We Warned the Droo Empire to Not Mess With Humans, Now They Are Extinct | HFY | A Sci-Fi Short Story

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  • @JMM33RanMA
    @JMM33RanMA หลายเดือนก่อน +51

    In an alternate Universe, Mr. Spock remarked, "It is truly remarkable how the Ferengi culture has evolved!"

  • @miketootall5286
    @miketootall5286 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    These stories make me feel so excited and proud to be a human.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  21 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I'm glad you're liking them! HFY is definitely an enjoyable subgenre just because of how positive it paints humans. :)

  • @andrzej2488
    @andrzej2488 หลายเดือนก่อน +25

    I love it sińce there was no "Galactic Council...." bs...

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      Glad you liked it! I think the whole council thing is a bit overused, but it's an integral part of most HFY stories still too. I can live with it so long as alien butts are being thoroughly kicked! Lol

  • @RickH-v2g
    @RickH-v2g หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    Morale of the story: DO NOT MESS WITH HUMANS! 😂
    Great story!

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Exactly! Glad you liked it. :)

  • @tioraytm
    @tioraytm หลายเดือนก่อน +51

    This story is an oasis in the dry barren desert of woke AI stories. I really appreciate a real human written story. Keep up the good work.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +17

      Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad you liked this. :)
      There's more than enough garbage content out there, especially pandering pieces of wokeness, and I hope to avoid seeing that sort of stuff on the channel. But that's just between you and me, I'm not ready to get cancelled here yet! Hahaha

    • @zeehero7280
      @zeehero7280 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      I've seen some bad AI stories but not many overtly woke ones. I must be lucky to have avoided seeing such evils.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +10

      @@zeehero7280 Yeah, there are some really bad ones out there that are painful!
      I've been accused of posting super woke stuff because of simply having female representation in a few stories, but I don't really see that as being woke. Joan of Ark, for instance, is a hero of mine. Females in leadership roles and on the front isn't unheard of. Maybe less common, but it irks me when the channel and my writers are called woke for having them. (People get excessively butthurt now. I suspect it's because of what certain entertainment companies, particularly ones that start with a D and end with isney have done.)

    • @tioraytm
      @tioraytm หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@zeehero7280 Being woke or feminist is politically the same thing this past decade. Feminists decided to attach their cause to woke due to the early success of woke. This is why feminist leaders are forced to accept that men who feel they are women are in their political minds, women. This is the twisted reason why feminists have surrendered women's safe spaces of women's sports, public bathrooms and change rooms.
      You don't realize or can't accept you are being manipulated. In real life testing, the results have been in for many, many years. In physical combat, piloting a fighter jet in combat scenarios, in military strategy testing, hell even in playing chess women do worse than men for various reasons.
      Human leaders, scientific leaders, military commanders and elite soldiers in these woke AI stories are almost all women. Do you seriously not get that these best of the best AI stories are not woke feminist stories?
      When you talk about the best of the best the only category that women do compete very well in is as scientists as distinct to scientific leaders which is more about administration and politics. This is not putting women down, this is really just areas that men do much better in and not listing areas that women do far better in.

    • @Amoth_oth_ras_shash
      @Amoth_oth_ras_shash หลายเดือนก่อน

      woke ?
      is that not that american word that been hijacked in their local internal fundamentalist culture war ?
      but ye , the tidal wave of generic V.I ''what most calls A.I'' generated crap that sloshes around thanks to idiotic algorithms is quite obnoxious

  • @GustavoGplay
    @GustavoGplay หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Nice story, but holy shit, if I hear about "cybernetic enhancements flickering" I'm gonna lose it.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Hahahaha
      *My cybernetic enhancements flickered and whirred as I processed this new information...*

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      I made sure that the cybernetic references were toned down in the stories later on in this series, I hope that makes them more enjoyable for ya! (And less annoying for all of us!)

  • @atticusseverus
    @atticusseverus หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Truly one of the best examples of why peace and equal trade and honest good treatment to everyone is the best way to go. Profit! Profit!! Profit!!!....by not screwing others.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Agreed! :)

  • @michealc76013
    @michealc76013 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    These Galatic stories are AWESOME!!! keeper coming

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Awesome! I'm thrilled to hear it, thank you. :)

  • @chrisspencer1791
    @chrisspencer1791 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Great story. Kept picturing the Ferengi in my head tho. Nice to have an engaging story that didn’t involve the Galactic Council, and Admiral or a named ship. Well done.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Glad you liked it! I'll see of we can cut down on some of those more stereotypical HFY things since so many people seem to be tired of it. :)

  • @alexdavis-mann8513
    @alexdavis-mann8513 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Take a shot everytime cybernetics are flickering 😂

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Lol So you want to get DRUNK drunk.

    • @jamesogden7756
      @jamesogden7756 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Trieð dis challenge. OT OKAY.
      VERy dunk. Call you later. K thhx bye.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@jamesogden7756 Lol!

