Rudy Francisco - Love Poem Medley

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  • @xoalliexo7504
    @xoalliexo7504 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1929

    "I want to be your ex boyfriends stunt double, and have the courage to do everything he didn't. Like trust you." damn

    • @uriahwaskey6871
      @uriahwaskey6871 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      that line got me too :P intense

    • @iamrootbrand
      @iamrootbrand 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      great line

    • @Mikeplaysdbd
      @Mikeplaysdbd 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I know this light sound weird even I'm 19 I fucking love poetry lol I imagine god made u he gasped and he turn to an anegl and Hugh tired him and say gof damn I'm good

    • @yeseniag269
      @yeseniag269 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      jack sparrow I

    • @PF-Fly
      @PF-Fly 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Such a great line!!

  • @SPcamert
    @SPcamert 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1774

    "I'm not a love poet but..." I've got some news for you Rudy.

    • @UnknownRealityMusic
      @UnknownRealityMusic 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Casually looking down an seeing this comment made the whole experience 1,000 times better

    • @zeyad7947
      @zeyad7947 2 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      "but I'm not a rapper" - SupaHotFire

    • @slacefield26
      @slacefield26 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I'm in the back yelling "stop the cap" when he says I'm not a love poet 😂

  • @dariencelis1395
    @dariencelis1395 6 ปีที่แล้ว +417

    "I'd write about your eyelashes and how they are like violin strings that play symphonies every time you blink." I. Got. Chills.

  • @nataliehatch3451
    @nataliehatch3451 5 ปีที่แล้ว +443

    “Sometimes, I pray that god somehow turns you back into one of my ribs just so I would never have to spend an entire day without you.” That gave me chills

    • @siegfriedclavecilla8407
      @siegfriedclavecilla8407 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      😔

    • @chloewilliams1702
      @chloewilliams1702 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      That's actually one of the problems I had with this; it made me uncomfortable. He would be taking away her autonomy, and it feels like the ultimate control. I understand that he's saying he loves her, but it felt more like obsession and just felt icky.

    • @johnmuriecayetano319
      @johnmuriecayetano319 2 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      @@chloewilliams1702 The reference of that line is biblical tho about how Eve was made out of from the rib of Adam

    • @sofisafamily7929
      @sofisafamily7929 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      @@chloewilliams1702 you somehow found a way to make something positive seem negative 🤦‍♂you're entitled to your interpretation/opinion tho I guess.

    • @EricNarson
      @EricNarson 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@chloewilliams1702 Whaf a baffun you are!

  • @itsagirlsname
    @itsagirlsname 6 ปีที่แล้ว +552

    “do all the things he was too afraid to do” - had to pause and scream for a minute *resume video* “like trust you” - had to pause, get up on of bed, walk around, vigorously flailing my arms so i don’t holler & wake up my neighbors. GOOD LORD. rudy you got the words.

  • @bebe3291
    @bebe3291 6 ปีที่แล้ว +304

    "Love is blind so I write my poems in braille" 👏🏿

  • @Harlie963
    @Harlie963 6 ปีที่แล้ว +601

    I love how I've heard this one so many times before but I fall in love with it all over again each time. Seriously, it's like watching it for the first time each time I see it, such a grand chap with such captivating words. Amazing

  • @neirasworld
    @neirasworld 6 ปีที่แล้ว +346

    P.S. I love how he sometimes performs two or three poems altogether 😊

    • @namandalukia3610
      @namandalukia3610 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      How did u make it dis far guy ,am just a starter

  • @rena-in8qo
    @rena-in8qo 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1898

