Dad: your my only child ofc I’m not okay” Patrick:*goes to his sisters house Edit: let me just say I commented 2 months ago about it, he’s says at 0:35 “my only son” buttttt at 0:45 HE SAYSSS “but he’s my only child...”
Ik, it's so strange. Is it Gatcha Logic? Gatcha Logic is soouuuu weird. Or do the parents have memory lose.... great now I'm even more confused!!!!!!!😑😑😑
That's not true T-that is true H-he/she is right A-apsolotly true T-tolaty agree S-siri said it's true N-never doubted it O-oviosly it's correct T-that moment you knew they where true T-that's right R-remarkable U- u r right E-even though I said that's not true I know it's true So ummm THATS NOT TRUE
Headmistress: You must be the chosen one Me: Harry Potter- I'm sowwy ;^; it literally was the first thing that came up in my mind Ok I'll shut up now ;-;
I cannot be the only one who’s thinking near the end scenes “Did she get this from ‘Twilight’???.....she definitely got this scene from twilight.” I mean like,-... just me?-...
Are we not gonna talk about how Patrick didn’t even invite his parents to him freeking wedding and didn’t even call them or visit them he literally forgot about them that’s just sad
Ray: You do know you’re in the girl’s bathroom right? Me: You know there are urinals right behind you? If you don’t get it, I’m saying that they are technically in the boy’s bathroom since there are urinals behind them, but Ray is saying that they’re in the girl’s bathroom.
Am I the only one that noticed that Patrick's dad specifically said Patrick was his only child if so how could Patrick live with his sister if he didn't have one
Title: "Human in an all animal school" Me: "Whats so wrong about that humans are animals too." Me: Watches movie. Me: "Yeah, I understand but I don't...."
Well- I just thought of something lol. If a male and female have a baby, there is a 50% chance of female and 50% chance of male, so gay’s baby’s are always bois. UwU
@@Bee2Tech a singing battle!? Thank you thank you thank you so much! I was ONCE a human but now I'm a a wolf who can turn into a Nightmare wolf animatronic whenever a family is in trouble. Don't worry though, I'm not the kind that bite... yet.
Yeah, and did'nt the principal said to give the "dorm" and locker number but why don't they have a dorm and why does he live with his "sister" also isn't he in another country or states??? Now im confused??
@Creampuff, it’s simple. The mother cheated, hence that the father said HIS only child. Or that the mother was raped, explaining the fact why the older sister would drink, due to problems and addiction from coping with problems. I hope this answers your question, and I hope you read it!
me watching this vid trying not to go crazy the music: *mOnStErS uNdEr uR bEd* me: AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
"the total is 2000" "damn pat your expensive" uhhhhh more like 2000 for the ambulance ride alone prob atleast 20000 for the head trauma at the very least too mch money
Disclaimer: This is not meant to be a hate comment but rather a comment meant to show you how you can improve so you can meet your full potential! It’s had a good plot, but here are some tips: 1. It helps keep the story on track if the characters keep a consistent personality. For example, Ray had originally been an edgy child, however he somehow immediately started changing. These relationships and changes need to grow throughout the story. 2. Keep consistent movements, in some parts of the story the movement was really nice however in some parts they were on one side only a room and are suddenly on the other side with just one slide. If this is due to powers, you can signify this with editing things like auras over the characters when they do these things. 3. Clear up some of the narrative, the relationship of Ray and Patrick seemed a little to quick, and the side relationships didn’t really make sense or align with the story. Also, how was Patrick sent to the hospital if his sister was also passed out. Who called the police? I’m not fully sure what happened to Clifford as well, in the beginning his character was introduced as obsessed but he just disappeared in the story. 3. I didn’t fully understand the whole castle part, however I did notice some stereotyping. For example, the princess character type. The fact ray is a prince, his parents specifically his dad hates gays, and Ray is a hybrid. 4. Showing the Creator is typically used for transitions or a side note about an inconsistency in the plot that needs to be cleared up. If a character is uncomfortable with something it would be better to show that in their reactions. 