emptiness - Very Sad English Poem

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  • @Satishpoetry
    @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว +89

    Thank you all for giving me so much support and appreciation on these words. You have filled my emptiness with happiness by your comments and likes..I am overwhelmed by this response..never thought so many will like it .. This is my only achievement in life and I am happy about it. Thanks a lot

    • @trebkren2874
      @trebkren2874 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Can I ask fro the music?

    • @cringingpandamoniam1070
      @cringingpandamoniam1070 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      we Have to Stick togheter

    • @remimarkable4834
      @remimarkable4834 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      ... so far

    • @trebkren2874
      @trebkren2874 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@remimarkable4834 do you know the background music?

    • @remimarkable4834
      @remimarkable4834 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@trebkren2874 I was actually responding to satishpoetry, but the song is called I don't want to do this without you by Late night feeler, I believed

  • @mpn2128
    @mpn2128 3 ปีที่แล้ว +88

    The loneliest moment in someone's life is when they are watching their whole world fall apart and all they can do is stare blankly. 😔

  • @ritakhoerunnisa8819
    @ritakhoerunnisa8819 3 ปีที่แล้ว +54

    Oh my God, your poem made me cry😭 how beautiful❤️

    • @ydeepakpoetrybreather2730
      @ydeepakpoetrybreather2730 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @ElijahSwann
      @ElijahSwann 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Truly awesome poem

    • @ElijahSwann
      @ElijahSwann 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @jbbmagical206
      @jbbmagical206 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @englishpoemsy2855
      @englishpoemsy2855 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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  • @buntoncnd
    @buntoncnd 3 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    “The Meadow Of A Man’s Life”
    “I desire to behold
    A butterfly in peaceful flight,
    The light flits that lift
    And dance inside my eyes.
    I have dared to taste
    The nectar drip of wet figs
    Ready to drop and spill
    Their sweetness on the ground.
    I have learned to adjust
    My sight upon the golden sea
    Shortly before the sun
    Goes down in all its glittering.
    Shimmers move through the creek,
    Ripples of water light and shadows,
    Fish darting into safe pools,
    While the dragonfly hovers above.
    Who can tell another man
    Where over that hill, a dale
    Waits with flowers and bees
    Buzzing about in perfect harmony?
    Who can go inside another’s heart
    And hear the sorrows that all need healing?
    Who can share with eyes closed
    His vision of the Cosmos and that vast infinity?"
    Igor Stepanishcheva

  • @lindalinda6953
    @lindalinda6953 3 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    Never give up, life is like a wheel you need to keep it turning! sadness doesn't last for ever remember that. Go find joy, when you find joy happiness will follow 🌹🌸🌻

  • @marinbandoni751
    @marinbandoni751 3 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    This was everything I'm going through right now. It was amazing. Thank you u wrote everything down what I've been trying to say for so long . Keep writing beautiful poetry

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thanks a lot for the nice words!!!!

    • @sanjaydurga7677
      @sanjaydurga7677 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ma'am, Just visit to my channel 👍

  • @maano2543
    @maano2543 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    It’s a beautiful poem sketching the absence of one’s beloved from his heart which poet doesn’t want to admit that all the colours of joy and life are gone with his paramour. That’s the most pathetic era of one’s regime. Anyhow the loneliness described torn our heart . 👍🏻🌷🌷🌷

  • @wabajack8250
    @wabajack8250 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I am not one for poetry or am I knowledgeable about it but this poem screamed at me in a way that made me feel connected to the writer in a way it just like so many other things are a sign that I need to not work myself to death anymore for the past 15 years I’ve missed holidays birthdays weddings all in the name of success thank you for sharing this with me and everyone else this is another wake up call for me thank you

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks a lot for the kind words !!!!

  • @Diwas112
    @Diwas112 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Wow such a emotional 🥺🥺 poem loved it ...

  • @maryfedor7981
    @maryfedor7981 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    I wish I could hug you !!in time things can get better you have to bring your self out of all that play music 🎶 it gets me in a good mood .we all have our sad moments believe me I know!! Time heals everything !!♡ much love to you !!

    • @englishpoemsy2855
      @englishpoemsy2855 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I used to write my own english poem, check once click below link to read👇:
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  • @nebinskip1010
    @nebinskip1010 4 ปีที่แล้ว +30

    Wow, loved the sentiment, from one poet to another, keep strong.