    To the girl who works at the Starbucks down the street from my house on Delmar Heights Road, swear to God, I'm not a stalker.
    That's the title.
    When I asked you for a chai latte, what I meant was, I was walking past, I saw you in the window.
    To be honest, I only came in here because I had to know what your voice sounded like.
    Instead of saying that, I got really nervous and ordered the first thing on the menu.
    I don't even know what chai is. Or a latte, for that matter.
    I imagine that when God made you, I bet he cussed for the first time. I bet he turned to an angel, gave him a high-five, and said goddamn, I'm good.
    Or me damn I'm good, cause he's like God, right?
    I spent the last five days trying to figure out how I'm going to introduce myself to you properly. I finally figured it out, it's going to be something like "Hi."
    That's all I got so far, but I think it's a good start.
    I'm gonna be honest, it's not often that I find myself eager to write about love. In fact, every time I try to write about love, my hands cramp, just to show me how painful love can be. Sometimes my pencils break just to prove to me that every now and then, love takes a little more work than you planned.
    I heard that love is blind, so I write all my poems in Braille. And my poems are never actually finished because true love is endless.
    I've always believed that real love is kind of like a supermodel before she's airbrushed. It's pure, and imperfect just the way that God intended.
    I'm gonna be honest, I'm not much of a love poet, but if I was to wake up tomorrow morning and decide that I was gonna write about love, my first poem- it would be about you.
    About how I love you the same way I learned how to ride a bike: scared, but reckless, with no training wheels or elbow pads, so my scars can tell the story of how I fell for you.
    I'm gonna be honest, I'm not much of a love poet, but if I was, I'd write about how I see your face in every cloud, your reflection in every window. You see, I've written a million poems hoping that somehow maybe some way, you'll jump out of the page and be closer to me.
    See I'm not much of a love poet, but if I was, I'd write about how you have the audacity to be beautiful even on days when everything around you is ugly.
    I'd write about your eyelashes and how they are like violin strings that play symphonies every time you blink.
    If I was a love poet, I'd write about how I melt in front of you like an ice sculpture every time I hear the vibration in your voice and whenever I see your name on the caller ID, my heart plays hopscotch inside of my chest. It climbs onto my ribs like monkey bars, and I feel like a child all over again.
    And I know it's gonna sound weird, but sometimes I pray that God somehow turns you back into one of my ribs just so I would never have to spend an entire day without you.
    And I swear I'm usually not a love poet, but if I was to wake up tomorrow morning and decide that I was going to write about love, my first poem- it would be about you.
    And after all of that, she was like, "But how do you feel about me?"
    And I said, "Put it like this, I want to be your ex-boyfriend's stunt double. I want to do everything he never had the courage to do, like trust you."
    See, last night I had a dream. In this particular dream, I died in my dreams, awoke not knowing I was still sleeping, decided to walk. See, that night, I walked in my sleep, I slept in my walk, I walked backwards until I saw you for the first time and I could barely muster the courage to introduce myself all over again.
    You see, I've been trying to find the right words. I've been trying to take the right steps to what seems to me like thousands of years, but something always seems to go wrong between us.
    We lived in Egypt, I was the Pharaoh's slave, you were his daughter. Loving you led to my death. They claimed I seduced you, and after they stole my life, I was resurrected as a mason, I made the foundation for your house. We met eyes for two seconds, you left, then I didn't see you again until I died.
    I came back as a caterpillar, I turned into a butterfly, I landed in the palm of your hands, you brushed me away and the rejection killed me.
    When I woke, I was a kick drum, you were a snare; we were both owned by this drummer named Cozy Cole and when he died, so did we, but I came back just to look for you.
    I left notes in random places hoping that you would stumble across them, I carved our names in trees and then prayed that it would jog your memory. I whispered your name in the wind, hoping somehow, maybe some way, my voice would reach you, but it didn't, and I died- I died early, I died young with bread crumbs in my hand just hoping that you would find me, but you never did, so they buried me.
    When they buried me, they put these coins over my eyes and I used them as bus fare to get back to earth just so I could look for you.
    That's why sometimes when we hold hands, every so often, I hold on a little too tight, and I'm sorry.
    I just don't want to lose you again.
    My mother told me, when you find the perfect woman, you gotta do whatever it takes to make sure she stays next to you.
    - Rudy Francisco, "Love Poem Medley"

  • @rajatverma9664
    @rajatverma9664 6 ปีที่แล้ว +163

    I'm a simple man, I see "Rudy" I press like button before even starting the video cuz I know it's going to be good.

  • @Brongs4life
    @Brongs4life 5 ปีที่แล้ว +80

    We can all write like this when we are in love. Love is beautiful and inspiring, when it's real, it's consuming and it's your high. You feel it in your veins, her next call, text, picture, hug, kiss, it's my fix that gets me high. You always feel their love, surrounding you like a blanket, you're warm. When love is real, you can do anything, be anything, be better for you and be better for her. When love is real, constant thoughts of her invade your mind, consuming your thoughts and you two feed off of each other because you're starving and you're eating each others fears, desires, dreams, feelings, and hopes, feeding each other's souls. When love is real, they are your best friend, diary, rock, world, universe, everything. You grow with them, build with them, mature with them, live for them and if need be, die for them. Love is inspiring, beautiful, and powerful and real love is indeed magical. Like a river, it can wash away your pain. Like a drug, it will get you high. Like adrenaline, make you feel alive. When love is real, there isn't anything you wouldn't do for them.