5. Your sound work is actually really nice, the sound is clear and you can tell it’s not cut off or anything. So good job on that ^-^ 6. Eventually when you start making covers or special moments with characters it would be beneficial to edit the character. In the context of the gacha community that would mean you would have to either draw the character in a certain position that the gacha life doesn’t allow, draw or add touch ups like shadowing, lighting, hair strands, blood, etc. Doing this on your cover tends to bring in more of an audience for your videos and will help you move forward. For this I suggest checking out somebody like Deformed Reality and Emathyst. As well as for other things like these, checking out people like Hell_boi and Henry Kang would also help you grow. Another small tip is that episodes typically tend to be more popular and help you not only express the plot but let’s the reader keep track of what’s happening and enjoy your episode. Just don’t let your series drag on for like 5 seasons since then it typically makes the story really confusing and boring. 7. Gacha logic can be good in sometimes, but there are times where you have to explain it and can’t leave it up to gacha logic, or go with the natural flow of things. ( For example the male body physical isn’t capable of conceiving a child. So, it would make more sense for the couple of Ray and Patrick to adopt a child. In the comedic aspect, you really hit the nail hard. It was an enjoyable story to watch. The bits of humor help build to that. I hope you can use my advice to help push your channel into the spotlight. ^-^ This was a good start. I’m rooting for you! Ps: My favorite part was when Patrick was screaming about food! He’s such a mood that it’s funny. ^-^
This is really long. But let me tell you something you expecting too much only the best gacha tubers can do stuff like that. This person is just starting give advice that would be useful to a starter not a pro.
I do apologize if I was rude but I was simply trying to help them improve. I do realize that I only have 11 subs, but I have been around the community for quite some time. I’ve come to find some gachatubers I’ve favorited, and I honestly like to see smaller creaters grow to their full potential. I know it may seem like a lot but it will help in the long run. As for the 11 subs, I currently have been thinking of ideas to kick off my own channel whether that is in animation or Gacha, well I’m still deciding that. Though, I still intend to help gachatubers grow into stars. I do hope that is an adequate explanation, if there are any more questions I would be glad to elaborate. Though, I do thank you for the concern on the quality of my advice. I do have to inform you that the quicker they start practicing on things like this, the more it will profit them. Either way, It is their own choice, it isn’t really a requirement but more like the factors that tend to be more popular in the community, My comment is just a suggestion on potential improvement. Though I understand your worries, you do have to realize, I’m not expecting to much of them. I know they can do it if they out the effort. It simply takes some practice as well as time. I would like you to realize that I took time out of my day as well in order to help them grow. I wouldn’t do this if I thought they couldn’t handle it. There are many people with potential, and sometimes, it just takes some constructive criticism to put them in the right direction. Anyways, I do hope that this is not taken in the wrong way. This comment is simply to clear up any potential questions or worry’s about my previous comment. Now I Bid you adieu.
Pat: *throws August at Levi* Pat: NOW MAKE BABIES Me: YASSSSSS SHIP NEED TO SAIL BOI Like a minute later August: *Pushes pat* August: KISS Me: OMG TWO SHIPS SAILED AT ONCE
You are heavily underrated, you put so much detail into the story. Im not even 5 minutes in and i can tell this will be good. 156 subs, nah make that 157. I dont usually sub to gacha tubers or youtubers in general but i can tell you will be one of the gacha tubers i am going to sub to. Reason why i can tell you are underrated is the fact you actually made the boy have to get registration and also when the dad screamed, usually gacha tubers wont do anything like it doesnt make a scene, but you, you made it a scene. 10000000000/10
"you're the chosen one"
Me a crackhead: POtAh Is ThAT YoU¡‽¿!?
Tabby slime OMG ME TOO XDDD
Harry Potter
@Jayavel K IDK OwO
Memecat UwU same lol
0-0
I couldn’t stop laughing at Clifford 😂 his name suits him😂😂
Jesus Chavez true true
He is Clifford the big red cat
Yes😂
Omg its Clifford the red dog but he tiny
Täyłør Płäyzz and a cat
The chosen one
Harry !?!?!?!?
Clifford the big red cat!
XD
your damn right its the damn cat xd
YES A POTTERHEAD
I thought I was the only one to see thay
“Harry, your a Wizard!
Dad: your my only child ofc I’m not okay”
Patrick:*goes to his sisters house
Edit: let me just say I commented 2 months ago about it, he’s says at 0:35 “my only son” buttttt at 0:45 HE SAYSSS “but he’s my only child...”
