I'm sorry i didn't explain her character. The main reason of her accepting the deal is that johan beat her twice in a week and she doesn't have any money to buy food .
Wth.. Yes I appreciate that teenage girls are also watching this.that's why you're concerned.. But you didn't even mention a kissing scene.. Mind it if they watch ffs they're not innocent.. They already knows enough about it😂
Hi author i really liked this ff but I didn't liked how yn just agree to do it with him like you should make yn dignity should me more imp than money . And how he just always do it with him I know he was addict of it but I didn't liked yn character in this. Don't mind me I am just telling my opinion 🙂 but the ff was good and your voice is also nice 👍 💞💞 Edit:- thanku for these likes as it shows that you all agree with me 🤗🥺
Aishhh yahh author this is injustice....what about us your adult readers'.....im freaking 22 already.....have some mercy on us we single ass need some spice 😅😅😅
Yn just casually agreeing to sleep with him then why she tear up when she adress her sleeping with him. She agreeing like she going to trip. You should put more effort for yn character making
This is not something seems like an FF you should have to put some more effort on this I mean first of all yn character is so bad in this and the beginning was also not to good I am not disliking it but yeah you can understand😅
I'm sorry i didn't explain her character. The main reason of her accepting the deal is that johan beat her twice in a week and she doesn't have any money to buy food .
No need to explain but thank you
Wth.. Yes I appreciate that teenage girls are also watching this.that's why you're concerned.. But you didn't even mention a kissing scene.. Mind it if they watch ffs they're not innocent.. They already knows enough about it😂
Author: I'm not writing smut as teenage girls also watch
Me thinking: (As if teenage girls don't know anything 😂😂)
We are the most innocent fandom right 😂
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@@JeonJungkook-ed6vh yeah we are 🤣
Teenage 😂😂😂
He grabbed her neck from the back and 👂👂👂 next morning 🤣🤣🤣🤣
LoL 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
5:02 is the best part so far 🌝
Hahaha 😅😂😂😊🤣🤣
Auther is behaving like teenage girls don't know anything😂😂😂 Author didn't even mention kiss😂😂😂
I like the thing when you said their are teenagers and they are watching I really appreciate that
Hi author i really liked this ff but I didn't liked how yn just agree to do it with him like you should make yn dignity should me more imp than money . And how he just always do it with him I know he was addict of it but I didn't liked yn character in this. Don't mind me I am just telling my opinion 🙂 but the ff was good and your voice is also nice 👍 💞💞
Edit:- thanku for these likes as it shows that you all agree with me 🤗🥺
Truee
She is right
Author really good!!!! Keep making amazing ff’s
Hii unnie we watch the same ppl😅
True
Aishhh yahh author this is injustice....what about us your adult readers'.....im freaking 22 already.....have some mercy on us we single ass need some spice 😅😅😅
I love this story line so much , thanks for this masterpiece 😍🤗
Looks like yn is ready to sleep with anyone if they give her lot of money 🙄 . But ur ff is gud ❤
It makes y/n some kind of a .....you know
I was thinking about Rein but you cleared at the end 😊😊 Beautiful masterpiece ❤❤
Yn is so cardi B 🤣🤣🤣🙌
Yn just casually agreeing to sleep with him then why she tear up when she adress her sleeping with him. She agreeing like she going to trip. You should put more effort for yn character making
Yeah she agreed for money but eventually fell on love with him. That's why she cried.
@@nivedharamadass3360so what that didn't change the fact right?
You are a good writer 👍🏻😌😊
It's nice better you should keep some scenes
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😂😂😂😂😂😂 too silly & childish 😂
Umm it was amazing but why i cnt feel any emotions maybe i had touch😂
This is not something seems like an FF you should have to put some more effort on this I mean first of all yn character is so bad in this and the beginning was also not to good I am not disliking it but yeah you can understand😅
Bonusssssss
Hey Authour do u really think teenage girls who are bts fans are also very innocent?
( me to )
You should make an ff where yn kills her psycho ex and 1 year later she hears a whistle similar to his, Jungkook ff
Author plz do not voice cover but ur ff are good 😊❤
This is really good
I can't find the bonus part please anyone share the link 😊
Author I know it is personal question but still I am asking how old are you because your voice is like a baby just like sweet cute
Your voice is soooooooooooooo cute 💜
This really works 💜💜
Next part please 👍💜💜💜💜
Bonus part please
Amazing
Nice
Pin me author I'm first 😊