The story itself is good even with the loss that is there. The only thing I do not like is the misleading title and the third picture that is not similar to the first two pictures in the story. Consistency in the pictures and a proper title that reflects what the story is about should prevail. I find it unlikely that the unnamed 19 years old female protagonist who is unrelated to Nicole would be notified of her illness and be allowed to stay by her bedside until Nicole die. This scene at the end is very unrealistic. If Nicole has no family members, then she would die in the hospital alone and the 19 years old would not be privy to any information at all except for rumours. So other than the three discrepancies listed above, the story was wonderfully told. Thanks for sharing.
No... That doesn't happen... It can't.... All these stories are full of hardships.. Battles.. Small minded.. Prejudiced people... But you fight... You win... Not loose... Not like this.. I don't like this story... It's sad... It hurts.... 🖤
I understand how you feel. Stories full of hardship and pain can be tough, especially when we hope for a different outcome. Sometimes, the hardest stories are the ones that feel the most real or resonate with us on a deeper level.
The story itself is good even with the loss that is there. The only thing I do not like is the misleading title and the third picture that is not similar to the first two pictures in the story. Consistency in the pictures and a proper title that reflects what the story is about should prevail. I find it unlikely that the unnamed 19 years old female protagonist who is unrelated to Nicole would be notified of her illness and be allowed to stay by her bedside until Nicole die. This scene at the end is very unrealistic. If Nicole has no family members, then she would die in the hospital alone and the 19 years old would not be privy to any information at all except for rumours.
So other than the three discrepancies listed above, the story was wonderfully told. Thanks for sharing.
No... That doesn't happen... It can't.... All these stories are full of hardships.. Battles.. Small minded.. Prejudiced people... But you fight... You win... Not loose... Not like this.. I don't like this story... It's sad... It hurts.... 🖤
I understand how you feel. Stories full of hardship and pain can be tough, especially when we hope for a different outcome. Sometimes, the hardest stories are the ones that feel the most real or resonate with us on a deeper level.