" Why you looking at me like that" " I COULD'VE DIED!!!" " Yea probably could kill us" " PROBABLY?" "... " " I quit" ( OMG!! I love this Keep up the amazing work Ed!!)
This Edward is very cute. A little ditzy, but seems sweet. The fact that this man didn't realize that taking off clothes would be an issue and why🤣🙃😂. But he gave us a hoodie. Every girlfriend loves a hoodie and we have his favorite without even kissing him! Let's go folks! And the little slips of care and romance from the "second to" and him hoping we had just wanted to tell him about our discovery and him so stupidly but very bravely running out to distract it. And the sound at the end, the sort of ugh/ahh thing was fantastic. Brilliantly done as usual Sir. I look forward to the next installment. Would it also be a build an Ed or would you just take the story in whichever direction you choose?
I can’t decide which concept for part 2 I like better. Either the two of in the ER being treated for monster related injuries and Edward being gently berated for being brave but stupid. Maybe Ed’s hand/arm is broken and despite their own injuries, the listener invites themself over to his house to help and to work together on what the next steps should be plus the hella long report they’re gonna need to write. Or several weeks after this audio, the listener is about to make a big presentation about the cryptic they found but when Ed finds them backstage, they’re having a panic attack, crying with their notes scattered around them. The audio is Edward comforting them, admitting their “fly by the seat of their pants” style of research apparently works, and he quickly goes through what happened that night (including after this audio cuts off) and the rest they can remember from cue cards. Ends with a kiss for good luck? Whatever you decide, I think Edward deserves a badass scar somewhere easily visible so that he can casually show off to people, subverting their assumptions about him just being a book nerd. (Once again I am digging my claws into someone else’s creative media to add my own spin on it 😅)
@@bagotoast You should see the mini essay I left in the comments of the recent monstergirl video. And that’s only the parts I decided were important enough (and weren’t embarrassing) to include 😅 I’d love to write scripts for the various channels but I’m too scared to try my hand submitting scripts to any of the subreddits.
@@jerri6007 Hey, I felt the same way for a while. I’ve been script writing for a few weeks now, and I haven’t posted them or emailed them yet, but don’t be embarrassed or nervous about your material! Even with these comments you leave, I can tell you’d make amazing scripts! Your ideas and continuations are enough to get me hooked!
Me: Put Down My Edward! Ed: ._. Put Down My Edward Is That What You're Gonna Tell Em Me: Ummm Oh Right.....Put Down My Edward Please ^_^ Honestly I loved thus keep it up Ed❤✨
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" Why you looking at me like that"
" I COULD'VE DIED!!!"
" Yea probably could kill us"
" PROBABLY?"
"... "
" I quit"
( OMG!! I love this Keep up the amazing work Ed!!)
This Edward is very cute. A little ditzy, but seems sweet. The fact that this man didn't realize that taking off clothes would be an issue and why🤣🙃😂. But he gave us a hoodie. Every girlfriend loves a hoodie and we have his favorite without even kissing him! Let's go folks! And the little slips of care and romance from the "second to" and him hoping we had just wanted to tell him about our discovery and him so stupidly but very bravely running out to distract it. And the sound at the end, the sort of ugh/ahh thing was fantastic.
Brilliantly done as usual Sir. I look forward to the next installment. Would it also be a build an Ed or would you just take the story in whichever direction you choose?
Build-an-Ed audios are typically one shots. But I suppose with creative control given to the audience, anything is possible.
Part 2 please 🥺
The ending! I'm still laughing man!🤣🤣🤣❤
Ed: I know this is the worst possible time--
Me, aloud: YA THINK?
My cat: >^o.O^
u r my fav asmrist aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa🏋️
😳
I can’t decide which concept for part 2 I like better.
Either the two of in the ER being treated for monster related injuries and Edward being gently berated for being brave but stupid. Maybe Ed’s hand/arm is broken and despite their own injuries, the listener invites themself over to his house to help and to work together on what the next steps should be plus the hella long report they’re gonna need to write.
Or several weeks after this audio, the listener is about to make a big presentation about the cryptic they found but when Ed finds them backstage, they’re having a panic attack, crying with their notes scattered around them. The audio is Edward comforting them, admitting their “fly by the seat of their pants” style of research apparently works, and he quickly goes through what happened that night (including after this audio cuts off) and the rest they can remember from cue cards. Ends with a kiss for good luck?
Whatever you decide, I think Edward deserves a badass scar somewhere easily visible so that he can casually show off to people, subverting their assumptions about him just being a book nerd.
(Once again I am digging my claws into someone else’s creative media to add my own spin on it 😅)
I love your ideas! There’s a lot to work off of here, who doesn’t love a little creative freedom?
Absolutely love the directions you're taking this. Especially the visible scar.
@@bagotoast You should see the mini essay I left in the comments of the recent monstergirl video. And that’s only the parts I decided were important enough (and weren’t embarrassing) to include 😅
I’d love to write scripts for the various channels but I’m too scared to try my hand submitting scripts to any of the subreddits.
@@jerri6007 Hey, I felt the same way for a while. I’ve been script writing for a few weeks now, and I haven’t posted them or emailed them yet, but don’t be embarrassed or nervous about your material! Even with these comments you leave, I can tell you’d make amazing scripts! Your ideas and continuations are enough to get me hooked!
You're always welcome to submit scripts to me via e-mail. While I may or may not use the script, I will always read them and give positive feedback.
Perfect timing as always, Ed! Can’t wait to see where this goes!
this was so perfect, i laughed so hard at the end! 😂💗
This is really well done. Amazing, I liked it very much. You are amazing, Ed
Me: Put Down My Edward!
Ed: ._. Put Down My Edward Is That What You're Gonna Tell Em
Me: Ummm Oh Right.....Put Down My Edward Please ^_^
Honestly I loved thus keep it up Ed❤✨
Your videos really help me while I'm stuck in this hospital bed 😇
We hope you get better soon!
@@bagotoast aw thx!!!
*hugs*
Thanks for listening. Get well soon.
Get well soon ^_^
Me at the end : 'No Ed don't be a hero - damn it! '
I hope there's a part 2 !
Absolutely fantastic ❤
Hi Ed! I hope you're doing well :)