Honestly, all porter had to do was get the coffee shop guys number then have him be like "call me when my grandpa comes back". He could have legit lived and not even lost a body part. He also could have planned it pretty well cus his grandfather would go after him or his mom so he basically knows where he's going. It was just stupid he went right in without much of a plan on getting out. I mean the acid was a good idea but he didn't have much of a plan really.
History And opinions and like the police would probably be pretty chill about it because the grandfather is a murderer and literally stole the mother’s uterus.
@@juanruiz2550 You forgot the part where the mystery man from the coffee shop just said those things to the people he lures to Alum to trick them in thinking that they're something special. He was really just a body that the mystery man wanted to sell after he died
If that's your style you should read the book "I am legend" possibly the most depressing thing I've ever read but it's been a long time. Check it out some time
*BURP* Underworld, Porty! We’re going to the underworld.. Porty, come on it’s gonna be great great.. Porty! You just- *BURP* You just need to give me some of your blood Porty! Uh.. Oh geez I don’t know about this Gramps COME ON PORTY, I’M RUNNING *BURP* OUT OF BUTTERMILK *BUUURP* PORTY JUST LEAVE IT NEXT TO THE DUMPSTER WITH SOME FOOD AND A FEW THOUSAND DOLLARS PORTY
David Littlejohn And the fact it doesn’t have that ending, the fact it’s dark and grim all the way through, is what makes this such an amazing piece imo. The imagery this writer is able to inject into my mind is just incredible.
I’m so happy to see this channel grow to almost half a million subscribers. I have crazy insomnia and use your voice to help me fall asleep. Been here since day one, keep up the great work!!
@@twistedsaints6995 I can't fall asleep to Nature's Temper. I get to involved with his story telling and can't fall asleep, afraid I'll miss what's happening next. Lol He's just too good of a story teller.
Hell is 250km below ground its location is well known. Dont ask where its everywhere below the 250th kilometer. At the 50th kilometer you brake through the upper crust and enter the great void between heaven and hell. If you manage to fly down you will enter hell. Yes fly because everything flips in the middle and you need to fly up into hell. Earth is not a planet but a endless rift dividing the two realms. We are on the haven's side.
@@michaelhadley1040 shut the fuck up goober. you're responsible for your own satefy and that of your family's. Not the police. Those tyrants only serve to produce income for the state, and will lock you up just as soon as help you.
I agree after all the horror through out this full story, once I realized the gravity of that line, I was dumbstruck with absolute horror. Bloody amazing story!!! Well done the author, words are not enough to describe how much I was drawn in to this story , so well written and narrated. 10/10 all round!
Man... if Porter hadn't killed his grandpa then old dude would have killed more people. How is this about vengeance when Porters grandfather could strike again and come for him. My heart broke for the boy. He really just wanted to be left alone.
Nice story. Sucks what happened to Porter but considering all the close calls he had up until the end, made sense that was where he ended up with no hope of escape. I appreciated that the story treated him like a regular teenager and gave him all the faults and lack of skill that someone like him would have. He never accomplished anything more than what someone his age could feasibly do, which made his victories and failures a lot more meaningful. I will say that while Porter was acting out of revenge, it was made clear that the grandfather wasn't going to stop coming back and attacking Porter and his mother. He was led to believe their family was special and the only way he could return was using their bodies. So yeah Porter couldn't just let it go. In hindsight Porter could've explained to authorities that his grandfather was targeting the family and they needed protection. Could've caught the grandfather that way.
When I first saw the title I thought, “This ought to be good” then I saw the length and thought, oh hell yes this IS gonna be great! Thank you tremendously for such a long effort and amazing narration! Loved every bit!
You got to give his Grandpa's props because he's a fucking man son.the demon told his grandpa that he needed his dick and he squatted down cut it off and went on his merry way like it wasn't nothing. He's like a samurai
Holy cow! That story had just about every emotion us humans have.....Narration was perfect. But the writing goes way beyond your imagination, wildest nightmares or dreams. Thank you very much Christifer D. Ewing .....
What grandson? I'm so sorry that I chained your brother's neck to the wall and drained him of all of his blood. But it's cool. This place is awesome!!! Wtf
Like the fact that some people praise the author and he gives thanks for his very poor writing. Just because a story is written out with extreme length doesn't make it any good
@@greatgallade you do realize that most of the stories are from people that are subscribers right?and it's freaking bulshit that you complain about it because number one if you don't like it you don't have to listen to it and number to these people are taking time out from their day because they enjoyed their narrator so much and it's nice to have a narrator that actually interact with his subs.there are very very very few narrator's out there that do that. Nature's temper does it dark somnium does and Mr Black and disciple does it but I don't know of any other ones that do it. I'm not trying to be a dick it's just it's free content...and do you know how long it takes to edit and read and add music and sound effects to even just a 20-minute story? It takes hours.
