When I read the forgotten warrior and the part where Hollyleaf returns I was like “AYE HOW IS SHE NOT DEAD YESSSSSS SHES ALIVE” she is my favorite cat from the power of three arc
Definitely one of your strongest songs! It was a blast to work with you! If ever you need cover art for a song again, I’d love to do it again!! It impresses me how much your songwriting improves with each release!
This is by far my favorite so far! Your lyrics get better and better, I really feel like this is what Hollyleaf was thinking during her decision to go back to the clans
Hollyleaf is my favorite character despite the people that say she is a Traitor. Now this is her voice in my mind IT'S SOOOOOOOOOOO SAD! Keep up the awesome work Akira!
OOO IT'S OUT! This turned out so good, thank you so much for the opportunity to be part of this Akira! (Of course I still yeet away at the sound of my own voice, but that's just me xD) I had a lot of fun singing this and if you ever need help again in the future on anymore songs, feel free to hit me up! Also the art is so pretty O:
WOOOOOOOW THERE, BUDDY! Your music went from "ok" to FULL OUT BONKERS-BAJILLIAN WONDERS AMAZING -- if that's how to explain it?? Like wow, I'm impressed
Hello! Here is lyrics! (lyrics are made by me but these lyrics belong to the person who made this song) shut myself out; now I only get glimpses of the sunlight I used to live in It's true I love being alone, but now I feel like a fool in my cold, dark home .... I wish I could change the way I am. Bringe back friendship's I lost ❛cause I was scared My actions will never be forgiven They'll forever be a burden on the life I'm living .... I should give myself a chance Ohh I should give myself a chance.. .. I'm gonna follow the code!, but not too closely.. Open my heart and start again! All that I've lost had never vanished! I can still get it back.. When I return.. A step in the light's got my whole body shaken. I can't bear the sight of cats i loved. But here I am; no going back I promise I won't repeat the past! ... I should give myself a chance Ohh I should give myself a chance! I'm gonna follow the code!, but not too closely Open my heart and start again! All that I've lost has never vanished I can still get it back.. I won't be on my own; it's for the better I've been so afraid, but I'll be brave! All that I've lost has never vanished I can still get it back.. When I return.. I will see What my clan has become without me Do they care that I'm gone? Can I show them that I am strong? I'm gonna follow the code!, but not too closely Open my heart and start again! All that I've lost has never vanished I can still get it back.. I am who I am, and they might hate me Buts it's all I'll ever be I'm the only one who needs to be ready I'll be better then When I return.. When I return...
Omggawsh, the instruments in the background are amazing. Get ready for some rambling and lyric analyisis ahead -> Edit: One year later. The art for this song is still amazing and the song itself is absolute perfection! edit: 2 years later, i still really like this song! my comments cannot do justice my love for this song. edit: it's been 3 years now! Its such a special song! Original comment: I like how this song can apply to everyone even if they aren't a warrior cat. Like, I think I need to go into depth here "I shut myself out, now I only get glimpses Of the sunlight that I used to live in." for Hollyleaf, the lack of sunlight simply reffers to how she is trapped in the tunnels where it is dark. But this could mean so much more if you think of it in the context that Sunlight is something good and Darkness is something bad. Imagine shutting out a window of your happiness and hope, and only getting glimpses and memories of how your happy life used to be. Such powerful and metaphorical lyrics! "I wish I could change the way I am, being back friendships I lost cuz I was scared." Again, fabulous lyrics, don't you think? And the tone in which she sings is is so perfect. Next, later she says "I should give myself a chance" She has, in the previous lyrics, validated the emotions of someone who feels lonesome or scared. Now, she is telling herself but also the listeners of the song that relate to her lyrics to try to overcome such dark feelings, which I think is very meaningful and well-written. "I'm gonna follow the code but not too closely," This obviously referrs to the warrior code, but it could also make sense if you think of the code as some sort of norms that people are supposed to follow. Before, the singer felt trapped by these norms, which drove her into this state of sadness. Now, she's decided that it's alright to be herself when she says that she's not going to follow the code "too closely". When she says that "a step in the light's got my whole body shaken," she's implying the emotion she feels when she is going back to try to be happy again. It is not easy for her, and I think that this line adds a lot of expression to the song! Then, she says "but here I am, no going back," and it shows her strength in character that she won't give up. I mean, at this point these song lyrics are literally getting better than Hollyleaf's novella itself. When I first listened to this song a year ago and when I made this comment, some lyrics that resonated with me a lot were at 3:23. The "Do they care that I am gone?" shows a lot of the character's doubt in the song, but at the "can I show them that I am strong" she is showcasing the fact that she still believes in herself through her uncertainty. I feel as though this lyric later in the song, at 3:46, "I am who I am and they might hate me, but it's all Ill ever be" (aaaahhh my favorite part XD!!!!) also goes with that. The pitch of the song goes higher a little, which seems to indicate that hollyleaf is felling happier and maybe more sure of herself. It's so meaningful, I can't appreciate this perfect song enough. And one last thing: Notice how the art gets brighter throughout the song? How cool!! Perhaps it's another metaphor about how Hollyleaf's happiness brightens the picture. I dunno... Now excuse me while I listen to this song on repeat 1000 times. I know nobody will read this but that's okay :3
this is so good. the vocals i don't even need to say anything- they're perfect. dawn clearly thought of hollyleaf's persona and put all she had into making it seem as close to her as possible. the cover art portrays emotion but it's slightly bland, just hollyleaf and little scenery, which is fine because the scene i think you're trying to mimic is a replica. i love hollyleaf so i'm p bias lol. the instrumental is a little boring but it goes w/ the lyrics and expression. it's also a lil quiet, but that may be intentional. and for the lyrics, wow. you've improved so much on the lyrics. you've kept the main idea in mind while writing these fantastic lyrics, rhyming goes well, and the flow is great. i like how you kept it strictly to hollyleaf's mindset while she was going through this time. i love this piece, please make more music!
