Thank you all for giving me so much support and appreciation on these words. You have filled my emptiness with happiness by your comments and likes..I am overwhelmed by this response..never thought so many will like it .. This is my only achievement in life and I am happy about it. Thanks a lot
“The Meadow Of A Man’s Life” “I desire to behold A butterfly in peaceful flight, The light flits that lift And dance inside my eyes. I have dared to taste The nectar drip of wet figs Ready to drop and spill Their sweetness on the ground. I have learned to adjust My sight upon the golden sea Shortly before the sun Goes down in all its glittering. Shimmers move through the creek, Ripples of water light and shadows, Fish darting into safe pools, While the dragonfly hovers above. Who can tell another man Where over that hill, a dale Waits with flowers and bees Buzzing about in perfect harmony? Who can go inside another’s heart And hear the sorrows that all need healing? Who can share with eyes closed His vision of the Cosmos and that vast infinity?" Igor Stepanishcheva
I am not one for poetry or am I knowledgeable about it but this poem screamed at me in a way that made me feel connected to the writer in a way it just like so many other things are a sign that I need to not work myself to death anymore for the past 15 years I’ve missed holidays birthdays weddings all in the name of success thank you for sharing this with me and everyone else this is another wake up call for me thank you
Never give up, life is like a wheel you need to keep it turning! sadness doesn't last for ever remember that. Go find joy, when you find joy happiness will follow 🌹🌸🌻
It’s a beautiful poem sketching the absence of one’s beloved from his heart which poet doesn’t want to admit that all the colours of joy and life are gone with his paramour. That’s the most pathetic era of one’s regime. Anyhow the loneliness described torn our heart . 👍🏻🌷🌷🌷
This was everything I'm going through right now. It was amazing. Thank you u wrote everything down what I've been trying to say for so long . Keep writing beautiful poetry
I wish I could hug you !!in time things can get better you have to bring your self out of all that play music 🎶 it gets me in a good mood .we all have our sad moments believe me I know!! Time heals everything !!♡ much love to you !!
No cry,no more tears,plz see me,I m with you to remove ur loneliness,it is the main reason that I want to talk to you that you never cry and shed tears
Nice flow and full of emotion watching this poem, watched in full, very deep, nice ryhming of words and still connecting with the sjbject. I like it, thanks sharing this video.
How I know the feeling! But when you have a God and a Savior that died for us, and you thank him even through troubles he gives you strength. When we stop thinking of our selves and doing for others without bragging. It sure helps to stop feeling sorry for yourself.
"The deep ocean of emptiness drown me and leave me breathless. I am waiting for someone to grip my hands out. Hold me securely and take me out, To see the brightest light, And this emptiness I hide Will no more but just a dot." ~ Joan Santillan Amurao
I wanna cry but no tears come out but when I lost something I cry with my heart out and people say it's very small reason u r crying about but the small reason only bring back my terrible memories.
So sad! But it is of free will to let this happen to one's self! If you feel this and know it , time to do something about it! To look at all beautiful things life has to offer, appreciate God's gifts he offers around us! Never let this feeling last! God Bless!😇🙏
@@MALLUTRUCKERDUDE well it is easier to give up, and surrender, than it is if your not up to the challenge.No one said it was going to be Easy!! God Bless !! Wish you well!😇🙏
Yes I wrote these lines when i though I cannot move ahead in life any further.. I wrote these lines as a means of venting out my feelings...Thanks for your comment..
Everybody has a past, If you think about it your present will blast. If you judge anyone by their past, Remember, their happiness won't last. Mistakes are made by human being, Forgiveness is what they are pleasing. Each being wish for a new chance. This is well known in the history of France. Realising people about their mistakes, Is like offering salt to their pain and aches. Being sorrounded some are still lonely. Why don't you make them feel homely?? People starve for love and care. What you are doing is not fair. Life is all about earn and fire-burn, Life is all about earn and fire-burn, Once you gone, no choice to return. Move on and help others moving, It will be amazing and soothing. Never allow your words to exploit lives, Not only you dear, each has equal rights. Before you judge look at your own. May be you are already drawn. Everyone has right to dance in the air. If you feel jealous, kindly relax under the chair. Every being is a rising star, So respect each, no matter him or her. 𝔖𝔲𝔧𝔞𝔱𝔞 𝔖𝔥𝔞𝔯𝔪𝔞.
