When Your Half Brother Kicked You out of the house While Snowing Heavily

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  • @nynyrackzz2407
    @nynyrackzz2407 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    it’s giving part two because that’s a lot to take in as a four year old child I want to see her reaction to them as a teenager

  • @LoveStance
    @LoveStance ปีที่แล้ว +37

    Two things to our wonderful author here....
    1st. I'm so glad I made sure I had no distractions while I watched this through. You write well all the time, but the subtle darkness that progressed throughout this piece was exemplary.
    2nd. I'm very glad you gave no hint about the background of the families, making all the readers take a big....Oh....Ahhh...when her parentage was revealed.
    While this is fiction, this is a reminder of how children's perceptions can be easily led astray and how cruel they can be when angered, jealous, or just 'cuz'.
    I was REAL happy that Yn didn't die outside, as that would have been sadly tragic, and her step-siblings might have felt bad for leaving her outside, but they'd have not understood the full impact of their actions if they'd not seen how terrorized she'd become of them.
    Part of me would like a bonus to explore how their lives unfolded over the years, but another part likes exactly where you left things.
    You've done an exceptional job with this.
    - St@nce

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Why am I smiling so big while reading your comment? 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @LoveStance
      @LoveStance ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@missrandom5430 Because you know you made a FINE piece of work, and you were gifted with some personal validation for all the toil and...turmoils you experienced putting your world into print for us to enjoy with you!! :)
      xoxoxox
      - St@nce

  • @nohway07
    @nohway07 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    I'm crying rn! This is such a good story! I felt like i was actually reading a book.

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thank Youuu💜💜💜

  • @ishratjahanjui4109
    @ishratjahanjui4109 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Author really can make me cry . I did cry I'm not lying

  • @army_girl_ot71313
    @army_girl_ot71313 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Your every story have always made me cry no matter what.................
    I just loved the way you put sooo much details in your every story and how you just make up the actual scene.......................
    Mind-blowing ✨
    Well, I actually fell more emotional then any other person because I am also a story writer just the thing is I haven't made any story on internet, I have them in a book but absolutely the stories are also deep meaning one, so I really like your stories a lot

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว

      Awww. Thank You so much for appreciating the way ai write. It really makes me happy 💜💜💜

  • @radhagupta9162
    @radhagupta9162 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    You never fails to make me cry 😭

  • @cookiebts7743
    @cookiebts7743 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Author nim!!! Y do u always make me cry??!!! 😫😫💜✨

  • @Saanvigattani
    @Saanvigattani 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Now this is what a masterpiece called! 😭 you will become a great Author one day😭❤❤

  • @Myriamele
    @Myriamele ปีที่แล้ว +16

    Absolutely perfect, as always. My emotions took a rollercoaster ride, I am glad to see how it ended. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @melodyshortcuts4225
    @melodyshortcuts4225 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I never felt so happy to cry 😭 love u author

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว

      Awwwww love u too, sweetieee💜💜💜

  • @Justtt_jiwoo
    @Justtt_jiwoo ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Anytime you realese anything unnie, it's a masterpiece
    i love ur work so much unnie

  • @namjooniee7
    @namjooniee7 ปีที่แล้ว

    This FF was masterpiece...💜

  • @le-anne4309
    @le-anne4309 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    This is a beautiful story ! A masterpiece !!!!! A fairy tale .I suggest you make an animated movie or a picture book of it. The story is too beautiful to let it be just a story !🥰💞

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I agree. I'm actually talking to some of my friends who knows how to animate or to make it like a manhua but unfortunately we all have hectic schedules. But who knows. Maybe someday

  • @XG71
    @XG71 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    I Know It's Gonna Be Masterpiece

  • @bagntanplaylistsforyou
    @bagntanplaylistsforyou ปีที่แล้ว +11

    ok how about you tell me all the things you are good at including writing absolute masterpieces and making me cry, like author nim don't you know how big of a trouble i would be in if my mom walked in on me crying while staring at my screen. Also author nim, what did poor y/n did to you, you're always giving her trauma and ptsd and anxiety, like what did she ever do to you. this was amazing, keep writing author nim, ill be here to read your stories.

