Feedback from the Professor: "The film Grave Decisions has positive and elegant elements in the mise-en-scène. It manages to tell the story with few elements. The decision to make the film essentially in the car involved risks at the narrative level and that is a challenge. The sound of the film, especially in the car, is poor. There is a lack of realistic sound atomospheres. The performances do not seem to be committed to the premise of the film. It is difficult to define the tone of the film. In some cases the music and acting seems to be more melodramatic. In some cases it seems more comedy. But it is not clear. That's why communication in the film crew about the tone of the film is important. That stimulates new ideas and new input. The aesthetic and cinematographic language elements of the film that are taken care of by the crew are noticeable and allow us to enjoy an elegant short film with risks taken."
Feedback from the Professor:
"The film Grave Decisions has positive and elegant elements in the mise-en-scène. It manages to tell the story with few elements. The decision to make the film essentially in the car involved risks at the narrative level and that is a challenge.
The sound of the film, especially in the car, is poor. There is a lack of realistic sound atomospheres. The performances do not seem to be committed to the premise of the film. It is difficult to define the tone of the film. In some cases the music and acting seems to be more melodramatic. In some cases it seems more comedy. But it is not clear. That's why communication in the film crew about the tone of the film is important. That stimulates new ideas and new input.
The aesthetic and cinematographic language elements of the film that are taken care of by the crew are noticeable and allow us to enjoy an elegant short film with risks taken."