i have naothing to say ....... i am just .. your poem's line just realistic. ....... and what you said in your poem that everything happen in my life ...... . 😔😔😔😔😔
We clearly feel the same way. Do you do the things you do because you don't believe in yourself? Like you not good enough? Both crying. The bible says that if you let me in, call me your sister, all that will change. I am the one who can rewire your mind. You have been around the wrong influence. It's God's way of calling you to himself. When we set our minds on the things of God, then everything will change. My entire life is set on God and I have integrity. You and I are supposed to put a Garland on each other's heads. Bringing unity. Please don't beat yourself up. Everything that has happened was supposed to happen. This has brought us wisdom. As you said, I am also not perfect. I am exactly who I am. The whole point of renewing our minds is to be set free from condemnation and ungodly desires. We are supposed to set our minds on things from above. What's pure and lovely. Trying to be perfect will never set you free. All God requires of us is to be who he created us to be. Ourselves. Xxxx
Whats up?Say it we cry together Am here to stand with you 😭😭😭 Everytime my eyes especially My right lower eye is shaking I don’t like it I know am going to cry 😭 And am experiencing that now I denied the power of cry now
Hey i am too a poet and i post my work on ig and now i have started on you tube too but after watching your work i feel extremely inspired and i am impressed .great;)
I am not a writer or a poet ...but its really inspiring to know that you got inspired by my lines... appreciation like this makes me write more.. thanks a lot
Not my best poem but its meh. *Empty* empty but broken nothing but hurt no words spoken all mouths shut shattered ever so more than before lying down low on the cold floor i'm facing defeat watched my world fall couldn't face the heat i can't hear single call everything distancing away from here from the terrorising of the arising fear the fear was me i am the monster so set them free and the firefighter these fires are never going to ever die it's the same forever even if you lie tell me if u liked it :) for more follow x.damaged.mind.x - instagram.com/x.damaged.mind.x/
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Thank you all for giving me so much support and appreciation on these words. You have filled my emptiness with happiness by your comments and likes..I am overwhelmed by this response..never thought so many will like it .. This is my only achievement in life and I am happy about it. Thanks a lot
Can I ask fro the music?
we Have to Stick togheter
... so far
@@remimarkable4834 do you know the background music?
@@trebkren2874 I was actually responding to satishpoetry, but the song is called I don't want to do this without you by Late night feeler, I believed
The loneliest moment in someone's life is when they are watching their whole world fall apart and all they can do is stare blankly. 😔
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“The Meadow Of A Man’s Life”
“I desire to behold
A butterfly in peaceful flight,
The light flits that lift
And dance inside my eyes.
I have dared to taste
The nectar drip of wet figs
Ready to drop and spill
Their sweetness on the ground.
I have learned to adjust
My sight upon the golden sea
Shortly before the sun
Goes down in all its glittering.
Shimmers move through the creek,
Ripples of water light and shadows,
Fish darting into safe pools,
While the dragonfly hovers above.
Who can tell another man
Where over that hill, a dale
Waits with flowers and bees
Buzzing about in perfect harmony?
Who can go inside another’s heart
And hear the sorrows that all need healing?
Who can share with eyes closed
His vision of the Cosmos and that vast infinity?"
Igor Stepanishcheva
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I am not one for poetry or am I knowledgeable about it but this poem screamed at me in a way that made me feel connected to the writer in a way it just like so many other things are a sign that I need to not work myself to death anymore for the past 15 years I’ve missed holidays birthdays weddings all in the name of success thank you for sharing this with me and everyone else this is another wake up call for me thank you
Thanks a lot for the kind words !!!!
Never give up, life is like a wheel you need to keep it turning! sadness doesn't last for ever remember that. Go find joy, when you find joy happiness will follow 🌹🌸🌻
Well said.Ill try to remember that ,I wanna give up but cant😢
It’s a beautiful poem sketching the absence of one’s beloved from his heart which poet doesn’t want to admit that all the colours of joy and life are gone with his paramour. That’s the most pathetic era of one’s regime. Anyhow the loneliness described torn our heart . 👍🏻🌷🌷🌷
This was everything I'm going through right now. It was amazing. Thank you u wrote everything down what I've been trying to say for so long . Keep writing beautiful poetry
Thanks a lot for the nice words!!!!
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Wow such a emotional 🥺🥺 poem loved it ...
emptiness - Very Sad English Poem, really emotional poetry full of LOVE sadness..💯👍
I wish I could hug you !!in time things can get better you have to bring your self out of all that play music 🎶 it gets me in a good mood .we all have our sad moments believe me I know!! Time heals everything !!♡ much love to you !!
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No cry,no more tears,plz see me,I m with you to remove ur loneliness,it is the main reason that I want to talk to you that you never cry and shed tears
Nice flow and full of emotion watching this poem, watched in full, very deep, nice ryhming of words and still connecting with the sjbject. I like it, thanks sharing this video.
Thanks a lot for the nice comment
Silence never made me cry...it is the chaos which is storming inside me that makes me cry
How I know the feeling! But when you have a God and a Savior that died for us, and you thank him even through troubles he gives you strength. When we stop thinking of our selves and doing for others without bragging. It sure helps to stop feeling sorry for yourself.
