Thank you all for giving me so much support and appreciation on these words. You have filled my emptiness with happiness by your comments and likes..I am overwhelmed by this response..never thought so many will like it .. This is my only achievement in life and I am happy about it. Thanks a lot
“The Meadow Of A Man’s Life” “I desire to behold A butterfly in peaceful flight, The light flits that lift And dance inside my eyes. I have dared to taste The nectar drip of wet figs Ready to drop and spill Their sweetness on the ground. I have learned to adjust My sight upon the golden sea Shortly before the sun Goes down in all its glittering. Shimmers move through the creek, Ripples of water light and shadows, Fish darting into safe pools, While the dragonfly hovers above. Who can tell another man Where over that hill, a dale Waits with flowers and bees Buzzing about in perfect harmony? Who can go inside another’s heart And hear the sorrows that all need healing? Who can share with eyes closed His vision of the Cosmos and that vast infinity?" Igor Stepanishcheva
Never give up, life is like a wheel you need to keep it turning! sadness doesn't last for ever remember that. Go find joy, when you find joy happiness will follow 🌹🌸🌻
This was everything I'm going through right now. It was amazing. Thank you u wrote everything down what I've been trying to say for so long . Keep writing beautiful poetry
It’s a beautiful poem sketching the absence of one’s beloved from his heart which poet doesn’t want to admit that all the colours of joy and life are gone with his paramour. That’s the most pathetic era of one’s regime. Anyhow the loneliness described torn our heart . 👍🏻🌷🌷🌷
I am not one for poetry or am I knowledgeable about it but this poem screamed at me in a way that made me feel connected to the writer in a way it just like so many other things are a sign that I need to not work myself to death anymore for the past 15 years I’ve missed holidays birthdays weddings all in the name of success thank you for sharing this with me and everyone else this is another wake up call for me thank you
I wish I could hug you !!in time things can get better you have to bring your self out of all that play music 🎶 it gets me in a good mood .we all have our sad moments believe me I know!! Time heals everything !!♡ much love to you !!
Nice flow and full of emotion watching this poem, watched in full, very deep, nice ryhming of words and still connecting with the sjbject. I like it, thanks sharing this video.
No cry,no more tears,plz see me,I m with you to remove ur loneliness,it is the main reason that I want to talk to you that you never cry and shed tears
How I know the feeling! But when you have a God and a Savior that died for us, and you thank him even through troubles he gives you strength. When we stop thinking of our selves and doing for others without bragging. It sure helps to stop feeling sorry for yourself.
"The deep ocean of emptiness drown me and leave me breathless. I am waiting for someone to grip my hands out. Hold me securely and take me out, To see the brightest light, And this emptiness I hide Will no more but just a dot." ~ Joan Santillan Amurao
Yes I wrote these lines when i though I cannot move ahead in life any further.. I wrote these lines as a means of venting out my feelings...Thanks for your comment..
I wanna cry but no tears come out but when I lost something I cry with my heart out and people say it's very small reason u r crying about but the small reason only bring back my terrible memories.
So sad! But it is of free will to let this happen to one's self! If you feel this and know it , time to do something about it! To look at all beautiful things life has to offer, appreciate God's gifts he offers around us! Never let this feeling last! God Bless!😇🙏
@@MALLUTRUCKERDUDE well it is easier to give up, and surrender, than it is if your not up to the challenge.No one said it was going to be Easy!! God Bless !! Wish you well!😇🙏
We clearly feel the same way. Do you do the things you do because you don't believe in yourself? Like you not good enough? Both crying. The bible says that if you let me in, call me your sister, all that will change. I am the one who can rewire your mind. You have been around the wrong influence. It's God's way of calling you to himself. When we set our minds on the things of God, then everything will change. My entire life is set on God and I have integrity. You and I are supposed to put a Garland on each other's heads. Bringing unity. Please don't beat yourself up. Everything that has happened was supposed to happen. This has brought us wisdom. As you said, I am also not perfect. I am exactly who I am. The whole point of renewing our minds is to be set free from condemnation and ungodly desires. We are supposed to set our minds on things from above. What's pure and lovely. Trying to be perfect will never set you free. All God requires of us is to be who he created us to be. Ourselves. Xxxx
Crashing through glass floors with poetic sharp swords, maxed out and not much left like an old cobra ford. Always lonely, damn im so bored. Air compressors and other tools without cords, what a world from the nectar i poured. Drippin knowledge, i see far like a bird on a gourd. Why not!
