Not Sure How to End Your Mystery? Watch This!

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  • @Avionne_Parris
    @Avionne_Parris ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Jessica Fletcher really uses the sleuth's trap alot to catch her killers in Murder She Wrote.
    I can see why she uses it so much; it's a pretty good tactic! Never gets old. I cant wait to use this myself.
    My favourite is S1 E2 "Deadly Lady" where a sister tried to frame her baby sister for their father's murder.
    Jessica handed over a pair of shoes in a brown paper bag to the killer. She told Jessica her sister's shoes arent her style as she never wears pink.
    But Jessica never told her what colour the shoes were (cant see through a brown paper bag) only the killer would know.
    The reveal always gives me goosebumps. Thanks, Jane! Another stellar video :-)

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Great episode, Avi!

  • @mattmallecoccio8378
    @mattmallecoccio8378 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Columbo was the KING of the sleuth trap

  • @snedge28
    @snedge28 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    So weird that I watched the first Columbo episode you mentioned with the exploding cigar case last night and was thinking about that as you were talking about setting up the villain for them to drop themselves in it. Laughed when you mentioned the very example I was thinking of!

  • @lukacunningham342
    @lukacunningham342 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I was thinking that the novel would end with my narrator getting married to the woman he loves, explains what the other suspects/characters are doing after the events of the book and the last line of the novel would be the first line of the novel, with Arthur starting to write the book. EDIT: By “ending”, I thought you meant “what happens in the last chapter after the murderer’s been caught” ending

  • @coreyh1956
    @coreyh1956 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you for making these videos. I have learned a great deal. 😊

  • @judyshinohara
    @judyshinohara ปีที่แล้ว +2

    So amazing. I've never even thought about this topic (I'm still on the endless outlining stage) so I didn't think this video would be relevant to me. I clicked on it anyway because your videos are always valuable, and of course, it was!! Your channel is a goldmine.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you so much!

  • @lukacunningham342
    @lukacunningham342 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    *FINALLY!* My dear show Murder, She Wrote (made by the same guys who made Columbo) is finally on this channel!

  • @mattmallecoccio8378
    @mattmallecoccio8378 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Suitable for Framing is one of my faves

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I actually used that one in my last video! th-cam.com/video/4rSkKeUbJu4/w-d-xo.html

    • @mattmallecoccio8378
      @mattmallecoccio8378 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@janekalmes the look on Ross Martin's face was priceless when he was had.

  • @chriswildfire
    @chriswildfire 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I think the one with evidence left behind trick but there is none was done in monk

  • @rainbowsomeone
    @rainbowsomeone ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Super helpful video as always! I’m definitely going to use some of these methods in my story. I’m actually pretty stuck in the plotting stage right now because I don’t know how to write a mystery subplot that drives character interaction (my real love in writing) forward. Any tips on writing cold cases or conspiracy theories (like government cover ups)?

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thanks!
      I talked quite a bit about cold cases and conspiracies in this livestream: More Secrets of Mystery Writing | Live Q&A
      th-cam.com/users/live7F6nopCv92Y?feature=share

    • @rainbowsomeone
      @rainbowsomeone ปีที่แล้ว

      @@janekalmes perfect!! Tysm!

  • @Storiix
    @Storiix ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello Jane! I wanted to THANK you for your amazing channel! Believe it or not i have gobbled all of your videos in 2 days!
    Now it is up to me, with your fantastic advice, to write something cool!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว

      So great to hear! I'm glad you're finding them helpful.

  • @DavidMacDowellBlue
    @DavidMacDowellBlue 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    07:47 Sherlock Holmes did this a fair amount especially in "The Dying Detective" but also in THE HOUND OF THE BASKERVILLES in which he arranged for the target of the killer to be supposedly vulnerable when in fact Holmes and Watson were lying in wait.

