Oh man, the story was just getting started but the guy had to cancel it :/ I guess it's his choice as the writer, but that's like making a really tasty pizza and then throwing it in a trash can.
Trunks is smart enough to realize that. he would teach goku and maybe gohan super saiyan maybe vegeta if somehow he revelaed to getes that he is his son, and turns him good.
Exactly with Piccolo still alive and their friends dead they can just use the Earth Dragonballs. Also to who said giving Vegeta the strength of a Super Saiyan before he gets "reborn" in a sense is dangerous. I think the animosity of learning Freiza was the one who killed the Saiyan's (from Cui on Namek I believe) turns him from his original path and that on his death bed he passes the torch to fellow Saiyan Kakarot to avenge their people are 2 BIG required moments to set the future back on track
Why would you think that? Fanfics that are in English are written by people in the West who would have nothing to do with the production of an anime in Japan.
Fanfics in general aren't the problem, I myself read constantly checking for fanfics, (only find written one's not really fan mangas) and in general people can do pretty good stories... of course when you come across them, in recent years these fanfics are dying breeds Too many immature and down right terrible people write bad fics, because either it's yaoi (got nothing against gays, but it just makes no fucking sense in DB) forced romantic ( which again DB is definetly not cut out for) which gives very weird pairings for no fucking reason. or the most common, characters are OOC ..And because of people like these are the reason fanfic is shall we say not viewed really positivily, not to mention when because of people like these the author loses all interest in either making OR to continue his fic. One of my favourite fanfic which was written VERY nicely, Second chance (Bardock fic) was written very nicely, 98% everyone was in character, but it was stopped because the author lost interest because of the many way too similiar and downright autistic fics.
@Allen Silva Not necessarily. It's multiverse theory so technically Future Trunks would live. But there's the possibility that the original Trunks of that timeline would not exist.
it wouldnt have been too hard to write it so that the original ending happens; as in a dead nappa, a messed up vegeta getting away and vowing revenge, and the dead z fighters getting resurrected with the namek dragon balls.the only difference is krillian. which could be solved with a trip to namek to use the dragonballs there. you could have mr popo do the exposition, like he heard the guardian talking about how the balls there can bring people back many times, but the guardian thought it wasnt right, so didnt include that in his dragonballs. granted, you would have to have a mid level fighter like tien or yamcha go with bulma and gohan to namek, but no big deal. i think yamcha, bulma, and gohan travelling to namek could be a fun adventure. maybe toss in some sexy space pirate to flirt with yamcha and make bulma jealous as a filler could go well.
DR. SAVAGE during that time period she was still on and off with yamcha. iirc, she went to namek because he was a baseball star and getting lots of girls, so she left to forget about him.
Why would he want the same ending to happen? Since we already know that the timeline he enters splits off from his timeline, it doesn't really matter what he does. The differences are why this fanfiction would be interesting.
I know a well-written fanfic about Trunks accidentally going too far back in time. Except he goes way back, to the time where Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz still cleared planets for Freeza. I know it's not precisely the same, but it's the same idea. It's called Point of No Return by niteryde and can be found here if you're interested: www.fanfiction.net/s/5785965/1/Point-of-No-Return
Trunks: I need to talk to you Goku: about what?! Trunks: what year is it.. Goku: two thousand two hundred and twenty-two Trunk: BC or AD?? Goku: the hell who knows?
well anything with different scenarios is gonna resemble xenoverse. but because xenoverse has no the monopoly of it nor is the source of it. it doesn't matter.
I think it's less about time itself and more about interfering with events. For example, because of Trunks interference Piccolo lived but Krillin died. Now they have no reason to go to Namek, which likely means Goku won't become a super saiyan, which in turn means even with an extra two years advance warning he's likely screwed when the androids show up, not to mention Babidi and Buu.
kyuubinaruto17 You forget, krillin already died once. Meaning, he could not be wished back by the earth's dragon balls at that time. I think that'd be a reason to go to namek.
EXCEPT that KRILLIN was the one who suggested going to Namek. He was the one who pieced together that there may be more dragonballs on Kami's home planet. No Krillin means he doesn't even know Namek exists. Considering how Trunks was trying to ignore Vegeta completely just to spill the info and book it that brings up the possibility he never would have gone to Namek because he was never aware of the possibility.
Well that's no surprise, the bar is set pretty low when it comes to super. And capable fans that are interested in the series have often more background knowledge and creative ideas at their disposal that might even fit better than what the official writers would come up. They might even be able to close up plotholes that existed before with clever writing. Take Team Four Star, for example.