  • @Erwin.Wijayanto
    @Erwin.Wijayanto 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    emptiness - Very Sad English Poem, really emotional poetry full of LOVE sadness..💯👍

  • @smiley6469
    @smiley6469 3 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I can relate to all your beautiful line ....great work💗

    • @ydeepakpoetrybreather2730
      @ydeepakpoetrybreather2730 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @englishpoemsy2855
      @englishpoemsy2855 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I used to write my own english poem, check once click below link to read👇:
      th-cam.com/video/CfJO_cKzDSw/w-d-xo.html

  • @noelvillarosa-storytelling
    @noelvillarosa-storytelling 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Nice flow and full of emotion watching this poem, watched in full, very deep, nice ryhming of words and still connecting with the sjbject. I like it, thanks sharing this video.

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks a lot for the nice comment

  • @shubhamfenanses1282
    @shubhamfenanses1282 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    This is so beautiful. I loved this poem. It is almost my feelings.

  • @samiaazam3139
    @samiaazam3139 3 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    No cry,no more tears,plz see me,I m with you to remove ur loneliness,it is the main reason that I want to talk to you that you never cry and shed tears

  • @flowerbomb188
    @flowerbomb188 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    How I know the feeling! But when you have a God and a Savior that died for us, and you thank him even through troubles he gives you strength. When we stop thinking of our selves and doing for others without bragging. It sure helps to stop feeling sorry for yourself.

  • @learningarena7826
    @learningarena7826 4 ปีที่แล้ว +24

    Deep down in the emptiness of ocean you stand,
    With years in eyes
    With sorrows in heart,
    The time night will pass
    The sun will rise

  • @aditikhanna4683
    @aditikhanna4683 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Just so amazing...expressing a thousand emotions keep it up keep going ✨❤️

  • @PrinzestJoan
    @PrinzestJoan 4 ปีที่แล้ว +32

    "The deep ocean of emptiness
    drown me and leave me breathless.
    I am waiting for someone to grip my hands out.
    Hold me securely and take me out,
    To see the brightest light,
    And this emptiness I hide
    Will no more but just a dot."
    ~ Joan Santillan Amurao

    • @PrinzestJoan
      @PrinzestJoan 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @vicky mpp thank you

    • @nibeditasingha1460
      @nibeditasingha1460 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Beautiful !!!

    • @nibeditasingha1460
      @nibeditasingha1460 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Did you write this ?

    • @PrinzestJoan
      @PrinzestJoan 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@nibeditasingha1460 yes dear, impromptu lines for comment.

    • @zgudgaming651
      @zgudgaming651 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Can i use this, for making poem because my teacher give us activity making an English poem. (Correct my grammar if there's something wrong)☹️

  • @truptibenpatel3245
    @truptibenpatel3245 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Silence never made me cry...it is the chaos which is storming inside me that makes me cry

  • @selvim3203
    @selvim3203 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    It added tears to my eyes ...such lines ..
    Loved this dr..

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      am sorry for adding tears ..hope you are fine now

  • @kaushikoza4677
    @kaushikoza4677 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    One of the best poem I have heard so far. Feelings and words are coming from within.hats off.

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yes I wrote these lines when i though I cannot move ahead in life any further.. I wrote these lines as a means of venting out my feelings...Thanks for your comment..

  • @monicaseez9164
    @monicaseez9164 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Yes just waiting

  • @monoranjandas9085
    @monoranjandas9085 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I wanna cry but no tears come out but when I lost something I cry with my heart out and people say it's very small reason u r crying about but the small reason only bring back my terrible memories.

    • @hadijahan4493
      @hadijahan4493 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

      You made a poem right now

  • @mjesvli6883
    @mjesvli6883 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I want to feel how hard life was n how happy to hve this little life span..no tears, no joy this kill me I'm totally blank

  • @mwallace2415
    @mwallace2415 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    So true all the words I am empty and lost thank for this poem it's beautiful

  • @sukanyakatta9675
    @sukanyakatta9675 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Ur so precious man. Ur so inteligent from child hood. Ur self enjoyable person ,no need to dipend others chheer up man

  • @RajeshKumar-es3jl
    @RajeshKumar-es3jl 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Amazing poem post like these poem and you grow fastly 1M subscribers

  • @judyvispi
    @judyvispi 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    So sad! But it is of free will to let this happen to one's self! If you feel this and know it , time to do something about it! To look at all beautiful things life has to offer, appreciate God's gifts he offers around us! Never let this feeling last! God Bless!😇🙏

    • @MALLUTRUCKERDUDE
      @MALLUTRUCKERDUDE 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Well sometimes it's not that easy as you may say ,especially for the ones who did this over and over and over

    • @judyvispi
      @judyvispi 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MALLUTRUCKERDUDE well it is easier to give up, and surrender, than it is if your not up to the challenge.No one said it was going to be Easy!! God Bless !! Wish you well!😇🙏

  • @sundaramr9188
    @sundaramr9188 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Now my mood.
    Thanks for your post.