Whats up?Say it we cry together Am here to stand with you 😭😭😭 Everytime my eyes especially My right lower eye is shaking I don’t like it I know am going to cry 😭 And am experiencing that now I denied the power of cry now
i have naothing to say ....... i am just .. your poem's line just realistic. ....... and what you said in your poem that everything happen in my life ...... . 😔😔😔😔😔
Everybody has a past, If you think about it your present will blast. If you judge anyone by their past, Remember, their happiness won't last. Mistakes are made by human being, Forgiveness is what they are pleasing. Each being wish for a new chance. This is well known in the history of France. Realising people about their mistakes, Is like offering salt to their pain and aches. Being sorrounded some are still lonely. Why don't you make them feel homely?? People starve for love and care. What you are doing is not fair. Life is all about earn and fire-burn, Life is all about earn and fire-burn, Once you gone, no choice to return. Move on and help others moving, It will be amazing and soothing. Never allow your words to exploit lives, Not only you dear, each has equal rights. Before you judge look at your own. May be you are already drawn. Everyone has right to dance in the air. If you feel jealous, kindly relax under the chair. Every being is a rising star, So respect each, no matter him or her. 𝔖𝔲𝔧𝔞𝔱𝔞 𝔖𝔥𝔞𝔯𝔪𝔞.
Hey i am too a poet and i post my work on ig and now i have started on you tube too but after watching your work i feel extremely inspired and i am impressed .great;)
I am not a writer or a poet ...but its really inspiring to know that you got inspired by my lines... appreciation like this makes me write more.. thanks a lot
Sorry if I don't ask permission before I forgot to put credit to the owner.. Just love your poem that's all, still sending love and support watching from ksa
Awesome!! I'm a novice beginner felt like sharing something... TIME -------- What's the value of time I should've known the lost Folding these hands for the cost Just another broken heart Feeling shattered and tossed I keep listening to those memories of the cross Shall you be loveless of its crimes Muted whispers like a mime Can you read my mouth Or you just standing there blind Oh Holy Heaven And Killer Hell Why God Why this Jail My Human flesh is Contemplating And Worrying Through Self-abuse And Masquerading Hold my tongue Satan's gun Fallen Angel Constellation of an angle Orion's Belt That's Passion felt And Jesus wept So Daddy sleeps The Shepard and all the lost Sheep The 99 Where's the one Hopped the fence Digging my ditch Salvation found Hold the Crown Writer Ryan K Pendley
@@Satishpoetry Umm I need more poetry, when I get more I'll try to get videos of me reading my poems... Here's one more writing if you don't mind.. PROMISE --------------- I promise to love you, it's my favorite duty of life to cherish you, I love your silliness, Your googly eye pictures makes me laugh, You know we're some dorks Please dont get me on your smile it's my Kryptonite that warms the soul The duty of me being your man is to make us happy, I may not be good at spilling my guts But this is who I am letting you know that there is nobody else in this world that compares to you, It's crazy you're the only person that's 24/7 on my mind, and that's a sincere thought no lie, You consume me, I love your nakedness That's my everything and Being naked is pretty funny, And funny is what I want to be!! So to my better half Let's laugh!! Take this rib, ouch; It's okay if I'm in pain I love you Maybe I try to hard I just want to be myself with you. Maybe I don't think you accept me? Butchya do! I hear the rhythm of our heart beating as one Take my hand let go and let God! Speaking in tongues of the Angels Hallelujah! Love has won! Writer Ryan K Pendley
Wow.... Today 1st time I read this poem and now I love it...❤️❤️❤️ Even I write poems... But didn't upload yet... But it's the true talent but it's heart breaking to know that you have such few subscriber's..💔
I really don't know why Sometimes I want to cry... I wish to scream and shout and let my feelings out... I am living like a king But still I miss something... I have nothing less But I can't feel happiness... Inside my bones am trapped And with a skin am wrapped... Within myself I do hide... I feel no pain or joy inside My life has come to a pause In silence my days all pass.. My heart has turned to numb I am just waiting for end to come... With no more hopes to persist... My dreams have ceased to exist... With no more path to follow My heavy heart is hollow.... With emptiness all alone.. I can feel my tears rolling down.. I really don't know why .. Sometimes... Silence make me cry.. Silence make me cry...