    • @blaCknails031
      @blaCknails031 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      wow

    • @billygeorge6460
      @billygeorge6460 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I fucking love thia

    • @nabile4895
      @nabile4895 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      BUT CAN U WRITE A POETRY BOOK AS THICK AS HIM I HAVE HIS BOOK ITS THICK NOT TO MENTION AS OTHER THICK POETRY BOOK ITS ACTUALLY DIFFICULT TO WRITE A THICK BOOK. TO WRITE A POETRY A ONE TITLE PAGE ITS EASY BUT TO EXPAND IT AND MAKE IT SENSIBLE N MORE SENSE DERIVING FROM ONE MAIN TITLE. WELL I GUESS IF U HAVE DEGREE N HAVE EXPERIENCE ON THESIS WRITING ONLY THEN U CAN WRITE A POETRY BOOK. JUST MY OPINION. SORRY.

    • @ts4gv
      @ts4gv 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      humanity got more sensitive to love faster than the primitive biology behind it could keep up. it’s a flawed system & most of us will never experience it.

  • @BabvBlues
    @BabvBlues 6 ปีที่แล้ว +90

    You're just out of this world ~~~

  • @poemsplay178
    @poemsplay178 6 ปีที่แล้ว +48

    This man gives me the goosebumps, "I heard that love is blind, so I write all my poems in Braille. And my poems are never actually finished because true love is endless." this line always get me, so beautifully written and so true 👏👏👏

  • @adrianac843
    @adrianac843 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    "I loved you the same way I learned to ride a bike, scared. But reckless with no training wheels or pads, so my scars can tell the story of how I fell for you" ❤

  • @johnathanpl
    @johnathanpl 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I am moved to tears……EACH time I hear his beautiful poetry….. I’ll never be able to thank you enough for the therapy that I receive from your perfect words!

  • @cookiealbum
    @cookiealbum 5 ปีที่แล้ว +44

    I’ve listened to this about a million times and every time I’m moved. This man is a legend

  • @mealswithmazzi2650
    @mealswithmazzi2650 6 ปีที่แล้ว +107

    I might not know much about love, but I know that I am in love with Rudy's poetry.
    "If I was a love poet..." I'm sorry, but I think you're already a love poet Rudy. This was beautiful.

  • @JuanEnriqueBravo
    @JuanEnriqueBravo 5 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    Sometimes, just one “like” doesn’t describe all my emotions. Thank you.

  • @preciousdoesnotmeanvalue
    @preciousdoesnotmeanvalue ปีที่แล้ว +2

    you have no idea how badly i want to meet this man, when i searched for broken hearts, i found a poem about love and one I'll never forget one that the little fine line between me giving up on it and trying again., if love wants find me it knows where I am and if i doesn't i'll try to love myself as hard as it will be whatever is people couldn't see in me, I will see in myself and look for until the ends of this earth because why make me if it was waste of my time, my life will never be that again, it will be time you wish you could have more of. I will make myself the person people wish they still had, I will make myself love me.

  • @QueenSuzie28
    @QueenSuzie28 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    this is easily his best written poem. every now and again i listen to this piece.

  • @alejandratrevino7923
    @alejandratrevino7923 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I think I'll cry every time I hear or read this poem. Love is such a tragically beautiful experience and those lucky enough to feel it this deeply are blessed. Thank you Rudy for reminding me ❤

  • @roniboni___
    @roniboni___ 6 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    The beginning of this is so When great poetry meets stand up comedy. Amazing I loved every second

  • @andreaaraya7636
    @andreaaraya7636 2 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    To this DAY.
    TO THIS DAY.
    this poem lives rent free in my head

  • @brittdays1598
    @brittdays1598 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Talk about the perfect man, a man who’s love is so strong, he writes for you, not ignoring you.

  • @llllWazzupBroslllll
    @llllWazzupBroslllll 6 ปีที่แล้ว +31

    Everytime.. Every damn time I hear Rudy's poem. I feel mine is trash, it means I have alot of room to improve!