@@bigcountrymountainman9740 I have the story my time that's enough payment to give it criticism And yeah i know what it takes for the video to be made you idiot but if you want me to criticize mr. Creeps he does the same voice for literally everybody and he doesn't have any acting and is Creepypastas however I never thought that was a problem. I know what it takes to make a video because I've done it and the past with other channels with my friends yes editing takes a long time but there's a difference between all the effort and the end product not being up to par and that's mostly due to the writing you clearly don't know or understand why people give criticism out and my payment is my time my time is my most precious resource like anybody else is if I give this thing an hour and 30 minutes it damn better be good and for the first 40 minutes it was barely so far the first 10 minutes are a nightmare to get through
@@Hypocricy_rules_supreme Hi Ma'am..I belongs to an ancient Dayak's head hunter clans of Borneo called Dusun. Please allow me to clarify, when I said our language, I mean the national language of our nation; Malay language. I hope that explains.
Markus Lemerise I don’t. He made that choice (kid or not). Should had not let his emotion and revenge ran his actions. People warn him to not to but he decided. He didn’t listen and he pay the price.
"My Grandpa sent me recordings of his visits to the underworld" He lived there for 69 years and became roomates with lucifer...he even had cerberus as a pet
Sabian M Him: “WTF, DOWN CERBY!” Lucifer: “damnit” Him: “I TOLD YOU TO KEEP HIM AWAY FROM MY SHOES” Lucifer: “yeah, sorry” Him: “FOR F*CK SAKE THIS IS THE THIRD TIME THIS WEEK”
Oh my gosh I knew that this whole time as wicked as his grandpa was that he was describing hell.and it completely confirm to me when the kid got there because everybody had certain abilities and they had a * boss." also they said they couldn't figure out how his grandfather kept coming and going when no one else ever had.
@@wyntersteele1a which story would have been a little more accurate in itsrealism though. Technically no one is in hell. No one will be in hell until after the great white throne judgment. Right now everyone that's died, that hasn't been born again is in Hades if you're NOT a Jew. If you ARE a Jew and you die having rejected CHRIST, you go to a place called Sheol until the Great White Throne Judgement. That's where Christ judges the sinners of the world and the judgement seat of Christ which is called the BEMA is where those that have repented and put their faith and trust in Jesus Christ and turned from their sin will be rewarded by Christ HIMSELF and enter into heaven andthere will be no more tears and no more pain no more suffering no more sickness and there shall we forever be with our heavenly Father. The one that spoke entire galaxies and star systems existence!!!!
Wow, I actually listened to the whole story and IT DIDN'T EVEN FEEL LIKE AN HOUR AND A HALF! Great story, I loved the narration and the descriptive imagery. If only I could lay my eyes on that gorgeous art...
Protagonist death done right! Not dying while narrating, but rather having someone else take over for him by having a way to let them know before he dies is correct. This story is the perfect example of how that should be handled. Props to the author.
it kills me so much that people want to put such a strict ban on ways to get guns when they have absolutely no clue whatsoever that all you have to do is go to a local flea market and you can buy any gun that you want even machine guns and it's not illegal.people think that it's illegal to own a machine gun in the United States and it's not you just can't carry them in public whatsoever. You can buy them from flea markets legally and it's not illegal for them to sell them to you if you and they both turn in the taxes on it to the IRS.
Matthew Dixon the narrator is British, hence his statement and the humor of my joke. It’s already known how pathetically easy it is to buy a gun in the USA
@@michaelhadley1040 what's wrong with having a hunting rifle for killing deer a shotgun for killing rabbits squirrels pheasants and turkeys and a pistol for home protection? Not a damn thing
@@BladeMasterGrom13 do you know that around 6 million lives were saved last year due to a homeowner having a gun... And 71% of the interactions with a criminal in the home, when the criminal saw the gun they fled and there was no altercation.
Damn. Took me a night and a afternooon to listen and imagine the words. Dont think a movie would do this justice. Audio was more than enough for me to choke on what i was hearing. I admire the creativity, beautifully dark and horrid
Really liked the story. Only issue i had was with the whole "you go out looking for revenge and you'll end up dead" thing. I get the whole an eye for and eye and we all go blind but to be fair the kid wasnt just some bloodlusted killer out for revenge. He seemed to be doing it largely in part to protect himself and his family since he knew grandpa would keep coming for them to "recharge" his disney pass. He sought to kill his grandfather out of necessity and self preservation of himself and loved ones. Shit i wouldnt even want to have kids if i was oart of the old mans family. Apart from that the lore and story itself was excellent.
In defense of that line, the guy didn’t know anything about the kid’s past at all though, without any context he just assumed it was a typical rage and bloodlust fueled revenge quest.