I love this song! Just got say though, a lot of your songs have a similar beat in the background, and the instrumentals can be a little too simplistic! It’s amazing, nonetheless.
I love the tiny detail of echo like stone walls, but then the echoing fades and the singing is clear as she steps out of the cave in the ending. HecCiN LoVE ThE SONg!
Ok, I don’t really like holyleaf, but this is AMZING! I love it! Definitely one of my favorite warrior cat songs you made! I loved it! It was slow and perfect! Keep up the good work!
Me before this song: Hollyleaf is best ThunderClan girl Me after this song: HOLLYLEAF IS SUPER BEST THUNDERCLAN GIRL This is the best original song you’ve done so far :D
It was so very beautiful!! The voice is a perfect fit for Hollyleaf! And the lyrics gave me goosebumps. This is my second favorite after the one for Crowfeather!!💕💕
Warriorslover54 , The Lateclan Warrior snarled, “Filthy Earlyclan!” He lashed his tail. He wouldn’t let anyone know that he was appealed by the Earlyclan aspect
Mannn this song got me through some tough times in high school when I was really into Warriors, and now I’m in college and realizing that I’m still just the same as I was then, and I’m still just trying to learn and grow and figure things out, and I know it’s gonna take more time than I have right now, but even if I give up hope, I won’t give up on myself.
So imagine hollyleaf singing this and fallen leaves is just watching her in secret and he is trying not to cry because he knows how she feels................only me ok....
I personally think this song suits Hollyleaf. She did do a bad thing, but she was holding in so much pain after what Ashfur did, and this song in a way could be a way of venting out her feelings. (I think there maybe a little Hollyleaf in all of us in one way or another)
When I read the forgotten warrior and the part where Hollyleaf returns I was like “AYE HOW IS SHE NOT DEAD YESSSSSS SHES ALIVE” she is my favorite cat from the power of three arc
i recognises dawn’s voice from the first word lmao. love the melody and art
Definitely one of your strongest songs! It was a blast to work with you! If ever you need cover art for a song again, I’d love to do it again!! It impresses me how much your songwriting improves with each release!
Omg your art is amazing. You are so skilled.
Ilikecrunchy AnimalJam Thank you so much!!
You art is amazing!
Julie Boyd Thank you!
DaVinci131 no problem! :3
I clicked on this immediately thinkin it was blixemi but now I’m glad it’s bright guardian akira
omg same
Same
Same
To be honest, I like this one a bit better than the Blixemi Hollyleaf song. I love both of them but this one is a bit better I think
Me too did not know until you said
Hollyleaf oh hollyleaf.
Why does every song fit her XD!
Love it so much :)
Well yeah that's true but this was specifically made to fit her
@@mistywinter4180 Yeah, it is sung fantastic! Love love it!!!
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SpottedLove123 cus this is made for her it’s not a map or whatever a pmv is cus I think that’s a thing to
She's absolutely AWESOME and it's so sad she had to suffer like this... I can't say anymore or I'll start crying so...
This is by far my favorite so far! Your lyrics get better and better, I really feel like this is what Hollyleaf was thinking during her decision to go back to the clans
When I return...
You'll hear me saying...
