The Apartment and How to Write Movies Good
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An effort to understand and unpack Billy Wilder's screenwriting methodology by applying his own eleven tips for writers to his greatest work: The Apartment, co-written by I.A.L. Diamond. The goal here is not to put forth Wilder's list as the ultimate screenwriting formula, but to educate viewers on what is gained by structuring a screenplay along Wilder's principles.
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One of my favorites, film-wise.
Film-wise :)
@Randy White Yes. One of the repeated comic tropes in the film is "(insert word)-wise". It is even on the original poster. lh3.googleusercontent.com/KRgMHHUjkpyWEWVpWqRQ_aq1aNdXhvyvwRydFYWpTbqmT-QOoFnmUUASHXFwsnjnpWPA=w400-h600
I see what you did there Brian ;)
I guess that’s the way it crumbles, you know, cookie-wise?
Good one
One of my top five favorite films ever. It’s amazing how often I watch it, yet never come close to getting tired of it. No matter the mood I’m in, The Apartment instantly improves it.
Yeah, it's my go-to feel good movie. Certainly pretty heavy at points, but it makes the catharsis so much stronger.
It's a timeless masterpiece and pure joy to watch
what's your top 5?
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5. The Apartment (1960)
4. Stand By Me (1986)
3. Casablanca (1942)
2. Vertigo (1958)
1. E.T. The Extra-Terrestrial (1982)
The Apartment is brilliant - it really is a joy, in every sense.
One of my favorite films, story-wise, acting-wise, and otherwise-wise
No creator who could deliver that "...I also don't know how to read," line so perfectly could be considered anything other than great.
"11.... that's it. Don't hang around." It makes all the sense in the world, but requires a Herculean amount of self-awareness and discipline. It also explains why most movie sequels are so disappointing. Great analysis btw... presented in a way that is neither condescending nor over any one's head.
Make a short doc series about Wilder's movies. His body of work and personal attributes deserve a more complete dive because he truly was such a singular artist.
This made me love the Apartment even more, bravo!
Wilder never made a bad film, and I'd even defend Buddy, Buddy. I've seen them all over several decades of nailing the canon. Thanks for doing such a good job of schooling the unfamiliar.
Outstanding movie... Jack Lemon at his all time best...
Thank you prime for adding The Apartment so that I can now finally watch this video
Lovely!
Shirley McLain is gorgeous and a great actress this is a great movie top three of mine watched it loads of times
One of the best films by my absolute favorite director.
Excellent video! Billy Wilder was simply one of the greatest.
If you’ve got script sleuth commenting, you know you’re doing well
Fantastic breakdown of one of my favorite films. Well done.
"...And if you don't know who Cameron Crow is..." That was a fucking winner right there.
Great video ! I absolutly adore the movie and am so glad someone is talking about it.
This script is simply flawless. The humor, the pathos, the romance, the pacing, the twists, the character development, the relationship development … never to be topped.
...the acting: ""And the girl...?"
I can't believe I haven't found this video sooner!
The Apartment is my favorite movie, as I discovered just a couple years ago. I even downloaded the screenplay and read it religiously.
I looked up every analysis and essay I could find online, and for some reason this video never came up. But this is truly one of the greatest breakdowns of it I've seen. It's a true masterclass in everything filmmaking has to offer.
I will say however that I disagree with your interpretation of Baxter's emotions when he recognizes the pocket mirror. I think Baxter was upset for more selfish reasons: That the girl he liked was taken, and the fact that it was his boss he already lets take advantage of him who took her. I don't think he really contemplates how much he hurt her until he found her lifeless in his bed.
Avanti is another great Wilder/Lemmon comedy.
Hollywood is simply incapable of making movies like this anymore. Thank God we have about 80 years of quality films to enjoy.
Great job on analyzing this amazing movie.
The need vs want analysis really opened my eyes on some life questions.
Me: *see’s movie analysis video*
No it’s 10:40 I got school in the mor-
*recognizes channel name from the gangster video*
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K maybe I’ll give it a shot
I'm deeply flattered. Hope it was worth the late night.
Thank you for this, you have helped sell my interest in this when I picked up a leaflet at a particular local cinema of mine which is planning on showing a lot of older classics over the holidays including this one🤔
Awesome and funny analysis of a Great Movie! Thank you for posting.
