Hello everyone, I'm trying my best to answer all your queries in my comments, for any further queries, you may reach out through my social media handles : instagram.com/musingsbyhajra?igsh=MnY2NGFicDR6Zm5i Or twitter.com/MusingsbyHajra Moreover, I'll try to do one or two Instagram lives for 2024 applicants too. Good luck ❤
Thank you very much... Mera 1 question hai k aap ny sirf over view dia hai introduction ki heading k baad or udr thesis statement ki heading nai de bss waisy he likh dia hai tou thesis statement ki heading dena zarori hai ya miss kr dyn or wo kia aapki thesis statement hai
If u don't mind it ,ma'am I m ur big fan from Peshawar how to collect data for essay and from which websites ,books etc and how to link angles with others plz help and make a video on linking with different themes ,
bro i don't understand if you may clarify it would help these are almost three hundred words and fpsc is asking about 2500 to 3000 where are those paragraphs i can't see how it can fulfill the fpsc criteria
@@CSSwithDrHajra Mam ma css 2025 KY liay preparation kr raha ho tw mam AP koi English essay or English Precis ka session conduct kr rehien h online ya physical
Its not just outline, maybe you lacked or failed to justify your points effectivity in your essay. Or, you did some structure & language related mistakes.
Mam thanks for the explanation.I attempted the same topic but got just 28 marks.After watching this video I understand that most of the paragraphs were relevent.But failed due lack of case studies with strong justification and obviously Grammer.So try to reshape my essays strategies at all
I kindly disagree with you. The examniers of essay paper are not some stubborn ordinary people, but they have their education and career in literature. And, people from literature are more open to ideas irrespective of the ideas being conflicting to theirs. BTW, your work is really appreciating one, as running a channel is a headache.
I am from India preparing for civil services. We also have an essay paper... You can also see those essay papers. Its somewhat similar to these topics.
@@Wafahassan-tn7yw indian civil services essays are now inclined towards philosophical side rather than substantive or theme based essays. You can search upsc cse essays paper to see. Also you can see topper copies of VISION IAS to see the essays.
Maam, kindly clear this thing that are you talking about making all the arguments of the forward in a single paragraphs?our teachers told us that when you are making subpoint write a complete para on the sub heading of the main heading.
Maam jo headings k neechy likha hua hai blue se wo main material hai . Shuru se parhty aye hain k essays mai lengthy lengthy paragraphs hon . Kia esa nhi krna css mai?
as we know that we can only discuss one idea in a paragraph so how can one talk about cyber bullying and training programs for teacher in single paragraph, these are different ideas...?
sir kindly deputy chief administrative officer k bary me b video bana den syllabus tu pta hy kindly ye bta den k us k 2 papers hn wo dono sath hoty hn ya pahly first paper pas ho ga tu phr 2nd paper ho ga
Thank you for sharing Ma'am, how to write so many paragraphs within stipulated time ? Because i cannot write more than 12 paragraphs within in 3 hours. Please make a video on this or reply me here
Once in a classroom, Dr. Arif Javed sb. said that you need to make outline into phrasal format. The one you mentioned is paragraph-styled. Does it make the difference??
following outline is mine. " PATHWAYS TO PAKISTAN'S PROSPERITY" Outline Introduction 1.Democracy a. Political instability in Pakistan b. Real Democracy vs Authoritarian regime in Pakistan 2. Relationships with neighbor countries 3. Education a. Technical education b. IT and AI should be promoted c. To tarnish cramming and route learning system 4.To Avoid blind trust on political leaders a. Populism in politics b. Nationalism c. statesman is important rather than political leader for Pakistan's prosperity 5. Cpec 6. Brics 7. SIFC Conclusion. what would you say about it?
Madam please tell us if we don't know critical and convincing English can we write in simple way? You wrote in very tough way but our base is not strong enough
Hello everyone,
I'm trying my best to answer all your queries in my comments, for any further queries, you may reach out through my social media handles :
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Moreover, I'll try to do one or two Instagram lives for 2024 applicants too.
Good luck ❤
Which topics or themes should we cover for CSS 2024 essay's paper??
Thank you very much... Mera 1 question hai k aap ny sirf over view dia hai introduction ki heading k baad or udr thesis statement ki heading nai de bss waisy he likh dia hai tou thesis statement ki heading dena zarori hai ya miss kr dyn or wo kia aapki thesis statement hai
@@annieawan8272 not needed. Only write thesis statement at the end of your introduction
If u don't mind it ,ma'am I m ur big fan from Peshawar how to collect data for essay and from which websites ,books etc and how to link angles with others plz help and make a video on linking with different themes ,
@CSSwithDrHajra please share a video on body paragraph structuring thanks in advance
The only youtube channel where the teacher comes down to the student's level to make them understand, so her efforts are highly appreciable.