  • @Roman-af1
    @Roman-af1 22 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    "Life is pain anyone who says differently is selling something."
    Princess Bride

  • @robhelencarpio646
    @robhelencarpio646 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Hi!I love this poem.Can I ask the tittle of the background music?

    • @ElijahSwann
      @ElijahSwann 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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  • @margaretagreen966
    @margaretagreen966 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    So happy cry happy tears of joy

  • @afreenhussain4142
    @afreenhussain4142 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    words are too sad to share it with anyone 🤦‍♀️If this is what you think I am ?
    THEN YOUR ASSUMPTIONS ARE WRONG !
    Thanks you for sharing

  • @sarinhajuntocomloros2398
    @sarinhajuntocomloros2398 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you love this song you have no idea!

  • @janaswords2466
    @janaswords2466 3 ปีที่แล้ว +27

    This has beautifully broke my heart in two.

  • @deekshayadav9887
    @deekshayadav9887 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I don't know but my tears rolling down

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hope you are fine now :-)

  • @kathrynsevers3797
    @kathrynsevers3797 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    You have said it all in one poem! 🙏💯❤️

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      you made me happy in just one comment ...thanks for the nice words

  • @PureWater-w7c
    @PureWater-w7c 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    We clearly feel the same way. Do you do the things you do because you don't believe in yourself? Like you not good enough? Both crying. The bible says that if you let me in, call me your sister, all that will change. I am the one who can rewire your mind. You have been around the wrong influence. It's God's way of calling you to himself. When we set our minds on the things of God, then everything will change. My entire life is set on God and I have integrity. You and I are supposed to put a Garland on each other's heads. Bringing unity. Please don't beat yourself up. Everything that has happened was supposed to happen. This has brought us wisdom. As you said, I am also not perfect. I am exactly who I am. The whole point of renewing our minds is to be set free from condemnation and ungodly desires. We are supposed to set our minds on things from above. What's pure and lovely. Trying to be perfect will never set you free. All God requires of us is to be who he created us to be. Ourselves. Xxxx

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for your concern and inspirational words

  • @samridhisubedi5690
    @samridhisubedi5690 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Heart touching poem .. I really like this 🥰

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Happy to read your lovely comment. :-)

  • @arvanbarzani
    @arvanbarzani 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I really don't know why
    Some times I want to cry..
    I wish to scream and shout
    And let my feelings out..💗

  • @jordanfalkowski6924
    @jordanfalkowski6924 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Crashing through glass floors with poetic sharp swords, maxed out and not much left like an old cobra ford. Always lonely, damn im so bored. Air compressors and other tools without cords, what a world from the nectar i poured. Drippin knowledge, i see far like a bird on a gourd. Why not!

  • @AnitanRosa
    @AnitanRosa ปีที่แล้ว +1

    🌹❤️nevera allone more🌹

  • @sasikumarkannattu2759
    @sasikumarkannattu2759 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    The great lines touched my heart.....and felt so sad...

    • @tiktokes8892
      @tiktokes8892 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You are the king of Urdu poetry Mirza Asad Ullah Khan Ghalib Read this poetry . Your heart will be happy .

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  • @magickimanzi2036
    @magickimanzi2036 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Whats up?Say it we cry together
    Am here to stand with you 😭😭😭
    Everytime my eyes especially
    My right lower eye is shaking
    I don’t like it I know am going to cry 😭
    And am experiencing that now
    I denied the power of cry now

  • @Moon-co7dc
    @Moon-co7dc 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    i have naothing to say ....... i am just ..
    your poem's line just realistic. ....... and what you said in your poem that everything happen in my life ...... . 😔😔😔😔😔

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      oh my goodness..hope you are fine now :-)

    • @Moon-co7dc
      @Moon-co7dc 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Satishpoetry 😨😨😨😨 thank you so much for your reply ... continue your work .... always supprot ..😊😊😊😊

  • @titansoltisuku3769
    @titansoltisuku3769 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow 😮 beautiful poem

  • @sarahvickysarahvicky3284
    @sarahvickysarahvicky3284 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Don't give up even don't give your loving heart to someone else. You deserve her