Thank you all for giving me so much support and appreciation on these words. You have filled my emptiness with happiness by your comments and likes..I am overwhelmed by this response..never thought so many will like it .. This is my only achievement in life and I am happy about it. Thanks a lot
Can I ask fro the music?
we Have to Stick togheter
... so far
@@remimarkable4834 do you know the background music?
@@trebkren2874 I was actually responding to satishpoetry, but the song is called I don't want to do this without you by Late night feeler, I believed
The loneliest moment in someone's life is when they are watching their whole world fall apart and all they can do is stare blankly. 😔
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“The Meadow Of A Man’s Life”
“I desire to behold
A butterfly in peaceful flight,
The light flits that lift
And dance inside my eyes.
I have dared to taste
The nectar drip of wet figs
Ready to drop and spill
Their sweetness on the ground.
I have learned to adjust
My sight upon the golden sea
Shortly before the sun
Goes down in all its glittering.
Shimmers move through the creek,
Ripples of water light and shadows,
Fish darting into safe pools,
While the dragonfly hovers above.
Who can tell another man
Where over that hill, a dale
Waits with flowers and bees
Buzzing about in perfect harmony?
Who can go inside another’s heart
And hear the sorrows that all need healing?
Who can share with eyes closed
His vision of the Cosmos and that vast infinity?"
Igor Stepanishcheva
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Never give up, life is like a wheel you need to keep it turning! sadness doesn't last for ever remember that. Go find joy, when you find joy happiness will follow 🌹🌸🌻
This was everything I'm going through right now. It was amazing. Thank you u wrote everything down what I've been trying to say for so long . Keep writing beautiful poetry
Thanks a lot for the nice words!!!!
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It’s a beautiful poem sketching the absence of one’s beloved from his heart which poet doesn’t want to admit that all the colours of joy and life are gone with his paramour. That’s the most pathetic era of one’s regime. Anyhow the loneliness described torn our heart . 👍🏻🌷🌷🌷
I am not one for poetry or am I knowledgeable about it but this poem screamed at me in a way that made me feel connected to the writer in a way it just like so many other things are a sign that I need to not work myself to death anymore for the past 15 years I’ve missed holidays birthdays weddings all in the name of success thank you for sharing this with me and everyone else this is another wake up call for me thank you
Thanks a lot for the kind words !!!!
Wow such a emotional 🥺🥺 poem loved it ...
I wish I could hug you !!in time things can get better you have to bring your self out of all that play music 🎶 it gets me in a good mood .we all have our sad moments believe me I know!! Time heals everything !!♡ much love to you !!
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Wow, loved the sentiment, from one poet to another, keep strong.
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emptiness - Very Sad English Poem, really emotional poetry full of LOVE sadness..💯👍
I can relate to all your beautiful line ....great work💗
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Nice flow and full of emotion watching this poem, watched in full, very deep, nice ryhming of words and still connecting with the sjbject. I like it, thanks sharing this video.
Thanks a lot for the nice comment
This is so beautiful. I loved this poem. It is almost my feelings.
No cry,no more tears,plz see me,I m with you to remove ur loneliness,it is the main reason that I want to talk to you that you never cry and shed tears
How I know the feeling! But when you have a God and a Savior that died for us, and you thank him even through troubles he gives you strength. When we stop thinking of our selves and doing for others without bragging. It sure helps to stop feeling sorry for yourself.
Deep down in the emptiness of ocean you stand,
With years in eyes
With sorrows in heart,
The time night will pass
The sun will rise
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Just so amazing...expressing a thousand emotions keep it up keep going ✨❤️
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"The deep ocean of emptiness
drown me and leave me breathless.
I am waiting for someone to grip my hands out.
Hold me securely and take me out,
To see the brightest light,
And this emptiness I hide
Will no more but just a dot."
~ Joan Santillan Amurao
@vicky mpp thank you
Beautiful !!!
Did you write this ?
@@nibeditasingha1460 yes dear, impromptu lines for comment.
