minutes. WHAT DID I SAY??? I KNEW IT, YESSIR Edit 2: At 25 minutes. I FUCKING KNEW IT, I KNEW IT
Harrys family all knew, how did they not, that part didn't make sense that they didn't know, where did all the historical books and the paper be passed down from generation if the family didn't know, onitsha they story finished on family lore that tied everything up it be perfect, I don't know how a writer be happy just ignoring the "famile" problem.. oh they were sad he died.. 😅
Louise over here soloing the boss while the other party member went afk
Tbf, you probably wouldn't become an op monster hunter either when you see that thing, we're only human, and that's one thing humans do (fight, run, or freeze)
MC really stood there daydreaming about Harry's "tentacle"
I'm only at 25 minutes in, but honestly I would find it so cool that the narrator had been living with the monster the whole time and the monster was just hanging out and letting him keep exploring, like "that's cute". I bet $100 the monster thought the narrator was at least kind of cute.
Damn…
Spoilers man.
I got lowkey homoerotic monster romance vibes-
This isn't spoilers to me i already foresaw that twist.
@@aldranzam3456 Same. Was waiting for the "I would never hurt or kill you, MC. I love you."
And they were roommates? 👉🏾👈🏾
This is the most compelling horribly written story ever.
Agreed.
Ai wrote it 😂😂😂
@@dr.swamp-ass idk. Its a bit coherent for AI.
@@richardmorganwriteshow do you know that it's AI?
A real writer wouldn't leave the family's involvement unaddressed at the end. If id written that, wouldn't have taken 5mins to explain family lore, & their part in the curse, that hidden evidence from generation to generation.
That was not too bad! I’d have preferred a longer backstory, maybe telling the story of why and how the entity came to be. But I’ll settle for this. It seemed that Louise had quite an enormous amount of fight in her, as she was able to combine all her remaining strength, twice, in her fight with the Harry. It’s a good thing too! She saved the town! Who doesn’t love a happy ending???
Glad someone elsed noticed that lmao
@@phillyboy5773 oh I make it my job to notice those types of things…😠
See, this is why you can't leave people alone in your house. That dude is noisier than Gladys Kravitz.
ringluvr
Who's the character Gladys Kravitz from?
Goodnight guys
Goodnight
Sweet dreams!
Fight well
Goodnight
Nite nite
The main takeaway from this story, any roommate you'll ever have will go through your shit. ANY house mate/parter.
100%
What kind of sociopath bulids a house with a kitchen on the second floor?
Know someone like that because they use first floor for their workspace (owns a business). Other than that, I can't think of any excuses
I hoped this would turn out to be a romance between our boi and the tentacle monster but oh well
You, you get it
@@amyg1930 🤝
you dont know how upset i am that he didn't even get one last conversation while harry hesitated to kill him because of the bond they had formed 😭
I kinda interpreted it that way. The monster must have caught some feelings if he just let him stay in his apartment knowing there was a risk of discovering his secret
@@dopaminedrought395
I always liked the misunderstood monster and I like the Misunderstood Slenderman and misunderstood Creepypasta Characters better.
This story has a major pacing problem. The first ten minutes felt like something that should’ve happened 30 min in when the protagonist realizes crazy and weird stuff is happening.
Yeah.
“So I moved in this remoted place. There’s an odd bell in the church. Rings kinda creepy. Asked some old man about it and he said there’s this monster that hunts people. Mkay. Seems legit. Gotta stop the monster now I guess...”
I don't really understand how your subs have stagnated at 2.07 million for the past couple years or so. You are by far one of the greatest narrators on this platform. Don't stop brother, many thousands of us are daily followers
He doesn’t seem to put out many videos anymore. But even still, he has a huge catalog going back almost a decade
@@couchman-sw6jy This is exactly it. And personally, the stories he's been reading have been eh as of the last 6-12 months. At least for me. I've been listening to Dr Creepen for awhile now when I can't find anything of Creeps' I wanna hear. He does really, really well. I would say pretty damn equal quality in comparison to a lot of the other creepypasta readers on TH-cam.
There is the algorithm, there is the lower amount of videos relative to when it had a big grow, there was the controversy some time ago (which i don't want to go over)...
Lots of reasons
Because he stopped posting new videos every day.
