I ended up not watching this video, but if a bit of constructive criticism is acceptable by you then here it is. The reason why I didn't continue to read your ff is coz of your voice over. I found it very difficult to read the story while listening to your voice. It's obvious that English isn't your first language, and although you gave it a good go, your accent is what I couldn't listen to. Please don't think that I'm trying to be unkind to you, coz that's the last thing I want to do. I admire your will in writing a story in the first place. But you have a high pitched voice and I found the words hard to follow. A lot of the ff that I've come across doesn't have voice over at all and they just let the readers read what's on the screen. Also, coz of your accent and how terrible the English language can be, for me your words seem to run into each other. I reckon you would be better off just writing your story and posting the video with just words, no voice. Trying to understand what you're saying while reading it as well can be pretty difficult and that's what I found. Other than that I wish you all the best with your story writing. Cheers and borahae 😀🥰😇😜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
If you're not satisfied with my voice over then you can simply mute it But i can't stop doing voice over, it's really important for me Also my Voice is not high pitched, i edit my real voice by lowering it's pitch I didn't mind at all if you think so BORAHAE 💜💜💜
It's a little short today 😅....
I always mixed YN with ROBIN... ignore it plz....
What should we do with Mina ?? She should be punished right? 😅
It's too good ❤, amazing, love it. Continue this series, every line was so lovable 🤍
❤️💜✨ Thankuuu
I AM LITTERLY SCREAMING❤
Why 🥲😲
😮 Cause it is good ehh!
@@jorasingh5851 Thank you so much 💜❤️
I was screaming to you to make this part and now i am late 😂
Yeah i was thinking
Someone's comment is missing huh 😂
Who is always first
@@bunny22708 yeah 🤣
I ended up not watching this video, but if a bit of constructive criticism is acceptable by you then here it is. The reason why I didn't continue to read your ff is coz of your voice over. I found it very difficult to read the story while listening to your voice. It's obvious that English isn't your first language, and although you gave it a good go, your accent is what I couldn't listen to. Please don't think that I'm trying to be unkind to you, coz that's the last thing I want to do. I admire your will in writing a story in the first place. But you have a high pitched voice and I found the words hard to follow. A lot of the ff that I've come across doesn't have voice over at all and they just let the readers read what's on the screen. Also, coz of your accent and how terrible the English language can be, for me your words seem to run into each other. I reckon you would be better off just writing your story and posting the video with just words, no voice. Trying to understand what you're saying while reading it as well can be pretty difficult and that's what I found. Other than that I wish you all the best with your story writing. Cheers and borahae 😀🥰😇😜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
If you're not satisfied with my voice over then you can simply mute it
But i can't stop doing voice over, it's really important for me
Also my Voice is not high pitched, i edit my real voice by lowering it's pitch
I didn't mind at all if you think so
BORAHAE 💜💜💜