@@YokaiX Thats not the argument, the point is that the author is trying to convey a point that when seeking revenge you have to dig 2 graves. The problem isnthat the kid wasnt out for revenge, he was trying to protect his family from his crazy gramps that he knew would keep offing members of his family.
karaso0 no I get that, I’m just sayin the line itself from the coffee shop owner was due to his limited comprehension of the backstory and reasonings for Porter’s mission. As for the author’s point and what he’s trying to convey, that’s a different subject, I’m not talking about that
@@YokaiX But that's my whole argument, the authors message is just that but the story is really getting the point across. The shop owner and the guy at the end that kills the kid are part of the story so they perspective is really irrelevant. They're just acting out their parts.
karaso0 ok, I actually agree with you, I’m just saying there was a rational reason for why the shop owner said what he said. My bad for not making that clear. I get what you’re saying, the author wants to convey a message about revenge etc, but it doesn’t work as well considering he had understandable and rational reasoning for wanting to kill his grandfather. It wasn’t simply about revenge, it was about defense as well
Coming back to say: I finished this story yesterday. I listen to horror narrations much of the day, five days a week, and can count the times I've actually lost sleep on one hand. The imagery at the end of this one did it. Jeebus.
You’re an AMAZING writer! I’m going to go as far as to say this should be made into a movie somehow! I genuinely didn’t want this story to end! Great stuff!
9:11 "...with a black hat and a tall coat..." Was that mixed up? Shouldn't it be, a black coat and a tall hat? I mean, I'm not sure what a tall coat is. A long coat, sure. But tall?
What's up Kari!? A tall coat is the same as a long coat.. What I wear when I HAVE to wear a Suit.. Like a long tailored western cut. He probably meant A "Tall coat" and "Top Hat" ... Hope all is well... 💯⚡🎸🖤🤠⚡
I love lisening to your narration as i force my body back in some kind of shape as chronic pain did brough havoc on my stamina and strenght. So i gladly thank you for this involontary help toward a better life quality.
It was perfect besides one part .i dont personally think the family's response or lack thereof emotional anger was shown clearly enough about the grandfather. The mom says nothing and is forgetten and the son actually reacted to seeing him very naively. Like how are u angry enough to go on a dangerous trip and sacrifice a body part but not angry enough to try to kill the man on the spot?
@@xXJLNINJAXx Perhaps he was afraid that the folks around the town would turn on him if he did that, but yeah it would have been less risky to finish him within the town instead.
Something tells me this was written by a Rick and Morty fan. Not a bad thing of course, excellent story and by far one of my favorites, great work author!
I loved this. It was long, entertaining, and really draws you in. It’s got somewhat relatable characters and a plot that makes the hour and a half worth it. I just wish it was a little more scary to be honest. I wish we saw/heard more about the boss with the nice and creepy smile. And it would be nice to have more to think about in your horrible, lovely dreams that make you bolt awake at night wanting to learn more.
Anyone get that feeling throughout the story that you feel like it’s the end but then you look and you’re far from the end?
Yes
Delusional Kagamine just did at 17 minutes in :/
lol yes I hate when those happen!! Like “oh yea this sounds like a good ending- oh there’s still an hour left”
YES
Continuously!
This grandpa is the definition of a florida man
A bully?
this comment had me rolling
exactly
Farhan Sinha u are right
an insane maniac who loves the underworld knows several demons and likes buttermilk seems... legit...
Someone: *Finds Oil in the Underworld.*
US Military: *Fortunate Son and Helicopter blades sound in the distance*
It's fortunate son
@@StoneCorazon F
I love the smell of sulfur in the morning
"We have done so much with so little for so long that now we can do anything with nothing forever. "
Hoorah
Honestly, all porter had to do was get the coffee shop guys number then have him be like "call me when my grandpa comes back". He could have legit lived and not even lost a body part. He also could have planned it pretty well cus his grandfather would go after him or his mom so he basically knows where he's going. It was just stupid he went right in without much of a plan on getting out. I mean the acid was a good idea but he didn't have much of a plan really.
History And opinions and like the police would probably be pretty chill about it because the grandfather is a murderer and literally stole the mother’s uterus.
I would have just told him he could have the grandfather body to get back and forth since he was going to kill him. I felt that would be smarter.
Juan Ruiz I wonder if he would’ve accepted that now?
@@jim6480 I mean like the grandfather said, "Our family is really important here." He would have gotten a whole body. Wouldn't that be worth more?
@@juanruiz2550 You forgot the part where the mystery man from the coffee shop just said those things to the people he lures to Alum to trick them in thinking that they're something special. He was really just a body that the mystery man wanted to sell after he died
This is the kind of history that don't make you felling any better at the end, it's just pain and misery from beginning to end.
A masterpiece
That's a stretch
Lol
Super edge lord master paco
If that's your style you should read the book "I am legend" possibly the most depressing thing I've ever read but it's been a long time. Check it out some time
Leave the internet dude
*BURP* Underworld, Porty! We’re going to the underworld.. Porty, come on it’s gonna be great great.. Porty! You just- *BURP* You just need to give me some of your blood Porty!
