Paragraph Structure

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    In this video, we will discuss the structure and organization of a standard paragraph, as well as the importance of the topic sentence. After the video, students will have an understanding of paragraph structure and be able to write a strong topic sentence.
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  • @maysoundawoud2898
    @maysoundawoud2898 4 ปีที่แล้ว +124

    His voice and the way he delivers the lessons are so peaceful.

  • @teachergabrielBR
    @teachergabrielBR 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    The way he delivered this explanation was extremely easy to understand. Not only does he teach but also he makes us meditate!

  • @supertoyssupertoys3809
    @supertoyssupertoys3809 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    This guy is an amazing teacher! 🙏🏻, he is so peaceful ! and whatever he says it gets stuck on your head.

  • @shellymolnar8049
    @shellymolnar8049 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank you so much for making this video. If you can imagine, I am going back to school at an older age in my life. I went to a technical high school. English was not what they really focused on. Writing essay’s was never something we did. Thank you again for your calming voice, and easy explanation of how to finish my essay. Have a blessed day, and thank you for sharing this with all of us. 💜

  • @sashidharbaral3947
    @sashidharbaral3947 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Shaun's ways of presenting is amazing. The guy is cool and deserves incredible teaching learning skill. Thanks.

  • @Dreoc
    @Dreoc 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Couldn't figure out what I was doing wrong with my writing. You presented the information on paragraph writing and showed me exactly where I was going wrong. Think I can write much better with this in mind. Great lesson Professor! Thank you!

  • @frankharmstrong
    @frankharmstrong 8 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    This is a superb lesson. I am going to use this in my essay-writing class to help teach paragraph structure. Thank you for sharing.

  • @tuckcedo9823
    @tuckcedo9823 4 ปีที่แล้ว +75

    I want this guy to teach me how to meditate.

    • @Aokaz
      @Aokaz 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      hi tucky boi

  • @Abdominal0.0
    @Abdominal0.0 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I noticed that he smiled in one of the revised sentences. The one about having a kid makes you patient. It's kind of sweet because maybe he has a kid.

  • @zenophoenix8931
    @zenophoenix8931 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Watching this video is the best way to improve my English writing .

  • @abuelitadc
    @abuelitadc 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Shaun, I'm 74 years old getting an MA in seminary and this is the best lesson on paragraph structure I've ever heard!! Thank you!

    • @danielleonardosantos7089
      @danielleonardosantos7089 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      good luck!

    • @the_gamer_sonika1638
      @the_gamer_sonika1638 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@danielleonardosantos7089 jrjddjdjdjdjdjnddndndndnenendjisis it

    • @clonkex
      @clonkex 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      How'd it go, out of curiosity?

    • @uglaegilsdottir
      @uglaegilsdottir หลายเดือนก่อน

      Have you graduated from the Seminary? If so, congratulations!

  • @fiercegladiator7000
    @fiercegladiator7000 5 ปีที่แล้ว +56

    That bird just flew into your house! lol 0:02

    • @Alphareactions007
      @Alphareactions007 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      xD

    • @ihumbleyou
      @ihumbleyou 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      XD
      i seen that too

    • @Drew-cv5ns
      @Drew-cv5ns 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      this is the main reason why i don't pass the class i got distracted that easy lmfao

    • @lowcorrelation
      @lowcorrelation 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      postmates just upped there game. Doesnt get any fresher than that.

    • @andymorales5444
      @andymorales5444 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      im watching this for my class and i had to rewatch it that part xD

  • @bushrahoque1571
    @bushrahoque1571 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    His voice & way of description just amaizing

  • @smrtenglish
    @smrtenglish  8 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Join the Smrt Live Class for free every Wednesday at 3:00pm PST on TH-cam.

  • @richardmajece5498
    @richardmajece5498 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I like your channel! And I think that your videos are helpful for students, because I used your advices when I had to write my SAT essay. And I managed to get a high grade so thank you! Studying in college was always difficult for me so now I am your subscriber! But I also use nerdymates when I want to read more about different types of essay. Maybe it will help you with your videos

  • @zachtaylor2041
    @zachtaylor2041 10 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you, Farah.
    Shaun has a lot of writing videos in this channel. I hope it helps in the course you are in.

  • @tomaslara1815
    @tomaslara1815 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    His voice is so relaxing

  • @Allihere
    @Allihere 9 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is an excellent video on paragraph structure. Thank you for creating and sharing it.

  • @fountain44159
    @fountain44159 11 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks for posting - well presented with clear and helpful ideas

  • @sumaiyaahmed8314
    @sumaiyaahmed8314 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    this person's teahing method is so cool and useful.. thank you

  • @nalizefourie604
    @nalizefourie604 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thx so much, this video helps a lot!