I thought about thats too! Lol
Patrick's dad said only son. Not only child. Just wanted to point that out.
The sister could have been from a different mister
Ik, it's so strange. Is it Gatcha Logic? Gatcha Logic is soouuuu weird. Or do the parents have memory lose.... great now I'm even more confused!!!!!!!😑😑😑
Omg he’s a liar
14:51
I just love how August brings shipping to a whole new level 😂
Me: *Sees Clifford talking/ about to hit Patrick*
*My mind: Shush you small red cat*
The definition of I'm fine
I-ignored
M-misunderstood
F-framed
I-insulted
N-neglected
E-egregious
That's not true
T-that is true
H-he/she is right
A-apsolotly true
T-tolaty agree
S-siri said it's true
N-never doubted it
O-oviosly it's correct
T-that moment you knew they where true
T-that's right
R-remarkable
U- u r right
E-even though I said that's not true I know it's true
So ummm THATS NOT TRUE
E D G Y AS F R I C K
@@itz_Jane-do5jg wow that must have took time to figure all that out-
PERFECT DEFINITION
blue_ toast! Clearly you are talking to me
CLIFFORD THE DOG?!
THE pbs Clifford?!
Him: AUGUST PENNY
Me: actual it’s August Earwood..
The video completely copied the beginning part from th-cam.com/video/g8FnydCT3-o/w-d-xo.html
@@steveyouraveragehamster9383 IKR, I also noticed that.
Clifford the big red- cat?
I just said Clifford the big red dog
Steve Your Average Hamster ikr i noticed that.
From the first 7 minutes, I have concluded:
* does anything *
_* sadness noise *_
No one:
Gacha life: “kicks once” big scars” :0
Unless they wearing spikes on their shoes 😂
@@pearl8013 😂😂😂
Gacha Logic
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😨
I crave skin
I love how Patrick says "Mother" and "Father" when I'll always call my parents mom and dad till the day I die.
You're supposed to call them mother and father to annoy them
“NO WERE NOT A COUPLE”
DETENTION they got detention for it being a couple 😂😂
no they were in detention for not being in class.
Meseret Benti WHY U BREAK THE JOKE
Like true
oh yeah true-
Lol it's so funny
Headmistress: You must be the chosen one
Me: Harry Potter-
I'm sowwy ;^; it literally was the first thing that came up in my mind
Ok I'll shut up now ;-;
Samez😂😂😂
Don’t stop, I’m being Sirius! Idc if you Neville shut up.
Sameee
Nooooo keep talking
mylorenazambrano me too I was just reading Harry Potter before watching this
*Patrick hasn’t visited his parents in 13+ years..*
*i bet they think he’s dead.*
*Chokes*
Hm.. or maybe he did and a CERTAIN SOMEONE got lazy
Midnight Blue ミッドナイトブルー oof
BABABABABABBA
i think their dead
I cannot be the only one who’s thinking near the end scenes “Did she get this from ‘Twilight’???.....she definitely got this scene from twilight.” I mean like,-...
just me?-...
I know I just say out the words before it even comes on the thing lol
Yeh I see it
Most of it came from someone elses vid
Favorite part was when everyone said yay at their marriage like a normal thing
“You’re the chosen one”
HaRrY PoTTeR
botafull
𝙹𝚞𝚜𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚌𝚘𝚖𝚖𝚎𝚗𝚝 𝙸 𝚠𝚊𝚜 𝚕𝚘𝚘𝚔𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚏𝚘𝚛
PATRICK?! WHERES TH CRABBY PATTIES?!
AweSeM0
I love it!😂
Me seeing zero yelling at ray:
Me noticing how ray cant hear him:
Also me.. again: BOI YOU HAVE A SECOND PAIR OF EARS....USE THEM!!!!
lamo hahahahahaha
And if it and was was lbnfynylynlynfyng
Its also possible for a gacha character to have 6 ears too XD
*Patrick and ray kiss*
*Everyone at the wedding* "yay"
Ok 'yay!?'
