Yes, definitely please make a part two there’s a lot of loose ends like say Angko being with Naruto and Kura since after all Naruto is part of the CRA, maybe even adding Makoto to the group of women to be with Naruto since she’s the head of the Jha clan also Naruto still has to finish getting the rest of his revenge on Fukaku for what he had done to Naruto also Naruto is supposed to be placed on a team who is he gonna be placed with and I’m not the only one but I’m sure everyone wants to see Ouma get mold by Naruto in one of his animal forms. Wally continues to try and get his way with Kur and eye, that would be totally hilarious and maybe somehow finding his mother and exacting his revenge on her or something else along those lines since we don’t know the full story about her maybe he already got his revenge on his mother or not we don’t know because Naruto never said anything about thatso right there there’s plenty of things for the author to take into consideration and making a part two there is one and hope it comes out soon 0:03
Oh yes, and I did also forget Naruto hasn’t gotten his inheritance from the Hokage yet so that he can move into his parents estate and so that the two girls can move in with him there by the two girls I mean, Kanine and Eno. I think it would be hilarious, if Asumah continues to try and hound Konai and he keeps going to her old place and never find her there and doesn’t even know that she’s even moved out and into Naruto‘s place with him along with that would be hilarious eventually might actually learn that she no longerI mean that neither girls actually are there anymore and it takes him a long time to find out where they’re at 0:02
Confused thought Itachi killed them all. So how they are alive. Why would emo duck boy would have revenge in his mind if they are alive. When hearing his brother name. Seem like 2 or 3 stories now as one.
I don't want anybody to take my comments wrong, I like this story and I'm not saying change anything. I mean, Naruto is an interesting bad a** in this. But these fan fiction authors need to stop butchering the story and then try to shoe horn all these alternate elements. OK Either you chopped the story up or you shoe horn in ideas. When you do both, it becomes forced. The story flow is messed up. They've aged them up yet again, which I've never seen a single story aged them up. Actually enhances the story. I've only seen them do it most of the time so they can add in adult elements like sex. But the thing is, this is a war world. The original author wanted to draw attention to child soldiers. That's one of the pillars of the dollar tour. Naruto stories, yet they jerk that out aging them up. Naruto does not live in the village so that's another part of the story chopped out and then tried to shoe horn this shape shifting stuff. It's too much you can't twist the story so much and it come out feeling like Naruto. That's all I want to say sorry if people take offense to it but. I don't mind a fan fiction author putting their own twist to the story. What I do mind is when like this story, It's butchered and then I try to shoehorn in elements that don't work.
Need a part 2 for this
Please please please please please please please please please please make a part 2
Yes, definitely please make a part two there’s a lot of loose ends like say Angko being with Naruto and Kura since after all Naruto is part of the CRA, maybe even adding Makoto to the group of women to be with Naruto since she’s the head of the Jha clan also Naruto still has to finish getting the rest of his revenge on Fukaku for what he had done to Naruto also Naruto is supposed to be placed on a team who is he gonna be placed with and I’m not the only one but I’m sure everyone wants to see Ouma get mold by Naruto in one of his animal forms. Wally continues to try and get his way with Kur and eye, that would be totally hilarious and maybe somehow finding his mother and exacting his revenge on her or something else along those lines since we don’t know the full story about her maybe he already got his revenge on his mother or not we don’t know because Naruto never said anything about thatso right there there’s plenty of things for the author to take into consideration and making a part two there is one and hope it comes out soon 0:03
Yes more parts please this is a good story thank u for putting it up
Love the episode need part to please💚💚💚
Make more plz
Oh yes, and I did also forget Naruto hasn’t gotten his inheritance from the Hokage yet so that he can move into his parents estate and so that the two girls can move in with him there by the two girls I mean, Kanine and Eno. I think it would be hilarious, if Asumah continues to try and hound Konai and he keeps going to her old place and never find her there and doesn’t even know that she’s even moved out and into Naruto‘s place with him along with that would be hilarious eventually might actually learn that she no longerI mean that neither girls actually are there anymore and it takes him a long time to find out where they’re at 0:02
More parts, please 🙏
Part two please
Name of this fanfiction story please?
Part 2 please.
Can we get part 2 please please please please please please please please please please 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙🥺🥺🥺 please
Confused thought Itachi killed them all. So how they are alive. Why would emo duck boy would have revenge in his mind if they are alive. When hearing his brother name. Seem like 2 or 3 stories now as one.
I don't want anybody to take my comments wrong, I like this story and I'm not saying change anything. I mean, Naruto is an interesting bad a** in this. But these fan fiction authors need to stop butchering the story and then try to shoe horn all these alternate elements. OK Either you chopped the story up or you shoe horn in ideas. When you do both, it becomes forced. The story flow is messed up. They've aged them up yet again, which I've never seen a single story aged them up. Actually enhances the story. I've only seen them do it most of the time so they can add in adult elements like sex. But the thing is, this is a war world. The original author wanted to draw attention to child soldiers. That's one of the pillars of the dollar tour. Naruto stories, yet they jerk that out aging them up. Naruto does not live in the village so that's another part of the story chopped out and then tried to shoe horn this shape shifting stuff. It's too much you can't twist the story so much and it come out feeling like Naruto. That's all I want to say sorry if people take offense to it but. I don't mind a fan fiction author putting their own twist to the story. What I do mind is when like this story, It's butchered and then I try to shoehorn in elements that don't work.
What the hell is happening here
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