I'm pretty sure somebody who's inspire by the lore will make something better because they are boosted. "OmG, i'm helping on darksouls, omg i got so many shit going on my head to bring forth a lore for the dark age. I want to make everyone's brain explode, i'm gonna make the world cry they're eyeballs out." Get my drift?
I want to start of by saying that I am not yet a subscriber from this channel, this showed up in my recommendation, and if The writer is watching this video and even reading this comment. I think you already have an entire fan base behind you. And I think you should continue it before someone else takes your idea and finishes it in a way that you didn't want it to. You have great talent and I'd hate for that to be ruined by someone else!!!
Since this was posted on deviantart I can see why the creator cancelled it. A lot of fan made manga don't get too far thanks to people that inform the original creators. Since the creator of this was using images from Dragon Ball Z I can assume that it was stopped so that the creator wouldn't get any possible legal action taken against them. Or maybe they really got tired of making it who know. It was good though, Trunks could've ended the fight in 10 seconds.
webdesigner18 So long as he wasn't selling it the IP holders can't really do much. Nonprofit noncommercial fan art lawsuits don't have a leg to stand on in court. You can't prove any damages, the artist isn't profiting off your IP without license, they aren't claiming to be producing legitimate works so claims of brand damage are laughably weak at best, and something this transformative would get an easy Fair Use ruling. IP holders hurt themselves more by trying to suppress nonprofit fan projects (regardless of success or failure) than leaving them be ever could. Smart IP holders find the best ones and hire the creators/buy the creators' work and publish it as canon, or at least promote it for good publicity and exposure.
trunks turn ssj and cuts off Vegeta's left leg but allows him to live. Goku gets angry at trunks for interrupting the fight. trunks smacks some sense into him and forces him to hear what he has to say. piccolo isn't sure if trunks is good or bad but sees him smacking Goku around. so he does a sneak attack special beam Cannon and kills trunks.
I'm doing this shit with Broly. gonna turn his ass into a good guy and have him filing office reports and documents getting angry because the Ferguson account wasn't finished in time to close the deal. Then, he goes outside to see he's gotten a parking ticket. But he doesn't lose his shit because he smokes Dragon kush and it evens him out.
With stories like this, it's exceptionally easy to write yourself into a corner. What's more, when you get to that point, you can easily loose motivation when you realize the block you wind up putting up as a result is impossible to come down.
if you're a true fan, as the story was being read you could already link up the chain reactions Trunks arrival had caused. After Krillens death it had me going oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck!!! cause that meant Krillen would not be going to namek, meaning, Goku wouldn't have the right trigger for a Super Saiyan transformation.. Frieza would have probably took over namek and got the dragon Balls without anyone interfering and would have become immortal. Majin Buu would have woke up eventually and destroyed everyone on earth. Beerus would have woke up and destroyed Frieza for being a Tyrant of the Universe. Omni King would have caught wind that this universe was evil and filled with disaster and would have wiped out the entire original timeline 😐 Thanks Trunks
they needed to...well technically trunks needed to go, since he needed to correct the damage that he cause, and he got krillin killed but cannot be revive with the current dragonball on earth because of the 1 death only, until dendi fix it, the namek dragon can revive a person regardless of how many times they die
It's also worth noting that the creator could not make money off of this and creating something like this entirely by yourself takes a LOT of time and can make you feel dissatisfied to be doing it completely for free. It's why I'm glad the crew at TFS have things they do outside of DBZA that are apart of their channel to help them gain revenue since DBZA itself is unable to.
Yeah... it probably was a money/passion problem.. I'm sure people would support him/her if a gofundme was started though.. I know I'd chip in a couple bucks to see more.
Oh indeed there would be ways to making money on this. TH-cam streaming with superchat as he/she draws some of the pages of manga. Or even Twitch donations. Stuff like that would work.
The creator has said that she has lost all motivation and will never finish wrong time. That she forced herself to work on it at the end, and that she has lost interest in all things Dragon Ball related. It's a little too late for that, but damn, makes you wonder what the hell happened.
@Freecia Patreon might be a way around that. Directly making money off it is a slippery slope, but there are a plethora of fans of one medium providing content for their followers.
It took both Piccolo and Krillin dying in succession after the failure of the spirit when Goku was drained of ki to do it, without Krillin in the equation, I don't think it would be possible, unless Gohan was to be killed in his place under the same circumstances. A catalyst is essential to spark the transformation.
