Help me name this piano piece
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 28 ก.ย. 2024
- Hey everyone, this is a piece that I wrote a bit ago but never really put up here so I did some final touches and decided to post it here. I wasn't able to think of a name for it so I figured I would reach out to you guys for help! Let me know of any suggestions :)
If you want the sheet music shoot me an email at:
ryanthetrombonist@gmail.com
I hope everyone is safe and doing well :D
Maybe you can call it something like 'Traped Path' ☺️
Great work 👍
Love the name! Thanks so much :)
Twin Thriller !! 😄
do you think you can come out with another trombone quartet or quintet
I Dookied My Britches: A Rock Opera. That's the name, close the polls, you're welcome
I think this would make a great story of a dragon that escaped mankind’s grasp and had peace for a while before being hunted down , he thinks he escaped but at the end the crescendo is maybe them surrounding him? No clue but I thought maybe like this
Something along these lines?
The Last Dragon
Part 1: Escape from mans grasp
Part 2: Freedom (the dragon escapes and is free for a while
Part 3: Enslaved once more (they catch him) just what I thought of lol
Great piano piece!!!
also this would go really nice as “mind troubles” or “extensive thoughts”
King Of The Ruined Castle
This is a very eccentric sounding piece but I dig it!
I can see this being named as music cue in a film: "Secret Revealed" or "Learning the Truth" something like that. It's an inciting moment of something....
For some reason the title "Walk of the Wendigo" popped in my head. Not sure it quite fits but who knows...
Interesting and energetic original Ryan (:
Thank you so much! I love that name, it’s got a really good ring to it
The way I can interpret this comes in two ways:
1) I want to say this piece embodies a villian’s arch in a story. The first part is of the trauma they have faced. It creates a sense for the listener to expect that because the beginning sounds eerie and “in your face” that the entire piece will be that. Then, the first “calm” section is the villian finding that one spark to bring them joy (love, freedom, any will work). But, the third section (kinda a repeat of the first) is when everything hits the fan, the joy is lost and they unleash what they can do, creating choas. At the end however, they redeem themselves. I was stuck on the ending crescendo at first, thinking it broke the narrative. However, that is I guess the pianist’s version of the story, as the villian can never escape what it did, creating this looming evil that may possibly never be erased but us as the listeners know what happened, how the redemption was made.
If you go this route, I would choose something that goes along with something like Wicked the Musical. Make the name menancing, but as you hear it, it has complexity.
2) You can also talk about this as a Romeo and Juliet situation. Both character were at first forced to love other ppl because of the family rivalry, they fall in love, stuff hits the fan, and ends with both lovers dead. I don’t have an idea with the ending crescendo on this one.
If you go with this one, I would do something along the lines of Forbidden Romance or like Star Crossed
I've had some friends say the same thing about the villain arch as well, I love the idea! Thank you so much :D
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Of Course! Sounds so good! I couldn’t pass it up!
@@ryancomposition your analysis is spot on! I thought virtually the same thing.
Yeah that's what I was going to say duh 👀👀👀👀
I definitely wasn't going to say you should call it calculus tripping on acid or anything that would be dumb definitely what he said took the words right out of my mouth 🤣🤣🤣
Delusional
I have no idea what to call it! Suffice to say I really enjoyed it. Who did you study harmony with? PS: It was great to read along with the score.
Thank you so much!! I just had my first year at Columbus State University where I studied with James Ogburn who helped me get out of my harmonic comfort zone!
@@ryancomposition I definitely understand the terminology of comfort zone. I will never forget my first harmony teacher as well; John Krueger. He was a friend of Al Hirt at the Cincinnati Conservatory. He set me up with my first real professional music gig…being a trumpet player with Al. (you are too young to remember Al Hirt) The only place I could go from there was down, which I never did. Keep the arrangements coming. They are delightful! Good luck!
@@ryancomposition"helped me get out of my harmonic comfort zone"
Translation: indoctrinated me into his cult.
Your "new harmonic ideas" are literally completely random. You've regressed.
@@Whatismusic123 no
This is a certified banger. I love how sincerely it uses the cartoon villain aesthetic, especially those high dissonant stabs around 2:45 and 5:54. The ending made me crack up laughing. Really well constructed piece.