Uh.. Oh geez I don’t know about this Gramps
COME ON PORTY, I’M RUNNING *BURP* OUT OF BUTTERMILK *BUUURP* PORTY JUST LEAVE IT NEXT TO THE DUMPSTER WITH SOME FOOD AND A FEW THOUSAND DOLLARS PORTY
He said Porter so much I thought I was on a train
Love the Rick and Morty reference
The dark and twisted adventures of prick and porty
😅😂😉
I knew I wasn't the only one that made that connection!
That was about the creepiest story ive ever heard. That took unknown imagination! Great narriation.
Thanks!
@@MasterGamer501 Well Done!👏👍
@@MasterGamer501 you wrote this? It's freaking awesome thank you for sharing
Have you seen the zombie one in the 1800's its also very good imo better than this one.
Theres better just look deep like mr long fingers it accualy afgects me
Well, that was the most interesting episode of Rick and Morty I've ever seen.
😂😂😂
😂😂😂
How tf did you see any of this
@@BCASgaming funny thing is while Im still listening to this I now can't unsee it.. lol!!
NO MORRTY THAT RECORDING IS PRIVATE
Imagine what Porter's mom is goin thru right now, this is deppressing. I thought this would have a good end or at least not tramautizing
David Littlejohn And the fact it doesn’t have that ending, the fact it’s dark and grim all the way through, is what makes this such an amazing piece imo. The imagery this writer is able to inject into my mind is just incredible.
it’s not real bro 👍
@@grrrlkult9216 I know, but you cant say that story at the end was tramautizingly sad 😭😭
Aaron Lancaster yup
vein and nerve still living christmas tree
Think about if the mom ever finds the recordings he took and what the artist showed at the end..
I’m so happy to see this channel grow to almost half a million subscribers. I have crazy insomnia and use your voice to help me fall asleep. Been here since day one, keep up the great work!!
Another good one to listen to while going to sleep is nature’stemper
Same here, that and keeps me awake and focused on something while on the nightshift
@@twistedsaints6995 I can't fall asleep to Nature's Temper. I get to involved with his story telling and can't fall asleep, afraid I'll miss what's happening next. Lol
He's just too good of a story teller.
Kari I’m sure it has nothing to do with the fact that he looks like Thor and loves animals 🙂
Same here. It makes me feel relaxed enough to sleep
" I almost bit the dust, but maybe some of it got in my eyes. "
That is a very genius way to look at the contrast of a bad situation. Wow.
Yes very very clever
@@christopherrobin3763 I've heard a couple of stories from this author and he seems to be very intelligent
@@bigcountrymountainman9740 yes I see that what are some more
@@christopherrobin3763 huh Chris? I have no clue what your comment means, but then again maybe I'm stupid LOL
@@bigcountrymountainman9740 I asked what are the others I'd enjoy hearing them wow what was that about
Damn, now he'll never get that cute girl at the counter.
Legit the only thought in my head
I swear man 😂
I was so pissed when he took a tongue... I wanted him to take a kidney
I was relieved when he said tongue and not...
Dylan Johnson why? I would give it up
"I don't believe In heaven or hell"
Dude... You standin in the underworld wym
Hey, there's people with COVID who think COVID doesn't exist, so...
@@lilahdog568 seems legit
Hell is 250km below ground its location is well known. Dont ask where its everywhere below the 250th kilometer. At the 50th kilometer you brake through the upper crust and enter the great void between heaven and hell. If you manage to fly down you will enter hell. Yes fly because everything flips in the middle and you need to fly up into hell. Earth is not a planet but a endless rift dividing the two realms. We are on the haven's side.
@@vinportobg wHat that's kinda...
Psy ERroR bullshit?
"Guns are for criminals and police"
Laughs in Texan
Think they are the same
lol
Got a shot gun a rifle and a 4wd
Abel Aldrete no one needs more than 1 gun. Sadly we shouldnt need any at all
@@michaelhadley1040 shut the fuck up goober. you're responsible for your own satefy and that of your family's. Not the police. Those tyrants only serve to produce income for the state, and will lock you up just as soon as help you.
comparing your old narrations with these new ones is like night and day, the tone and audio quality has sky rocketed!
What do you mean. He still sounds constipated... Maybe he took a tiny crap, but that's it
The uhhhhhh is not as noticeable
josh winegard tf you talking about of course it is lmao, just go listen to his first few videos lmao
@@sam-to1mw I know its there and I can never listen to any of his videos and not listen for it the first couple of videos he came out with were bad
I like his old ones better. They seemed more creepy
"I like vivid colors, they help me think artistically." When he said that im like OH SHIT.
Yo same lol I was like shit he gonna die
Yo same lol I was like shit he gonna die
Yo same lol I was like shit he gonna die
I agree after all the horror through out this full story, once I realized the gravity of that line, I was dumbstruck with absolute horror. Bloody amazing story!!! Well done the author, words are not enough to describe how much I was drawn in to this story , so well written and narrated. 10/10 all round!