Yeah man the story was pretty interesting and it sucks that he didnt continued that story......... Btw thanks for all the information you give us about dbs
TECH KING Yeah logically trunks would immediately leave so he wouldn't screw up the timeline. Hell being that early he might have prevented his own birth in that timeline.
Or he would have simply waited until after the Saiyan Saga fight to visit Goku in the hospital in the middle of the night past visiting hours like a ghost. After all his main concern was little change to the timeline as possible besides getting rid of the Androids.
What the... that story was going so WELL! such a MAJOR cliffhanger, trunks probably could have gone super to stop both Goku and Vegeta in one second and listen to what he had to say!
What happens next is Trunks knocks out Vegeta, Nappa retreats back to the base carrying knocked out Vegeta at his side saying "You will regret this!!" in fear and anger. So now upon returning to base Nappa reports to Frieza to let know what happened. Frieza then side swipes Vegeta out of the picture and sends Genyu Force directly to Earth instead. So now Trunks has limited time to teach Goku SSJ before Genyu and Frieza arrives to Earth.
cool story! i especially liked the part where trunks was tanking their beams like it was nothing, he showed his level there where he can whoop anyone in that timeline goku included
Man, this was really interesting.. i wish the story ended. [Plot Twist] Black Goku Appears from the Sky using the time ring.. and so does Future Trunks from this Saga. Future trunks then fuses with Goku in order to combine super sayian form with Kaioken technique, & they woop Black Goku and Vegeta sees a glimpse of Trunks' Super Saiyan form, and turns good realizing his half-human son is a legendary super saiyan.
Tesfaye Williams it's in character though, trunks killed freiza and king cold because he thought his presence had inadvertently changed the time line, not knowing that Goku had the instant transmission technic. This trunks has yet to learn from that mistake.
You can tell he really wasn't motivated to finish this. It was very basic. Also if Goku was nearly dead and got a Senzu bean he would have had a Zenkai boost and the fight with Vegeta would not have played out as in nearly the same fashion. Lets not forget though Vegeta was ruthless in the early days his pride is extremely important. His character really wouldn't just sneak attack and kill a child. Good thing he stopped writing it cause it was shitty.
It did take x4 Kaioken to beat Vegeta in their first fight, when in this one he only goes x2 (as far as I know). Vegeta absolutely would kill a child. He even tried to on Namek in DBZ.
~He can kill Frieza and King Cold just like in original timeline ~He can kill infant Cell way before he grow ~I am pretty sure when Majin Buu Saga happen,the story *more or less* gonna be same like in Dragon Ball Super where he killed Babidi and Dabura So yeah pretty much he's the stronger in that *what if timeline* not universe ... You forgot Beerus and Whis exist which they're far stronger then Future Trunks ...
This wasn't no small project, and the creator realized this and got overwhelmed, and just lost motivation he wasn't happy doing it anymore. Why continue a fan-manga if you don't want to anymore?
How can future trunks go to the Saiyan saga past and see Vegeta if he wasn't born yet? I don't understand trunks timeline it's very confusing.. Vegeta didn't pound bulmas tuna yet!
Green Dude multiverse theory every time someone go's back in time they create an new dimension so any changes in the past won't affect your timeline it's the same reason why when trunks went back to his time the androids were still there
If trunks went too early, he'd look at the clock in the time machine, realize he's too early, and go back to correct date without anyone even noticing.
Do a fanfic and make ur own story u present the given Manga pretty good I enjoyed it and I think u could tell ur own story as well I'll sub in hopes of a part 2
Oh man, the story was just getting started but the guy had to cancel it :/
I guess it's his choice as the writer, but that's like making a really tasty pizza and then throwing it in a trash can.
i know right? i was enjoying it untill the creator pulls out his dick to -slap us all in the face.. :'(
DBZ Macky this is such a great analogy! Lol i was looking forward the how it would end like a delicious pizza. Someone should finish this story👌🏻
it was actually getting interesting...sucks...but what can you do? XD
DBZ Macky fr he barely wrote a couple pages
Elephant Rider155 thats not even far into the story tho ?
Sad all these good fanmangas come to an end so suddenly.
yeah I would've wanted to hear the story
Metzue so true
Metzue usually happens with a lot of fanmade projects that succeed in certain fanbases.
Dragonball Multiverse
Metzue sometimes people get overwhelmed with their project, and lose motivation to continue.
the most important part about this story is.....
- they have no reason to go to namek
- goku doesnt become a super saiyan unless trunks teaches him
Trunks will tell him that he needs to use that tingly feeling in his back
Trunks is smart enough to realize that. he would teach goku and maybe gohan super saiyan maybe vegeta if somehow he revelaed to getes that he is his son, and turns him good.
