(Corrected translation below) As much as people think that the world is not an easy place Just look at me I'm just like a dirty rag To become happy - I do not have that right And before I knew it, yes, it has been engraved into my mind Still, even so I want to live I, even I have the right to live If it were to come true In this sky I'd want to fly freely just like those birds As much as people think that the world is not an easy place Just look at me Trash that can't stand up to his role (*) Even so, in distress, if I were to be forcefully crushed even then, for me, still, still there is hope There seems to be only one aspiration left The guitar is my last aspiration Strum the distorted sound This unreasonable way of life I'll drown it out! As much as people think that their heart is not strong Just look at me I'm really just a dirty rag Even so, in distress, if I were to be forcefully crushed even then, for me, now... there is still hope
There seems to be only one aspiration left This song is my last wish To live - that's enough, right? To take a breath - that's enough, right? Strum the painful sound (**) This unreasonable way of life I'll drown it out! Drown it out! Translation Notes: (*) 役に立たない瓦落苦多だ - Was very hard for me to translate, many different uncertainties: 1. Trash/Garbage (我楽多, garakuta) is written as 瓦落苦多 ((roof)Tile, fall down, suffering) here, which is not an actual word to my knowledge. If this is an error or intentional, I'm not sure... 2. It leaves a lot of room for interpretation, e.g.: "Trash that can't stand up to this role" "Trash that can't rise in this position" "Trash that can't rise in position" 3. Can't stand up (立たない) has a second meaning in combination with role/position (役): Something like "Trash that can't find himself in this position" Any ideas appreciated. (**) Kanji clearly say distorted sound, just like in the first occurence, but painful (itami) is sung (or igami, a different writing for the same kanji, but I just can't hear that) Regarding the title: 最後の希望 in the song can be literally "Last Hope", but more so "Last Aspiration", as far as I can tell This gives the title a different connotation - e.g. "Last thing I want to do" instead of "Last chance at something"
Are you fluent? If not, I could spend some time later to do some work on it. I used to translate on VocaDB, and I did some of his songs I was really attached to, so I could help on this one too, if you like.
@@glyphknightmax Oh hell no. Just a bit of intuition and (hopefully careful) research. Any corrections welcome:) With the ~なんだ in particular in this song I might have lost some intention in translation. Nice, will make sure to check VocaDB as well if I can't find a translation on vocaloidlyrics or youtube. Was hoping to get most of his official videos subbed now that he has turned on community contributions.
@@vocassen If you don't already use it, Jisho.org can help going forward, for one... But in terms of grammar construction or conjugation, I don't have any resources I can recommend that will help with the level of poetics OkameP puts in his work, sorry. I'll give this some work within the next 24 hours, because I love the song, and I want to see people who can't speak Japanese get the full experience.
@@glyphknightmax Yeah, already use it to full extend, else I'd be lost haha Here is the transcription: docs.google.com/document/d/1Lu46pWRM7y6a8hOT3mg5C-OiJlJ4seAYsggM-ivz4So/edit?usp=sharing
Congrats on passing 5k subs with this song!! Finally and well deserved. Awesome song as always, glad to see you try this new thing! Was waiting for neural nets to be used in voice synthesizers for a long time, excited to see them used now
I had to actually search that thing in google. I am kind of happy it exists, I couldn't get what is wrong with this voice, it still sounds like vocaloid, but that sounds like the effect over the vocal layer. Something's wrong and I can feel it, but I like it.
(Corrected translation below)
As much as people think
that the world is not an easy place
Just look at me
I'm just like a dirty rag
To become happy -
I do not have that right
And before I knew it, yes,
it has been engraved into my mind
Still, even so
I want to live
I, even I
have the right to live
If it were to come true
In this sky
I'd want to fly freely
just like those birds
As much as people think
that the world is not an easy place
Just look at me
Trash that can't stand up to his role (*)
Even so, in distress,
if I were to be forcefully crushed
even then, for me, still, still
there is hope
There seems to be only one aspiration left
The guitar is my last aspiration
Strum the distorted sound
This unreasonable way of life
I'll drown it out!
As much as people think
that their heart is not strong
Just look at me
I'm really just a dirty rag
Even so, in distress,
if I were to be forcefully crushed
even then, for me, now...
there is still hope
There seems to be only one aspiration left
This song is my last wish
To live -
that's enough, right?
To take a breath -
that's enough, right?
Strum the painful sound (**)
This unreasonable way of life
I'll drown it out!
Drown it out!
Translation Notes:
(*) 役に立たない瓦落苦多だ - Was very hard for me to translate, many different uncertainties:
1. Trash/Garbage (我楽多, garakuta) is written as 瓦落苦多 ((roof)Tile, fall down, suffering) here, which is not an actual word to my knowledge. If this is an error or intentional, I'm not sure...
2. It leaves a lot of room for interpretation, e.g.:
"Trash that can't stand up to this role"
"Trash that can't rise in this position"
"Trash that can't rise in position"
3. Can't stand up (立たない) has a second meaning in combination with role/position (役):
Something like "Trash that can't find himself in this position"
Any ideas appreciated.
