Like the story excellent work I was scrolling around while listening to the story and came across several other stories that had similar female character signs are they this part of the same storyline if so, combine all of the story into one playlist or one video I recommendation good work thank you
You need to lay off the sarcasm in these stories a bit. The stories and the storylines are great but you're really dragging it down by overdoing the sarcasm and the jokey jokey earthling thing...
These TH-cam short stories very rarely stand up to the even slightest bit of scrutiny I'm afraid. A welcome surprise is the rare one, now and again, that does. 😊
The sarcasm is over done and the story gets a grade of incomplete as my only reaction is a raised eyebrow and a sharp pain in my right side temple...Just sayin'
Good story, but I am getting really tired of the over worked sarcasm in a lot of these stories. It is way over done. The occasional comment OK, it adds humour, but this guy wants answers and he can open his sarcastic mouth without a snide remark to the answers for EVERY question he wants answers to. I feel like saying STFU and listen!
The descriptions in this story are wonderful. Best I have heard. They keep coming, too! You should keep this up, seriously. Thank you so much!
This definitely needs a continuation. Part two please...
Like the story excellent work I was scrolling around while listening to the story and came across several other stories that had similar female character signs are they this part of the same storyline if so, combine all of the story into one playlist or one video I recommendation good work thank you
Thank you very much.
The sarcasm gets boring, in the way of the story.
Yes it does, another boss babe and sarcastic simp story
You need to lay off the sarcasm in these stories a bit. The stories and the storylines are great but you're really dragging it down by overdoing the sarcasm and the jokey jokey earthling thing...
Why is Cathlet being tested? I have been reading SF for 65 (I am 75) years. I have fine tuned my seeing flaws. I see many flaws here.
These TH-cam short stories very rarely stand up to the even slightest bit of scrutiny I'm afraid. A welcome surprise is the rare one, now and again, that does. 😊
Sad you think it needs so many quibs
What no kiss
The sarcasm is over done and the story gets a grade of incomplete as my only reaction is a raised eyebrow and a sharp pain in my right side temple...Just sayin'
martin is annoying...his sarcasm is over used....he comes off as a jerk.
Was Martin human or alien? Does not make sense.👎
Good story, but I am getting really tired of the over worked sarcasm in a lot of these stories. It is way over done. The occasional comment OK, it adds humour, but this guy wants answers and he can open his sarcastic mouth without a snide remark to the answers for EVERY question he wants answers to. I feel like saying STFU and listen!
It is tiring.
Well, keep trying. Eventually, you might have a decent story.
This wasn't it. 😢