KNOCK KNOCK OPEN UP THE DOOR IT'S REAL, WITH THE NONSTOP POP POP OF STAINLESS STEEL
Hollyleaf is my favorite character despite the people that say she is a Traitor. Now this is her voice in my mind IT'S SOOOOOOOOOOO SAD!
Keep up the awesome work Akira!
I was crying 😭 hollyleafs my favorite
Same
AMAZING! I can imagine Hollyleaf singing this. Her life was so difficult 😔
she brought this part of her life opawn her self she thinks killing is the only way to solve things
This song is so perfect, I've come back to it a year later and I still can sing all of the lyrics, its such a special and beautiful song
Haven’t watched but already liked!
me to
Me too
Same tho
OOO IT'S OUT! This turned out so good, thank you so much for the opportunity to be part of this Akira! (Of course I still yeet away at the sound of my own voice, but that's just me xD) I had a lot of fun singing this and if you ever need help again in the future on anymore songs, feel free to hit me up!
Also the art is so pretty O:
You did such a good job!
Thanks!
Good hollyleaf and singing.
You have such a nice voice! Definitely fits Hollyleaf.
Omg it’s amazing
WOW THIS IS GREAT! This speaks what she thinks and Portrays her perfectly in my opinion!
Agreed :3
Your songs just keep getting better! Keep up the great work! Also, Hollyleaf voice in this is so pleasing to my ears. 💖😻
WOOOOOOOW THERE, BUDDY! Your music went from "ok" to FULL OUT BONKERS-BAJILLIAN WONDERS AMAZING -- if that's how to explain it?? Like wow, I'm impressed
AGHH IM THE WORLDS BIGGEST HOLLYLEAF FAN EVER AND I LOVE THIS
The vocals in this song are absolutely amazing and the lyrics are so meaningful! Good job on this song Akira and Dawn!
Two views, 5 likes
TH-cam? 🤔
Moonstar WhyDoINeedASecondName don't mind it
I guess it’s so good that people got like bots? XD
TH-cam takes a bit to load the views to match the likes
Moonstar WhyDoINeedASecondName
TH-cam! Stop smoking weed and get out here! - TH-cams mom
Veiws are only when a person who fully watches it and you can like with just clicking on the video
All hail the real leader: Hollystar
This is probably my new favorite original from you
Whyyyyyyy...?
It's so gooooood
*sniffles*
The emotions hit me hard, i mean
*look at her face! So sadddd*
This is the best warriors song I have ever heard!! I love this vocal!
This is purely amazing, the vocals are so beautiful and the tone of her voice really sets the mood. It's excellent! Keep up the good work!
This is AMAZING!!!!! Akira, you should make your own custom maps or sommething.
You should make karaoke for these songs!!!
Hello!
Here is lyrics!
(lyrics are made by me but these lyrics belong to the person who made this song)
shut myself out; now I only get glimpses of the sunlight I used to live in
It's true I love being alone, but now I feel like a fool in my cold, dark home
....
I wish I could change the way I am.
Bringe back friendship's I lost ❛cause I was scared
My actions will never be forgiven
They'll forever be a burden on the life I'm living
....
I should give myself a chance
Ohh
I should give myself a chance..
..
I'm gonna follow the code!, but not too closely..
Open my heart and start again!
All that I've lost had never vanished!
I can still get it back..
When I return..
A step in the light's got my whole body shaken.
I can't bear the sight of cats i loved.
But here I am; no going back
I promise I won't repeat the past!
...
I should give myself a chance
Ohh
I should give myself a chance!
I'm gonna follow the code!, but not too closely
Open my heart and start again!
All that I've lost has never vanished
I can still get it back..
I won't be on my own; it's for the better
I've been so afraid, but I'll be brave!
All that I've lost has never vanished
I can still get it back..
When I return..
I will see
What my clan has become without me
Do they care that I'm gone?
Can I show them that I am strong?
I'm gonna follow the code!, but not too closely
Open my heart and start again!
All that I've lost has never vanished
I can still get it back..
I am who I am, and they might hate me
Buts it's all I'll ever be
I'm the only one who needs to be ready
I'll be better then
When I return..
When I return...
the vocals, lyrics and art all beautiful!
This is great! Propably my favourite so far!
Omggawsh, the instruments in the background are amazing.
Get ready for some rambling and lyric analyisis ahead ->
Edit: One year later. The art for this song is still amazing and the song itself is absolute perfection!
edit: 2 years later, i still really like this song! my comments cannot do justice my love for this song.
edit: it's been 3 years now!
Its such a special song!