Thank you so much. That's one of the best videos I have ever watched on essay preparation and attempt.
I highly appreciate, thank you so much for your tip and tricks,
Thank you for disseminating such highly useful knowledge ❤🎉
Yes mam this is very helpful and informative video about the essay.
well explained maam and i personally noted my mistakes which I had done in special CSS ..make more informative videos like this
zabardast mam i had listened a long ago that b.a english is a beginner's level of css essay
it resembles with b.a english
thank you so much
Great mam for explaining outline
MashaAllah Worthful lecture
Dr sahiba, it's helped alot thank so much.
Thank you so much Madam your way of teaching is very nice.
Super informative and worth- watching beloved! ❤
Glad it was helpful!
M so glad that I found u❤
Thank you very much. Very helpful video
Which documents are required for css admission..
Please guide sir
Just one word Ma'am ,JAZAK ALLAH❤❤❤
Thank you so much sister🎉
great mam .....You split you essay in very effective and easy way
Soo much helpful mashallah! Allah bless you
Great and thank you
I ve attempted my essay today on this format. Alhamdulillah i am satisfied with it. JazakAllah Khair❤
Can uh tell me.where is the slybus of English essay
bro i don't understand if you may clarify it would help these are almost three hundred words and fpsc is asking about 2500 to 3000 where are those paragraphs i can't see how it can fulfill the fpsc criteria
@@sheikhokasiyaapa2752 It is only an outline not a full fledged essay.
Kindly mam shre this outline in documented form with us plz.
Mashallah, it was great
Well done mam..... First time all things in one vedio
Thanks a lot 😊
Mam I requested you to share your complete essay
Wonderful explained
Keep up the good work.
Thanks, will do!
I also watched videos of topper in essay but yours video is more effective & informative ✅🙏🏻
Thnku madam this will help alot
Ma'am thanks for your helpful tips. Please make a video on paragraph 😊
Excellent
Amazing mam bohat hi mext level ka ap na essay attempt karwaya h Jaza Ka Allah Mam
Thank you. Keep watching
@@CSSwithDrHajra Mam ma css 2025 KY liay preparation kr raha ho tw mam AP koi English essay or English Precis ka session conduct kr rehien h online ya physical
@@muhammadishfaqmustafa yes
@@CSSwithDrHajra Mam How can I contact you?
Superb
Great ma'am!!!
Ma'am how to build up own thoughts, and arguments?
Great sis❤
We cannot compare it with Indian civil services examination UPSC ..no comparison...upsc is one of the toughest exams in world.
Very helpful!
Glad it was helpful!
Million dollar lecture ❤
Thank you
Excellent ❤... you talked in detail and very realistic approach...seems like you are a student of Doctor arif javed .thanks
JazakAllah Mam ❤
I did it the same essay but secured 18marks.....it was my second attempt
Outstanding maam❤
🙏🏻
Very informative ma'am
Keep watching
Good suggestions mam
Thanks ...Ma'am kindly made a video on introduction writing with your sample example before 2025...please
thank you Mam!!
Assalamualaikum
My only concern is how to get the data for essays?
Like which is the resources, how diverse has to study?
You are methodology is most best
I wrote exactly the same outline but could score 32. You never know the true criteria of passing the essay. Practice could be the key.
Its not just outline, maybe you lacked or failed to justify your points effectivity in your essay. Or, you did some structure & language related mistakes.
Dear.essay ka slybus nhi hota kia
Jesy baqi subjects ka hota h?
Hay sis me b bahoot confused hu😢
@@AbdulRehman-kb2yr Perhaps, but the fact that I scored 32 alone shows that language must have been sound. The problem could’ve been in argumentation.
Mam thanks for the explanation.I attempted the same topic but got just 28 marks.After watching this video I understand that most of the paragraphs were relevent.But failed due lack of case studies with strong justification and obviously Grammer.So try to reshape my essays strategies at all
I kindly disagree with you. The examniers of essay paper are not some stubborn ordinary people, but they have their education and career in literature. And, people from literature are more open to ideas irrespective of the ideas being conflicting to theirs.
BTW, your work is really appreciating one, as running a channel is a headache.
Absolutely agree with you
Salam sir...
Please tell me which documents are required for css admission..
very informative
Great mam❤
Thank you mam❤
Maam I cant remember stats... i haven't even worked much on that..Thats haunting me...
please start proper lectures for 2025 attempt (ESSAY )
Can you show us a proper full solved essay? Everyone shows an outline but I'm a beginner so please show a full essay so I may have an idea
Appreciated 👍 Please may I have your outline in PDF?
Ma,am please introduction and thesis statement bhe show karen like outlines.
You wrote a very well-structured essay.