    • @alkank9004
      @alkank9004 6 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      atleast you can write a poem

  • @taylormarie9217
    @taylormarie9217 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I will wait patiently for a love like this 💞

  • @ToshiJ89
    @ToshiJ89 6 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    I love everything that comes out of this man’s mouth

  • @Moke_Queen
    @Moke_Queen 10 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I watch these to come back to myself they bring my soul back to me and just Thanks for that

    • @ButtonPoetry
      @ButtonPoetry  8 วันที่ผ่านมา

      that is so incredible!! You should look into Rudy's workshops :) buttonpoetry.com/product/button-university-rudy-francisco-workshop/

  • @kaitlynbaker7634
    @kaitlynbaker7634 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I had a Spotify playlist of poems on while I slept last night, but this and only this poem woke me up. I had a dream that went along with the poem, so I had to get up and put “I’m not really a
    love poet but...” into my Safari search bar so that I could actually listen to it again when I woke up for real.

  • @Liveurlyfe4u
    @Liveurlyfe4u 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Every poem, every word, simply amazing. His talent is beyond words.

  • @KaytiebugofKC
    @KaytiebugofKC 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Wow, I feel the exact same way about my "love poems" and poems in general; I've written... spoken... a lot of poetry (>300) and less than 10% are what I would consider love poems, even less love poems to or about someone. All of the insecurities Rudy expresses in his words, face, body... I felt that throughout most of my life until poetry found me, until music found me, and together they taught me to speak. They helped me to stand up. Still an enigma to most, my heart swells when I listen or read poets like Rudy. Words craddle and run marathons across my brain until I just have to get them on paper, and most don't even make it to the door before they try to knock. I didn't have the sense that I was a real person until I was gifted the kind of freedom one gets from the spoken word.
    My best still doesn't feel like it's good enough, and I'm not sure if it ever will. Yet I'm okay with that because somewhere, somehow I know that my best and my love has always been plenty to those who truly know me, or have felt and experienced the world like a constant, but silent hurricane as I have.
    but Rudy... Rudy bares us his soul and already feels like our friend.
    I'll get there someday. I will get there someday, but I need the help of other creatives and kindred spirits...

  • @samwilliam8534
    @samwilliam8534 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    If I don’t have love like this I don’t want it

  • @ogshanti52
    @ogshanti52 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Ugh the fact this made me cry. so beautiful

  • @suzange14
    @suzange14 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Will always love Rudy Francisco's poetry. So incredible.

  • @amandagrimes3571
    @amandagrimes3571 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    tears. every. single. time. Always so moved by this one.

  • @collettecaraway2759
    @collettecaraway2759 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    He doesn't write or deliver any thing other than, THE BEST WORD ART I've heard delivered by a male. Love this guy♥️♥️♥️

  • @aamnaalzaabi4659
    @aamnaalzaabi4659 6 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    nope i didn't tear at all, this is beautiful and i felt THAT

  • @Izzy-mu1ij
    @Izzy-mu1ij 6 ปีที่แล้ว +244

    I want to be the girl in starbucks

  • @andrearivera249
    @andrearivera249 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    So beautiful I cried🕊😢💗

  • @chrisha1332
    @chrisha1332 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    rudy’s poem made me love love again. falling in love is such a beautiful thing i really just cried watching this twice in a row now. such a beautiful piece

  • @nataliec1300
    @nataliec1300 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    I love quoting love poems to one of my friends, but he doesn't know the real reason is because I truly love him

  • @iManEnigMA7
    @iManEnigMA7 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Doesn't matter how many times I watch this...
    It makes me cry EVERY TIME!!!
    BLOWN AWAY!!!
    TRULY BEAUTIFUL!!!
    ❤❤❤👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽

  • @elizabethdevries8028
    @elizabethdevries8028 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I've listened to him recite his poem now several times and have tears streaming down my face every single time. I relate it to my late husband completely. This is incredibly beautiful.

  • @ceonabennett3434
    @ceonabennett3434 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is the most beautiful poem that I’ve ever heard👏🏾👏🏾

  • @jexerjohngamoso7942
    @jexerjohngamoso7942 6 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    My favorite poem from my favorite poet.

  • @esmeraldahernandez-kg3ow
    @esmeraldahernandez-kg3ow 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I cry every time I watch this. One of my favorite poems

  • @phelopita9471
    @phelopita9471 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I will never get enough of this,every time I listen to it,it feels like it is the first time and I feel like I am traveling in time. Seeing the girl and watching all of these ways in which you show love🙌🙌🙌

  • @neirasworld
    @neirasworld 6 ปีที่แล้ว +37

    Oh Rudy!!! It's 11pm here and I always wait for the video on this channel. When I saw my favourite, I was more excited 😊😊😎

  • @hazzydefault7308
    @hazzydefault7308 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I could never tire of listening to this love poem. I wish that I were a poet. I sure do love listening to poems especially if it’s written especially for me.