Patrick and ray make out with members of the group
YAY
I get it (spongebob show)
the part where they try and get Patrick
Nobody:
Absolutely nobody:
Me:*starts killing,abusing,fighting a pillow
Dreya UwU who won 😏
@@kikikeeks09 Me
You can't kill a pillow
@@dastarter1865 -_-
Pamela Johnson my dog did 😂😂😭😭😂💀💀💀
When Patrick change August's appearance
Me:She looks like a gacha spoiled emo or bully (in a nutshell)
For sure
We gonna not talk about how this mans forgot about his parents and never visited them
And Patrick's parents did NOT go to da wedding
Omg!
Izuku Midoriya Izukuuuuuu
The video completely copied the beginning part from th-cam.com/video/g8FnydCT3-o/w-d-xo.html
@@thesupplyofpower o-oh hi!
YaY cLiffORd tHe BiG rEd DoG
Oh No ItS cLiffORd ThE bIg ReD cAt
@What's Up Wolfies R/hmmmmmm
i was thinking of Clifford the dog but I notice that it was a cat xD
No it’s cLiffORd ThE tInY ReD cAt 🤣
Me at the end*
Me:I DIDNT KNOW BOYS COULD GIVE BIRTH :0 GACHA LOGICCC!!!
Are we not gonna talk about how Patrick didn’t even invite his parents to him freeking wedding and didn’t even call them or visit them he literally forgot about them that’s just sad
Shayshay theturtle you sure are right!
The sadest thing is...
What is wrong with his sister
Jeez makes me wanna type Japanese
私はこれについて何をするつもりですか
no we are not
He didn’t have parents just his abusive sister
OMG WHY WOULD SUCH A HUMAN DO THATTTT :
I swear when i seen him say clifford me and my brother screamed "the big red dog" but instead it was a tiny red cat..Disappointed..T`T
XD
Ikr why is he small and not a dog AND NOT KINDDDDDDD
he was red though...
Lol same
Same ;-;
Ray: How would you feel if I married your dad. Me: Damn y’all been dating for like a decade and still haven’t gotten married
Sooo... is anybody gonna talk about how much this is like twilight?
In a good way I mean
There’s no such thing as being like twilight in a good way
What is twilight love story
The mlp?
I’m just laughing at the very end they just got married and everyone just says ‘yay’
Me: *clicks video*
Also me: It says it's only ten mins
Me again: *well, now its 34 mins apparently*
and 16 seconds
XD
Plot Twist: you clicked the wrong video
when they got married and all of the people there was like:
*Y A Y .*
When they kissed at the wedding everyone was like yay including the kids who said ew when they got engaged
Yeah YAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!
that reminds me when we watched a movie everyone hated when they kissed but was happy when they had a baby like -_-
Tomkat 53 exactly
Do everbody know the boy are human and me and everbody in comment are also humann...
🤣
Ray: Why’re you wearing a mask?
Me: bEcaUsE oF cOroNaVIrUs
and yes I liked my own comment
Yasssss wear a mask everyone or u get slapped- WHEN CORONAVIRUS IS OVER keep safe (he he)
Wait YOU ARE ABLE TO LIKE YOUR OWN COMMENT I have to find everything I have ever commented on 🙀🙀🙀🙀
@@kaytlynsimpkins7742 Yes Keep safe everyone.
Or yOu WiLl geT SlaPpeD
@@brendajamison2355 🤣🤣🤣
Yes you can like your own comment
Stay safe❤️
'' hE Is My OnLY CHilD'' and then his sister appeared, VeRY LoGICaL .-.
I’m sure like they got rid of her then he had to live with her that is my Theory
xD
Maybe he didnt classify the sister as his daughter, remember she was a brat sooooo
Mary 007 LMAO I DIDNT EVEN NOTICE THAT
Ms gachal logic??
Me when I hear “Patrick Cadwell from Australia”: IM ASH KACHEM FROM PALET TOWN AND I WANNA HAVE A POKÉMON BATTLE
Yeah I was just like, HE's A FELLOW AUSSIE (my auto correct was trying to turn it to TASSIE
Commonwealth gang. Im staying home back in England lol. God save the queen :-)
Oh ma gawd yas poco mawn
you correct boi I said that also
And I'm that guy w a hit who always wins
" eleven years later, kids are now eleven "
The kids be lookin like their 5 or six years old
no hate, I just felt like I had to point that out
That means they were 0 years old ;-;
XD
...Um.