Yo same lol I was like shit he gonna die
I mean the kid kinda didn't have a choice. His grandfather would keep hunting his family down so he can work for that one guy.
Man... if Porter hadn't killed his grandpa then old dude would have killed more people. How is this about vengeance when Porters grandfather could strike again and come for him. My heart broke for the boy. He really just wanted to be left alone.
I finally understood the depth of grandpa's depravity when I learned he liked buttermilk. 😱🤢🤮
Yup, that stuff is nasty af.
Pancakes?
Y'all sipping on too much Truly
Oml right so gross unless it's been made into other things like cake or ranch or pancakes etc. Its absolutely horrid no doubt about it ick
@@candydaisydunlopa9403 ranch dressing has always grossed me out big time. 😝 (insert sickly green pukey face here)
Nice story. Sucks what happened to Porter but considering all the close calls he had up until the end, made sense that was where he ended up with no hope of escape. I appreciated that the story treated him like a regular teenager and gave him all the faults and lack of skill that someone like him would have. He never accomplished anything more than what someone his age could feasibly do, which made his victories and failures a lot more meaningful.
I will say that while Porter was acting out of revenge, it was made clear that the grandfather wasn't going to stop coming back and attacking Porter and his mother. He was led to believe their family was special and the only way he could return was using their bodies. So yeah Porter couldn't just let it go. In hindsight Porter could've explained to authorities that his grandfather was targeting the family and they needed protection. Could've caught the grandfather that way.
This should be a movie, really cool
they did a cartoon
@@baiatubaiatu2659 where can i find it?
@@skanlessdago adult swim
@@baiatubaiatu2659 whats it called?
A lot of the creepy pastas should be vids
"I just bit the dust, maybe some got in my eye."
Bars 🔥
jonasfan9878 facts! Straight poetry!
Nigga spitting fire like a dragon.
is this the new bladee track
When I first saw the title I thought, “This ought to be good” then I saw the length and thought, oh hell yes this IS gonna be great! Thank you tremendously for such a long effort and amazing narration! Loved every bit!
"What looks like the man carrying my grandpa's sexual organ.."
Me: Hold Up......
He must've had a magnifying glass 😂😂
You got to give his Grandpa's props because he's a fucking man son.the demon told his grandpa that he needed his dick and he squatted down cut it off and went on his merry way like it wasn't nothing. He's like a samurai
@@bigcountrymountainman9740 I'll turn in my man card & keep my dick if that's the only way to have sex again 😂
Ottis Deaton damn your ended this mans hole career
@@timchris7569 EWW
This feels like a very evil, twisted version of Rick and Morty.
Holy cow! That story had just about every emotion us humans have.....Narration was perfect. But the writing goes way beyond your imagination, wildest nightmares or dreams. Thank you very much Christifer D. Ewing .....
"an image burned into my member" was that supposed to be memory? Cause that really changes what that means, haha
yeah I was confused as well lol rewound it to check if I heard right
getting his member tattooed.
It's kermit the frog
Rick and Morty Meets H.P. Lovecraft that's what this one reminded me of I dig it love to hear a second part
The dark and twisted adventures of prick and porty
You should join my reddit/discord, I'll be releasing a novel series set in the same universe with reoccurring characters!
Jim A send me link please highly interested and support up and coming authors you sir are a blessing in the universe the highest powers thank you
@@kayko8783 link plz
@@WestcehpehBamablock discord.gg/VCgU6Ag
I am a truck driver, I listen to your stories while driving. i love every minute always satisfied
That story was incredible. Whoever wrote this has amazing talent. This is the best I have heard in a looong time. Hope to see more from him/her.
Then you should join the reddit and discord
What grandson?
I'm so sorry that I chained your brother's neck to the wall and drained him of all of his blood.
But it's cool.
This place is awesome!!! Wtf
Like the fact that some people praise the author and he gives thanks for his very poor writing. Just because a story is written out with extreme length doesn't make it any good
@@greatgallade it's a shame that you complain about free content
@@bigcountrymountainman9740 free content doesn't mean it's good content
@@greatgallade you do realize that most of the stories are from people that are subscribers right?and it's freaking bulshit that you complain about it because number one if you don't like it you don't have to listen to it and number to these people are taking time out from their day because they enjoyed their narrator so much and it's nice to have a narrator that actually interact with his subs.there are very very very few narrator's out there that do that. Nature's temper does it dark somnium does and Mr Black and disciple does it but I don't know of any other ones that do it. I'm not trying to be a dick it's just it's free content...and do you know how long it takes to edit and read and add music and sound effects to even just a 20-minute story? It takes hours.