They have a reason. He can tell Goku that Namekian's balls can ressurect anyone multiple times not like earth's one.
I'd love the irony. Trunks teaching Gohan what Gohan failed to teach Trunks (well, until he died)
Exactly with Piccolo still alive and their friends dead they can just use the Earth Dragonballs. Also to who said giving Vegeta the strength of a Super Saiyan before he gets "reborn" in a sense is dangerous. I think the animosity of learning Freiza was the one who killed the Saiyan's (from Cui on Namek I believe) turns him from his original path and that on his death bed he passes the torch to fellow Saiyan Kakarot to avenge their people are 2 BIG required moments to set the future back on track
Technically, the only person that Vegeta actually killed while on Earth was Nappa.
Isaac Nsiah not true
nowonmetube Kinda is true Nappa did mostly all of the killing.
@@landendrake1696 On Vegetas orders so Vegeta is still indirectly responsible.
wow losing motivation when the best part starts ...
Especially when no one supports you and you see shit like "i hate fanfics and blahblahblah".
Of course he'd lose motivation
Most fanfics don't happen to be as good as his. Most end up being "What if Goku fucked Krillin in the ass."
Carlos Danger that's only as much as you know.
There are fanfics out there that don't cater to ass-fucking.
@@brannix7417 Anybody would tbh. Which is why I stopped sharing my stuff.
i normally hate fan stories but this was actually interesting. wish hed keep going....
Why would you think that? Fanfics that are in English are written by people in the West who would have nothing to do with the production of an anime in Japan.
Fanfics in general aren't the problem, I myself read constantly checking for fanfics, (only find written one's not really fan mangas) and in general people can do pretty good stories... of course when you come across them, in recent years these fanfics are dying breeds
Too many immature and down right terrible people write bad fics, because either it's yaoi (got nothing against gays, but it just makes no fucking sense in DB) forced romantic ( which again DB is definetly not cut out for) which gives very weird pairings for no fucking reason. or the most common, characters are OOC
..And because of people like these are the reason fanfic is shall we say not viewed really positivily, not to mention when because of people like these the author loses all interest in either making OR to continue his fic.
One of my favourite fanfic which was written VERY nicely, Second chance (Bardock fic) was written very nicely, 98% everyone was in character, but it was stopped because the author lost interest because of the many way too similiar and downright autistic fics.
PhaseGamer the only one that I wanted to here
Kev_The_Tryhard a
@Allen Silva Not necessarily. It's multiverse theory so technically Future Trunks would live. But there's the possibility that the original Trunks of that timeline would not exist.
he didn't continue? wtf! this was some good shit
Elephant, fucking shut up. He's not even a hater of the writer. He complemented him, don't go in just randomly insulting people you degenerate.
Elephant Rider155 So a positive comment means he's crapping on the manga?
Elephant you have horrible reading skills if you can't recognize the complement.
The ending is obvious trunks vaporizes Vegeta
I guess.
well this is going to be a never ending cliff hanger
NEXT TIME ON DRAGON BALL Z LOST TI-
Oh wait :(
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Half-Sayan 3
this is really interesting
BRO HOW DO YOU JUST "LOSE MOTIVATION" FOR SOMETHING AS GREAT AS THIS
I think the creator wanted to make everyone mad
That can be said about both creators. lol
I did`t think about that
Oops I ment didn`t
meant*
Mike Larry I'm going to finish the story and say I did all the work just to make him mad
Vegeta didn't kill anyone, Nappa did! 😂
Vegeta only butt fucked Nappa with a giant blast.
Abhilash Kr. How about Vegeta Jr?
Game Derps only to be haunted by ghost Nappa lol
Haha, I love tfs.
so in a way vegeta was the actual good guy that day. got rid of the real threat
Nappa: Vegeta! Wat does the scouter say about his power level?!?!
Vegeta: I-I-I-Impossible!!!!
Larry S it's... 5
The biggest problem is changing one event creates too many possibilities to the next, which is why the creator couldn't continue.