  • @Boldly_Beautiful88
    @Boldly_Beautiful88 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Everybody has a past,
    If you think about it your present will blast.
    If you judge anyone by their past,
    Remember, their happiness won't last.
    Mistakes are made by human being,
    Forgiveness is what they are pleasing.
    Each being wish for a new chance.
    This is well known in the history of France.
    Realising people about their mistakes,
    Is like offering salt to their pain and aches.
    Being sorrounded some are still lonely.
    Why don't you make them feel homely??
    People starve for love and care.
    What you are doing is not fair.
    Life is all about earn and fire-burn,
    Life is all about earn and fire-burn,
    Once you gone, no choice to return.
    Move on and help others moving,
    It will be amazing and soothing.
    Never allow your words to exploit lives,
    Not only you dear, each has equal rights.
    Before you judge look at your own.
    May be you are already drawn.
    Everyone has right to dance in the air.
    If you feel jealous, kindly relax under the chair.
    Every being is a rising star,
    So respect each, no matter him or her.
    𝔖𝔲𝔧𝔞𝔱𝔞 𝔖𝔥𝔞𝔯𝔪𝔞.

  • @lashantiawhyte5034
    @lashantiawhyte5034 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Trust God he delivers.God bless,have a wonderful day.

  • @nuzhatshireen5033
    @nuzhatshireen5033 ปีที่แล้ว

    This poem is truly a masterpiece. I wish I could do what you can do. That’s amazing.

  • @irinadutt8293
    @irinadutt8293 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Hey i am too a poet and i post my work on ig and now i have started on you tube too but after watching your work i feel extremely inspired and i am impressed .great;)

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I am not a writer or a poet ...but its really inspiring to know that you got inspired by my lines... appreciation like this makes me write more.. thanks a lot

    • @irinadutt8293
      @irinadutt8293 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Oh my god ! Thanks for replying :)

    • @ElijahSwann
      @ElijahSwann 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @englishpoemsy2855
      @englishpoemsy2855 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I used to write my own english poem, check once click below link to read👇:
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    • @englishpoemsy2855
      @englishpoemsy2855 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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  • @NEP.FAMILY.Member
    @NEP.FAMILY.Member 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This song is so cool and good I like it

  • @ayushiyadav7175
    @ayushiyadav7175 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Really I can relate to this poem... Very nice

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      its not good to relate to this poem ..hope you come out of this feeling of emptiness soon :-)

  • @Taekook_72132
    @Taekook_72132 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    So so beautiful

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for the nice feedback

  • @nupingupokngupok2580
    @nupingupokngupok2580 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Excellent works and the last line really touches my heart ....keep going on ..

    • @ranjoor1593
      @ranjoor1593 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I read these beautiful lines on my channel with title English sad poetry...need your conment...

  • @adiftia8993
    @adiftia8993 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your poem is very good, i can feel every single word that you say in this video❤️❤️ ...

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I am sorry for making you feel empty :-). Thanks for the feedback

  • @supornaroy5950
    @supornaroy5950 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Hey I love your poems❤

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I am happy to know that ..and thanks for such a support ..I will try writing more :-)

    • @ydeepakpoetrybreather2730
      @ydeepakpoetrybreather2730 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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  • @ivar472
    @ivar472 4 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    Satish go on writing. One day you will reach the top.

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      @maquisigvlog4047 4 ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @onelinetale8207
      @onelinetale8207 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Visit my page for poetry❤

  • @zindadil6134
    @zindadil6134 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It is a wonderful piece 😊😊 please keep writing 👍👍

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for the lovely comment. I am happy while i read comments :-)

  • @marvelalltheway8029
    @marvelalltheway8029 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Moved when I was 8 and found someone I thought would love me the way my old friends did but I miss my old friends

  • @jackypalabrica5667
    @jackypalabrica5667 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow i like this vedio very touch😍😍😍😍

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      This comment is so touching ..thanks for such a nice comment

  • @festivalofcreating875
    @festivalofcreating875 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    How beautiful thank you

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you for posting a beautiful comment ..made my day

  • @aniruddhachunne3011
    @aniruddhachunne3011 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Awesome.. u deserve hug from me

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for the awesome comment... made my day !!!

  • @zenyventurina4114
    @zenyventurina4114 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    why feel sad ! be glad we are still here !God is good to us !

  • @shizukanobita3208
    @shizukanobita3208 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I think...this emtiness is the present situation most of all experiencing...try to follow spirituality may help a lot only option is left I feel...