Bruh they even looke like their 5 where is the logic oh yeah GaChA LogIc
Ray: You suck
Patrick: You swallow
Me: -///-
Fluffy Sheep i understood it now- o////o
Im 11 and I understand -///- @~@ **Insert gacha blushing face**
Oof I understand it xd me right now but ┐(ﾟдﾟ┐)
Didn't mean to say but my finger slipped xd
welp ive done it ( ͡ᵔ ͜ʖ ͡ᵔ )
33:36
*when your boyfriend forgets how long you have been dating*
So we just gonna forget about the parents, Ray's other friend and technically everyone else?
I love how his dad said you are my only child but he has a sister
Nobody gonna talk about how she said he was “The chosen one?” That was Anakin
Omg Harry Potter is that u 😂 or should I say choosen one
Theres a lot of Movie and anime reference.
I totally butchered this reply didn't I?
Patrick is a boy he got pregnant because of Gacha Logic witch I hate
it just needed to be in the begging of the story to tell why he was there duh
@@touyatodorokidabi3924 idk
Ray: You do know you’re in the girl’s bathroom right?
Me: You know there are urinals right behind you?
If you don’t get it, I’m saying that they are technically in the boy’s bathroom since there are urinals behind them, but Ray is saying that they’re in the girl’s bathroom.
Maybe gacha life girls use those for...certain reasons...GIRLS KNOW WHAT I MEAN
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Azxcvy1000000000000000000000000000
@@abigailwalker-carrion9427 *When creator forgot to sensor..* :P
@@croffling_around Oop--
Damn who marries their guy after ELEVEN YEARS-
my mom and dad never got married and they "were" together for 11 years
Wasn't it twelve
Am I the only one that noticed that Patrick's dad specifically said Patrick was his only child if so how could Patrick live with his sister if he didn't have one
Oh have you read the comments section
I know I saw that too
Only SON HE SAID
@@ShadowJack06 at 0:45 he said only child
@@v3d3ogbob51 makes sense 🤔🤔
Patrick throws August at Levi and says:And now make babies!!!
Me: 🤣🤣🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂😂🤣 HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!!
LOL ROFL
My real life name is August, ;-;
can you not use so many emojis please
Title: "Human in an all animal school"
Me: "Whats so wrong about that humans are animals too."
Me: Watches movie.
Me: "Yeah, I understand but I don't...."
R we not going to talk about how his dad was like he’s my only Child but yet he has a sister like makes no scene????
I checked the father says „my only son“
Elfe Rebecca but later he says my only child
Maybe he means his only child that lives in the same house as him
Cienna Blocker who knows🤷🏻♀️
Lol we all make mistakes sometimes
Real life: no males has a baby
Gacha life gay story: LeTs SpIcE tHiNgS uP aNd MaKe rEaL lIfE tHiNgS tHAt arE iMpoSsIbLe pOssIbLe hErE
They can have to but not al off them
Gacha logic
Not gonna lie tho, Gay couples baby’s are so cute lmao.
Well- I just thought of something lol. If a male and female have a baby, there is a 50% chance of female and 50% chance of male, so gay’s baby’s are always bois. UwU
Eunmi that’s what you call Gacha logic
Me at the end : *YES I NEED MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*
13:06
Levi: “*cough* *cough*”
Me: iTs cRoNa TiMe riGhT nOw
😂😂😂 so true
Lololololololololololol
I think Levi wanted Ray top notice Patrick. That's just me tho.
To*
To*
9:18 Patrick should've said "And i'm the toughest human in this school ;)"
He has the prophecy
I read this as a human in an all human school
And my mind is like “yeah?”
”Maybe it’s a quarantine joke?”
“Oh an animal school🤦♂️😂”
lol
lol
The end where everyone goes “yay” with almost straight faces is hilarious
XD
“You may now kiss”
Everyone else: Yay
Toriix :3
So true
XD
Yay
Kitty Silver yAy
@@maybstrimble Yay....
Clifford the big red “cat” IS DAT U
Yes a part 2 or I will take your cookies
The awesome Alex ok I will make a part two but at the moment I am making a singing battle
Yes please
Pt2
😍😍😎😏
ayyy that's my line.