Can i use this, for making poem because my teacher give us activity making an English poem. (Correct my grammar if there's something wrong)☹️
Silence never made me cry...it is the chaos which is storming inside me that makes me cry
It added tears to my eyes ...such lines ..
Loved this dr..
am sorry for adding tears ..hope you are fine now
One of the best poem I have heard so far. Feelings and words are coming from within.hats off.
Yes I wrote these lines when i though I cannot move ahead in life any further.. I wrote these lines as a means of venting out my feelings...Thanks for your comment..
Yes just waiting
I wanna cry but no tears come out but when I lost something I cry with my heart out and people say it's very small reason u r crying about but the small reason only bring back my terrible memories.
You made a poem right now
I want to feel how hard life was n how happy to hve this little life span..no tears, no joy this kill me I'm totally blank
So true all the words I am empty and lost thank for this poem it's beautiful
Ur so precious man. Ur so inteligent from child hood. Ur self enjoyable person ,no need to dipend others chheer up man
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Amazing poem post like these poem and you grow fastly 1M subscribers
So sad! But it is of free will to let this happen to one's self! If you feel this and know it , time to do something about it! To look at all beautiful things life has to offer, appreciate God's gifts he offers around us! Never let this feeling last! God Bless!😇🙏
Well sometimes it's not that easy as you may say ,especially for the ones who did this over and over and over
@@MALLUTRUCKERDUDE well it is easier to give up, and surrender, than it is if your not up to the challenge.No one said it was going to be Easy!! God Bless !! Wish you well!😇🙏
Now my mood.
Thanks for your post.
Hope you feel happy now
"Life is pain anyone who says differently is selling something."
Princess Bride
Hi!I love this poem.Can I ask the tittle of the background music?
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So happy cry happy tears of joy
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words are too sad to share it with anyone 🤦♀️If this is what you think I am ?
THEN YOUR ASSUMPTIONS ARE WRONG !
Thanks you for sharing
Thank you love this song you have no idea!
This has beautifully broke my heart in two.
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I don't know but my tears rolling down
Hope you are fine now :-)
You have said it all in one poem! 🙏💯❤️
you made me happy in just one comment ...thanks for the nice words
We clearly feel the same way. Do you do the things you do because you don't believe in yourself? Like you not good enough? Both crying. The bible says that if you let me in, call me your sister, all that will change. I am the one who can rewire your mind. You have been around the wrong influence. It's God's way of calling you to himself. When we set our minds on the things of God, then everything will change. My entire life is set on God and I have integrity. You and I are supposed to put a Garland on each other's heads. Bringing unity. Please don't beat yourself up. Everything that has happened was supposed to happen. This has brought us wisdom. As you said, I am also not perfect. I am exactly who I am. The whole point of renewing our minds is to be set free from condemnation and ungodly desires. We are supposed to set our minds on things from above. What's pure and lovely. Trying to be perfect will never set you free. All God requires of us is to be who he created us to be. Ourselves. Xxxx
Thanks for your concern and inspirational words
Heart touching poem .. I really like this 🥰
Happy to read your lovely comment. :-)
I really don't know why
Some times I want to cry..
I wish to scream and shout
And let my feelings out..💗
Crashing through glass floors with poetic sharp swords, maxed out and not much left like an old cobra ford. Always lonely, damn im so bored. Air compressors and other tools without cords, what a world from the nectar i poured. Drippin knowledge, i see far like a bird on a gourd. Why not!
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The great lines touched my heart.....and felt so sad...
You are the king of Urdu poetry Mirza Asad Ullah Khan Ghalib Read this poetry . Your heart will be happy .
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Whats up?Say it we cry together
Am here to stand with you 😭😭😭
Everytime my eyes especially
My right lower eye is shaking
I don’t like it I know am going to cry 😭
And am experiencing that now
I denied the power of cry now
i have naothing to say ....... i am just ..
your poem's line just realistic. ....... and what you said in your poem that everything happen in my life ...... . 😔😔😔😔😔
oh my goodness..hope you are fine now :-)
@@Satishpoetry 😨😨😨😨 thank you so much for your reply ... continue your work .... always supprot ..😊😊😊😊
Wow 😮 beautiful poem
Don't give up even don't give your loving heart to someone else. You deserve her
Everybody has a past,
If you think about it your present will blast.
