Writer is all over the place. The story is very badly written, the story would be excellent if proofreading had been done. Now it’s just like all the other stories on the other channels. 😢😢
Last comment Stop the background with the dots. Also if you’re going to have the couple on screen stop change the characters. Keep the same people. Very confusing when you show 6 different characters supposed to be the couple.
Bowed to HIS authority not HER. Please can the channel stop running those stupid dots. It’s enough to make me stop listening to the channel. Is Ethan married? since the photo shows Ethan wearing a wedding ring! The writer needs to get his/her stories proofread! Also background needs to be shown according to the story. Ethan sends email to meet but narrater reads it as if she send the email, than goes back to him. PROOFREADING DESPERATELY NEEDED.
If you don't like it, why are you here? Just go somewhere else and stop writing nonsense. The story is beautiful and just like any renowned film/series it has its holes. These are insignificant details!
Amazing story! congratulations! 👏♥️
True love conquers all.
I noticed the wedding ring on Ethan’s finger too. Every story needs an editor.
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Writer is all over the place.
The story is very badly written, the story would be excellent if proofreading had been done.
Now it’s just like all the other stories on the other channels. 😢😢
Last comment
Stop the background with the dots.
Also if you’re going to have the couple on screen stop change the characters. Keep the same people. Very confusing when you show 6 different characters supposed to be the couple.
Bowed to HIS authority not HER.
Please can the channel stop running those stupid dots.
It’s enough to make me stop listening to the channel.
Is Ethan married? since the photo shows Ethan wearing a wedding ring!
The writer needs to get his/her stories proofread!
Also background needs to be shown according to the story.
Ethan sends email to meet but narrater reads it as if she send the email, than goes back to him.
PROOFREADING DESPERATELY NEEDED.
If you don't like it, why are you here? Just go somewhere else and stop writing nonsense. The story is beautiful and just like any renowned film/series it has its holes. These are insignificant details!
What's this?
Another version of "50 SHADE'S OF GRAY"????
It's been DONE ALREADY and a whole lot better than this crap.......