@@bigcountrymountainman9740 I have the story my time that's enough payment to give it criticism
And yeah i know what it takes for the video to be made you idiot but if you want me to criticize mr. Creeps he does the same voice for literally everybody and he doesn't have any acting and is Creepypastas however I never thought that was a problem. I know what it takes to make a video because I've done it and the past with other channels with my friends yes editing takes a long time but there's a difference between all the effort and the end product not being up to par and that's mostly due to the writing you clearly don't know or understand why people give criticism out and my payment is my time my time is my most precious resource like anybody else is if I give this thing an hour and 30 minutes it damn better be good and for the first 40 minutes it was barely so far the first 10 minutes are a nightmare to get through
"you called this world earth, we called the underworld alam"
Alam in our language means world
Fascinating. May I ask what tribe you belong to?
@@Hypocricy_rules_supreme Hi Ma'am..I belongs to an ancient Dayak's head hunter clans of Borneo called Dusun. Please allow me to clarify, when I said our language, I mean the national language of our nation; Malay language. I hope that explains.
Alam is world in Arabic
@@ompingounandi6258 im malaysian too
@@thebush6379 Kabare sahabaaat..
I got sad when he lost his tongue. Imagine not being able to taste or talk ever again.
Markus Lemerise I don’t. He made that choice (kid or not). Should had not let his emotion and revenge ran his actions. People warn him to not to but he decided. He didn’t listen and he pay the price.
To be completely honest, I think he has more pressing issues to worry about right about now.
@@parkerowens9118 i commented when he lost his tongue and then he died after
@@markuslemerise5812 He didn't die. He is still alive in that state.
What? Imagine not being able to taste dick an talk about dick? ...ill pass lol
When I heard the price to get to the other world was an organ, I thought the worst organ to loose would be your skin ...
This nigga 😂😂😂
Bruh I started laughing when his grandfather pulled a knife on a homeless guy and said "hold this camera, I'm making a film for my grandkid."
The stories of hell are always so damn interesting. Can’t wait to listen, thanks Nature’s
Love the pfp
This isn't about hell it's more a form of purgatory
Hell’s overrated trust me... it gets boring eventually after the nonstop torture and suffering becomes “meh” to you
Natures? This is mr creeps channel not natures temper lol
"My Grandpa sent me recordings of his visits to the underworld"
He lived there for 69 years and became roomates with lucifer...he even had cerberus as a pet
Sabian M lol
He ain’t cursed,he’s blessed.
Sabian M
Him: “WTF, DOWN CERBY!”
Lucifer: “damnit”
Him: “I TOLD YOU TO KEEP HIM AWAY FROM MY SHOES”
Lucifer: “yeah, sorry”
Him: “FOR F*CK SAKE THIS IS THE THIRD TIME THIS WEEK”
One of the new robots they just designed on the mobile game war robots is called Cerberus. What is Cerberus
Nice
The part that really got me was Porter learning...and seeing...what became of his dad, knowing he will meet the same demise
Oh my gosh I knew that this whole time as wicked as his grandpa was that he was describing hell.and it completely confirm to me when the kid got there because everybody had certain abilities and they had a * boss." also they said they couldn't figure out how his grandfather kept coming and going when no one else ever had.
Glad you liked my stories bro thx
Matthew Dixon he kept coming and going because of the boss.
I knew it was hell also. What other place could it be?
@@wyntersteele1a which story would have been a little more accurate in itsrealism though. Technically no one is in hell. No one will be in hell until after the great white throne judgment. Right now everyone that's died, that hasn't been born again is in Hades if you're NOT a Jew.
If you ARE a Jew and you die having rejected CHRIST, you go to a place called Sheol until the Great White Throne Judgement. That's where Christ judges the sinners of the world and the judgement seat of Christ which is called the BEMA is where those that have repented and put their faith and trust in Jesus Christ and turned from their sin will be rewarded by Christ HIMSELF and enter into heaven andthere will be no more tears and no more pain no more suffering no more sickness and there shall we forever be with
our heavenly Father. The one that spoke entire galaxies and star systems existence!!!!
@@bigcountrymountainman9740 dude how much fucking meth are you on jesus
That was the best story I think I’ve EVER heard. The last line tho: what a perfect spine chilling way to end it!!
Why did this feel like Rick and morty
It does have a twisty Rick and Morty vibe
The dark and twisted adventures of prick and porty
Lol ikr
Shut up Morty
Grandpa and Porty
This story is truly chilling, it left me with cold sweat.
Just am starting but already liked the video based on 2 things. Narrator and length of story. Thats more than enough to sell me happiness
Wow, I actually listened to the whole story and IT DIDN'T EVEN FEEL LIKE AN HOUR AND A HALF! Great story, I loved the narration and the descriptive imagery. If only I could lay my eyes on that gorgeous art...
My eyes started to sting when he realized his payment was his tongue. 😭 damn that grandfather!
Excellent story! ❤
Protagonist death done right! Not dying while narrating, but rather having someone else take over for him by having a way to let them know before he dies is correct. This story is the perfect example of how that should be handled. Props to the author.