Hit he just focus on one outcome rather than all of them
it wouldnt have been too hard to write it so that the original ending happens; as in a dead nappa, a messed up vegeta getting away and vowing revenge, and the dead z fighters getting resurrected with the namek dragon balls.the only difference is krillian. which could be solved with a trip to namek to use the dragonballs there. you could have mr popo do the exposition, like he heard the guardian talking about how the balls there can bring people back many times, but the guardian thought it wasnt right, so didnt include that in his dragonballs. granted, you would have to have a mid level fighter like tien or yamcha go with bulma and gohan to namek, but no big deal. i think yamcha, bulma, and gohan travelling to namek could be a fun adventure. maybe toss in some sexy space pirate to flirt with yamcha and make bulma jealous as a filler could go well.
why would bulma get jealous? she doesnt like yamcha....
DR. SAVAGE during that time period she was still on and off with yamcha.
iirc, she went to namek because he was a baseball star and getting lots of girls, so she left to forget about him.
Why would he want the same ending to happen? Since we already know that the timeline he enters splits off from his timeline, it doesn't really matter what he does. The differences are why this fanfiction would be interesting.
I know a well-written fanfic about Trunks accidentally going too far back in time. Except he goes way back, to the time where Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz still cleared planets for Freeza. I know it's not precisely the same, but it's the same idea. It's called Point of No Return by niteryde and can be found here if you're interested: www.fanfiction.net/s/5785965/1/Point-of-No-Return
OMG, it's Guy Dude i just finished it and oh man it's damn good it should get animated or something .
You earned a sub bro. Keep up the good work.
pass vegeta: impossible I have a son, there's no female sayians left unless I uggggggggggggggggggh
Trunks: I need to talk to you
Goku: about what?!
Trunks: what year is it..
Goku: two thousand two hundred and twenty-two
Trunk: BC or AD??
Goku: the hell who knows?
Trunks: I travelled into the fucking past.
(Goes apeshit crazy and achieves SSJ3)
They should make that a Dragonball Z movie for old times sake. It would be kinda dope
Discontinued? OH COME ON, THIS WAS FREAKING AWESOME!
this just xenoverse with extra steps
Scott Boyd you mean Xenoverse 2?
The Actor Plays xenoverse 2 is basically xenoverse
well anything with different scenarios is gonna resemble xenoverse. but because xenoverse has no the monopoly of it nor is the source of it. it doesn't matter.
Scott Boyd ooh la la, someone's going to get laid in college.
lmao plot for xenoverse 3 ( now in reality it wouldn't happen what with the main villains being dead and all)
That's a nice change of pace. I never considered this scenario. I've gotta check out that manga.
why was trunks so impatient? he was 2 years early!
I think it's less about time itself and more about interfering with events. For example, because of Trunks interference Piccolo lived but Krillin died. Now they have no reason to go to Namek, which likely means Goku won't become a super saiyan, which in turn means even with an extra two years advance warning he's likely screwed when the androids show up, not to mention Babidi and Buu.
kyuubinaruto17 You forget, krillin already died once. Meaning, he could not be wished back by the earth's dragon balls at that time. I think that'd be a reason to go to namek.
EXCEPT that KRILLIN was the one who suggested going to Namek. He was the one who pieced together that there may be more dragonballs on Kami's home planet. No Krillin means he doesn't even know Namek exists. Considering how Trunks was trying to ignore Vegeta completely just to spill the info and book it that brings up the possibility he never would have gone to Namek because he was never aware of the possibility.
kami being alive, more than likely would know about the dragonballs on his home planet so that would be the gate way to namek.
It could be, not necessarily would be. It's not like Kami ever brought it up before.
NO DO NOT STOP THE SERIES!!!! THIS SERIES IS AWESOME!!!!
When fan magas start becoming better than super lmao
Wounded Guy damn
The Super manga is actually pretty damn good and better than the anime.
Well that's no surprise, the bar is set pretty low when it comes to super.
And capable fans that are interested in the series have often more background knowledge and creative ideas at their disposal that might even fit better than what the official writers would come up.
They might even be able to close up plotholes that existed before with clever writing.
Take Team Four Star, for example.
I'm pretty sure somebody who's inspire by the lore will make something better because they are boosted.
"OmG, i'm helping on darksouls, omg i got so many shit going on my head to bring forth a lore for the dark age. I want to make everyone's brain explode, i'm gonna make the world cry they're eyeballs out."
Get my drift?
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Chunks? :D Good video btw! :)
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Holy hell. This is actually very interesting. I actually like this. Someone please keep this going.
It's funny because Vegeta really didn't kill any of them
I want to start of by saying that I am not yet a subscriber from this channel, this showed up in my recommendation, and if The writer is watching this video and even reading this comment. I think you already have an entire fan base behind you. And I think you should continue it before someone else takes your idea and finishes it in a way that you didn't want it to. You have great talent and I'd hate for that to be ruined by someone else!!!