How your channel hasn't blown up in popularity yet is a mystery to me
That's kind of you to say. I suspect my inconsistent posting schedule doesn't exactly help. But I like the videos I make and the feedback from folks like yourself mean a lot. Cheers.
It's perhaps because the creator likes to put jokes in his video titles...
My favorite movie.
Excellent commentary, thank you!
You do a truly amazing job at film analysis. I'm really enjoying these as I'm a huge movie fan and I've seen all of these. Now I can look at them with a totally new outlook. Thanks for educating me.
Thanks, Janet. It's been a pleasure reading your kind words.
This is such an incredible and brilliant video thank you so much for making this
Hey, it was my pleasure. Glad you liked it.
WATCHED AS A PRE-TEEN AND LIKED IT, LATER AS A NEW MOM AND ENJOYED IT MORE; AND PROBABLY ONCE MORE APPRECIATING IT FURTHER. THIS HOLIDAY SEASON, NURSING A DAUGHTER'S BROKEN HEART (NO FUN) I SUGGESTED WE WATCH THE APT. ACTS I & II UPSET HER AND I KEPT PROMISING SHE'LL LOVE ACT III - SHE DID (OF COURSE). NOW, I'M DELVING INTO JUST WHAT MAKES THIS FILM TIMELESS SO I'M WATCHING THESE ANALYSIS WHICH I FIND JUST AS FASCINATING TOO. EXCELLENT FILM!
You're bold to openly lie to my face.... you write really well. Subscribed.
Shrek wanting the fairytale creatures to fuck of...Best line!!!
your channel is soooo underrated
That's kind of you to say. I try to do good work.
@@EyebrowCinema I've been following your run through the Bergman films, sooo good
60 years today. première NYCity june 15, 1960
masterpiece
By current grammatical standards you are technically correct, but if you are going to use "good," I would use it as an adjective before the noun it describes "good movies." The rules of grammar once dictated that "well" be used as in "how to write movies well," but the rules have changed (as they always do over time) and when someone now asks, "How are you?" It is now considered acceptable (and sometimes preferable according to some grammar guides) to say "Good" although I will always respond with "I am well." Also, in cases where you have an independent clause such as "How to write movies good" (meaning it can stand alone as its own sentence), you should consider the using a comma before the conjunction "and."
I know I’m late to the party, but the Shrek bit made me cackle
Great video, great analysis!
Strong review. But couldn't the screenplay be just the famous dramatic structure of: Act I beginning (set up),Act II (confrontation), Act III (Resolution)? That's the paradigm structure, with each screenwriter adding his or her creative talents to the plot points. Here, it seems Wilder's 2+2 works fine, but that again need not be too technical, for drama must allow the audience or reader to also make inferences.
hey, that guy with the dark hair sitting there in the office at the desk behind baxter's, is that jon hamm?
A great movie!
Was this remade a little while back
Great review!
Did you know that Mr Dobish in this film is actually played by the devil?
Because Ray Walston, five years earlier, played the devil, Mr Applegate, in Damn Yankees on Broadway and in the film.
funny, well-written with setup and payoffs, well-acted, hence it's my favorite movie
Would love you to employ this structural analysis to a Michael Bay movie
great video. thanks!!
Hey, thank you, Logan. I appreciate your kind words!
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I love the girl’s hair
That Aloha joke tho.
There was no key "mix - up" that prevent him from going back to the apartment.
At the opening Bud tells the boss he's on the phone with that the boss accidentally put the washroom key under the mat, instead of the apartment key which Bud explains he needed to get the landlady to open his door at 4am.
Good or well?
scene 100 dollars?
"Shut up and view."
"The Apartment" is one of the best movies ever made. I'm interested in how the screenplay came into being. You jump around way way way way too much in your analysis. P.S.: 90% of the success of the movie is due to the superb cast of first-rate actors.
Wilder said while seeing the film Brief Encounter, in which a minor character lends his apartment to an adulterous couple, he began wondering what kind of story could be told if that minor character were the protagonist.
Whew. A lot of people my age and older really not coming off well in the comment section. My fellow oldsters: "Write good" is a JOKE. Stop acting so old.
It's just an incredibly pathetic joke is all
@@BillSmith-ed4jg So what? It's a joke nonetheless. Stop taking it so seriously.
