This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters. I have to say that the leaf village is reaping what it sewed. It gets what it deserves for what it has done to all the other countries, but especially to Naruto and how they treated him definitely hope that Ardo‘s parents get what they truly deserve. They end up facing down Naruto so cool that the story Paulos King Arthur in away with Naruto having the Excalibur sword is like King Arthur and it’s cool that he has all of those other Weapons that he can use him and only him so that no one else can try and steal them unless he lets someone else use a weapon and it’s cool that in the west where Naruto is at the story follows all the other animes that’s really cool and I even know of those animes cause I like them Really hope that this story continues and also have to wonder what other women are gonna end up joining Naruto‘s harem really hope the story comes out soon 1:41:51
I'll agree with you! All in all, it is a very great story, but character development is all over the place. First off, Mito went basically her entire life until the Sasuke retrieval mission bot succumbing to hive mind syndrome. All of a sudden, when Naruto comes back, she is basically a yes woman with absolute blind loyalty to Minato. During the false trial, Minato and Kushina start out being apathetic to Naruto's plight and the fact that he basically was falsely accused and turned a blind eye to the blatant bias of the council, who shouldn't have the power to sway any votes. Toward the end of the farse trial, Minato and Kushina begin to realize that the village isn't as great a place as they thought what with them insulting Naruto. In fact, Minato thinks to himself something along the lines of, "How can my family turn against one of their own," which is to say, "How can my village, which I view as my family, be so cruel to my son" acknowledging Naruto as his son and basically admitting to himself that he was a bad father. Not to mention, in the past, Minato and Kushina actively neglected and forgot about Naruto on multiple occasions, I would even go so far as to say they forgot they had a son though it nevers explicitly says so. When Naruto returns Minato and Kushina, who had at least shown signs of beginning to change for the better, they are suddenly worse upon Naruto's return. Also, during the chunin exams, Minato sees Naruto beat both Neji and Mito, and under the scrutiny of his peers, the other kage, he acknowledges that Naruto was his son. Obviously, anyone with two working eyes would see that Naruto is stronger than everyone who went on the mission, so the argument that the mission was too much of a difficulty for him is null. The only thing I can think of to explain these inconsistencies, if they were deliberate, would be the, quite honestly overused, loyalty seals, but that begs the question, "who placed them and when and how did they place seals on, at the very least, 2 kage level shinobi both of whom are supposed to be sealing masters" I don't know where the story goes from the point that I am writing this. I am currently at timestamp: 1:15:33. A lot can happen in the next 26:23 minutes, and I don't know what the author has/ had in store for the rest of the story. Maybe he/she finds a great way to explain the strange behavior and tie up any loose ends regarding said behavior, or maybe he/she wasn't expecting anyone to notice. Heck, maybe the author themself hadn't noticed these inconsistencies. I just felt the need to bring it up. Other than that, again, it's a great story. The world building is great, and it is different from most neglected Naruto stories since he doesn't become hostile at the sight of Konoha citizens. It is refreshing to see that because most other neglected Naruto stories just feel like a copy and paste of each other
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This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters. I have to say that the leaf village is reaping what it sewed. It gets what it deserves for what it has done to all the other countries, but especially to Naruto and how they treated him definitely hope that Ardo‘s parents get what they truly deserve. They end up facing down Naruto so cool that the story Paulos King Arthur in away with Naruto having the Excalibur sword is like King Arthur and it’s cool that he has all of those other Weapons that he can use him and only him so that no one else can try and steal them unless he lets someone else use a weapon and it’s cool that in the west where Naruto is at the story follows all the other animes that’s really cool and I even know of those animes cause I like them Really hope that this story continues and also have to wonder what other women are gonna end up joining Naruto‘s harem really hope the story comes out soon 1:41:51
I'll agree with you! All in all, it is a very great story, but character development is all over the place. First off, Mito went basically her entire life until the Sasuke retrieval mission bot succumbing to hive mind syndrome. All of a sudden, when Naruto comes back, she is basically a yes woman with absolute blind loyalty to Minato. During the false trial, Minato and Kushina start out being apathetic to Naruto's plight and the fact that he basically was falsely accused and turned a blind eye to the blatant bias of the council, who shouldn't have the power to sway any votes. Toward the end of the farse trial, Minato and Kushina begin to realize that the village isn't as great a place as they thought what with them insulting Naruto. In fact, Minato thinks to himself something along the lines of, "How can my family turn against one of their own," which is to say, "How can my village, which I view as my family, be so cruel to my son" acknowledging Naruto as his son and basically admitting to himself that he was a bad father. Not to mention, in the past, Minato and Kushina actively neglected and forgot about Naruto on multiple occasions, I would even go so far as to say they forgot they had a son though it nevers explicitly says so. When Naruto returns Minato and Kushina, who had at least shown signs of beginning to change for the better, they are suddenly worse upon Naruto's return. Also, during the chunin exams, Minato sees Naruto beat both Neji and Mito, and under the scrutiny of his peers, the other kage, he acknowledges that Naruto was his son. Obviously, anyone with two working eyes would see that Naruto is stronger than everyone who went on the mission, so the argument that the mission was too much of a difficulty for him is null. The only thing I can think of to explain these inconsistencies, if they were deliberate, would be the, quite honestly overused, loyalty seals, but that begs the question, "who placed them and when and how did they place seals on, at the very least, 2 kage level shinobi both of whom are supposed to be sealing masters" I don't know where the story goes from the point that I am writing this. I am currently at timestamp: 1:15:33. A lot can happen in the next 26:23 minutes, and I don't know what the author has/ had in store for the rest of the story. Maybe he/she finds a great way to explain the strange behavior and tie up any loose ends regarding said behavior, or maybe he/she wasn't expecting anyone to notice. Heck, maybe the author themself hadn't noticed these inconsistencies. I just felt the need to bring it up. Other than that, again, it's a great story. The world building is great, and it is different from most neglected Naruto stories since he doesn't become hostile at the sight of Konoha citizens. It is refreshing to see that because most other neglected Naruto stories just feel like a copy and paste of each other
part 2 plz
what if naruto got harem with himawari and hinata part1,2,3,4 please
Sick fuq thank God incest is illegal in real life
Next part plz❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
the seven tails jinkuriki's name is fuu NOT fk
it's deidara not dedra
What happened to his summons?