The idea for story is good but the execution for it is crap with the author bs.ing important crap. 1st its naruto canon then he walks in on sasuke and hinata going at it in his bed then realizes he's an idiot with his kids having blk hair like sasuke instead of his blonde or her dark blue snapping him out of a gengutsu. Then he remembers he is kaguya 3rd son and goes right to her and blk zetsu to fully recover his heart and power. Then he a primordial god above titans which r above zeus and his gods in power and authority let's zeus walk all over him and dictate anything involving himself. Then author decides to redo his own story by saying he is an otsutsuki married to mako makoto and he's the father of itachi and sasuke and fugaku put all 4 in a genjustu where makoto thinks she is his wife, itachi his son and sasuke as well, then throws naruto out into village as a baby as a seal makes him a baby without his memories, he grows up canon and somehow sasuke and itachi kill each other in their fight yet the story starts with sasuke screwing hinata narutos wife he was forced to marry who claims she loved him all their life yet ntrs naruto with sasuke as all their kids get sasuke's blk hair instead of either blonde or her dark/midnight blue. So wat sasuke dies against his bro remembers his best friend is actually his dad and comes back enough times to steal hinata by impregnating her multiple times and letting naruto catch them to free naruto finally from the genjustu as some dead guy able to procreate after death..... I c problems there....
5 minute in and yep… nope
Please make more 🙏
More please from CHRISHASS.
Part 2 please
Can you post the link so I can read it to
The idea for story is good but the execution for it is crap with the author bs.ing important crap. 1st its naruto canon then he walks in on sasuke and hinata going at it in his bed then realizes he's an idiot with his kids having blk hair like sasuke instead of his blonde or her dark blue snapping him out of a gengutsu. Then he remembers he is kaguya 3rd son and goes right to her and blk zetsu to fully recover his heart and power. Then he a primordial god above titans which r above zeus and his gods in power and authority let's zeus walk all over him and dictate anything involving himself.
Then author decides to redo his own story by saying he is an otsutsuki married to mako makoto and he's the father of itachi and sasuke and fugaku put all 4 in a genjustu where makoto thinks she is his wife, itachi his son and sasuke as well, then throws naruto out into village as a baby as a seal makes him a baby without his memories, he grows up canon and somehow sasuke and itachi kill each other in their fight yet the story starts with sasuke screwing hinata narutos wife he was forced to marry who claims she loved him all their life yet ntrs naruto with sasuke as all their kids get sasuke's blk hair instead of either blonde or her dark/midnight blue. So wat sasuke dies against his bro remembers his best friend is actually his dad and comes back enough times to steal hinata by impregnating her multiple times and letting naruto catch them to free naruto finally from the genjustu as some dead guy able to procreate after death..... I c problems there....
Part 2 please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 and thank you
Share the link please
Huh wth