@@TomEyeTheSFMguy
Zero seriousness
Young Zero testosterone half boy
Now don't get annoyed
That's a joke
@@BillSmith-ed4jg what are you talking about?
Not nice to slam Cameron Crowe. He's done some fine work like Singles, Jerry McGuire and Almost Famous.
Are you f@$ing kidding me?? Dude, I loved this breakdown so much but why in the world would you ruin the very last minutes by spoiling a film I haven’t sen yet?? The Shrek reference was funny and unharmful as it is a relatively recent film that you can assume no one between the ages of 20 and 60 hasn’t seen. But another classic from the 1940s that would have to be sought out and that you can assume would be by most of those who would watch this breakdown... I cannot fathom why you would build your entire half-hour to spoiling another classic and risk infuriating your so far entrhralled audience - which is what happened to me - especially after you took such care to warn us about the spoilers for this film at the outset.
Luckily, even though I yelled at my laptop and had to cut this video short, the otherwise brilliant and engaging rest of this video has earned you a subscriber and fan. I look forward to checking out the rest of your library. Just don’t pull any more bs like that.
Get over yourself. Jesus Christ. I hope in the year since this comment you’ve grown up.
There’s nothing "sexist" in this movie as both men and women use their assets to gain an advantage. It’s women who use sexual access to gain a monetary advantage from wealthy men. The mistresses in the film know full well that these men are married and yet they are willing to go to great lengths to secure their access to cash and prizes. Are these women "sexist”? I love how women are always absolved of any and all agency when it comes to feminist-propaganda.
You talk about "feminist propaganda," and my brain dies.
@@TomEyeTheSFMguy - Not sure what you mean?
Just because the women may also be using the men, doesn't mean the men aren't still being sexist. (That's not in relation to my previous comment, just something else that came to mind.)
@@TomEyeTheSFMguyhow was Fran trying to get monetary advantage of anyone? She didn’t want money, heck, she self harmed when he gave her cash. She loved him. That is a weak argument.
@@aet5807 When did I say anything about monetary advantage? When did I say anything about... Did you respond to the wrong person or something?
If you are going to write about good writing, it would be helpful to use good grammar yourself . . . "How to Write Movies Well" is proper English. Aside from that, well done!
That's the joke.
@@EyebrowCinema Okay, if you say so.
@@dreamterry Okay, but "loan" is a noun. "Lend" is a verb.
How to write movies ' good '. I love the bad English. Supposed to be ironic i assume ?
Absolutely.
you don't know how to read??
"The Apartment and How to Write Movies Good" -- Speak English much ????
That's the joke.
How to write movies well.
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Is there other gooder scripts? What will it be Sunset Boulevard? When do it now?
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Wow. This is such a thorough and detailed analysis of these movie. Love this work a lot. Please make many such good ones.
I plan too!
@@EyebrowCinema awesome. I'm waiting
I must say the apartment it without a doubt one of the best screenplays of all time
This film is so unique in so many ways even today. The audience are fed the conception of Kubelik running to Baxter in the end to (probably?) profess her love for him but we are excited by the gunshot, expecting the worst. This makes us forget why Kubelik was here in the first place and are waiting for Baxter to open the door. The relief we feel when he does is turned into a comic moment.
Then when they pay off with the incomplete gin game, it shows that this isn't just like any other romantic drama movie. The last line: "Shut up and deal" drills home this exact point.
One of my all time favourites. I cannot get over this movie no matter how many times I watch it. Love it. Thanks for this great analysis! I think I will go through all other videos of yours as well!
EDIT: I had a contention. You say that when Baxter realizes that he was renting his apartment so that his boss could take out Kubelik, he feels guilty. But I have another opinion. I think he feels betrayal and animous towards his boss and Kubelik because he realizes she stood him up to be out with his boss. Thats why when he comes home and sees Kubelik lying unconscious he yells at her to get out. He wouldn't do that if he felt guilty, right?
This movie is beautiful.
It's another planet.
Jack Lemmon miming gunshot makes me laugh every time. Hehehe!
I love this movie. I've seen it several times, but I think I'm going to give it another go.
Wilder was a brillant mind! He made so many great films!
And Jack Lemmon was his best man.