Since this was posted on deviantart I can see why the creator cancelled it. A lot of fan made manga don't get too far thanks to people that inform the original creators. Since the creator of this was using images from Dragon Ball Z I can assume that it was stopped so that the creator wouldn't get any possible legal action taken against them.
Or maybe they really got tired of making it who know. It was good though, Trunks could've ended the fight in 10 seconds.
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So long as he wasn't selling it the IP holders can't really do much. Nonprofit noncommercial fan art lawsuits don't have a leg to stand on in court. You can't prove any damages, the artist isn't profiting off your IP without license, they aren't claiming to be producing legitimate works so claims of brand damage are laughably weak at best, and something this transformative would get an easy Fair Use ruling. IP holders hurt themselves more by trying to suppress nonprofit fan projects (regardless of success or failure) than leaving them be ever could. Smart IP holders find the best ones and hire the creators/buy the creators' work and publish it as canon, or at least promote it for good publicity and exposure.
it sucks that it was stopped early, this sounded epic!
I think i will continue his work hmm..🤔 It would be a waste if this wont continue.
You MUST! continue it i wanna see how awesome it would be lol
Iron Dante this dude has dutch minecraft videos in his favorites i doubt he made it
God damn it...... why can't a perfect story be completed?? -_-
I'd love to continue it. Unfortunately I can not draw well. But writing is something I do. Just don't think it'd feel as right.
D Franklin34 hey dude, I can draw. Lets work together!
Man I'm so mad that the creator didn't continue this story, this is awesome
We... WE SHALL MAKE OUR OWN ENDING, YES, all we need to do is think for a minute..........
Iv got nothing
trunks turn ssj and cuts off Vegeta's left leg but allows him to live. Goku gets angry at trunks for interrupting the fight. trunks smacks some sense into him and forces him to hear what he has to say. piccolo isn't sure if trunks is good or bad but sees him smacking Goku around. so he does a sneak attack special beam Cannon and kills trunks.
Darn that motivation! Always leaving when everything goes well for the artist.
i hate when fan created mangas get sooo interesting and then they cancel
Goku black Exactly smh
Wow this was getting super exciting!
actually if he met his son Vegeta would be the first to see a super Saiyan and get beat by him changing the future
Gosh that was great, thanks for sharing!
I'm doing this shit with Broly. gonna turn his ass into a good guy and have him filing office reports and documents getting angry because the Ferguson account wasn't finished in time to close the deal. Then, he goes outside to see he's gotten a parking ticket. But he doesn't lose his shit because he smokes Dragon kush and it evens him out.
lmao
Azteck9 10/10 I would buy it
Hell yea would be fairly entertaining alternate timeline indeed hahaha.
Azteck9 ahhh lazer collection throwback....
Azteck9 lol Suits
Man, I really love looking at these "what if" stories of Dragonball.
Noooo i fought Kakarot, Nappa fought everyone else... Well except for that onc scrub who got killed by a saiba... BHAHAHAHAHAHA
dont pay your mind to that scrub. he was a Yamcha! thats the earth equal of our Radditz!
Why don't you come say that to my face?
Wow!! I enjoyed everything!!
It doesn’t make sense because if he fucks with that timeline. She may have never met Vegeta and given birth to Trunks
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Somebody should pick up this story.
gallyun1 you do it
Or you can
gallyun1 Or you
Don't have time.
Then Trunks has sex with Android 18. The end.
With stories like this, it's exceptionally easy to write yourself into a corner.
What's more, when you get to that point, you can easily loose motivation when you realize the block you wind up putting up as a result is impossible to come down.
The funny thing is vegeta didn't kill anything in that WHOLE saga
He was in charge so all the deaths are on him
Man, I fucking love it 3:52 in. The drawing is _pretty_ good too. It's pretty close.
trunks should just turn SSJ to scare nappa and vegeta
0:01 Trunks looks so cute shaking ♡ and this story was so good. I wish the creator continued :'(
it wouldve been cool if they saw trunks go super saiyan
Hey! This is a good one! Interesting!
if you're a true fan, as the story was being read you could already link up the chain reactions Trunks arrival had caused. After Krillens death it had me going oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck!!!
cause that meant Krillen would not be going to namek, meaning, Goku wouldn't have the right trigger for a Super Saiyan transformation.. Frieza would have probably took over namek and got the dragon Balls without anyone interfering and would have become immortal. Majin Buu would have woke up eventually and destroyed everyone on earth. Beerus would have woke up and destroyed Frieza for being a Tyrant of the Universe. Omni King would have caught wind that this universe was evil and filled with disaster and would have wiped out the entire original timeline 😐
Thanks Trunks
Nathan T G unless trunks invomces himself during all this. He's already a Super Saiyan once he returns to the past.