Original comment:
I like how this song can apply to everyone even if they aren't a warrior cat. Like, I think I need to go into depth here
"I shut myself out, now I only get glimpses
Of the sunlight that I used to live in."
for Hollyleaf, the lack of sunlight simply reffers to how she is trapped in the tunnels where it is dark. But this could mean so much more if you think of it in the context that Sunlight is something good and Darkness is something bad. Imagine shutting out a window of your happiness and hope, and only getting glimpses and memories of how your happy life used to be. Such powerful and metaphorical lyrics!
"I wish I could change the way I am, being back friendships I lost cuz I was scared."
Again, fabulous lyrics, don't you think? And the tone in which she sings is is so perfect.
Next, later she says "I should give myself a chance"
She has, in the previous lyrics, validated the emotions of someone who feels lonesome or scared. Now, she is telling herself but also the listeners of the song that relate to her lyrics to try to overcome such dark feelings, which I think is very meaningful and well-written.
"I'm gonna follow the code but not too closely,"
This obviously referrs to the warrior code, but it could also make sense if you think of the code as some sort of norms that people are supposed to follow. Before, the singer felt trapped by these norms, which drove her into this state of sadness. Now, she's decided that it's alright to be herself when she says that she's not going to follow the code "too closely".
When she says that "a step in the light's got my whole body shaken," she's implying the emotion she feels when she is going back to try to be happy again. It is not easy for her, and I think that this line adds a lot of expression to the song! Then, she says "but here I am, no going back," and it shows her strength in character that she won't give up. I mean, at this point these song lyrics are literally getting better than Hollyleaf's novella itself.
When I first listened to this song a year ago and when I made this comment, some lyrics that resonated with me a lot were at 3:23. The "Do they care that I am gone?" shows a lot of the character's doubt in the song, but at the "can I show them that I am strong" she is showcasing the fact that she still believes in herself through her uncertainty. I feel as though this lyric later in the song, at 3:46, "I am who I am and they might hate me, but it's all Ill ever be" (aaaahhh my favorite part XD!!!!) also goes with that. The pitch of the song goes higher a little, which seems to indicate that hollyleaf is felling happier and maybe more sure of herself. It's so meaningful, I can't appreciate this perfect song enough.
And one last thing: Notice how the art gets brighter throughout the song? How cool!! Perhaps it's another metaphor about how Hollyleaf's happiness brightens the picture. I dunno...
Now excuse me while I listen to this song on repeat 1000 times.
I know nobody will read this but that's okay :3
yes we do still read it
@@jfqubinator6183 hi fellow warrior cat fan, i never thought someone would comment on this, its 2 years old haha
this is so good. the vocals i don't even need to say anything- they're perfect. dawn clearly thought of hollyleaf's persona and put all she had into making it seem as close to her as possible. the cover art portrays emotion but it's slightly bland, just hollyleaf and little scenery, which is fine because the scene i think you're trying to mimic is a replica. i love hollyleaf so i'm p bias lol. the instrumental is a little boring but it goes w/ the lyrics and expression. it's also a lil quiet, but that may be intentional. and for the lyrics, wow. you've improved so much on the lyrics. you've kept the main idea in mind while writing these fantastic lyrics, rhyming goes well, and the flow is great. i like how you kept it strictly to hollyleaf's mindset while she was going through this time. i love this piece, please make more music!
Good job! I like it! You've improved!
I've had this on loop for the past three hours...
same!
Really nice song!! Can you do one on Scourge or Flametail
Anyone notice how the lighting changes over time in the song?
Yeah!
I love this song!
Just got say though, a lot of your songs have a similar beat in the background, and the instrumentals can be a little too simplistic! It’s amazing, nonetheless.
I just thought,
the fact that she isn't crying rn is making it feel like she is in fact accepting this :(
AHHHHH AWESOME I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!
This was amazing! I loved this and it fit her so well! Keep up the great work Akira!
This is so 'purr'fect! I see that your song are getting better.
I love the tiny detail of echo like stone walls, but then the echoing fades and the singing is clear as she steps out of the cave in the ending. HecCiN LoVE ThE SONg!
This is my fav of all your songs. Nice job!
Ok, I don’t really like holyleaf, but this is AMZING! I love it! Definitely one of my favorite warrior cat songs you made!
I loved it! It was slow and perfect! Keep up the good work!
Why don't you like her?
To both the people in this reply section: because they have a freaking opinion.
I feel like the people singing these songs should be professional singers XD
This is all hollyleaf right here the song fits her so good
Wow, it's almost like the song was written for her. -_-
Me before this song: Hollyleaf is best ThunderClan girl
Me after this song: HOLLYLEAF IS SUPER BEST THUNDERCLAN GIRL
This is the best original song you’ve done so far :D
Abigail and Ava #HOLLYLEAFISSUPERBESTWARRIORGIRLINEXISTENCE
My notifactons were not on fully ;^;
It's really good btw :3
I wanna voice a cat, but I'm to smol..