The Dark Somnium?
Not me a demented romantic hoping they would instead help Harry as the monster instead of killing him…..
why was this guy just.. watching his friend get attacked by this entity without doing a THING about it? did I miss where he was restrained?
YEA LIKE DID HE NOT HELP HER 🤡💀
Even running and leaving her to die would make more sense than watching
@@jerrieyoutubecandystars3752 he didn't even CONSIDER helping. bro was writing about how she was about to be defeated and she couldn't hold on for much longer... my guy had a full bar of health and just calculated hit points on his teammate. and she wasn't even mad at HIM
@@Blandy8521 dude right 😭 literally anything but "wow I'd hate to be her"
And even from the sound of it the entity didn’t seem like it had some kind unnatural strength. He could have at least thrown something lol
Thanks for doing these videos all these years, you have been a huge part of my routine for quite a few years now, i think its been probably 5 years or more across like 8 youtube accounts that i keep coming back. Im always looking forward to the next video. Just wanted to let you know that you do more to influence peoples lives than you think. Keep up the good work bro.
I didn’t know my sims were putting up with this!! I thought I was their only evil deity!!😮
I knew it was Harry from the moment he was introduced. But I have to wonder, did he really like the MC? I mean…it does seem like it
Yay!! I adore these type of story!!
{the town bell tolls or an emergency signal…signals} then insanity commences!!
Thanks CMP, your the best!!
The guy was pretty quick to believe the old man...and pretty quick to do something stupid despite being told about it. I'm usually annoyed by people who refuse to believe what they're told in these stories, but I'm a bit more annoyed by someone who believed it and did stupid things anyway.
No creepypasta video has made me quickly unlock my phone and go back a few seconds just so I can listen to something again to make sure I'm not missing something vital other than this one
Isn't Willow Creek one of the preset towns in Sims 4?
Yes
lmao that's exactly what I was thinking, glad someone else thought so too
it is and now i want to re create this small village in the sims. Church and all
@@user-PuppyDan please please please do!!
@@BeesWithKnees im imaginig the village being like medievil buildings, with some being really tall devived into small tenaments with a main market street where the shops are and then the one large lot in willow creek is where the forest is with the church in the middle. Ill have to listen to it a few more times to get the discription of the buildings and placements right. Do a few sketches and plans ofr what i think it looks like.
10s of decades......you mean hundreds of years
Lolol
Decades of decades
Definitely not centuries
The main character was such a wimp
bro was casting the fight aint even helping her😂
The way you say "closet" gives me serotonin
u have the best voice in narration youtube i swear. been listening to u everynight for 8 years now
This seems more like a monster romance, wish it had gone that way tbh 😭😭
It is absolutely impossible for me to feel bad for protags like this. "They told me not to this thing, so I did, now I'm in danger". I mean come on, this is almost satire it's so ridiculous
Sounds like the perfect creepy tale for a cold late light.
Winston Wins
Exactly.
ask not for whom the bell tolls, for it tolls for thee.
Fantastic as always. I can't sleep without you 😉😴
This would be perfect for a full length novel
mlem mlem
I totally read that.
I like novels.
Especially horror based ones about the supernatural.
2 am in leeds uk rain beating off windowsill dog snoring joint lit life is good
I love a creepsmcpasta story before bed. Only he can make horror so riveting And relaxing
Creepsmcpasta and dark Somnium are the only narrators I can listen to. And romex actually
@@couchman-sw6jy how bout Mr.Creeps?
@@Eazy_The_Lutheran he’s up there, though I don’t listen to him much anymore since he’s pretty monotone
A wonderful story and the best narration
I absolutely love your content and the way you sound.... Many years of following you❤️
CTO84
I like it too.
Been following since 2016 😊
Same
This made my night
1:38 "food places,", LMAO you mean restaurant?
When I hear "restaurant" I think something fancy😂😂 I don't know why
Restaraunt? Wat some kinda food place?
Thanks creeps. Thanks for the story.
Long time follower...
Farmer Dave
Have weed, wine, and a sleeping cat curled up next to me...life can be good sometimes...😎👍
“Every few weeks, my towns church bells ring an eerie tune” …
And no one know where it comes from or goes …
Cotton eyed-joe
But my town has no church
Great story. However, instead of saying” tens of decades” you can say “centuries”, ya know?