    • @ydeepakpoetrybreather2730
      @ydeepakpoetrybreather2730 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @ElijahSwann
      @ElijahSwann 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @englishpoemsy2855
      @englishpoemsy2855 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I used to write my own english poem, check once click below link to read👇:
      th-cam.com/video/CfJO_cKzDSw/w-d-xo.html

  • @bikolanangnatu6478
    @bikolanangnatu6478 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sorry if I don't ask permission before I forgot to put credit to the owner.. Just love your poem that's all, still sending love and support watching from ksa

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks a lot .. I am your new Subscriber now :-)

  • @ginacampbell9589
    @ginacampbell9589 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Omg... Love the po am gotta say it made me cry😢

  • @nadiahussaini9088
    @nadiahussaini9088 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Very good but you have to speak aswell it will make us emotional and easy to understand it......😊

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Sure .. I will try that ...Thanks for your Comments

  • @ryanpendley1826
    @ryanpendley1826 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Awesome!!
    I'm a novice beginner felt like sharing something...
    TIME
    --------
    What's the value of time
    I should've known the lost
    Folding these hands for the cost
    Just another broken heart
    Feeling shattered and tossed
    I keep listening to those memories of the cross
    Shall you be loveless of its crimes
    Muted whispers like a mime
    Can you read my mouth
    Or you just standing there blind
    Oh Holy Heaven
    And Killer Hell
    Why God
    Why this Jail
    My Human flesh is
    Contemplating
    And Worrying
    Through Self-abuse
    And Masquerading
    Hold my tongue
    Satan's gun
    Fallen Angel
    Constellation of an angle
    Orion's Belt
    That's Passion felt
    And Jesus wept
    So Daddy sleeps
    The Shepard and all the lost Sheep
    The 99
    Where's the one
    Hopped the fence
    Digging my ditch
    Salvation found
    Hold the Crown
    Writer
    Ryan K Pendley

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hmm you should consider starting your own channel and making your words more reachable. Thanks for the post

    • @ryanpendley1826
      @ryanpendley1826 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Satishpoetry
      Umm I need more poetry, when I get more I'll try to get videos of me reading my poems...
      Here's one more writing if you don't mind..
      PROMISE
      ---------------
      I promise to love you, it's my favorite duty of life
      to cherish you,
      I love your silliness,
      Your googly eye pictures makes me laugh,
      You know we're some dorks
      Please dont get me on your smile it's my
      Kryptonite that warms the soul
      The duty of me being your man is to make us
      happy,
      I may not be good at spilling my guts
      But this is who I am letting you know that there
      is nobody else in this world that compares to
      you,
      It's crazy you're the only person that's 24/7 on
      my mind, and that's a sincere thought no lie,
      You consume me,
      I love your nakedness
      That's my everything and
      Being naked is pretty funny,
      And funny is what I want to be!!
      So to my better half
      Let's laugh!!
      Take this rib, ouch;
      It's okay if I'm in pain
      I love you
      Maybe I try to hard
      I just want to be myself with you.
      Maybe I don't think you accept me?
      Butchya do!
      I hear the rhythm of our heart beating as one
      Take my hand let go and let God!
      Speaking in tongues of the Angels
      Hallelujah!
      Love has won!
      Writer
      Ryan K Pendley

    • @englishpoemsy2855
      @englishpoemsy2855 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I used to write my own english poem, check once click below link to read👇:
      th-cam.com/video/CfJO_cKzDSw/w-d-xo.html

    • @med-motivationhub4046
      @med-motivationhub4046 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@ryanpendley1826 Magnificent ❤️

  • @irenepelisan5417
    @irenepelisan5417 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Love your poem ❤

  • @sarayyaragu9382
    @sarayyaragu9382 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow . U r so creative in ur thinking

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks a lotttt for your appreciation ... makes me more creative

    • @sarayyaragu9382
      @sarayyaragu9382 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Satishpoetry I like ur poetry skills ,they motivate me to have such magic in the writing . Thanks

  • @IndianMalluPoetry
    @IndianMalluPoetry 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Simple lines but powerful feel😍

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for the inspiring words !!!

  • @mindpsychology5680
    @mindpsychology5680 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    When I heard this just I wanted to see my passed hubby. O God I can't control my tear.

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Its okk .. you will be fine.