  • @BigDaddy_MRI
    @BigDaddy_MRI 27 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Fully fleshed out, this could be a good movie.
    A very fresh look at the cost of war. Very good story.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  27 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I'd sure love to see a movie made off of this one as well! Glad you liked it. :)
      There are several other stories linked to this one as well in the Fall of the Droo Empire playlist that I made. Hope you enjoy those as well! :)

  • @deborahmcneil747
    @deborahmcneil747 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    One of the best stories out there. Good to listen too, well paced and with a sound tale to tell. Well done.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Awesome! Thank you for the comment amd the view. :) I'll tell the writer you liked it!

  • @raymondcarter1137
    @raymondcarter1137 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    This is an excellent story!
    Well worth listening to,great pacing!

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you! I'm glad you liked this one. :)

    • @ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc
      @ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc หลายเดือนก่อน

      I agree. Well told.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc Thank you! :D

  • @timobrien2813
    @timobrien2813 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    A cautionary tale I wish our "leaders" were more familiar with. Thank you. UKUK

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Agreed and thanks for the comment. :)

  • @wirralnomad
    @wirralnomad หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    No Galactic Council, No Chen's, and No "And This Is Only The Beginning"!

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Glad you liked it! :)

  • @ogoglethorp
    @ogoglethorp 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    New hear toltaly enjoyed loved the POV.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Glad you liked it! :)

  • @toomanyjstoomanyrs1705
    @toomanyjstoomanyrs1705 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    The Ferengy after Nog became the Grand Nogging (misnamed on purpose).😂😂😂😂😂

  • @thejak
    @thejak หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Many truths spoken

  • @danielbenyair300
    @danielbenyair300 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    "we flourish in peace, we thrive in war"

  • @navyhmc8302
    @navyhmc8302 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    To many cybernetic enhancement references. I could also see the humans capitalizing on the cultures that were dominated by the Droo would have been encouraged too rise up and fight against the Droo, as well as being spared, unless they were the "True Droo"

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      I gotta agree, I was tempted to cut several but didn't in the end, I don't like doing big edits on writer's work. Might need to change that though, sorta like a real publisher needs to!
      And I really like those thoughts! Could be really cool for a future story. :)

  • @High_Blood
    @High_Blood หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    what a good teacher

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Indeed! :)

  • @Vaquero4382
    @Vaquero4382 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Sorry, but the whole "cybernetic enhancements" thing wore very, VERY, thin.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Sorry about that, it got to me a bit too. I'll see about doing bigger edits on stories in the future for stuff like that! :)
      *My cybernetic enhancements whir as I commit this to memory* Lol

  • @LawrenceKennard
    @LawrenceKennard หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Love the story and the unique take on it. By the way do you think that teacher named um has has the last name ofnDuh😂

  • @charlesm8182
    @charlesm8182 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    very good

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you! Glad you liked it.

  • @alanSJ1000
    @alanSJ1000 หลายเดือนก่อน +24

    Great words of wisdom. Peace = profits and prosperity. War = death and destruction. Can someone in the community share this video to Uncle Putin.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +11

      Share it with every world leader! They all seem to want to get folks dead of late.

    • @ronniebots9225
      @ronniebots9225 หลายเดือนก่อน

      many profit alot from war and destruction. You think the American "aid" to Ukraine goes to Ukraine as a banktransfer? Or do you think America is lend-leasing their old weapons stock and pumping all that money back into their economy by boosting the American weapon manufactures to renew their own warmachine's stock. Saying war is not profitable is nonsense, specialy if you manage to sell to both sides without them finding out.

    • @andrzej2488
      @andrzej2488 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      We will once uncle Shlomo...I mean uncle Sam learns that lesson.😊

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@andrzej2488 Yep.

    • @Cranky931
      @Cranky931 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      with our own MIC...War is profitable

  • @DarrochJohnson
    @DarrochJohnson หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I still have The Rules of Accusition . Sorry for the spelling .

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Nice! And no worries. :)

  • @62forged
    @62forged หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Excellent story.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the comment. :)

  • @The_Geezus
    @The_Geezus หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Still need to work on tuning your narrators model, good story and the channel has lots of potential if you can clean up and improve the narration. (Yeah, I know thats the hard part. Ill swing back in a few months to see if things have improved!)

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thanks for the feedback and encouragement! Working on the AI to trying to make ot perfect! :)

  • @Bill-g4e
    @Bill-g4e หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Good story. My only criticism would be to program the AI to pronounce a name the same way every time. This one pronounced the instructor's name six different ways.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I know! I'm super sorry about that, I kept tweaking things and trying to fix it but wasn't able to for this one. Some names just make my AI poop its pants. Hahaha
      Trying to get the AI to behave for later videos, can't make promises, just progress. :)

  • @danielbenyair300
    @danielbenyair300 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    punctuation is crucial...

  • @ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc
    @ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc หลายเดือนก่อน

    A great story.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)

  • @daniellore2961
    @daniellore2961 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Is this story a commentary on the possible conflict between China and America?

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Nope, but I can see some parallels.