When you realize buttermilk wont spoil at room temp
tf
Kamron Butler because it’s already spoiled lol but served cold
My grandpa sent me letter from his visits to the underworld.
He says the happy hotel is ok.
Hah I get it
Apparently theres a spider with kinky boots there.
"But really this deer guy is freaking me out"
1:18:15 holy crap got em good
Ultra instinct
Oh, H3LLZ YEAH!!!
An hour n half! I can't wait to jump into this story!
Oh, man... this one stirred so many emotions and the end almost made me cry...
48:10
He had his chance to clap cheeks and ruined it.
Damn this is definitely one of my favorites
TheKyleman999 same.
“What kind of world would it be if I could get a gun that easily”. (Laughs uncomfortably in American)
it kills me so much that people want to put such a strict ban on ways to get guns when they have absolutely no clue whatsoever that all you have to do is go to a local flea market and you can buy any gun that you want even machine guns and it's not illegal.people think that it's illegal to own a machine gun in the United States and it's not you just can't carry them in public whatsoever. You can buy them from flea markets legally and it's not illegal for them to sell them to you if you and they both turn in the taxes on it to the IRS.
Matthew Dixon the narrator is British, hence his statement and the humor of my joke. It’s already known how pathetically easy it is to buy a gun in the USA
Matthew Dixon it kills me to think Americans think they need automatics much less more than 1 gun in general
@@michaelhadley1040 what's wrong with having a hunting rifle for killing deer a shotgun for killing rabbits squirrels pheasants and turkeys and a pistol for home protection? Not a damn thing
@@BladeMasterGrom13 do you know that around 6 million lives were saved last year due to a homeowner having a gun... And 71% of the interactions with a criminal in the home, when the criminal saw the gun they fled and there was no altercation.
This was one hell of a story! It was very well detailed without being to detailed. The twist was so obvious but never expected
looks like its time for crusade number 10 who's ready to invade alum?
DEUS VULT DEUS VULT DEUS VULT!!
So I tried to fall asleep to this but the story was just too good smh. Great narration!
Same
Thin King same
This was a great story, the long ones are my favorite ones. I wish he didn't have to die but it was a great story
Damn. Took me a night and a afternooon to listen and imagine the words. Dont think a movie would do this justice. Audio was more than enough for me to choke on what i was hearing. I admire the creativity, beautifully dark and horrid
Back again for an all time favorite
Really liked the story. Only issue i had was with the whole "you go out looking for revenge and you'll end up dead" thing.
I get the whole an eye for and eye and we all go blind but to be fair the kid wasnt just some bloodlusted killer out for revenge. He seemed to be doing it largely in part to protect himself and his family since he knew grandpa would keep coming for them to "recharge" his disney pass.
He sought to kill his grandfather out of necessity and self preservation of himself and loved ones. Shit i wouldnt even want to have kids if i was oart of the old mans family.
Apart from that the lore and story itself was excellent.
In defense of that line, the guy didn’t know anything about the kid’s past at all though, without any context he just assumed it was a typical rage and bloodlust fueled revenge quest.
@@YokaiX Thats not the argument, the point is that the author is trying to convey a point that when seeking revenge you have to dig 2 graves. The problem isnthat the kid wasnt out for revenge, he was trying to protect his family from his crazy gramps that he knew would keep offing members of his family.
karaso0 no I get that, I’m just sayin the line itself from the coffee shop owner was due to his limited comprehension of the backstory and reasonings for Porter’s mission. As for the author’s point and what he’s trying to convey, that’s a different subject, I’m not talking about that
@@YokaiX But that's my whole argument, the authors message is just that but the story is really getting the point across. The shop owner and the guy at the end that kills the kid are part of the story so they perspective is really irrelevant. They're just acting out their parts.
karaso0 ok, I actually agree with you, I’m just saying there was a rational reason for why the shop owner said what he said. My bad for not making that clear. I get what you’re saying, the author wants to convey a message about revenge etc, but it doesn’t work as well considering he had understandable and rational reasoning for wanting to kill his grandfather. It wasn’t simply about revenge, it was about defense as well
Coming back to say: I finished this story yesterday. I listen to horror narrations much of the day, five days a week, and can count the times I've actually lost sleep on one hand. The imagery at the end of this one did it. Jeebus.
Absolutely amazing story. These stories are why I stay a patron. Keep up the great work
Holy crap this ended badly and sadly
I am so happy you narrated my story! Thank you so much! You did ask excellent job!
You did a good job writing it too man
What make you think of it
Attached Grinch you got more stories ????
You’re an AMAZING writer! I’m going to go as far as to say this should be made into a movie somehow! I genuinely didn’t want this story to end! Great stuff!
Amazing story dude
Poor homeless guy he just wanted to get to the supermarket :C
9:11 "...with a black hat and a tall coat..."