  • @jVt1306..
    @jVt1306.. 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I was literally crying 😭 hard entire the video....... . I am not lying, seriously ..... It just touched my deep inside heart ...

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Awww Thank Youu💜💜💜

  • @bdarmy_ro1588
    @bdarmy_ro1588 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ur ffs are so underated

  • @zenia2310
    @zenia2310 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Curiously waiting for the next masterpiece

  • @user-rw1yu9pc5h
    @user-rw1yu9pc5h 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    You're an exceptionally good author but your music choice is also top notch!

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thank You💜💜💜

  • @yeonapark
    @yeonapark ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can't wait for an amazing story again!! 💜💜💜

  • @ShaSha-256
    @ShaSha-256 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Stop it’s illegal to write this awesome 😭😅😅 !!!!!!

  • @zenia2310
    @zenia2310 ปีที่แล้ว

    It was truly a masterpiece..like this time yn didn't became an assassin(which i think feels unrealistic) i enjoyed alot . Keep making this kind of masterpiece author 👍

  • @user-mx5zn9yi8z
    @user-mx5zn9yi8z ปีที่แล้ว +3

    so, im a new subscriber and your never fail to make something soo incredible and good... i knew it was going to be good just seeing the thumbnail.... Keep making these amajin stories.. i will always root for you.. borahee💜💜

  • @dianalechuga5523
    @dianalechuga5523 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow! This one had my heart ache for her. She is so little, and they had no understanding in them. I hope school is going well. Please take care of yourself❤💜❤💜❤💜

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm already in a vication, sweetiee. So no worries. And thank Youu. I hope you're doing good at school aswell 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @dianalechuga5523
      @dianalechuga5523 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @Miss Random thank you, but I have already graduated with my masters degree, so I remember a lot of the pressure to finish work.

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Ohh. I guess you're ahead and older than me. Well then. I wish you all the best

  • @maitrisharma1851
    @maitrisharma1851 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I never comment on ffs usually but I badly want a ff of middle child problems can you please make a ff on that topic and that too of jin or any hyung line member please 🙃🙇

  • @tvishaagarwal3018
    @tvishaagarwal3018 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    UNNIE! HOW CAN YOU DO THIS!
    how can you write soo amazing stories, as always, it was a masterpiece. Can't wait for the upcoming awesome stories. Borahae unnie 💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank You, sweetieee💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @tvishaagarwal3018
      @tvishaagarwal3018 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@missrandom5430 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @taekook6115
    @taekook6115 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Another beautiful story

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank You💜💜💜

  • @cloudyXeuphoric
    @cloudyXeuphoric ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is what I mean to say, when I talk about a perfect fanfiction

  • @purpleaftons8438
    @purpleaftons8438 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your the best unnie sometimes I wonder I do u think of these ideas
    May I ask how old are u?if it's fine😅

  • @fehmidashaikh8120
    @fehmidashaikh8120 ปีที่แล้ว

    I was crying 😭 my mom started to get tention 😂

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว

      HAHAHAHA why watch sad ff, sweetie hile you're Mom is around? I can't with yoy HAHAHAHA

  • @Coffeekindagal
    @Coffeekindagal 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I love you soooo much youre the best ff writer ever

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      thank you so much and I love you moree💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @rimilulaji4909
    @rimilulaji4909 ปีที่แล้ว

    This was a sad story 😢 but l love it 💜. Unnieee you are the best. Can't wait for the next story.

  • @DeepakRout-lo3hc
    @DeepakRout-lo3hc ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Its so good unnie 💜💜💜💜

  • @swatisharma-es9fk
    @swatisharma-es9fk ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I can't wait for the next masterpiece 💜💜 Sarangheyo unnie💜💜

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank Youuu and Nado Nomu Nomuu Saranghaee💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @ritulal8071
    @ritulal8071 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is my new obsession

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Sweetieee HAHAHA. Thank Youuu💜💜💜

  • @LOVELYKPOP286
    @LOVELYKPOP286 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    All i can say us wow i have no other words to describe this it so sad but happy at the same time i loved it 😊 ❤