    • @daniellore2961
      @daniellore2961 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @Sci-FiVault I watch quite a bit about China and it's relationships so my mind goes there.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@daniellore2961 Yeah, I've been following those stories for years now as well. (I guess sci-fi is where a lot of those of us who actually watch the meaningful news come for escape. Lots of us seem more knowledgeable in military and politics than the experts the normal news puts up!)

  • @GimmieTheGaff
    @GimmieTheGaff หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    “Peace for profitable trade” he remarked, while rubbing a heavily bejewelled thumb over his hooked nose.

    • @arnoldfwilliams
      @arnoldfwilliams หลายเดือนก่อน

      das ist ein beleidigend übelriechender Gedanke.

  • @mauricewatts892
    @mauricewatts892 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    What Ferengi Rule of Acquisition would this story cover??

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Hahaha Maybe we'll need a thread for folks to discuss it!

    • @guildgaming9891
      @guildgaming9891 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      3. Never spend more for an acquisition than you have to.
      7. Keep your ears open.
      8. Small print leads to large risk.
      9. Opportunity plus instinct equals profit.
      10. Greed is eternal.
      21. Never place friendship above profit.
      23. Nothing is more important than your health… except for your money.
      34. War is good for business.
      35. Peace is good for business.
      45 or 95. Expand or die.
      59. Free advice is seldom cheap.
      62. The riskier the road, the greater the profit.
      74. Knowledge equals profit.
      98. Every man has his price.
      109. Dignity and an empty sack is worth the sack.
      125. You can't make a deal if you're dead.
      208. Sometimes the only thing more dangerous than a question is an answer.
      211. Employees are the rungs on the ladder of success. Don't hesitate to step on them.
      239. Never allow doubt to tarnish your lust for latinum.
      289?. Shoot first, count profits later.
      Got from the wiki, ones that seemed to fit there may be more.

    • @ets2atstruckermartin527
      @ets2atstruckermartin527 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@guildgaming9891 Treat your employees as ur enemies: persue them
      A wealthy customer is rare get into them till ur toes

  • @generichardson4771
    @generichardson4771 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    the grentsound a lot like ferengi

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Indeed. :)

  • @roberttanguay8532
    @roberttanguay8532 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Ahhh... The Ferengi

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Someone has gotta get rich! Lol

  • @quentinmichel7581
    @quentinmichel7581 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Pretty decent though an actual human narrator would be better. No proper punctuation pauses... run-on sentences... the AI is deficient. And if it ever gains sentience, then I didn't write this- my next door neighbor did.😏👉

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Working on improving the voice as quick as I can! Thanks for the comment. :)
      And Lol! I'll be sure to tell the AI that. :P

  • @laydownlays
    @laydownlays หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Explains why the USA (Drew)is going bust.....

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Oof, ain't that the truth. At least one of the reasons.

  • @DarrochJohnson
    @DarrochJohnson หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Acquisition

  • @davidcollins2993
    @davidcollins2993 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I disagree with the whole premise huge fortunes have been created because of war.😅

    • @nurelic_og
      @nurelic_og หลายเดือนก่อน

      Limited to a few as a society war is counterproductive and Total war mostly counterproductive

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      That might be true, but historically war isn't good for business as well. The whole concept of it being good actually arose around the world wars ONLY for when the US wasn't a part of the wars and was just selling materials and taking loans from folks. Once you get in and get on a total war footing it's not beneficial. Plus the destruction wrought and all of that, es no bueno.
      Just my take though.

  • @darrylblackshear710
    @darrylblackshear710 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    They sound like the feringe.

  • @bernadettelee155
    @bernadettelee155 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Looking at your photo stock, I wonder where on earth would Elon Musk find the materials needed to build his ship to MARS 😔😭? Unless, it's a fantastic GRIFT 😊😊😊

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      I loved the ship in the video image when I finally got it. But, yes, it would be so expensive to build!

    • @outinthesticks1035
      @outinthesticks1035 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      ​@@Sci-FiVaultwould it be the rarity of some of the materials , or just the quantity? If the latter , then compared to a couple super tankers it may not be to unachievable

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@outinthesticks1035 My guess is a bit of both. But, let's face it, if we master the tech to build stuff like this then I expect it won't be too hard to build a massive warship like that. So many more materials will be immediately made available for our purposes. :)
      I so hope we can see space mining in my lifetime!

    • @inspiraPaz
      @inspiraPaz หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      The main reason Musk is developing rocket tech is so he can capture asteroids and mine them for metals and minerals. Mars is the end goal but the process of developing the tech to get there is what is making him rich.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@inspiraPaz And I'd love to see it! :)
      ...I am a little curious what kind of tweets we'll be seeing as he does it though! Hahaha

  • @TairnKA
    @TairnKA หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    At 11:16; "Burning Bridges", a human idiom the instructor should have given the student credit for using.

    • @Sci-FiVault
      @Sci-FiVault  หลายเดือนก่อน

      True! that could have been fun. :)

  • @KingThor-p1m
    @KingThor-p1m หลายเดือนก่อน

    horrible