This is where all the Hollywood writers ended up after losing their jobs and in Hollywood they learnt that logic and consistent story line was not important 😭
Tired of the humans always giving second, third, fourth...chances or doing as little damage as possible while sacrificing humanity to prove their benevolence.
The moment the counsel ships fired a human ship had the right to and would have returned fire there wouldn't have been warning after warning after warning that is want I mean in my other post too wordy
Ok then, so the humans systematically destroy nearly every alien vessel and yet ... the aliens admire the restraint shown by disabling, NOT destroying ????? There are so many things wrong
Chaff was used by surface ships to confuse radar, and submarines used the thermal layers in the ocean to confuse sonar. Please learn something about naval warfare before writing a story. Btw, I'm retired navy.
Good story. Im thankful that Chen and Rodriquez were in another sector of space this time!😅
In reality one doesnt explain his weapons to the enemy...silly
That's only one of the problems with most of these stories
@@darkshadow9291 umm happans in real life too, online. plus you can tell, others but its what one hides
It's a fun story, but I don't see two enemies engaged in combat carrying on such a winded conversation.
Inconsistencies, inconsistencies, and inconsistencies a hallmarks of A.I. stories along with poor dialog.
A little wordie but all in all not to bad just need to leave out stopping for a conversation in the middle of a fight
Typical AI generation without anyone proofreading the text. Many grammatical errors noted.
This is where all the Hollywood writers ended up after losing their jobs and in Hollywood they learnt that logic and consistent story line was not important 😭
Tired of the humans always giving second, third, fourth...chances or doing as little damage as possible while sacrificing humanity to prove their benevolence.
Started out good for the first 5 minutes then turned into trash don't waste your time time
What happened to "do not fire unless fired upon"?
this scene visualized would be epic, great telling!
Yeah, till we don't get what we want?
The moment the counsel ships fired a human ship had the right to and would have returned fire there wouldn't have been warning after warning after warning that is want I mean in my other post too wordy
AWESOME SAUCESOME. NICE STORY. JUST MY CUP OF TEA. THANK YOU.
so when did General Sun Tzu become a Admiral
Ok then, so the humans systematically destroy nearly every alien vessel and yet ... the aliens admire the restraint shown by disabling, NOT destroying ????? There are so many things wrong
14,000 views, only 461 likes. Yikes.
Ŵho writes this tripe ? No ships captain would explain how its weoponry works.
Excellent story! 🏆
That comment shows how low we have become as a species. I take it back, you said the story, which is good. It's the delivery and dialog that sucks.
@@mikearroyo3961 I base my opinion on the story and not the teller!
@@Terask_Terrasque Yes, that's why I took it back.
@@mikearroyo3961 I try not to critique an AI...it's below my station as a human...and I want to keep it well below! Screw the advancement of AI!
Chaff was used by surface ships to confuse radar, and submarines used the thermal layers in the ocean to confuse sonar. Please learn something about naval warfare before writing a story. Btw, I'm retired navy.
Much tooooo wordy, sometimes less is more, and this story was too much.
AI stinks again 😞
lame.