This is so beautiful. I loved this poem. It is almost my feelings.
Yes just waiting
Wow, loved the sentiment, from one poet to another, keep strong.
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I can relate to all your beautiful line ....great work💗
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Deep down in the emptiness of ocean you stand,
With years in eyes
With sorrows in heart,
The time night will pass
The sun will rise
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"The deep ocean of emptiness
drown me and leave me breathless.
I am waiting for someone to grip my hands out.
Hold me securely and take me out,
To see the brightest light,
And this emptiness I hide
Will no more but just a dot."
~ Joan Santillan Amurao
@vicky mpp thank you
Beautiful !!!
Did you write this ?
@@nibeditasingha1460 yes dear, impromptu lines for comment.
Can i use this, for making poem because my teacher give us activity making an English poem. (Correct my grammar if there's something wrong)☹️
Wow 😮 beautiful poem
Just so amazing...expressing a thousand emotions keep it up keep going ✨❤️
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I want to feel how hard life was n how happy to hve this little life span..no tears, no joy this kill me I'm totally blank
So true all the words I am empty and lost thank for this poem it's beautiful
I wanna cry but no tears come out but when I lost something I cry with my heart out and people say it's very small reason u r crying about but the small reason only bring back my terrible memories.
You made a poem right now
How you doing? It's been three years..
So sad! But it is of free will to let this happen to one's self! If you feel this and know it , time to do something about it! To look at all beautiful things life has to offer, appreciate God's gifts he offers around us! Never let this feeling last! God Bless!😇🙏
Well sometimes it's not that easy as you may say ,especially for the ones who did this over and over and over
@@MALLUTRUCKERDUDE well it is easier to give up, and surrender, than it is if your not up to the challenge.No one said it was going to be Easy!! God Bless !! Wish you well!😇🙏
One of the best poem I have heard so far. Feelings and words are coming from within.hats off.
Yes I wrote these lines when i though I cannot move ahead in life any further.. I wrote these lines as a means of venting out my feelings...Thanks for your comment..
Heart touching poem .. I really like this 🥰
Happy to read your lovely comment. :-)
I don't know but my tears rolling down
Hope you are fine now :-)
Thank you love this song you have no idea!
Wow i like this vedio very touch😍😍😍😍
This comment is so touching ..thanks for such a nice comment
It added tears to my eyes ...such lines ..
Loved this dr..
am sorry for adding tears ..hope you are fine now
Amazing poem post like these poem and you grow fastly 1M subscribers
Everybody has a past,
If you think about it your present will blast.
If you judge anyone by their past,
Remember, their happiness won't last.
Mistakes are made by human being,
Forgiveness is what they are pleasing.
Each being wish for a new chance.
This is well known in the history of France.
Realising people about their mistakes,
Is like offering salt to their pain and aches.
Being sorrounded some are still lonely.
Why don't you make them feel homely??
People starve for love and care.
What you are doing is not fair.
Life is all about earn and fire-burn,
Life is all about earn and fire-burn,
Once you gone, no choice to return.
Move on and help others moving,
It will be amazing and soothing.
Never allow your words to exploit lives,
Not only you dear, each has equal rights.
Before you judge look at your own.
May be you are already drawn.
Everyone has right to dance in the air.
If you feel jealous, kindly relax under the chair.
Every being is a rising star,
So respect each, no matter him or her.
𝔖𝔲𝔧𝔞𝔱𝔞 𝔖𝔥𝔞𝔯𝔪𝔞.
Nice Lyrics...Thanks for posting your comment here
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@vicky mpp thank you 😊
Nice poem
@@animasharma2650 Thank you Anima.
Now my mood.
Thanks for your post.
Hope you feel happy now
You have said it all in one poem! 🙏💯❤️
you made me happy in just one comment ...thanks for the nice words
Great poetry 🌹🌹
The great lines touched my heart.....and felt so sad...
You are the king of Urdu poetry Mirza Asad Ullah Khan Ghalib Read this poetry . Your heart will be happy .
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I really don't know why
Some times I want to cry..
I wish to scream and shout
And let my feelings out..💗
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It is a wonderful piece 😊😊 please keep writing 👍👍
Thanks for the lovely comment. I am happy while i read comments :-)
This song is so cool and good I like it
i have naothing to say ....... i am just ..
your poem's line just realistic. ....... and what you said in your poem that everything happen in my life ...... . 😔😔😔😔😔
oh my goodness..hope you are fine now :-)
@@Satishpoetry 😨😨😨😨 thank you so much for your reply ... continue your work .... always supprot ..😊😊😊😊
So so beautiful
Thanks for the nice feedback
Simple lines but powerful feel😍
Thanks for the inspiring words !!!
Really I can relate to this poem... Very nice
its not good to relate to this poem ..hope you come out of this feeling of emptiness soon :-)
Trust God he delivers.God bless,have a wonderful day.
words are too sad to share it with anyone 🤦♀️If this is what you think I am ?
