Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line I also like the character development I like how it deviates from the actual story I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work
The only bad part about this is the fact that Sasuke even started standing a chance in the dome with haku like even in the anime with his showing on he couldn't do it and he had Naruto to take some of the shots
Thanks to my headcanon of Being X's bits influencing these timelines in an attempt to rebuild (because there's a crossover fic with "Youjo Senki"), I can justify some of the things here, such as Haku being an actual girl.
Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line I also like the character development I like how it deviates from the actual story I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work
The author did not know Haku was a boy, did he ?
The only bad part about this is the fact that Sasuke even started standing a chance in the dome with haku like even in the anime with his showing on he couldn't do it and he had Naruto to take some of the shots
To me, it's not as much as a bother, because I imagine what cosmic forces may have amped his power to keep up with Naruto.
Thanks to my headcanon of Being X's bits influencing these timelines in an attempt to rebuild (because there's a crossover fic with "Youjo Senki"), I can justify some of the things here, such as Haku being an actual girl.
Need next part
Part 2 please
Ah i love when Zabusa gets screen time
We all do.
Oy Hirashin is a forbiden jutsu not bloodline limit
Aww thought Kurama was gonna give him chakra chains
Why would he do that ? Kurama hates those things. Besides, Naruto isn't a Pure blood. They wouldn't be as powerful, if they would be anything at all.
Has there ever been a part 2 on this channel?
Nope
Please part 2 please 🙏