If you judge anyone by their past,
Remember, their happiness won't last.
Mistakes are made by human being,
Forgiveness is what they are pleasing.
Each being wish for a new chance.
This is well known in the history of France.
Realising people about their mistakes,
Is like offering salt to their pain and aches.
Being sorrounded some are still lonely.
Why don't you make them feel homely??
People starve for love and care.
What you are doing is not fair.
Life is all about earn and fire-burn,
Life is all about earn and fire-burn,
Once you gone, no choice to return.
Move on and help others moving,
It will be amazing and soothing.
Never allow your words to exploit lives,
Not only you dear, each has equal rights.
Before you judge look at your own.
May be you are already drawn.
Everyone has right to dance in the air.
If you feel jealous, kindly relax under the chair.
Every being is a rising star,
So respect each, no matter him or her.
𝔖𝔲𝔧𝔞𝔱𝔞 𝔖𝔥𝔞𝔯𝔪𝔞.
Nice Lyrics...Thanks for posting your comment here
Pleasure
@vicky mpp thank you 😊
Nice poem
@@animasharma2650 Thank you Anima.
Trust God he delivers.God bless,have a wonderful day.
This poem is truly a masterpiece. I wish I could do what you can do. That’s amazing.
Hey i am too a poet and i post my work on ig and now i have started on you tube too but after watching your work i feel extremely inspired and i am impressed .great;)
I am not a writer or a poet ...but its really inspiring to know that you got inspired by my lines... appreciation like this makes me write more.. thanks a lot
Oh my god ! Thanks for replying :)
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This song is so cool and good I like it
Really I can relate to this poem... Very nice
its not good to relate to this poem ..hope you come out of this feeling of emptiness soon :-)
So so beautiful
Thanks for the nice feedback
Excellent works and the last line really touches my heart ....keep going on ..
I read these beautiful lines on my channel with title English sad poetry...need your conment...
Your poem is very good, i can feel every single word that you say in this video❤️❤️ ...
I am sorry for making you feel empty :-). Thanks for the feedback
Hey I love your poems❤
I am happy to know that ..and thanks for such a support ..I will try writing more :-)
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Visit my page for poetry❤
It is a wonderful piece 😊😊 please keep writing 👍👍
Thanks for the lovely comment. I am happy while i read comments :-)
Moved when I was 8 and found someone I thought would love me the way my old friends did but I miss my old friends
Wow i like this vedio very touch😍😍😍😍
This comment is so touching ..thanks for such a nice comment
How beautiful thank you
Thank you for posting a beautiful comment ..made my day
Awesome.. u deserve hug from me
Thanks for the awesome comment... made my day !!!
why feel sad ! be glad we are still here !God is good to us !
I think...this emtiness is the present situation most of all experiencing...try to follow spirituality may help a lot only option is left I feel...
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Sorry if I don't ask permission before I forgot to put credit to the owner.. Just love your poem that's all, still sending love and support watching from ksa
Thanks a lot .. I am your new Subscriber now :-)
Omg... Love the po am gotta say it made me cry😢
Very good but you have to speak aswell it will make us emotional and easy to understand it......😊
Sure .. I will try that ...Thanks for your Comments
Awesome!!
I'm a novice beginner felt like sharing something...
TIME
--------
What's the value of time
I should've known the lost
Folding these hands for the cost
Just another broken heart
Feeling shattered and tossed
I keep listening to those memories of the cross
Shall you be loveless of its crimes
Muted whispers like a mime
Can you read my mouth
Or you just standing there blind
Oh Holy Heaven
And Killer Hell
Why God
Why this Jail
My Human flesh is
Contemplating
And Worrying
Through Self-abuse
And Masquerading
Hold my tongue
Satan's gun
Fallen Angel
Constellation of an angle
Orion's Belt
That's Passion felt
And Jesus wept
So Daddy sleeps
The Shepard and all the lost Sheep
The 99
Where's the one
Hopped the fence
Digging my ditch
Salvation found
Hold the Crown
Writer
Ryan K Pendley
Hmm you should consider starting your own channel and making your words more reachable. Thanks for the post
@@Satishpoetry
Umm I need more poetry, when I get more I'll try to get videos of me reading my poems...
