ruby (an original song)

ig: / jayzelguen
hi, i made a song and it's entitled "RUBY"
Verse:
Seeing your hair in blue
Oh, I'd love to be with you
You look nice, oh yes you do
You don’t have any clue
What is wrong and what is true
But I like watching your view
Pre-Chorus:
Ooooh, when she’s close to me
I couldn’t speak
Ooooh, when she’s near to me
I couldn’t breathe
Chorus:
She’s like a ruby
Her skin’s so pretty
Oh, her eyes, her eyes
Were like skies, blue skies
She’s like a ruby
Everything’s so pretty
A star, so bright
Fills my days and nights
Ooooh

[@CrocsyGreen]

Adjust a little bit music/voice balance and this will be incredible! Well done!

[@jayzelvibar6793]

thank you so much for your advice, it really helps with my improvement. 💓

[@Naga_semka]

keep it up.....never cease doing what you love to do....btw you have a nice voice...✌✌

[@jayzelvibar6793]

Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate your encouragement and support. It means a lot to me. I'll definitely keep doing what I love. And I'm glad you enjoy my voice! 💗💗

[@bangtansarmy1110]

Your voice girlll😭😭

[@jayzelvibar6793]

thank you, i've been practicing my singing in the shower 😂