  • @anastephens7320
    @anastephens7320 ปีที่แล้ว

    Your poem leaves me speechless! How does one describe color, warmth, and depth in existence. Thank you for putting value to humanity🙏🏽💕

  • @peacec47
    @peacec47 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    The best massage to give u this beautiful morning 🌄🥰🥰🥰 the perfect man

  • @MrsMunoz21
    @MrsMunoz21 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Every time i watch this i love it more and more my heart gets warm and it brings a smile to my face 🙂

  • @shelbdreher
    @shelbdreher 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is the best poem to ever exist.

  • @lilyjasper9338
    @lilyjasper9338 5 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    This poem sums up pretty much all of my feelings about this one damn girl, im not gonna lie. 😂😂❤ thankyou rudy for putting my unexplainable love into words.

  • @prernaberi1339
    @prernaberi1339 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ohh.. such a beautiful poem... I almost cried towards the end.... ❤️

  • @jemisityfields6677
    @jemisityfields6677 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I watch this video and I cry and laugh hard each time more and more. My ex sent me this video often and says it reminds her of me and the love she had for me. She was tough but had a soft spot for me. I was her Pudding to her Joker. We had a bond that was unexplainable. I’ll never forget the feeling in my stomach when I got the call she passed away. It’s been almost 4 months .. but I will never stop watching this video.

  • @jacobinatangiuushona
    @jacobinatangiuushona 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I love listening to Rudy perform, 😩😩😩😩aspiration levels🙌✨👌

  • @tonimerflag8793
    @tonimerflag8793 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow! Ten minutes ago I had never heard of Rudy Francisco. Now I am an awestruck fan and admirer. Stunning performance!

  • @NondeM
    @NondeM 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This poem gets me each time. 💓

  • @soulrebirth5581
    @soulrebirth5581 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Its amazing how love turns our speech into poetry. I felt this in my spirit.

  • @dawsonroby1876
    @dawsonroby1876 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    me n my woman of two years just broke up and i listened to this, this morning. i will say, i cried like a baby. tears filled up my chai latte :’)

  • @lissamaya9415
    @lissamaya9415 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    *I know all his poems word for word

  • @jenngzz11
    @jenngzz11 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    My heart!!! My stomach!!! 😭 cant stop crying

  • @3uptowns875
    @3uptowns875 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ugh man .... idk how many I’ve watched this but it’s touching my heart in a way that makes my heart stop and tears drop ... every time.

  • @izzyaguilera3379
    @izzyaguilera3379 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Your poems feel real and experiences I relate to. So happy I found you expressing exactly how I feel time after time. Your deliverance intense.

  • @Anna-MLS
    @Anna-MLS 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I wanna be loved by Rudy just for a day.

  • @liliwoods4706
    @liliwoods4706 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I've listened to this poem a million times and I get chills every time!!!

  • @kjack19ify
    @kjack19ify 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    i fell in love listening to this... i literally said yesterday ppl dont give you butterflies anymore ...this give me hope someone is somewhere trying to find me or figure out how to speak to me

  • @615BlackBarbie
    @615BlackBarbie 5 ปีที่แล้ว +27

    " after all of that." " She asked, but, how do you feel about me?" Lolololol

  • @laurenehlers5384
    @laurenehlers5384 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Still one of the most beautiful things I have ever heard.

  • @anugerahpekertiislamilenia1869
    @anugerahpekertiislamilenia1869 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    the audacity of this man to make me feel this way, damn

  • @nikkifox2068
    @nikkifox2068 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    This right here is the kind of love the world needs and everyone deserves. This is so beautiful. Thank you for creating this. It hit me so hard i can feel it reverberating in my chest. Beautiful work.

  • @dmmunna3983
    @dmmunna3983 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Love is life, life is love!

  • @amandazink6335
    @amandazink6335 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I freaking love this. I can't stop watching it!!

  • @ebonyblack7867
    @ebonyblack7867 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Love it ♥️.
    I was really I'm devastated by your words. It" deeply I moved me in time. "♥️🫀♥️♥️
    Thank You 🫀

  • @mase3girls
    @mase3girls 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Beauty turns into beautiful, thank you my brother!!!!!!!!!

  • @yudilasangtam9905
    @yudilasangtam9905 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever heard and I can't help falling in love with it everytime I hear it. It makes me feel like believing in love. 😭❤️ Just wow.

  • @woodcamping
    @woodcamping 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I can’t wait to see Rudy live in a few weeks. Really looking forward to it!!

