Human Saved the Alien King's Lovely Daughter and Was Granted an Unexpected Gift | Sci-Fi | HFY Story

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 8 ม.ค. 2025

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  • @krm398
    @krm398 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    saved a princess again, only royalty gets hard times in this Universe, but here it happens several times a week...lol

  • @JamesLinder-l5d
    @JamesLinder-l5d 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    How was his communication device destroyed in her ships crash? And where is the rest of his unit?

  • @CryptidsRoost
    @CryptidsRoost 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Great story. Sounds like there is a part two to come... Story not over, plus he hasn't been rewarded his gift from the king.
    Too many plot-holes not picked up by either content creator or ChatGPT...
    1. If he wasn't actually involved in the crash, how could his communicator get damaged?
    2. He wasn't the commanding officer, so him (as well as the princess), suddenly disappearing, he would be blessed as going AWOL.
    3. He previously stated he didn't know of her planet, so how could he punch in the coordinates for her planet?
    4. The officer he spoke to over the communications device in the hidden base, captain Blake, that is an Earth name not a Zorathar name. Plus there has been no other mention of him, let alone the officer and the princess meeting up with him, yet.

  • @JamesLinder-l5d
    @JamesLinder-l5d 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    So many chances to first contact, diplomacy and alliance missed

  • @Locomotor1979
    @Locomotor1979 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    i beleive the story whas shortend and its end makes no sence

  • @georgek5546
    @georgek5546 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    what was a gift ?

  • @Wiggiwan
    @Wiggiwan 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    It seems like it could be part of a good story if not for stupid, glaring errors. I blame it on inadequate editing after using a lame AI for the story.

  • @clifficus
    @clifficus 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    She crashed in a desert, where did all the trees and go??

  • @rayairey5770
    @rayairey5770 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Three minutes and twenty five seconds that was enough for me....
    Do ANY, and I mean any, of the producers of these pathetic stories actually take the time to read or watch what they post st all??
    This entire, no i haven't watched it completely, video is just worse than any other crap I've had the misfortune to see.......

  • @FrankDayton-d2e
    @FrankDayton-d2e 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This is some of the worst AI tripe I’ve run into. The person who uploaded this junk clearly didn’t bother to listen to it first.