Here's one more writing if you don't mind..
PROMISE
---------------
I promise to love you, it's my favorite duty of life
to cherish you,
I love your silliness,
Your googly eye pictures makes me laugh,
You know we're some dorks
Please dont get me on your smile it's my
Kryptonite that warms the soul
The duty of me being your man is to make us
happy,
I may not be good at spilling my guts
But this is who I am letting you know that there
is nobody else in this world that compares to
you,
It's crazy you're the only person that's 24/7 on
my mind, and that's a sincere thought no lie,
You consume me,
I love your nakedness
That's my everything and
Being naked is pretty funny,
And funny is what I want to be!!
So to my better half
Let's laugh!!
Take this rib, ouch;
It's okay if I'm in pain
I love you
Maybe I try to hard
I just want to be myself with you.
Maybe I don't think you accept me?
Butchya do!
I hear the rhythm of our heart beating as one
Take my hand let go and let God!
Speaking in tongues of the Angels
Hallelujah!
Love has won!
Writer
Ryan K Pendley
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@@ryanpendley1826 Magnificent ❤️
Love your poem ❤
Wow . U r so creative in ur thinking
Thanks a lotttt for your appreciation ... makes me more creative
@@Satishpoetry I like ur poetry skills ,they motivate me to have such magic in the writing . Thanks
Simple lines but powerful feel😍
Thanks for the inspiring words !!!
When I heard this just I wanted to see my passed hubby. O God I can't control my tear.
Its okk .. you will be fine.
Plz tell me a name of background piano music 😭😭😭😭
Yes please what is that?
What a heart touching poem
Aisi dasha har insan ki hai bhai
Wonderful poem. Please do some more
Thanks for your appreciation
lined are just.....marvelous
Thank you so much for the nice comment..
i like English poem,come from China
Gosh this is so deep and beautiful 💚
Gosh I like your comment :-)
gosh I don't know what I have to say😂😂
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Very nice 😢really I cried
Thank you so much for your family have a great 👍👍👍👍👍👍
I know so few things more beautiful than this poem!
I have seen very few comments that were as beautiful as yours. Thanks for this poetic comment
@@Satishpoetry 💕
i am from pakistan
a very nice and feelingfull poetry.
Thanks for your wonderful feedback.
Very sad and nice poem. Loved it.
Thanks a lottttt !!!!!
Where will you publish your poem
Great poetry 🌹🌹
Name of the background music plsss
Call Jesus into your heart,,,get hold of the promises and cry unto God still you feel that he has heard you 🙏
Wow.... Today 1st time I read this poem and now I love it...❤️❤️❤️ Even I write poems... But didn't upload yet... But it's the true talent but it's heart breaking to know that you have such few subscriber's..💔
Wow.. Great ..upload your poems quick ..let me read it :-)
@@Satishpoetry yes... I want to but not right now... But big fan of yours poems...😊😊
So much thanks for replying my friend. Please keep in touch. Thanks.
Kaise ho
I used to write my own english poem, check once click below link to read👇:
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Keep it up☺️☺️💐💐🌹🌹
Thank you, I will
Tired of everything.
Feeling nothing.
Missing something.
-empty :) :(
Time is everything..Be patient 🙏
Exactly .. Time is the only answer to all failures..problems and pain..if we get through that time ..life changes
Can you tell the name of the author
I am waiting for your reply🙂 it is an amazing poem
Hello Gamer .. I am the author ...nice to meet you :-)
I really don't know why
Sometimes I want to cry...
I wish to scream and shout
and let my feelings out...
I am living like a king
But still I miss something...
I have nothing less
But I can't feel happiness...
Inside my bones am trapped
And with a skin am wrapped...
Within myself I do hide...
I feel no pain or joy inside
My life has come to a pause
In silence my days all pass..
My heart has turned to numb
I am just waiting for end to come...
With no more hopes to persist...
My dreams have ceased to exist...
With no more path to follow
My heavy heart is hollow....
With emptiness all alone.. I can feel my tears rolling down..
I really don't know why ..
Sometimes... Silence make me cry..
Silence make me cry...
Please give the poetry in description
I salute you..
I salute you too