Kubrick is the great auteur, Lumet, Nichols, Ford, Polanski, Altman and Huston have impressive resumes, but Wilder's body of work is so consistently good it puts him at the top of the list, imho.
Amazing video!! I rewatched this movie just about a month ago and loved it way more on a rewatch!
*SPOILER ALERT* Super analysis of my personal favorite film. The only thing I would add is that the overall structure of the film is masterful in the way it sets up, in the first hour, the characters so that we know and care about them as 'real' people. When Fran takes the sleeping pills (at exactly the mid-point of the film) it's more painful to watch than if it had come too soon. Audiences would probably see it as forced and unbelievable in what up to that point seems like merely a romantic comedy. Wilder has it timed perfectly, increasing the human dimension of the film.
Not to be that guy but I heard him say that Ace in the Hole was the best thing he’d ever done. Though, we may have read different interviews
My first reaction to this movie, when I saw it, on TV in 1969, was, this is not a comedy. It is not a comedy, rather it is a dramatic movie with a feel good ending.
That said it was well written. The rules quoted are not easy to follow. but represent good writing ideas.
Great video! I would like to add that the scene with the gun and the champagne works against audience's expectations in that by placing it on screen the audience will immediately think it has to be fired. In a sense, it works as a fake Chekhov's gun, when what's really going on is that Wilder is setting up a Chekhov's champagne.
Very good point
Fred MacMurray... great actor.
I have been applying Wilder's rules to some other 'almost great' movies and it shows every time where the flaw in the screenplay lies.
Hey Cameron Crowe made Say Anything, Jerry Maguire and Almost Famous :(. For a small period of time, Crowe was great
I was mostly just teasing. I like the Crowe you mention, especially Say Anything and Almost Famous.
@@EyebrowCinema I know, it just sucks that he hasn't made anything great or even that good in over two decades. Watching Almost Famous again just recently brought me so much joy but also sadness
I cant buy the central premise. Hi flying advertising executives, in Manhattan in the early 60s, wouldnt mess around with some lo level cat and his lo level apartment. They'd rent nice hotel rooms or nice apartments.
No lies detected. This is A+ stuff in a world filled with bad, vague, and/or prescriptive writing advice.
I think I could put multiple BW film in my top 5 movies of all time, but you could also say that about Double Inemnity, Sunset Blvd., Some Like it Hot, etc. This dude wrote and directed arguably the greatest film noir films ever (Sunset BLD and Double Indemnity, unquestionably the greateds comedy ever Some Like it Hot, and a dramady the Apartment. It really deserved the oscar even though it was a response to the stupid snub of each of the movies I've mentioned most notably "Some Like it Hot". This movie holds a VERY special place. It is masterfully crafted, funny, tragic, dramatic, and wonderfully written, directed and acted. It is a masterpiece. Thanks Billy an I.A.L. Diamond. You are the masters!
Your posts are terrific!
just saw this movie in 2024 incredible cinema
I only discovered this movie a few months ago and I've watched it 5 times since.
For goodness sakes, it's "among," not between!" You're in the word business. Get it right!
I'm not saying the aloha moment was shade but that was shade,
What would Billy Wilder do?
I found your channel today by the Hitchcock masterpiece... I subbed immediately!
Welcome aboard and thank you for your kind words!
Eddie Sheldrake was a guard on UCLA's basketball team from 1949-51. Wilder was a LA sports fan and has confirmed that Eddie was the namesake for Fred MacMurray's character in "The Apartment".
He stops playing the game because he is in love with her, not because of the immoral nature of the game. Great film, and while I am well versed in most things involving films and filmmaking, but I admit that I didn't that they made this one!
what about when Double Indemnity meets Sunset Boulevard
It's a CRIME you don't have more subscribers!
I'd like to think so. Thanks for your kind words :)
Teenage Dirtbag ripped up this film yet the writer dares to deny it,
I think I will have to watch this video, at least, three more time to can take all the tips and tricks that are presented. I, also, wanna to thank you for doing this video, as a person who has not the privelege of study cinema and screenwriting formally, this free content help and inspire me a lot. Greetings from Brazil, continue doing this amazing work!
Hope it proves helpful, Luiz!
Daniel I enjoyed this. Keep up the great work.
This was fantastic!