@@Bee2Tech a singing battle!? Thank you thank you thank you so much! I was ONCE a human but now I'm a a wolf who can turn into a Nightmare wolf animatronic whenever a family is in trouble. Don't worry though, I'm not the kind that bite... yet.
What if she has no kookies?
Are we not gonna talk about how the father said Patrick was an only child but then he lives with his sister 🤔
I thought he said only son😂
Yeah, and did'nt the principal said to give the "dorm" and locker number but why don't they have a dorm and why does he live with his "sister" also isn't he in another country or states??? Now im confused??
I honestly thought Patrick's mother was going to turn around and say "We can make another"
@Creampuff, it’s simple. The mother cheated, hence that the father said HIS only child. Or that the mother was raped, explaining the fact why the older sister would drink, due to problems and addiction from coping with problems. I hope this answers your question, and I hope you read it!
Beats oh mah gawd I thought that it was just a mistake made by the creator-
17:20 it would’ve looked like Patrick was kidnapping August bc Patrick is wearing a mask, but bc of his eyes it dosent look like he’s kidnapping her.
Patrick said he would visit his parents every holiday...
And he didnt visit them even once😂😂
"Forget you~"
Bro that’s me in real life I shop my friends with people then I say my ship will never crumble
I love the fact that he calls his parents mother and father
Ya
That was my parents expectations of me instead they got - me: mom= HAG. dad= BRO
Ya lil
Dad: HE’S MY ONLY CHILD 😭
Sister:....
Probably why she hates him so much! Hahaha! 😂😂😂😂
The video completely copied the beginning part from th-cam.com/video/g8FnydCT3-o/w-d-xo.html
Wrong he says my only SON
Gacha logic: characters have kids for 11 years then get married .-.
oofs computer stuff
The real question is, is that better or worse than the Gacha characters that get married after a few days?
oofs computer stuff THIs iS gacha LOGIC there was a boy THAT HAD BABYS soooooo does baby’s come from boys and girls to?
oofs computer stuff SUCH GACHA LOGIC MUCH WOW
Jinx Lyn better for sure
Wendy Heredia both if a person is trans it works out
"Unless........
YoU'Re ThHe cHosEn OnNe"💀
X_x The CcRinGe 😂😂😂😂😂😂
I cringed at that part 🤣
Jay Official_ lol
No joke I cringed so hard my brother said that I looked like a deformed duck (⊙_◎)
That’s what happens in movies now XD
@cheer up baby nope I thought of Harry Potter and clifford the big red dog
His dad said he was an only child... but he had a sister!!
AHHH I AM SO CONFUSED
It's Gacha Logic. Don't ask.
He said his only son
“Y’no, I’m part-“
*gets kicked*
Me: part toast?
Kitten Lover xx yep I’m part toast cuz you are what you eat so I’m part toast part ramen noodles part fish part aIR
i was like "PaRt PoTaToOoOoOO!?"
Cat Loven you don’t eat air?
•ѕυммєя _ѕтαя• air my favourite food! I will never stop eating it!
Dad: YoUr mY OnLy ChIld
**Patrick goes to sisters house**
THIS WAS SAID BY ANOTHER PERSON BUT I ALSO REALISED IT
Is could have been his cousin
Son*
Me watching this :oh it’s not that long right :me seeing the whole thing: some one call Netflix
...
idk what that means
*I feel the Harry Potter vibes*
YESSS I’m not the only one!
Boy: You mean clifford- Me: *OF COURSE HES RED*
hahaha i instantly thought of that to lol im dying rn
“For the past 12 or 13 year” pat:”13” so ray said whaen they had kids he didn’t love pat!!?!!??!!?!,
@@lilztacos7652 right, stormy your comment kinda didn't sense Because it was clear it said 11 years later so no hate btw
Oop-
When I heard
Headmistress- you must be the chosen one
My little Harry Potter brain - hArRy!wHeRe R u!?