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thank Youuu💜💜💜

  • @jinspinkslipper8133
    @jinspinkslipper8133 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I swear i never really cry reading a book or ff hell i don't even cry watching a very sad movie but this shit i felt like i was really the one suffering and i freaking cried like a baby in this onee ....author u r so good at it like woowwww😮😮

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thank you so muchhh💜💜💜

  • @Sarah-Zhao
    @Sarah-Zhao ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I am getting confused here, I need a family tree please to get this on my mind! 😅
    Ok I get now... 😊
    But seriously my heart is so emotional 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    Once again, I am not disappointed and falling in love with the author's magical stories ❤

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank You, sweetieee💜💜💜💜

    • @Sarah-Zhao
      @Sarah-Zhao ปีที่แล้ว

      @@missrandom5430 No, thank you for making me live the beautiful magical fantasy 😘😍☺😍😘😘😳❤❣️💝💕

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank You for supporting me doing one of what I love to do💜💜💜

  • @milicavelisavljevic4582
    @milicavelisavljevic4582 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I love your masterpiece's so muc unnie😊💜

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank You, sweetie😊💜💜💜

  • @sakshikataria4479
    @sakshikataria4479 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Can you make next part or a bonus please 💗💗💗it's me infront of my father. It's like so traumatic. I really like it . I want to see them 4 to be happy with eachother. Also the girl lj have to apologise to her . Please can you 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌼🌼🌼🌼

  • @ashmikashiv4415
    @ashmikashiv4415 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Masterpiece ✨✨✨ , love it

  • @RohitVerma-ut9cy
    @RohitVerma-ut9cy 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    It's a masterpiece l was literally crying 😭 while reading this

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank Youu💜💜💜

  • @ibagaad2157
    @ibagaad2157 ปีที่แล้ว

    I loved it bestie good to see u again 😊😊

  • @Lovelybeds3109
    @Lovelybeds3109 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is so good keep up the good work 🎉

  • @ustadsahab618
    @ustadsahab618 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    As always, I cried😢 but its so beautiful like it's real....
    I followed your insta gram too😉

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you, sweetieee💜💜💜

    • @ustadsahab618
      @ustadsahab618 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@missrandom5430 but you don't seem that much active on Instagram 🤔😞

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yes, sweetieee. Unfortunately I forgot the password so I wasn't able to open it again😂

  • @AgnivaModak
    @AgnivaModak ปีที่แล้ว

    Cant wait for your next masterpiece author

  • @revathirevathi5281
    @revathirevathi5281 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Always your ff make my tears burst out 😢😢but so good sissy 💜💜

  • @Hadiya0110
    @Hadiya0110 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Damn, I won't be able to watch this masterpiece cause I won't be home at 7:00 pm❤😢

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Wherever you're going. Wish you'll have a safetrip💜

    • @Hadiya0110
      @Hadiya0110 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@missrandom5430 I watched it, it's so good❤️ I was just going to a wedding that day, thank you❤️

  • @facrojigawas1597
    @facrojigawas1597 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    UNNIE !!! You made me cry si bad 🤧😭☹🥺😣
    Overall I loved it v. V.v.v. much❤

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank You, sweetieee and peaceee💜💜💜

  • @Yoentan_lover15
    @Yoentan_lover15 ปีที่แล้ว

    Unnie I love your work but please try to upload fast I mean don't pressure urself but please try to upload more videos fastly🙂love you work ❤❤
    Your lovely subscriber/Fan❤❤❤

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว

      Awwww you just made me smilee. Thank You, sweetieee💜💜💜

    • @Yoentan_lover15
      @Yoentan_lover15 ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@@missrandom5430 my welcome ❤

  • @ellise2601
    @ellise2601 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    YESS UR BACKK

  • @pastikaluci4814
    @pastikaluci4814 ปีที่แล้ว

    i lobeeee it unnie

  • @Dhinchakpoojaop
    @Dhinchakpoojaop ปีที่แล้ว +2

    You know what?? I won't even say anything about it. You already know what I am gonna say right??*takes in a lonnnngggg breath and..* ...I LOVE YOU AUTHOR!!!!!!!! KEEP WRITING AND TAKE CARE😚🤧🤧🤧 💜💜💜💜💙💙💙💙💖💖💖💖it is still lacking the hearts I wanna give to you. Yk?

