The Elven Princess
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 29 ก.ย. 2024
- Her voice soft, bewitching, magical
Hushes chirping birds and buzzing bees
Echoes within the Enchanted Forest
Reverberates behind the ancient trees
Her body bends, stretches, wiggles
Ever so gracefully she gently sways
As sparkling dewdrops sprinkle
The flawless beauty of her face
Her dazzling eyes wide open, beaming
Bright rays of the clearest sky blue
To awestruck mortals offer the promise
Of her purest smile, heartfelt and true
With Love she gleams, glimmers with Joy
She radiates Harmony, heartwarming hopes
Her glance sends souls peacefully soaring
Swirling above the highest mountain tops
At strayed, lonesome wanderers
Her captivating gaze is cast
She soothes their weary souls
Makes them forget their past
Oh splendid, stunning Sorceress!
Scores have fallen prey to your enchanting charm
Oh sweet, sublime Seductress!
You stole their hearts, yet you meant no harm
Wunderschönes Lied voller Anmut !
THis is gorgeous. Legitimately reminds me of Eurielle.
If I may offer a suggestion, replace "wiggles" with "ripples". Wiggles is a hard word to take seriously, especially when it comes to a vision of grace.
Thank you for your appreciation for the song. Thank you for taking the time to comment. As for your suggestion, it is valid and I see your point. But when I wrote the lyrics - it started as a poem - I had a very specific yoga teacher of mine in mind which I am not ashamed to admit I had a crush on. She was also an athlete and a dancer and she was very agile with her body and many times very dynamic physically, yet she could also be very subtle and soft. She also had a very artistic streak in her that added to her amazing personality. I think I had all the above in mind and I wanted to hilight this contrast when I composed this verse. As for changing it now I'm afraid that's impossible, the melody which I find unique and most fitting for the lyrics is created by AI (suno.com) and cannot be tampered with nor tweaked or recreated the same with somewhat different lyrics. I guess we're stuck with this original first version of the song. Thanks for the remark though...
Preciosa canción, menos mal que todavía quedan personas sensibles.
Ethereal.
i love the song
Sehr schön.
Shared this five of my loves.
❤😊
I'm tearing up😢
SO VERY CAPTIVATING
So sweet and sad 😢