Yes
when he threw up i was like “is he pREgaNte
Ray: u suck
Patrick: YOU SWALLOW
Me at the end of the video: hey Patrick I guess u WAS right 🤣😂
:>
Me: god now u have a picture in my head
My mom: how dare u hurt my holy child
Me: but I ain't holy I curse when I mad =-= and umm other things-
L A M O
Yes make a part 2 for the kids life please 😢
No one:
Me:*Clicks every gay glmm I see*
Same TvT mostly BC I'm bi- lol
And I'm really crazy about Gay's- uvu don't askkk
@@kaytlynsimpkins7742 I'm straight but I love watching these lol
@@kaytlynsimpkins7742 same im bi and i love gay people..... my aunt likes them bc she thinks there funny lol
Same I do it cause one I support lgbt two cause I’m lesbian
"Cool, I'm famous"
I was just drinking meh cola then when I read that- I amost spit it out because I was dying of laughter ; ^ ;
Patrick: DAHM YOU GATCHA LOGIC. that is me every time I have to see the terror of a boy being pregnant
I mean it's possible but with a surgery transplantation
me watching this vid trying not to go crazy
the music: *mOnStErS uNdEr uR bEd*
me: AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Wait dose Patrick poop out the baby or pee it out
OH GOD THE IMAGE IS IN MY HEAD
Ikkkkk TwT our poor heads and thoughtsssss
@@kaytlynsimpkins7742 i know right
"the total is 2000" "damn pat your expensive"
uhhhhh more like 2000 for the ambulance ride alone
prob atleast 20000 for the head trauma at the very least
too mch money
Clifford the big red... cat?..😂 I love it👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Disclaimer: This is not meant to be a hate comment but rather a comment meant to show you how you can improve so you can meet your full potential!
It’s had a good plot, but here are some tips:
1. It helps keep the story on track if the characters keep a consistent personality. For example, Ray had originally been an edgy child, however he somehow immediately started changing. These relationships and changes need to grow throughout the story.
2. Keep consistent movements, in some parts of the story the movement was really nice however in some parts they were on one side only a room and are suddenly on the other side with just one slide. If this is due to powers, you can signify this with editing things like auras over the characters when they do these things.
3. Clear up some of the narrative, the relationship of Ray and Patrick seemed a little to quick, and the side relationships didn’t really make sense or align with the story. Also, how was Patrick sent to the hospital if his sister was also passed out. Who called the police? I’m not fully sure what happened to Clifford as well, in the beginning his character was introduced as obsessed but he just disappeared in the story.
3. I didn’t fully understand the whole castle part, however I did notice some stereotyping. For example, the princess character type. The fact ray is a prince, his parents specifically his dad hates gays, and Ray is a hybrid.
4. Showing the Creator is typically used for transitions or a side note about an inconsistency in the plot that needs to be cleared up. If a character is uncomfortable with something it would be better to show that in their reactions.
5. Your sound work is actually really nice, the sound is clear and you can tell it’s not cut off or anything. So good job on that ^-^
6. Eventually when you start making covers or special moments with characters it would be beneficial to edit the character. In the context of the gacha community that would mean you would have to either draw the character in a certain position that the gacha life doesn’t allow, draw or add touch ups like shadowing, lighting, hair strands, blood, etc. Doing this on your cover tends to bring in more of an audience for your videos and will help you move forward. For this I suggest checking out somebody like Deformed Reality and Emathyst. As well as for other things like these, checking out people like Hell_boi and Henry Kang would also help you grow. Another small tip is that episodes typically tend to be more popular and help you not only express the plot but let’s the reader keep track of what’s happening and enjoy your episode. Just don’t let your series drag on for like 5 seasons since then it typically makes the story really confusing and boring.
7. Gacha logic can be good in sometimes, but there are times where you have to explain it and can’t leave it up to gacha logic, or go with the natural flow of things. ( For example the male body physical isn’t capable of conceiving a child. So, it would make more sense for the couple of Ray and Patrick to adopt a child.
In the comedic aspect, you really hit the nail hard. It was an enjoyable story to watch. The bits of humor help build to that.
I hope you can use my advice to help push your channel into the spotlight. ^-^ This was a good start. I’m rooting for you!
Ps: My favorite part was when Patrick was screaming about food! He’s such a mood that it’s funny. ^-^
For someone who only has 11 subs they know a lot
I skipped so i didnt have to read. 😶
This is really long. But let me tell you something you expecting too much only the best gacha tubers can do stuff like that. This person is just starting give advice that would be useful to a starter not a pro.
