@@troypreston1998 That’s no problem, Troy. There are a few things that I like to address. You missed a line from Shadow. He said, “Everything was quiet, not a word was spoken…” For Espio, you could say, “I don’t have any words to describe how intrigued I am with this story.” There was a grammar error on my end. For Silver, you could say the line, “No matter where the flying creature went…” and the rest will play out. Could you repeat Sonic’s line: “He tried to remove the scarf as quickly as he could,” I couldn’t hear you say that. You also have the role of the Chief Mechanic. I originally imagined his voice will be equivalent to Yami Yugi, but upon further examining his character, I imagine him as a guy with a cool demeanor who doesn’t mind to kick back but does his best to keep things in order. His lines are: “I’m blown away by Lanolin’s narration.” “I don’t think someone’s out for a late night horse ride.”
Nice job, Troy! 👍🏻👍🏻
Thanks, ,Bailey
@@troypreston1998 That’s no problem, Troy.
There are a few things that I like to address. You missed a line from Shadow. He said,
“Everything was quiet, not a word was spoken…”
For Espio, you could say, “I don’t have any words to describe how intrigued I am with this story.” There was a grammar error on my end.
For Silver, you could say the line, “No matter where the flying creature went…” and the rest will play out.
Could you repeat Sonic’s line: “He tried to remove the scarf as quickly as he could,” I couldn’t hear you say that.
You also have the role of the Chief Mechanic. I originally imagined his voice will be equivalent to Yami Yugi, but upon further examining his character, I imagine him as a guy with a cool demeanor who doesn’t mind to kick back but does his best to keep things in order. His lines are:
“I’m blown away by Lanolin’s narration.”
“I don’t think someone’s out for a late night horse ride.”
@baileymaloney3595 I completely forgot about that. LOL
Can I do this Thursday? I've been having headache problems all day.
@@troypreston1998 Hey Troy. You’re welcome to work on it on Thursday. Sorry that you have a headache.
Okay 👍
Awesome job.
Thank you! Cheers!
You’re welcome.