Caius Nair with piccolo alive they have no need to go to namek
and thats why time travel is forbidden.
they needed to...well technically trunks needed to go, since he needed to correct the damage that he cause, and he got krillin killed but cannot be revive with the current dragonball on earth because of the 1 death only, until dendi fix it, the namek dragon can revive a person regardless of how many times they die
...for mortals...
2:11 It was at that point I realized "Oh, crap! He CAN'T talk to Goku! Goku's still dead!"
this turns into Dragon ball xenoverse
OMG SOMEBODY TAKE PERMISSION TO CONTINUE THIS STORY! so many people find it interesting and it actually is!
krllin died again😂😂😂😂😂😂
Jesus future Bulma what the shit lol
It was really getting good!!!
Jeez, people are selfish assholes. It's hard writing your own manga. He has his own life to live. And it's his story. If he wants to end it, he can.
It's also worth noting that the creator could not make money off of this and creating something like this entirely by yourself takes a LOT of time and can make you feel dissatisfied to be doing it completely for free. It's why I'm glad the crew at TFS have things they do outside of DBZA that are apart of their channel to help them gain revenue since DBZA itself is unable to.
Yeah... it probably was a money/passion problem.. I'm sure people would support him/her if a gofundme was started though.. I know I'd chip in a couple bucks to see more.
He should put this up on Kickstarter. I´d certainly donate to have him finish this manga!
Oh indeed there would be ways to making money on this. TH-cam streaming with superchat as he/she draws some of the pages of manga. Or even Twitch donations. Stuff like that would work.
The creator has said that she has lost all motivation and will never finish wrong time. That she forced herself to work on it at the end, and that she has lost interest in all things Dragon Ball related. It's a little too late for that, but damn, makes you wonder what the hell happened.
"Who are you anyway?" "Someone who is at the right place, at the wrong time"
Pay the guy and you can bet your ass he will get motivation.
And here I am, owning the entire series on DVD, and feeling like a sucker.
@Freecia Patreon might be a way around that.
Directly making money off it is a slippery slope, but there are a plethora of fans of one medium providing content for their followers.
3:23 "Why can't you save your own damn self!" lol
I love Trunks!😍
Does, Krillin know?
No you love Krillin. You killed Trunks (in the future) you know?
Gay
This was actually good
Really interesting I wonder how Goku would have gone Super Saiyan
It took both Piccolo and Krillin dying in succession after the failure of the spirit when Goku was drained of ki to do it, without Krillin in the equation, I don't think it would be possible, unless Gohan was to be killed in his place under the same circumstances. A catalyst is essential to spark the transformation.
bruh this is actually good
No more over 9000!
So what is Trunks's power level ?
Over 9000?
Yeah he fu#@ed all that up lol
Yeah man the story was pretty interesting and it sucks that he didnt continued that story......... Btw thanks for all the information you give us about dbs
What if trunks got sent to saiyan saga simple answer is he would left that time immediately
TECH KING Yeah logically trunks would immediately leave so he wouldn't screw up the timeline. Hell being that early he might have prevented his own birth in that timeline.
Or he would have simply waited until after the Saiyan Saga fight to visit Goku in the hospital in the middle of the night past visiting hours like a ghost. After all his main concern was little change to the timeline as possible besides getting rid of the Androids.
What the... that story was going so WELL! such a MAJOR cliffhanger, trunks probably could have gone super to stop both Goku and Vegeta in one second and listen to what he had to say!
What happens next is Trunks knocks out Vegeta, Nappa retreats back to the base carrying knocked out Vegeta at his side saying "You will regret this!!" in fear and anger. So now upon returning to base Nappa reports to Frieza to let know what happened. Frieza then side swipes Vegeta out of the picture and sends Genyu Force directly to Earth instead. So now Trunks has limited time to teach Goku SSJ before Genyu and Frieza arrives to Earth.
nappa is dead... (killed by goku)
i think trunks would have beaten nappa before he would jump into his capsule.
And trunks can easily solo the Ginyu force and frieza.
neon did the mistake 98% DB fans do, never think things through. in other words, he just put on paper whatever came into his mind.