What was your score?
Please make a video on introductory paragraph
A.O.A MAM...examiner ny pakistan k perspective main essay ni pucha to kya hum itny case in point just pakistan k perspective main dy skty hain?
I am from India preparing for civil services. We also have an essay paper...
You can also see those essay papers.
Its somewhat similar to these topics.
Comparing CSS with UPSC is like comparing candle with sun.
Hi Ankit ,can u discuss with me India civil service essays ? I m Pakistani I want to know about it
@@Wafahassan-tn7yw indian civil services essays are now inclined towards philosophical side rather than substantive or theme based essays.
You can search upsc cse essays paper to see.
Also you can see topper copies of VISION IAS to see the essays.
Thanks a lot
Mam ,can you please tell us where you get statistics for reference?
Aoa mam ,mam conclusion k neechy page sy hi essay start krty ya next page py plz tell us❤
mam kindly provide an any full length written essay as i want to learn a number of things to learn please
Mam also please eassy ke bare me deatil videos bane kse , or kis trah different eassy ki prepration krni chye .
Maam, kindly clear this thing that are you talking about making all the arguments of the forward in a single paragraphs?our teachers told us that when you are making subpoint write a complete para on the sub heading of the main heading.
I am confused as well
Assalamualaikum mam.... Mam can u share complete essay please
please share another outline rather than the essay ( please share other than argumentative)
Mam we were learned that the topics and sub topics of the outline should be in phrases not in sentences, but you maked the headings too long.
Did remember references and case studies during exam?
Maam jo headings k neechy likha hua hai blue se wo main material hai . Shuru se parhty aye hain k essays mai lengthy lengthy paragraphs hon . Kia esa nhi krna css mai?
Please share any of your complete written essay.
Did you not refute the counterargument? And if you did, did you do it in the same paragraph as the counterargument?
this essay structure reminds me Sir Akhtar Nazir sb...
as we know that we can only discuss one idea in a paragraph so how can one talk about cyber bullying and training programs for teacher in single paragraph, these are different ideas...?
Thanks alot
Wonderful clarity ma'am... Stay blessed and happy 😊
sir kindly deputy chief administrative officer k bary me b video bana den
syllabus tu pta hy kindly ye bta den k us k 2 papers hn wo dono sath hoty hn ya pahly first paper pas ho ga tu phr 2nd paper ho ga
Dearest ma'am, introductory paragraph mein Kia Tariqa adopt Kia Jae and Kia Likha Jae us mein?
Pls share how and from which sources you collected these facts,case studies etc
plz make a video of full essay
Thank you! Found it very informative.Ma'am, is it necessary for a thesis statement to be written in an outline ?
Love from kupwara... Kashmir Jammu and Kashmir
I am preparing for Jammu and Kashmir state public services exam
My English is very weak .... kindly guide how to improve..
As I take alot of time to understand a question
Thank you for sharing
Ma'am, how to write so many paragraphs within stipulated time ?
Because i cannot write more than 12 paragraphs within in 3 hours.
Please make a video on this or reply me here
How to write the best thesis statement ??
maam aik or baat teacher kehte hai k main headings jo hoti hai k us mai questions nahe pochne hoti
Once in a classroom, Dr. Arif Javed sb. said that you need to make outline into phrasal format. The one you mentioned is paragraph-styled. Does it make the difference??
Could you please upload this outline here in description as a pdf form.
Thank you mam for such informative video. Mam which mentor or academy did u join for essay preparation?
Salam
Mene suna ha k recommendations me alag alag paragraph lkhne chaye 6 to 8, but apne kha aik hi me sab kch lkh do...
Ma'am hamen sikhaya gaya hai k argumentative essay mein wayforwards nahi dety. 😢 please clear kr den
Uper sentence main argument way forward main phraseMain yea imbalance ni hota?
How did you prepare for the essay?I mean from where have you collected the data
Mam plz pms crack Karny KY liyeee Roz ek lecture upload Kary all subjects
following outline is mine. " PATHWAYS TO PAKISTAN'S PROSPERITY" Outline Introduction 1.Democracy a. Political instability in Pakistan b. Real Democracy vs Authoritarian regime in Pakistan
2. Relationships with neighbor countries
3. Education
a. Technical education
b. IT and AI should be promoted c. To tarnish cramming and route learning system
4.To Avoid blind trust on political leaders
a. Populism in politics
b. Nationalism
c. statesman is important rather than political leader for Pakistan's prosperity
5. Cpec
6. Brics
7. SIFC
Conclusion.
what would you say about it?
Share your full Essay please
Madam please tell us if we don't know critical and convincing English can we write in simple way? You wrote in very tough way but our base is not strong enough
You've given counter argument but no refutation. How did you pass this?