“Why did you leave me, human” The alien woman followed me to Earth.

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 23 ธ.ค. 2024

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  • @alanrahko8406
    @alanrahko8406 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    The descriptions in this story are wonderful. Best I have heard. They keep coming, too! You should keep this up, seriously. Thank you so much!

  • @CryptidsRoost
    @CryptidsRoost 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    This definitely needs a continuation. Part two please...

  • @rickharms1
    @rickharms1 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Why is Cathlet being tested? I have been reading SF for 65 (I am 75) years. I have fine tuned my seeing flaws. I see many flaws here.

    • @oldnick4707
      @oldnick4707 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      These TH-cam short stories very rarely stand up to the even slightest bit of scrutiny I'm afraid. A welcome surprise is the rare one, now and again, that does. 😊

  • @RichardBishell-Wells
    @RichardBishell-Wells 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Sad you think it needs so many quibs

  • @rickharms1
    @rickharms1 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

    The sarcasm gets boring, in the way of the story.

    • @user-he6nj1zv9f
      @user-he6nj1zv9f 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Yes it does, another boss babe and sarcastic simp story

    • @vh7642
      @vh7642 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      You need to lay off the sarcasm in these stories a bit. The stories and the storylines are great but you're really dragging it down by overdoing the sarcasm and the jokey jokey earthling thing...

  • @JohnGemhunterDX
    @JohnGemhunterDX 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    The sarcasm is over done and the story gets a grade of incomplete as my only reaction is a raised eyebrow and a sharp pain in my right side temple...Just sayin'

  • @joeszalay2052
    @joeszalay2052 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    What no kiss

  • @edmanning8545
    @edmanning8545 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    martin is annoying...his sarcasm is over used....he comes off as a jerk.

  • @rickharms1
    @rickharms1 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Was Martin human or alien? Does not make sense.👎

  • @jamesogden7756
    @jamesogden7756 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Well, keep trying. Eventually, you might have a decent story.
    This wasn't it. 😢

  • @WayneMcNab
    @WayneMcNab 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Good story, but I am getting really tired of the over worked sarcasm in a lot of these stories. It is way over done. The occasional comment OK, it adds humour, but this guy wants answers and he can open his sarcastic mouth without a snide remark to the answers for EVERY question he wants answers to. I feel like saying STFU and listen!