4Head
cool story! i especially liked the part where trunks was tanking their beams like it was nothing, he showed his level there where he can whoop anyone in that timeline goku included
Man, this was really interesting.. i wish the story ended. [Plot Twist]
Black Goku Appears from the Sky using the time ring.. and so does Future Trunks from this Saga. Future trunks then fuses with Goku in order to combine super sayian form with Kaioken technique, & they woop Black Goku and Vegeta sees a glimpse of Trunks' Super Saiyan form, and turns good realizing his half-human son is a legendary super saiyan.
James DeCastro that's really good
James DeCastro PLOT TWIST: nerd
James DeCastro but goku and trunks weren't even super saiyan at this point so black would defeat them easily
Well, only trunks is
Black Goku was the shittiest villain in the series. I still don't get why people like him, but to each their own I suppose.
Man this story is EXCITING!!!!
the story was getting good but I didn't like the when Napa was killed by Goku and I didn't like how he jumped in the way
Tesfaye Williams it's in character though, trunks killed freiza and king cold because he thought his presence had inadvertently changed the time line, not knowing that Goku had the instant transmission technic. This trunks has yet to learn from that mistake.
that was a amazing storyline.. left you wanting more
Eh, it has potential... But it got super messy.
This was amazing
You can tell he really wasn't motivated to finish this. It was very basic. Also if Goku was nearly dead and got a Senzu bean he would have had a Zenkai boost and the fight with Vegeta would not have played out as in nearly the same fashion. Lets not forget though Vegeta was ruthless in the early days his pride is extremely important. His character really wouldn't just sneak attack and kill a child. Good thing he stopped writing it cause it was shitty.
But he has a half senzu do it could have played out that he could have been at half strength of what that full Zenkai would have made him.
It did take x4 Kaioken to beat Vegeta in their first fight, when in this one he only goes x2 (as far as I know). Vegeta absolutely would kill a child. He even tried to on Namek in DBZ.
Vegeta slaughtered an entire village in Namek for a single Dragon Ball.
That story is sooo GODLIKE
He would be the strongest in the universe, end of story... y'all have too much time on your hands.
Unless he killed first form Cell. ._.
Trunks couldnt even defeat the androids at that time let alone 1st form cell
~He can kill Frieza and King Cold just like in original timeline
~He can kill infant Cell way before he grow
~I am pretty sure when Majin Buu Saga happen,the story *more or less* gonna be same like in Dragon Ball Super where he killed Babidi and Dabura
So yeah pretty much he's the stronger in that *what if timeline* not universe ... You forgot Beerus and Whis exist which they're far stronger then Future Trunks ...
Awesome stuff
Oh ok to he bitced the fuck out and stopped making a good story.. Figures...
This wasn't no small project, and the creator realized this and got overwhelmed, and just lost motivation he wasn't happy doing it anymore. Why continue a fan-manga if you don't want to anymore?
the creator is a girl
You continue it then
+Supreme Kai of Time Na you go ahead....
Someone needs to continue this!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
You know who awesome. read the first word
BMarttiin _R You know who's stupid. Read the first word.
Dio Brando you
Man! Vegeta back then was a "scary dude", plus "savage", and " killed a lot of people".
How can future trunks go to the Saiyan saga past and see Vegeta if he wasn't born yet? I don't understand trunks timeline it's very confusing.. Vegeta didn't pound bulmas tuna yet!
Green Dude yes it's a parrallel dimension
Time travel. He was born, just not yet.
Green Dude multiverse theory every time someone go's back in time they create an new dimension so any changes in the past won't affect your timeline it's the same reason why when trunks went back to his time the androids were still there
Green Dude you have to be trolling...
Bojack S it's just confusing because there's two trunks future and little and I've never watched history of trunks mabey I should watch it.
THIS NEEDS TO BE CONTINUED--
first
Love the same "Selphie" it's like selfie but different. 🤳
Geez! What a damn quitter!!!! Just when suit was about to get interesting!!!
DANG IT! It was just getting good
Damn that autor!
I wanted to see Yamcha's reaction when he will find out! Oh...he is dead...
But Bulma's reaction would still be great.
I was listening to this sitting at the edge of my seat lol I haven’t been like that in awhile.. damn that would have been a dope story.
If trunks went too early, he'd look at the clock in the time machine, realize he's too early, and go back to correct date without anyone even noticing.
Do a fanfic and make ur own story u present the given Manga pretty good I enjoyed it and I think u could tell ur own story as well I'll sub in hopes of a part 2
Aww, it's not getting completed? That sucks, this sounded really cool
Why we're his only choices to talk to Goku or use the time machine again? He could've literally waited it out.