  • @Nandito03
    @Nandito03 9 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Excellent lesson teacher, I learnt a lot...

  • @kleiokaleidoscope9248
    @kleiokaleidoscope9248 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Bilbo Baggins... 😲 Also very helpful, thank you.. you really simplify it well, which I really appreciate because my school life got really messed up so I missed a lot of things and it can be hard to understand now, especially English stuff (don't even know the term for it lol). I didn't graduate, but I'm writing an autobiography about my experiences with love so far in life, and I'm going to publish it. So I'm really glad to find a teacher I can understand! 😄

  • @AngelFlores-bi5xw
    @AngelFlores-bi5xw 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Shaun = excellent teacher!

  • @diontaedaughtry974
    @diontaedaughtry974 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you this was very helpful and informative 👍👍

  • @mazoirsaid5894
    @mazoirsaid5894 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much sir for interesting lesson.Hoping you to post more examples..

  • @wendycanenguez5852
    @wendycanenguez5852 9 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you for this great video. I will translate it to spanish.

  • @nderitumuriuki7945
    @nderitumuriuki7945 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great Video Smrt! It really helped me understand the topic.

    • @shanelwhite3700
      @shanelwhite3700 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      see this th-cam.com/video/Oy7R6ticmag/w-d-xo.html

  • @farahalshuqairy2402
    @farahalshuqairy2402 10 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Very useful..thanks alot..
    Im taking the same course right now

  • @dianaangelalvarez3280
    @dianaangelalvarez3280 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great lessons!

  • @richkuhnsr7851
    @richkuhnsr7851 5 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    I seen a bird, that is cool. Thanks for all your help.

  • @tayweihong8331
    @tayweihong8331 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    A paragraph must have 3 parts:
    1. Topic Sentence - It gives the main idea of the paragraph.
    2. Supporting Sentences - It develops the main idea by giving examples and explanations.
    3. Concluding Sentences - It gives closure to the paragraph.
    Example of a good topic sentence: Taking too many university courses at once can have serious consequences.
    - The topic sentence has a clear topic and a main idea.
    Traits of a good topic sentence:
    1. It must not be too specific (e.g. a fact or evidence).
    2. It must not be too broad. The sentence must have a main idea.
    3. Topic must not be annouced. Instead, state your opinion or the main idea.

    • @unpan9790
      @unpan9790 ปีที่แล้ว

      You just did my homework, thank you 🥺

  • @gordonclamsey7468
    @gordonclamsey7468 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    well done shaun u r a good person I wont ever forget how you have helped me this day.

    • @DiegoGames-yf5vr
      @DiegoGames-yf5vr 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Lakokage and didnt put a ' in won't

    • @madychitwood8761
      @madychitwood8761 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Lakokage It isn't a grammar video, it's a paragraph structure video

    • @madychitwood8761
      @madychitwood8761 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DiegoGames-yf5vr well you didn't put an apostrophe in "didn't" so...

    • @DiegoGames-yf5vr
      @DiegoGames-yf5vr 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@madychitwood8761 apostrophes arent very important in words unless its something like 'we're'

    • @madychitwood8761
      @madychitwood8761 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DiegoGames-yf5vr That does make sense. That's why I think it was unnecessary and a bit rude to point out that won't did not have an apostrophe, as you can still tell what the word is. :)

  • @soy2pinoy
    @soy2pinoy 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi, Shawn I was wondering if you are still making this type of videos 2018. I came across your videos, it is very useful to me. English is not my native language. Thank you.

  • @tobiasit2190
    @tobiasit2190 9 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very nice. Thank you!

  • @tineygretel694
    @tineygretel694 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Yes it is i am thankful for your teaching sir it's my pleasure

  • @angellezhang5599
    @angellezhang5599 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very useful lessons!

  • @hikmat39
    @hikmat39 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great video. super informative.

  • @mariaescobar6640
    @mariaescobar6640 ปีที่แล้ว

    excellent explanation!!!

  • @abhinavverma7739
    @abhinavverma7739 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks for making me understand the concept. 😅🙏🙏🙏

  • @vanessasylvain101
    @vanessasylvain101 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    THANKS FOR THE HELP!!!

  • @0dalisk
    @0dalisk 10 ปีที่แล้ว

    thnks x Ur class. It was short & sweet and straight 2 the point. I`m having a hard time at writting essays . and Ur Vids are clarifying my problem. :) Ale Esl teacher from argentina

  • @hanojo6098
    @hanojo6098 9 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanx for this video.

  • @pxndxdictovzla
    @pxndxdictovzla 9 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you dear! It was too much useful for me!

  • @GoneTranquil
    @GoneTranquil 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Shaun,
    The provided exercise link is no longer valid. Are you able to update it?

