I know your channel is new, and so my feedback is well intended. The story is well written. The narration and length of the video are also perfect. However, don't give teaser wording/phrasing like "continue listening for dark twists." That may not have been your words verbatim, but teaser wording/phrasing that creates expectations that are not followed up on with anything supporting the teaser - no theories or rumors of why the k!lling occured, nothing. Also, when she received only manslaughter instead of 2nd or even 1st degree murder, what was the reason? I hope I was able to constructively impart what I intended and that you receive it well. Take care, friend. I wish you great success! From a new subbie.
I know your channel is new, and so my feedback is well intended. The story is well written. The narration and length of the video are also perfect.
However, don't give teaser wording/phrasing like "continue listening for dark twists." That may not have been your words verbatim, but teaser wording/phrasing that creates expectations that are not followed up on with anything supporting the teaser - no theories or rumors of why the k!lling occured, nothing. Also, when she received only manslaughter instead of 2nd or even 1st degree murder, what was the reason?
I hope I was able to constructively impart what I intended and that you receive it well. Take care, friend. I wish you great success!
From a new subbie.