DARN MY SLOW AGEING!!!
Same
Voice act kits!! :D
I wanna BE a cat idk why 😐
It was so very beautiful!! The voice is a perfect fit for Hollyleaf! And the lyrics gave me goosebumps. This is my second favorite after the one for Crowfeather!!💕💕
i love all the songs but this one is my fav but attention is my fav to-
im barely a EarlyClan apprentice... thank StarClan i didn't get exiled!
Im SkyFeather from LateClan. XD
@@30ratsstackedinatrenchcoat91 at least your a warrior.....
Warriorslover54 , The Lateclan Warrior snarled, “Filthy Earlyclan!” He lashed his tail. He wouldn’t let anyone know that he was appealed by the Earlyclan aspect
I am Brambleshade of Dumbclan
Im jay'storm from super late clan
OMG THE VOICE IS SO PRETTY!!!
OML I love this song and the art! ITS JUST SO GRETA I LOVE IT SO MUCH AKIRAAA
I LOVE IT TOO AHH ITS AMAZING like blixemi level songs
Her voice is so smooth.
When hollyleaf is confident her eyes are green but when She is sad or nervous her eyes are yellow
Ohhh new song!
Bet it’s good!
Edit:OMG IT IS
Very good and full of hope
You did well on my favorite song you did trater
NEW CANON VOICE FOR HOLLYLEAF 👌 also this is so emotional I’m crying 😭
Dis canon voice really suits Hollyleaf!
Omg the voice is so beautiful! The song fits her very well too!
Woah this is beautiful- the vocals are so beautiful
Wish this song was in the books they deserve to have songs.
Mannn this song got me through some tough times in high school when I was really into Warriors, and now I’m in college and realizing that I’m still just the same as I was then, and I’m still just trying to learn and grow and figure things out, and I know it’s gonna take more time than I have right now, but even if I give up hope, I won’t give up on myself.
To all who have played Kingdom Hearts II:
Like if you agree this is totally Riku’s song
This song tho honestly top 3 the only bright gaurdian akita song in the top 3
Yasssss I'm so happy this is amazing
You should make more of these!
Add this to spotify pls!
Help, this is the 1000th time I've replayed this song😅😥😅I love this song, it's beautiful
Wow! I love this! And I’m early for once in my life
I love the voice, not just for Hollyleaf, but the voice itself
YAY !! YOU MADE A MUSIC VIDEO THANK YOUU
This song is so relatable it hurts.. Thank you for opening my heart, Bright Guardian Akira. ^w^ have a great day everyone!
I don’t like holyleaf that much, but this was AMZING! Keep up the good work! Definitely my favorite song you made! Can’t wait for the next one!
The song is beautiful! The voice is beautiful the art is too!!!! I love this song!
AMAZING!!!!!!!!! The voice fits Hollyleaf!
I looved this! Great job!
Since you don’t want us to, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! Make a 1 hour version!!!!! I love this song but always have to restart it!!!! Thank you
Put it on loop becomes boring and I want to have it longer version too.
Wait wut did I just say?
I love it! It’s amazing and it made me happy
This touched me so much. Tears are falling
So imagine hollyleaf singing this and fallen leaves is just watching her in secret and he is trying not to cry because he knows how she feels................only me ok....
This is real music *MIKAN APPROVED*
HOLY HECC YES ANOTHER SONG
video: hollyleaf has yellow eyes
literally everyone: >:o
video: hollyleaf now has green eyes
everyone: :)
Big Boye Gang I think that the lighting may have made it look yellow. Who knows though? That's just how I see it. But that was funny!
Wow this is amazing!! Keep up the good work!!
I just love this song!
Great Job!
I personally think this song suits Hollyleaf. She did do a bad thing, but she was holding in so much pain after what Ashfur did, and this song in a way could be a way of venting out her feelings. (I think there maybe a little Hollyleaf in all of us in one way or another)
AMAZING! PAWS DOWN!- wait i dont have paws, HANDS DOWN!
This is my new favorite song of all time
Akira your awesome!
Beyond Waters’ voice really fits Hollyleaf!
This is the best song yet!
I love this song! Can't stop watching it!!!!!
This sounds amazin!
I love that chorus in the later parts.
I’m crying! 😭😭😭😭😢😢😢😢 I love HollyLeaf so much!
Good song can't stop listening to it 😁
Pretty! I love this!
omg these songs was part of my childhood ❤
This is absolutely lovely!
Also is this in ITunes
I wanna listen to this without WiFi