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you, sweetieee and I LOVE YOU MOREEEEEE💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @Dhinchakpoojaop
      @Dhinchakpoojaop ปีที่แล้ว

      Do you remember? The use of the account@the nature 5207.haha. Tbh my gf would accuse me of cheating as I never said I love you as many times I said to you to her. But still I can't resist saying it. You're the best ❤️

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I can't with you HAHAHAHA. Keep showing your girl how much love her

    • @Dhinchakpoojaop
      @Dhinchakpoojaop ปีที่แล้ว

      Sure..👌👌I will even make her read this and your ffs so that she can also say the same.👍👍👌

  • @neetigarg1032
    @neetigarg1032 ปีที่แล้ว

    *Unnie aap ki writing itni achchi hai ki aapko jail ho jaani chahiye...* ❤❤💞💞
    Translation( if you don't know Hindi) - Unnie your writing is so good that should be sued for that...❤❤💞💞
    Like how can someone write this good??! Had me in tears, honestly✨✨
    You know I'm also thinking about writing ffs on Wattpad but I don't have courage...🌹
    But no matter what, your long duration ffs are so good like they always make me switch on my AC at 16 degrees so that my tears dry up faster hehe😅🤧

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Awww. Thank You, sweetieee 💜💜💜 I wish you goodluck with your writing 💜💜💜

  • @purpleday7792
    @purpleday7792 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    FRom stating to last I was feeling heavy heart and pain like I want to cry my voice cracked and don't know how and when I started crying and about the writter like how u know the real cousions sisters pain and somehow it's real to life like mine nd my cousion till the mid of story but I haven't seen the end but I guess I can happy ending till I graduate I font to be here

  • @fehmidashaikh8120
    @fehmidashaikh8120 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can't wait to see 😻

  • @littlelifetime8095
    @littlelifetime8095 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hope we have a part 2 plssssss....🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

  • @wlyisqkr
    @wlyisqkr ปีที่แล้ว

    You're things are so inspiring! It's such a masterpiece! I actually have a request for an ff if you can do it....
    I was thinking if you could do an ff of Jimin: about how you're idol brother starts hating you because you're more popular, so you eventually get deep depression and commit su!c!de?

  • @satishgoyal9281
    @satishgoyal9281 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please make second part

  • @tejasriamruta3524
    @tejasriamruta3524 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    waiiit im a princess ????

  • @laylamoriom9881
    @laylamoriom9881 ปีที่แล้ว

    It's so good 🥺🥺

  • @Malohalim17
    @Malohalim17 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    What happened to vmin at the end

  • @sharika._.
    @sharika._. 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    How can you sleep with so much talent?

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Oh My HAHAHA Thank Youuu💜💜💜

    • @sharika._.
      @sharika._. 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@missrandom5430 Wellcomeee💜💜💜

  • @keerthanajayachandran6496
    @keerthanajayachandran6496 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Next part please

  • @Musicallife_ML
    @Musicallife_ML ปีที่แล้ว

    Finally

  • @itzsalexzs
    @itzsalexzs ปีที่แล้ว

    I MISS YOUUUUUUUUUUU😢

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว

      I MISS YOUU TOOOOO💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @purpleday7792
    @purpleday7792 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    M re reading it greatt😫😫

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Oh Myyy HAHAHA Thank Youu💜💜💜

  • @whosdeetya
    @whosdeetya ปีที่แล้ว +1

    no offense, but don't you think facing all this at the age of 4 is too traumatic for a kid? if it was a teenager it would've been better, I guess. No person with a sane mind would do this to a 4y/o lol

  • @vante.07
    @vante.07 ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm heree

  • @lovelymahi7080
    @lovelymahi7080 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hello💜💜💜

    • @lovelymahi7080
      @lovelymahi7080 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@missrandom5430 how are you dear ❤

    • @lovelymahi7080
      @lovelymahi7080 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@missrandom5430 Hi how are you now I hope you are very nice I want to be friend with you please give me your contact number?

  • @forampatel6879
    @forampatel6879 หลายเดือนก่อน

    You are so good in writing...omo.. 🤍