Was that mixed up? Shouldn't it be, a black coat and a tall hat? I mean, I'm not sure what a tall coat is. A long coat, sure. But tall?
Probably meant tailcoat
Short skirt and a long jacket.
What's up Kari!? A tall coat is the same as a long coat.. What I wear when I HAVE to wear a Suit.. Like a long tailored western cut. He probably meant A "Tall coat" and "Top Hat" ... Hope all is well... 💯⚡🎸🖤🤠⚡
Shhhh it was an inside job lol
@@scottcol23 aaand now I have the theme fron CHUCK in my head. Lol
this was fucking awesome, thanks to mr creeps for reading and to the writer for this story, music was also great
Gotta love the consistent five o clock uploads!
Holy shit. Had me listening to every second of this story. Disturbing yet marvelous and beautiful, this one is something special.
This is still one of my favorite stories to come back to. I would love it if they had more stories featuring allum and the artist
I literally fall asleep to these every night I just want to thank you so much for reading these much love to your channel and the authors!!!!
Props to the strange man for trying to keep the protagonist out of the underworld😔👌
I love lisening to your narration as i force my body back in some kind of shape as chronic pain did brough havoc on my stamina and strenght.
So i gladly thank you for this involontary help toward a better life quality.
fly famille me too actually! Hope you find some relief ❤️ we need to get our quality of life back - it’s so depressing some days! Take care!
Thanks for the continued & excellent entertainment. It’s truly appreciated. Thanks
I’ve been listening to creepypastas for years now and this is truly the greatest narration I’ve ever heard!
I'm addicted... To This Story!!!
Its amazing I loved it! Really well written.
"Before you embark on a journey of revenge, dig two graves."
This is one of the darkest stories I think I've ever heard.
That was crazy and well written. Awesome narration
It was perfect besides one part .i dont personally think the family's response or lack thereof emotional anger was shown clearly enough about the grandfather. The mom says nothing and is forgetten and the son actually reacted to seeing him very naively. Like how are u angry enough to go on a dangerous trip and sacrifice a body part but not angry enough to try to kill the man on the spot?
Man the art on these stories is fantastic! All of the "pasta people" have good connections in the illustration world.
If your eating cheese and see a cat drinking urine RUN
Aiden MARSH why
Erm?
He’s mocking another creepy pasta title I watched just before this. If you hear thunder and it’s snowing. Run
Michael Hadley when you explain the joke -_-
Bacon Master people needed explaining so I did. I’d probably ask too bad i not watched it prior
lol is it bad that when i first saw the title my reaction was ‘is his name Orpheus?’
Damn this one was killer props Mr. Creeps
This is by far my favorite... wow this is great!
This is my favorite horror story that ive heard, and i love all the different points of view given, especially toward the end.
i love how this was released on midnight on the dot lol kinda creepy
Sounds like an old Tales from the Crypt show, lol
Or _"Tales from the Darkside"_ ...classics
That conclusion paragraph was beautiful
Holy shit... It’s been a long time since I’ve heard a story this creepy and good. Awesome job!
1:16:36 damn took a turn
that last phrase “there’s a reason humans called us demons” honestly shouts danger danger danger danger in my head
Wow that was a epic story that would have turned out way different if the kid wasn't so blinded by rage and revenge.
He didn't have many choices their. his grandfather would have come for him or his mother to collect more body parts anyways.
@@R0230R he should have just killed him in town, but then he probably wouldn't have found out about his father
@@xXJLNINJAXx
Perhaps he was afraid that the folks around the town would turn on him if he did that, but yeah it would have been less risky to finish him within the town instead.
@@R0230R He was, but he could have explained why as well. After all, he was his grandson.
@@xXJLNINJAXx
lol i thought you were talking about the grandson not the grandfather.
Damn, this was a GREAT story, and you did a REALLY GOOD JOB narrating it, Mr. Creeps! #Blessings #KeepUpTheGoodWork 👏🏿👏🏿👍🏿👍🏿✌🏿🙏🏾
But why the black hands.
@@markmulfinger3922 are u stupid?
@@markmulfinger3922 cause the poster is black....
What a great story . I normally listen to stories while going to bed but I couldnt fall asleep cause the story was to good .
I love these hour and a half vids with no ads. Thanks Mr Creeps :)
WOW! This had me captivated & spellbound the entire time! EXCELLENT WORK!!!
Something tells me this was written by a Rick and Morty fan.
Not a bad thing of course, excellent story and by far one of my favorites, great work author!
Damn that was good. And had an actual ending unlike a lot of others. Thanks for the entertaining story.
I loved this. It was long, entertaining, and really draws you in. It’s got somewhat relatable characters and a plot that makes the hour and a half worth it. I just wish it was a little more scary to be honest. I wish we saw/heard more about the boss with the nice and creepy smile. And it would be nice to have more to think about in your horrible, lovely dreams that make you bolt awake at night wanting to learn more.