The Train Part 1 Short film IRCTC App

[@rajpadmasri]

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[@shashidharmamulla3510]

Good job brothers 👏👏

[@lingalasidhartha]

Thanks for supporting

[@Shaikproductions]

Honest review:- 1. Too shaky footages.
2. Unnecessary footage addups
3. Too lengthy footage addups [the dog one]
4. Weak storyline
5. Weak execution
6. Not obeying the grid law
7. Placing character anywhere (6)
8. Weak climax buildup
9. Unsatisfactory end
10. Hard cuts
11. Colour grading not according to scene and weather/situation
GOOD STUFF
1. good start
2. Sound quality (except some convo parts)
Overall 2/10
Keep it up

[@lingalasidhartha]

Thanks for review