  • @hideoussails1783
    @hideoussails1783 ปีที่แล้ว

    ❤️ all of your videos. Just want to say that if I'm not giving a thumbs-up or commenting, I'm just not signed in at the moment. Great job 😁 👍

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks so much, I know I can always count on you to cheer me on!

    • @hideoussails1783
      @hideoussails1783 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@janekalmes ❤

  • @lesleyann5118
    @lesleyann5118 ปีที่แล้ว

    I had a crush on Paul Drake from Perry Mason as a kid.
    Thanks for another great video!

  • @Hanedie1
    @Hanedie1 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi! I recently found your channel and I’m hooked! Your tips and knowledge are really helping me with my mystery 💜Are you going to do another Simple Mystery class? I missed the enrollment period 😭

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm so sorry you missed the enrollment period--but I'm glad my tips are helping you! Currently, the plan is to run another round in the summer. Are you subscribed to my newsletter? Sign up here, and you'll get all the details when I begin the launch for another round! www.fictiontechnician.com/contact/

  • @KristyBryson
    @KristyBryson ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Excellent video and a major plot problem solver! ❤ Thank you again for your analysis and time spent rewatching these classics. And the cameos! Now I have to go watch a muppets movie…because that tiny scene broke my heart for a moment 😢

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว

      I love the Great Muppet Caper!

  • @mattmallecoccio8378
    @mattmallecoccio8378 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Could you do a video on howdunits can work in books if you already haven't?

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I think they're mostly going to work the same as in shows--although books, obviously, are a little longer and deeper, so that can change things up a bit. Have you seen this video yet? th-cam.com/video/IHn26nviHlM/w-d-xo.html

    • @mattmallecoccio8378
      @mattmallecoccio8378 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@janekalmes I don't think I have yet. Thank you

  • @mattmallecoccio8378
    @mattmallecoccio8378 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I have a question: can howdunits work in books?

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว +4

      I do believe they can, yes! But you don't see a lot of them.

  • @julialednicky7542
    @julialednicky7542 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow, this is a great identification and analysis of techniques to create a great ending. I will definitely be using these. Excellent job, Jane!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad it was helpful!

  • @Priscilla_Bettis
    @Priscilla_Bettis ปีที่แล้ว

    Excellent video, Jane, thank you!

  • @jesbrimer3096
    @jesbrimer3096 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for making this video! This is super helpful and great!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Glad you enjoyed it!

  • @TheJadedFilmMaker
    @TheJadedFilmMaker ปีที่แล้ว

    Hey Jane! 👋
    thanks again for all the awesome vids.
    question: if you had an argument or fight with someone or some stress happens in your day, do you still try to write?
    sometimes I just keep reading what I wrote previously, in a desperate attempt to 'catch up' my thoughts. but it feels like a waste of time.
    what do you do ? also, if you write under these conditions is the writing still good ?
    also what about if the stress doesn't go away? like work for example
    cheers
    hope that all makes sense lol

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hey there! I've been thinking about your question. Here's my answer, but it's pretty specific to my own situation.
      As a homeschooling mom of four, I don't get a lot of time to write. I have one day per week when the kids are in activities and I can really sit down and have five hours together to get my head into my story. If I arrived at that time window in a terrible mood, yes. I would still work. Because the loss of that whole week's window would be too great a loss to bear. At the outset, my writing probably would suffer, but over the course of the day I think I'd find myself relaxing into it.
      In earlier times, when I had fewer responsibilities, I would have found it harder to commit to sitting down and getting that work in if I were upset. Perhaps I would have tried to work on my website, or social media, or something less creatively draining. BUT... I support muscling through and doing the work, because ultimately, having it done feels amazing.

    • @TheJadedFilmMaker
      @TheJadedFilmMaker ปีที่แล้ว

      @Jane Kalmes thanks for the reply!!
      yes im in a similar situation. .time is precious.

  • @Heothbremel
    @Heothbremel ปีที่แล้ว

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