I do apologize if I was rude but I was simply trying to help them improve. I do realize that I only have 11 subs, but I have been around the community for quite some time. I’ve come to find some gachatubers I’ve favorited, and I honestly like to see smaller creaters grow to their full potential. I know it may seem like a lot but it will help in the long run. As for the 11 subs, I currently have been thinking of ideas to kick off my own channel whether that is in animation or Gacha, well I’m still deciding that. Though, I still intend to help gachatubers grow into stars. I do hope that is an adequate explanation, if there are any more questions I would be glad to elaborate. Though, I do thank you for the concern on the quality of my advice. I do have to inform you that the quicker they start practicing on things like this, the more it will profit them. Either way, It is their own choice, it isn’t really a requirement but more like the factors that tend to be more popular in the community, My comment is just a suggestion on potential improvement. Though I understand your worries, you do have to realize, I’m not expecting to much of them. I know they can do it if they out the effort. It simply takes some practice as well as time. I would like you to realize that I took time out of my day as well in order to help them grow. I wouldn’t do this if I thought they couldn’t handle it. There are many people with potential, and sometimes, it just takes some constructive criticism to put them in the right direction. Anyways, I do hope that this is not taken in the wrong way. This comment is simply to clear up any potential questions or worry’s about my previous comment. Now I Bid you adieu.
@@xiao1205 oof, I couldn't read it all.
Well it is a copy but it's boy version so I am happy cus I am a boy
I thought I was the only one who noticed but I didn't say anything about it😅....I'm glad I'm not the only one😂😌
😭. Why is my name in every character that is gay. 😭😭😭🤦
@@reikosta4861 Sad dude
@@unknownphantomkill5991 sry to hear that.
@@unknownphantomkill5991 ok. Btw ur English good. It's not bad
"NOW MAKE BABIES!"😭😭😭💀💀
Make a part two and dye patricks hair and somthing dark happens
Kenzo Lampa please I don’t wanna see them with somin drama or mean
ME:hmmmmmmmm Patrick
ive heard it before..
me realising its my bro's name
Angela Ostheimer me too. It’s Patrick star 🤫
Am I the only one fan girling over every little thing they do at flippin 6am in the morning
levi joking to August if he could kiss her
while the some thats playing says mOnSTeRS UnDEr yOuR BEd
Ship names i thought of: Paty, Tricky, Patry :3
The video completely copied the beginning part from th-cam.com/video/g8FnydCT3-o/w-d-xo.html
??:Your the chosen one..
Me a crackhead: PotAh iS dAt YoiU~ 😳😂
Oh my god it's Clifford the big red do- cat!
Pat: *throws August at Levi*
Pat: NOW MAKE BABIES
Me: YASSSSSS SHIP NEED TO SAIL BOI
Like a minute later
August: *Pushes pat*
August: KISS
Me: OMG TWO SHIPS SAILED AT ONCE
Ray:”you know your in the girls bathroom” me:BISH WHY IS YOU IN THE GIRLS BATHROOM
Uhm- In the beginning, the flight attendant might've stolen his identity. She never gave back the identification, which is stuff like his license. ;-;
Can we just have a moment to appreciate her amazing grammar seriously 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
AHHHHHH GAY LOVE STORY 😂🤣 AND I CRIED WHEN PATRICK LEFT FOR US 😭😭😭😭
CLIFFORD THE BIG RED DOG MORE LIKE CLIFFORD THE BIG RED CAT *WhEeZe*
I would like to know why his parents were not invited to this
OH YEH- wait isn’t that cause he can’t tell anyone about the animals oof- then again the no rules- but ehhhh who knows. Gacha logic? Maybe.
When I looked at the title I thought it said a human in a all human school so my brain clicked on it.
You are heavily underrated, you put so much detail into the story. Im not even 5 minutes in and i can tell this will be good. 156 subs, nah make that 157. I dont usually sub to gacha tubers or youtubers in general but i can tell you will be one of the gacha tubers i am going to sub to. Reason why i can tell you are underrated is the fact you actually made the boy have to get registration and also when the dad screamed, usually gacha tubers wont do anything like it doesnt make a scene, but you, you made it a scene. 10000000000/10
ChopSticks make that 215 subs lol
Make that 229 subs
Make that 1000 subs gurl
ChopSticks ed
Ed