I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! EVERYONE DID SO GOOD! only took us 6 fucking months- /j In all seriousness, I loved voicing in this! It turned out perfect! Thanks for having me as V3 BF! I’m excited to work on more stuffz with you! Good job, Rose 💖
As a lyricist, I feel like I must point these out. First, your textbox is not at the bottom. Ocd moment. The first line we hear has no rhymes. 2nd boyfriend line also has no rhymes. No rhymes means it doesn't sound as peak! That's probably a trend here. 0:34 you didn't capitalize that first word. 0:36 text doesn't stay in the same place. 0:42 using and now twice is a sin. 0:46 I really hope vortex just screwed up the tuning that sounded a little autotuned. 0:53 what's up with the random art panel? 1:06 overused maimy line. 1:33 isn't this panel from blurs ic... 1:59 haha color moment. There's probably more but idk anymore. Moral is take these into consideration for your next peak.
I'm gonna give an entire review on this because it took like 8 months! PRE-WATCH I'm expecting this to be around at the same level of Dwerbi's defeat (which took around the same time) POST-WATCH So the writing improved, through it does only center on "oo you're gonna meet your demise" it's still good tuning is great (i can't understand FL Studio's dark magic yet) VAing is good Art i'm not even near to comprehend so, good? Yes. should it have taken this long from first time it got teased? No. But, it's good at the end of the day.
YO FINALLY
This was so fun to do we all did so well
FRRRR THANKS FOR HELPING MAN !!!
@@RosieTheLyricist SEE I TOLD YOU TO TAKE IT SLOW IM SO HAPPY FOR THIS
Good job ya'll, can't wait for the next one!
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! EVERYONE DID SO GOOD! only took us 6 fucking months- /j
In all seriousness, I loved voicing in this! It turned out perfect! Thanks for having me as V3 BF! I’m excited to work on more stuffz with you! Good job, Rose 💖
@@LilyTheLyricist you served well! 🫡 we're gonna miss you man!
After 6 months it’s finally out I loved this people who did art in this did so good and the voice acting and tuning was great i loved this
I love the unique instrumental that goes alongside the well thought out lyrics, and the flashback is amazing. Well done!
Good job took a while but good job
This is awesome! It was fun doing art for this
:3 It took me over 3 weeks to notice. I apparently did art for this.
I remember you gave me a panel in novas server one time,
@@RosieTheLyricist Oh yeah....
This defeat with the lyrics was great.🥺
i've been listening to this fire ass song for 3 days, help
There is no help for you
@@VortexTT36 oh god
bro really said
SNAP BACK TO REALITY
YO, WHATS UP KENNY
WAHOOOOO!!!!!!!!! THIS IS WHAT IVE BEEN WAITING FOR!!
U NEVER DISAPPOINT ROSIE:33333
Congratulations daughter 🎉
Nice! Great job everyone, y’all did great!
How did I miss this😭😭
Finally get to witness peak!
Peak! Good job rosie!
THIS IS PEAK SIS
Fuck I missed the premiere but this shit is fucking peak 🔥
Dang nice
So cool
F I N A L L Y .
WE FINALLY DID IT !!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉
YO, WHERE ARE MY CREDITS FOR THE FIRST LINES???? THOSE WERE MY LYRICS AT THE START!!! >:[
PEAK
PEAKKKKKKK
BRO HOLY SHIT FINALLY LMAO, THIS AWESOME ESPECIALLY WITH THE FACT THAT THIS HAS NEW INST
one criticism: why not ask me to art (jk)
I made that! For R-sides and used it here as a Lil Tease, if you caught that, I'd be surprised !
@@RosieTheLyricistITS PEAK
and also I just realized some of the stuff in the teasers was not in this video
I like 👍
I like 👍
Just like? Nah, I LOVE THIS!
@@LilyTheLyricist I’m just impersonating Ori
After months is actually real and here
FINALLY
so, do I get paid-
Depends, what I'd be in debt of
As a lyricist, I feel like I must point these out. First, your textbox is not at the bottom. Ocd moment. The first line we hear has no rhymes. 2nd boyfriend line also has no rhymes. No rhymes means it doesn't sound as peak! That's probably a trend here. 0:34 you didn't capitalize that first word. 0:36 text doesn't stay in the same place. 0:42 using and now twice is a sin. 0:46 I really hope vortex just screwed up the tuning that sounded a little autotuned. 0:53 what's up with the random art panel? 1:06 overused maimy line. 1:33 isn't this panel from blurs ic... 1:59 haha color moment. There's probably more but idk anymore. Moral is take these into consideration for your next peak.
Your criticism helps, I'll keep that in mind for IC!
@@RosieTheLyricist sweet
The overused maimy line was something I wanted in the song as a joke
I'm gonna give an entire review on this because it took like 8 months!
PRE-WATCH
I'm expecting this to be around at the same level of Dwerbi's defeat (which took around the same time)
POST-WATCH
So the writing improved, through it does only center on "oo you're gonna meet your demise" it's still good
tuning is great (i can't understand FL Studio's dark magic yet)
VAing is good
Art i'm not even near to comprehend
so,
good?
Yes.
should it have taken this long from first time it got teased?
No.
But, it's good at the end of the day.
It only took long bc everyone was on break or comms half the time so finding reliable resources was hard, sorry abt that
1:07 no more singing time for martyr
wasn't that from brodo's(maimymayo's) sonic.exe lyrics?
no wait wasnt that a nicoisnxxt reference that maimy sang for? that one song with bf tired of exe singing "drowning drowning sinking sinkin"
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Black imposter approve 👍
impostor*
the lyrics are interesting but after the flashback part, the music is kinda louder than the lyrics
If I end up reuploading this with better editing I'll keep that in mind
@@RosieTheLyricist you did a really good job tho 👍👍👍
Could i do a cover🙏
Yeah!
Thanks!