The concept you tried to portray was a good one, but when it comes to screenplay it’s not impactful. You have briefly specified one’s endeavour were you just tried to tell what it was, it just felt like promo advertisements were they play before the movie starts in India. You mentioned it’s a short film the maximum duration can go up to 40 minutes, so next time whatever the concept you had try to make a detailed script and screenplay that will make it more impactful, this concept is not suitable for a film within 10mins. So understand the concept and make a research whether you can bring it to the time with its detailed screenplay and impact it carries out. Other than that it’s a good one for a rookie, can understand you and congrats for that👏🏼Also try to make some improvements on your acting skill also try to increase the audio quality. Hope you understood. All the best for your future endeavours!
![SAFEPLANET - ดาวเคราะห์ [ THE PLANET ]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/4X1XL3I_k3c/mqdefault.jpg)
Death is not end nu sonnathu nalla irunthuchu...👍 Really super 🎉
Tq bro ❣️
Super Maple 💖💥💥
✨✨✨
Nice one ra
Tq bro❣️❣️
🔥
❣️
Vera level uh bro🎉
❣️
💥💥
Tq maapla
Deii mapla na than da sollaa ponaa TQ sollanuu 🤗
Maathi maathi sollikuvom
Super bro ❤️
Tq ❣️❣️❣️
Super Anna 👍
Tq thambi
❤❤
❣️
அது எப்படிடா ஃப்ரைட் ரைஸ் கடையில டீ இருக்கு 😜😜
அங்க எல்லாமே இருக்கு. வாங்க ஒரு நாள் போலம்... பக்கம் தான்... 😂
ஸ்விட்ச் பாக்ஸ் ல ஸ்விட்ச் ஆன் பண்ணல 😜
Charge eey connect panala, C-type mobile kku USB micro charge potta first kumbal naambaaa than 😂
The concept you tried to portray was a good one, but when it comes to screenplay it’s not impactful. You have briefly specified one’s endeavour were you just tried to tell what it was, it just felt like promo advertisements were they play before the movie starts in India. You mentioned it’s a short film the maximum duration can go up to 40 minutes, so next time whatever the concept you had try to make a detailed script and screenplay that will make it more impactful, this concept is not suitable for a film within 10mins. So understand the concept and make a research whether you can bring it to the time with its detailed screenplay and impact it carries out. Other than that it’s a good one for a rookie, can understand you and congrats for that👏🏼Also try to make some improvements on your acting skill also try to increase the audio quality. Hope you understood. All the best for your future endeavours!
Tq for this comment, Nxt we will try that you mentioned here...
No one can speak about this lags... Tq for that also❣️