(**) Kanji clearly say distorted sound, just like in the first occurence, but painful (itami) is sung (or igami, a different writing for the same kanji, but I just can't hear that)
Regarding the title:
最後の希望 in the song can be literally "Last Hope", but more so "Last Aspiration", as far as I can tell
This gives the title a different connotation - e.g. "Last thing I want to do" instead of "Last chance at something"
Are you fluent? If not, I could spend some time later to do some work on it. I used to translate on VocaDB, and I did some of his songs I was really attached to, so I could help on this one too, if you like.
@@glyphknightmax Oh hell no. Just a bit of intuition and (hopefully careful) research. Any corrections welcome:)
With the ~なんだ in particular in this song I might have lost some intention in translation.
Nice, will make sure to check VocaDB as well if I can't find a translation on vocaloidlyrics or youtube. Was hoping to get most of his official videos subbed now that he has turned on community contributions.
@@vocassen If you don't already use it, Jisho.org can help going forward, for one... But in terms of grammar construction or conjugation, I don't have any resources I can recommend that will help with the level of poetics OkameP puts in his work, sorry.
I'll give this some work within the next 24 hours, because I love the song, and I want to see people who can't speak Japanese get the full experience.
@@glyphknightmax Yeah, already use it to full extend, else I'd be lost haha
Here is the transcription: docs.google.com/document/d/1Lu46pWRM7y6a8hOT3mg5C-OiJlJ4seAYsggM-ivz4So/edit?usp=sharing
@@vocassen Getting started soon. I'll post a comment here if I've revised anything (highly likely).
Congrats on passing 5k subs with this song!!
Finally and well deserved. Awesome song as always, glad to see you try this new thing!
Was waiting for neural nets to be used in voice synthesizers for a long time, excited to see them used now
I had to actually search that thing in google. I am kind of happy it exists, I couldn't get what is wrong with this voice, it still sounds like vocaloid, but that sounds like the effect over the vocal layer. Something's wrong and I can feel it, but I like it.
Definitely one of the best work of this author. He surpassed himself in this piece of art.
her voice is amazing
Please just never stop creating music... Beautiful!
清らかで荘厳な、重厚で美しい、ドラマティックで混乱パワフルにぎやかな、華麗で優雅、センチメンタルな歌です。
Woaaaahhh using new voicebank!! Greaat
A nice song for telling the fight of life hnggg
Still an absolute banger
sounds like ONE 😔💕💕
OMG It Does.
実直で情熱的で素晴らしいです
AIきりたんなのでかるびさんの曲に馴染むかどうか気がかりでしたけど合っているようで良かったです
熱い素敵な曲ですね。
人が思うほど
世の中 甘くない
僕を見ろ
まるでボロボロの雑巾だ
幸せになること
その権利がない
いつの間にか僕は
そう刻み込まれてた
それでも それでも
生きていたいんだ
僕には 僕でも
生きる権利がある
叶うのならば
この空を自由に飛びたい
あの鳥たちの様に
人が思うほど
世の中 甘くない
僕を見ろ
役に立たない瓦落苦多だ
それでも苦悩に
押し潰されてもなお
こんな僕にでも
まだ まだ望みはある
残された
最後の希望なんだ
ギターは
最後の希望なんだ
掻き鳴らすこの歪みの音
理不尽なこの生き様を
掻き消すよ
人は思うほど
心は 強くない
僕を見ろ
まさにボロボロの雑巾だ
それでも苦悩に
押し潰されてもなお
こんな僕にでも
今・・・まだ
望みはある
残された最後の希望なんだ
この歌は
最後の願いなんだ
生きること
それで十分なんだ
呼吸をする
それで十分なんだ
掻き鳴らすこの痛みの音
理不尽なこの生き様を
掻き消すよ
掻き消すよ
thank you so much i love this
Oh amazing
Here we are gathered to witness greatness.
Thanks for New upload OkameP! I loved!
OkameP instrumental mix 👌
This is so beautiful😭💕
Great to see another song from you!
This voicebank sounds so good!
But who am I kidding, I love all of your songs xD
Idk how I missed this. This is so GOOD! Idk why but it kinda give me Heart vibes...
Incredible masterpiece! Lit!
この曲を、聞いていると、チカラが、わいて来ます🎵❗元気が出ます🎵❤絵の女の子、凄く可愛いです✨❤
Instant like
that was good.😭. great song
So good
Great song!! ;^;
Wow... This is actually good. Congrats. ^^
Amazing, is beautiful ❤😻
G J calvi!!!! love the song^^
Not bad.
I now it's not, but this sounds like One.
ありがとうございまああああああああああああああす(´；ω；｀)
Hi, Calvi! Can u make this song available on iTunes, please? :)
Djent djent djent 🤟
重いなww
😘
Anjirlah makin mantep ae