THEN YOUR ASSUMPTIONS ARE WRONG !
Thanks you for sharing
What a heart touching poem
Good 😊👍
Amazing poem
We clearly feel the same way. Do you do the things you do because you don't believe in yourself? Like you not good enough? Both crying. The bible says that if you let me in, call me your sister, all that will change. I am the one who can rewire your mind. You have been around the wrong influence. It's God's way of calling you to himself. When we set our minds on the things of God, then everything will change. My entire life is set on God and I have integrity. You and I are supposed to put a Garland on each other's heads. Bringing unity. Please don't beat yourself up. Everything that has happened was supposed to happen. This has brought us wisdom. As you said, I am also not perfect. I am exactly who I am. The whole point of renewing our minds is to be set free from condemnation and ungodly desires. We are supposed to set our minds on things from above. What's pure and lovely. Trying to be perfect will never set you free. All God requires of us is to be who he created us to be. Ourselves. Xxxx
Thanks for your concern and inspirational words
Omg... Love the po am gotta say it made me cry😢
Keep it up☺️☺️💐💐🌹🌹
Thank you, I will
Very sad and nice poem. Loved it.
Thanks a lottttt !!!!!
Hey I love your poems❤
I am happy to know that ..and thanks for such a support ..I will try writing more :-)
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Love your poem ❤
lined are just.....marvelous
Thank you so much for the nice comment..
How beautiful thank you
Thank you for posting a beautiful comment ..made my day
Time is everything..Be patient 🙏
Exactly .. Time is the only answer to all failures..problems and pain..if we get through that time ..life changes
Don't give up even don't give your loving heart to someone else. You deserve her
Very nice 😢really I cried
Whats up?Say it we cry together
Am here to stand with you 😭😭😭
Everytime my eyes especially
My right lower eye is shaking
I don’t like it I know am going to cry 😭
And am experiencing that now
I denied the power of cry now
This poem is truly a masterpiece. I wish I could do what you can do. That’s amazing.
Beautiful words...
So much thanks for replying my friend. Please keep in touch. Thanks.
Wonderful👏👏👏
Very beautifully written
Thanks a lot for your kind words
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Wow . U r so creative in ur thinking
Thanks a lotttt for your appreciation ... makes me more creative
@@Satishpoetry I like ur poetry skills ,they motivate me to have such magic in the writing . Thanks
Call Jesus into your heart,,,get hold of the promises and cry unto God still you feel that he has heard you 🙏
Wonderful poem. Please do some more
Thanks for your appreciation
Moved when I was 8 and found someone I thought would love me the way my old friends did but I miss my old friends
Gosh this is so deep and beautiful 💚
Gosh I like your comment :-)
Very nice and heart touching 😢
Thanks for your nice feedback ..
@@Satishpoetry thank u
Awesome.. u deserve hug from me
Thanks for the awesome comment... made my day !!!
"Life is pain anyone who says differently is selling something."
Princess Bride
I think...this emtiness is the present situation most of all experiencing...try to follow spirituality may help a lot only option is left I feel...
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When I heard this just I wanted to see my passed hubby. O God I can't control my tear.
Its okk .. you will be fine.
Excellent works and the last line really touches my heart ....keep going on ..
I read these beautiful lines on my channel with title English sad poetry...need your conment...
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Your poem is very good, i can feel every single word that you say in this video❤️❤️ ...
I am sorry for making you feel empty :-). Thanks for the feedback
Aisi dasha har insan ki hai bhai
I am loved this poem
Thanks a lot for your nice comment
@@Satishpoetry welcome🎉
i am from pakistan
a very nice and feelingfull poetry.
Thanks for your wonderful feedback.
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why feel sad ! be glad we are still here !God is good to us !
Hey i am too a poet and i post my work on ig and now i have started on you tube too but after watching your work i feel extremely inspired and i am impressed .great;)
I am not a writer or a poet ...but its really inspiring to know that you got inspired by my lines... appreciation like this makes me write more.. thanks a lot
Oh my god ! Thanks for replying :)
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i like English poem，come from China
Nice💕🖤🖤
Satish go on writing. One day you will reach the top.
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Not my best poem but its meh.
*Empty*
empty but broken
nothing but hurt
no words spoken
all mouths shut
shattered ever so
more than before
lying down low
on the cold floor
i'm facing defeat
watched my world fall
couldn't face the heat
i can't hear single call
everything distancing
away from here
from the terrorising
of the arising fear
the fear was me
i am the monster
so set them free
and the firefighter
these fires are never
going to ever die
it's the same forever
even if you lie
tell me if u liked it :)
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Nice ❤
Glad you like it
Beautifully written
Very nice lines
Very good
I feel the same way as you