  • @erick_0613
    @erick_0613 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    This man just helped me with my Final for the semester

    • @essaywriter5586
      @essaywriter5586 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Kindly reach out if you need help with your essays, research papers or generally handling your assignments, I would love to help. I tackle essays and academic work professionally for students. Feel free to email me at (orinaoris@gmail.com) if you interested with such a service.

  • @Jono.
    @Jono. 10 ปีที่แล้ว

    I have not written an essay in years and this served as a nice refresher, thank you!

  • @jagannadharaoalajangi7450
    @jagannadharaoalajangi7450 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    this is very useful to learners.

  • @janynehawkins9703
    @janynehawkins9703 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    how do you get to the exercise that he talks about at the end?

  • @JannatulFerdusOrshi
    @JannatulFerdusOrshi 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for this

  • @DARKGaming-yq1bf
    @DARKGaming-yq1bf 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very nice and good information about write paragraph.....thank you so much...........

  • @MYfriendsknow
    @MYfriendsknow 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you!

  • @saimaali843
    @saimaali843 9 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It was helpful .. i m taking ESL classes in Los angeles city college and its frustrating for me to play with this while i m trying to move in any university! -_-

  • @DidYouSeeThatPlayo
    @DidYouSeeThatPlayo 8 ปีที่แล้ว +361

    who is watching this for school??

  • @abdelhamidhamitouche887
    @abdelhamidhamitouche887 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    good and well presented

  • @AedAcademy
    @AedAcademy 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you

  • @Grabihan
    @Grabihan 10 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you, i will try to practice. By the way, can i ask what camera do you use? And do you also teach photography?

  • @Princeunique4life
    @Princeunique4life 10 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very helpful

  • @avukupavan2183
    @avukupavan2183 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for u great information

  • @crowneedsnoshadow7141
    @crowneedsnoshadow7141 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanx very useful.

  • @DARKGaming-yq1bf
    @DARKGaming-yq1bf 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks shawn.....

  • @mohammadjahirhossain9380
    @mohammadjahirhossain9380 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    thanks for good lecture

  • @osamaalawadhi6527
    @osamaalawadhi6527 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks

  • @irinabhdeaalves2307
    @irinabhdeaalves2307 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    He could say "Hi" or "Hello" at the beginning of his videos. But the lessons are good!

  • @yilinxie6321
    @yilinxie6321 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    How can I get access to the corresponding exercises, when I click the link, It doesn't provide me with the exercises

  • @sorderman900
    @sorderman900 9 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    is this a good topic sentance.The printing press was a great invintion at the time and impacted worldview.

  • @attamamei1494
    @attamamei1494 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    dude said to his barber "give me the season 1 jim halpert."

  • @cesarzafraxaldaya1746
    @cesarzafraxaldaya1746 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    After finishing my school, I continue watching this video to recall what I learnt one time.

  • @hisadorabramovitz3372
    @hisadorabramovitz3372 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    i am because this helped me set up my introduction but now i am having trouble with the second part the supporting topic

  • @MSA-uj7cp
    @MSA-uj7cp 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow helpful.

  • @minnie383
    @minnie383 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I liked the lesson, but the link was no use :(

  • @seemasood3840
    @seemasood3840 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    How to write introduction of an essay?

  • @henrys1198
    @henrys1198 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Very useful, thank you!

    • @smrtenglish
      @smrtenglish  7 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for watching!

    • @henrys1198
      @henrys1198 7 ปีที่แล้ว

      yeah

    • @henrys1198
      @henrys1198 7 ปีที่แล้ว

      ***** I mean the content mentioned in the video!!

  • @snaplanguage
    @snaplanguage 9 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    When you say "every paragraph" has three basic components, you mean a "typical" paragraph, correct? Paragraphs can have an implied main idea (i.e., no topic sentence) and, if it has a main idea sentence, it can be anywhere in the paragraph. I'm a reading instructor, and it's often a struggle to help students understand these concepts because they learn in their writing courses that they must "always start a paragraph with a topic sentence."

    • @shaunmacleod2371
      @shaunmacleod2371 9 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      Snap Language That's correct, yes; there will always be exceptions to the typical format. And I tell my students the same thing; while a paragraph's main idea is often found in the first couple sentences, it is not an absolute. When looking for the main idea of a paragraph you are reading, it is important to keep in mind that experienced/professional writers can place a topic sentence anywhere they like and are not restricted by the conventions of essay writing. When teaching language learners how to write a paragraph, however, I strongly encourage them to include a clear topic sentence to help them focus their ideas. Thanks.