  • @Aaron_Clayton
    @Aaron_Clayton 4 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    Poem I wrote would love to hear feedback from anyone
    To whom it may concern (Love letter)
    Maybe you and I were never supposed to meet
    It's like anytime I go out and try
    I suffer defeat
    Losses shouldn't make me suffer but sometimes I let them
    cause victories are harder to manage and lead to a prideful heart only to be humiliated once again by the inevitable return of defeat
    Sometimes I wish I was numb to the emotions that drive me deeper and deeper into sadness because without them I wouldn't be searching so tirelessly for something so impossibly unattainable
    The epitome of Irony creeps forward revealing itself ever so quietly in my life
    The ones that I love the most unknowingly cause my heart to shatter
    I am defeated mentally as again and again I take the back seat so that they may find the happiness I am seeking
    Maybe it is all together my fault because I don't tell them how much I love them or maybe it's my fault for hoping at all when time and time again I fall short
    How can it be that I'm too much yet never enough at the same time?
    I'm sorry
    I'm sorry that I don't have the answers and I'm sorry that my deep rooted selfishness gets the better of me and ultimately causes my failure
    The altruism I wish for others to perceive is clouded by ulterior motives that I pray escape me but always exist whether I recognize them or not
    I wish the man you love was me, but the insurmountable sins piled high suffocate his being
    Yet
    I cannot give up because true love is unconditional and
    I love you deeply, so here I am living with just a glimmer of hope that in my weakness you may find strength
    Vulnerable I may be, but strong I will become
    and when that time comes I may finally find what I've been searching for all along...
    Finally I will see why I had to endure such torment and in that very moment my suffering shall fade away only to be replaced tenfold by the joy I've been longing for, but until then all I can say is
    I love you

    • @shamilarozs1405
      @shamilarozs1405 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Really really good... You should write more often

    • @brefree8346
      @brefree8346 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      It's good, good job as upcoming poet myself you did good 👍

  • @shivanshtiwari8968
    @shivanshtiwari8968 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    He is just awesome and every good things that can describe his poems and his hardworking that he has put in his work

  • @charity2277
    @charity2277 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    only 26 bars but felt timeless listening to him.. love him sm

  • @almamun-ve3zr
    @almamun-ve3zr 6 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    no dislikes in this video...amazing..never seen like this

  • @lashawngrant3442
    @lashawngrant3442 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    He had me in tears😭😭😭

  • @harleesantana7524
    @harleesantana7524 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Beautiful ,just beautiful ..

  • @daddy_quack5182
    @daddy_quack5182 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is so beautiful I love how poetry is like a empty canvas you can fill with anything

  • @tanishachaudhuri2579
    @tanishachaudhuri2579 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    You make me wonder how words can be so beautiful

  • @Yomsstar
    @Yomsstar 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Rudy:- Am not a love poet...& boom 26 bars of love lines 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😅😅😅

  • @albertkibengo47
    @albertkibengo47 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The is sick!! God bless Rudy Fransisco

  • @skyecalame-pennington5932
    @skyecalame-pennington5932 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Breathtaking... I love everything about this...

  • @FS-vr8wg
    @FS-vr8wg 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    This needs to be a song... Beautiful 😍 absolutely beautiful ❤️

  • @stephibear3483
    @stephibear3483 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    This put me in tears 😢so beautiful

  • @clxxdx
    @clxxdx ปีที่แล้ว

    "see last night I had a dream. in this particular dream I died in my dreams awoke not knowing I was still asleep and decided to walk see that night, I walked in my sleep I slept in my walk..... " THIS LINE LIVES RENT FREE IN MY MIND

  • @story5188
    @story5188 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Rudy is something else uhhh my heart!! ❤️😩

  • @tinaryan8204
    @tinaryan8204 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Absolutely beautiful ♥️ like every structure of the heart working in perfect rhythm....q

  • @ixbe4813
    @ixbe4813 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Still listen to this often.

  • @Baybee.x
    @Baybee.x ปีที่แล้ว

    I’m in love with this

  • @chopstcks
    @chopstcks 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I just want someone who would feel and write like this for me. 😭

  • @torylopez2409
    @torylopez2409 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This poem brought tears to my eyes. great job

  • @valerinicole4233
    @valerinicole4233 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    He is so amazing. I can’t stop listening!

  • @angelstarlighttarot
    @angelstarlighttarot 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for this Rudy 💫 Absolutely beautifully spoken truth 💜