Remember when the bell rings its horrid tone, we Feast
I bet it's the sound of the bell ringing from Majora's Mask used for the bell.
Dope thanks for a new story
When the bell rings......I hope it's not for you.
Willow Creek? The Sims neighborhood?😂
Please upload this story on spotify, i wanna listen to it tomorrow for my bus ride. I always listen to your stories on spotify before sleep and on the bus.
They rushed into the story way too fast. I stopped listening after it said that his neighbor was the entity. They could’ve waited and it had more of a build up
Thanks for the story, always helps me sleep
Wait isnt this similar or different perspective of another creepypasta you narrated? The one of the kid talking of his childhood in Willow's Creek and how they had to all squeeze into a bunker and the guards being harsh but sorrowful for those who didn't make it?
I love these stories
Narrarator spent more time explaining how nice Harry’s apartment was then explaining what the fuck “the entity” was lmao
He explained the entity like he wanted to fuck it 😭
Excellent story!
"tens of decades" 🤔 centuries? 🤦♂️ also what is a "musty, old fashioned smell"
Am I the only one that predicted Harry being the entity as soon as you knew they weee around each other a lot?
I know I'm not alone in this thought but: as horrible as this story was written and as terrible as almost all of the plot points were, I thoroughly enjoyed this story
Goodnight everyone
Yet another gem enjoyed it til the very end
♥️👋 thanks for the wicked good story
Love the story keep up the good work thanks 👍😊
I'm a flower I have my own monster's...
The story would make me fall asleep
Many people have died after creating these creepypasta...nobody knows what happens when it happens...
Sweet dreams everyone! 💤😴
Willow creek is actually in the sims 4
But demons will chase you and drain you of your happiness sometimes soul... that's why I think it should be rated.
Good story though some of the descriptions are overused. I think 'inviting' popped up some four times describing the apartment alone. Also 'tens of decades' seems clunky.
What a weird reimagining of Brokeback Mountain.
When you said Willow Creek, at first I was sure this was a story about a Sim 😂
But what with the church though I was like okay so maybe not lol
As a Sims 4 player,
i am cackling at the image of "Willow Creek" in my mind lol
Ah another one to fall asleep too
So, it’s a dinner bell?
Damn, that moment when you find out your boyfriend is a Erdrich-like monster 😔👊
And they were roomates
Love creep’s narration but this story was kinda weird? Like paced really fast i think.
Dude, tentacle monster bf??? I mean yah he kills people but...I can fix him 💞
That was a great story Creeps, I just love you narrations, thanks for telling another wonderful Creepy tale.🙂👍💯
I love the narration didn't really like the story keep up 👍
Did he say Harry Styles and taste?
"For 10's of decades" So over a century then?
Good one
Harry’s a baker.
I find out that Harry’s the monster.
But Harry owns a bakery and sells delicious cakes and sweet stuff.
I do a deal with Harry.
The livestream isn't working again sir.😞
Eerie ass tune 😂😂😂😂
Louise didn't deserve all that praise for how she treated the OP, but you know what? If OP wanted a quiet life after that fiasco, who am I to judge?
Please give us live back :/
Sleep well
Here at 16 minutes and I have come to two conclusions, either Harry (Harris?? Idk his name) is the love interest or he will get crazy/ is controlled by the monster/ is the monster and will kill the protagonist
Edit 1: At 21 minutes. WHAT DID I SAY??? I KNEW IT, YESSIR
Edit 2: At 25 minutes. I FUCKING KNEW IT, I KNEW IT
Goodnight
I ain't no taco man that's for sure
Peace
Afternoon sir been a huge fan for years and made a channel myself. I would love to collaborate!!!! 😀😃🙂
Harrys family all knew, how did they not, that part didn't make sense that they didn't know, where did all the historical books and the paper be passed down from generation if the family didn't know, onitsha they story finished on family lore that tied everything up it be perfect, I don't know how a writer be happy just ignoring the "famile" problem.. oh they were sad he died.. 😅
Honestly, I saw that Henry was the 'entity', not bad story, could be better
Tens of decades? So hundreds?
Quank!
Did this guy say "tens of decades"?
Finally a good ending!
I just need a man like harry