    • @snaplanguage
      @snaplanguage 9 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Thank you for the quick reply! I'll make sure my reading students see this... so they don't think I'm lying LOL

  • @gillie5432
    @gillie5432 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Who got sent this for online school. Good video!

    • @essaywriter5586
      @essaywriter5586 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Kindly reach out if you need help with your essays, research papers or generally handling your assignments, I would love to help. I tackle essays and academic work professionally for students. Feel free to email me at (orinaoris@gmail.com) if you interested with such a service.

  • @asmaboudar3381
    @asmaboudar3381 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    U r Great Teacher ! Thank u very much =D

  • @what2998
    @what2998 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Got a bit surprised when i opened the vid. He's introvertedly charming lol

  • @Olfa_2006
    @Olfa_2006 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    the exercise link lead inexisted domain.... :( where can i exercise please

  • @zachtaylor2041
    @zachtaylor2041 10 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks Sami.
    Make sure you check out the other videos and subscribe to stay up to date with our newest videos.
    We add 3 new videos each week.

  • @Gavinsane5
    @Gavinsane5 8 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Lol, he smiled at 3:57 he smiles because something happens in the background, behind the camera. I bet his kid or partner was doing something funny XD.
    +Smrt English , is this true?

    • @arolveloso
      @arolveloso 8 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      +Gavinsane5 I`d bet it`s the bird who appears at the beginning of the video through the window... it has been present in various videos :D

    • @Gavinsane5
      @Gavinsane5 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      +arol veloso LOL Yesss!

    • @munawarshah373
      @munawarshah373 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      No, He smiled at "Having a child taught him to be patient"

    • @sevvy326
      @sevvy326 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      ur right

  • @aurabaute4506
    @aurabaute4506 10 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank, a good paragraph need:
    Topic Sentence
    Supporting Sentences
    Concluding Sentence.

  • @keepinthefaith.5406
    @keepinthefaith.5406 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    Beging my essay with a grabber sentense ... Example a news paper clipping.. ( high school student got arrested after walking on toll road) don't you believe we should have right as a pedestrian?

  • @zachtaylor2041
    @zachtaylor2041 10 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    We don't teach photography, sorry. We use a Cannon D70.

  • @Engstudyskill
    @Engstudyskill 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Finished the explanation of the definition of a paragraph before a minute passes.

  • @natraj9399
    @natraj9399 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    ,it is easy to understand 😎😍🎆

  • @thequestfish1442
    @thequestfish1442 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    i am watching this for school😌

    • @smrtenglish
      @smrtenglish  7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Awesome! I hope our video helps :)

  • @zfa20203
    @zfa20203 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Why you don't come to Iraq we really need a good teachers like you .

  • @savoki_5671
    @savoki_5671 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Study smart brings me here

  • @VaehsMind
    @VaehsMind 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Rip x💔

  • @munishkumarchaudhary7054
    @munishkumarchaudhary7054 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    easiest way to understand

  • @carlgauss5905
    @carlgauss5905 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    lessons are great of course, has anyone else noticed the seagull in the background?

  • @quixotic7718
    @quixotic7718 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This guy looks like a more nerdy version of that dude from the office.

  • @Learnnewtings
    @Learnnewtings 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Who’s watching this for their GCSEs

  • @aarionlynch
    @aarionlynch 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    He looks like the guy from crash course.

  • @brageleosaugstadthgersen
    @brageleosaugstadthgersen 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    If you don't watch the video while listening, it really sounds like Alexander Skarsgård talking to you.

  • @ashwin_N369
    @ashwin_N369 9 ปีที่แล้ว

    Is this a good topic sentence: The writer has used a choice of powerful phrases and words in the description of the countryside to create a powerful visual impression about the remote part of Mongolia.

    • @shaunmacleod2371
      @shaunmacleod2371 9 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Yes, it is, although "used a choice" is a little awkward. Maybe "chosen to use" or simply "used".

    • @ashwin_N369
      @ashwin_N369 9 ปีที่แล้ว

      thank you

  • @zep2639
    @zep2639 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    anyone see the bird fly in at 0:00 xD

  • @themmaxim4ikworld136
    @themmaxim4ikworld136 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello from future

  • @asmaaelgogary6523
    @asmaaelgogary6523 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    🌷

  • @ala-eddinezair9997
    @ala-eddinezair9997 6 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    who is watching this video in 2018?

    • @ashleymcclain5680
      @ashleymcclain5680 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Meeee.... Sent here for English Comp lol

    • @Olfa_2006
      @Olfa_2006 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      HI guys, does exercise link work for you? i would like to practice

    • @AhmedAli-uf1ll
      @AhmedAli-uf1ll 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      i

    • @hilop33
      @hilop33 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Me

    • @swim7k
      @swim7k 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Even in 2019!