  • @prernajadeja9669
    @prernajadeja9669 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Plz tell me a name of background piano music 😭😭😭😭

  • @shristilama231
    @shristilama231 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What a heart touching poem

  • @gangahosmani1960
    @gangahosmani1960 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Aisi dasha har insan ki hai bhai

  • @Priya-vu8ik
    @Priya-vu8ik 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Wonderful poem. Please do some more

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thanks for your appreciation

  • @roshnilimboo8464
    @roshnilimboo8464 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    lined are just.....marvelous

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you so much for the nice comment..

  • @look007456
    @look007456 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    i like English poem,come from China

  • @AnxiousAmy37
    @AnxiousAmy37 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Gosh this is so deep and beautiful 💚

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Gosh I like your comment :-)

    • @technoplayerz1866
      @technoplayerz1866 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      gosh I don't know what I have to say😂😂

  • @Kritikashortsz
    @Kritikashortsz 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Aap kon se app se video bnate ho bhaiya

  • @basupatilhkes6770
    @basupatilhkes6770 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very nice 😢really I cried

  • @JunreyFelizarta
    @JunreyFelizarta 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Thank you so much for your family have a great 👍👍👍👍👍👍

  • @serapafsar4422
    @serapafsar4422 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I know so few things more beautiful than this poem!

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I have seen very few comments that were as beautiful as yours. Thanks for this poetic comment

    • @serapafsar4422
      @serapafsar4422 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Satishpoetry 💕

  • @m.ramzanjaan.2223
    @m.ramzanjaan.2223 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    i am from pakistan
    a very nice and feelingfull poetry.

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for your wonderful feedback.

  • @MrShuberth
    @MrShuberth 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Very sad and nice poem. Loved it.

  • @Vedh_vlogs
    @Vedh_vlogs 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Where will you publish your poem

  • @artinpoetsoulnature
    @artinpoetsoulnature 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great poetry 🌹🌹

  • @landeragustin3737
    @landeragustin3737 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Name of the background music plsss

  • @elizabethpaul7225
    @elizabethpaul7225 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Call Jesus into your heart,,,get hold of the promises and cry unto God still you feel that he has heard you 🙏

  • @khushisoni...9874
    @khushisoni...9874 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Wow.... Today 1st time I read this poem and now I love it...❤️❤️❤️ Even I write poems... But didn't upload yet... But it's the true talent but it's heart breaking to know that you have such few subscriber's..💔

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Wow.. Great ..upload your poems quick ..let me read it :-)

    • @khushisoni...9874
      @khushisoni...9874 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Satishpoetry yes... I want to but not right now... But big fan of yours poems...😊😊

    • @innermostfeelings4969
      @innermostfeelings4969 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      So much thanks for replying my friend. Please keep in touch. Thanks.

    • @manalkhan8695
      @manalkhan8695 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Kaise ho

    • @englishpoemsy2855
      @englishpoemsy2855 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I used to write my own english poem, check once click below link to read👇:
      th-cam.com/video/CfJO_cKzDSw/w-d-xo.html

  • @prozz99
    @prozz99 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Keep it up☺️☺️💐💐🌹🌹

  • @ruchithathota8416
    @ruchithathota8416 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Tired of everything.
    Feeling nothing.
    Missing something.
    -empty :) :(

  • @sheilawhitaker3603
    @sheilawhitaker3603 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Time is everything..Be patient 🙏

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Exactly .. Time is the only answer to all failures..problems and pain..if we get through that time ..life changes

  • @dudegamer2699
    @dudegamer2699 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Can you tell the name of the author
    I am waiting for your reply🙂 it is an amazing poem

    • @Satishpoetry
      @Satishpoetry  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hello Gamer .. I am the author ...nice to meet you :-)

  • @darkbeans849
    @darkbeans849 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I really don't know why
    Sometimes I want to cry...
    I wish to scream and shout
    and let my feelings out...
    I am living like a king
    But still I miss something...
    I have nothing less
    But I can't feel happiness...
    Inside my bones am trapped
    And with a skin am wrapped...
    Within myself I do hide...
    I feel no pain or joy inside
    My life has come to a pause
    In silence my days all pass..
    My heart has turned to numb
    I am just waiting for end to come...
    With no more hopes to persist...
    My dreams have ceased to exist...
    With no more path to follow
    My heavy heart is hollow....
    With emptiness all alone.. I can feel my tears rolling down..
    I really don't know why ..
    Sometimes... Silence make me cry..
    Silence make me cry...

  • @soumyadipbhunia6710
    @soumyadipbhunia6710 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Please give the poetry in description

  • @latika.here31
    @latika.here31 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I salute you..